Michi FF: Yaadein epilogue p-118 20/2 - Page 51

Originally posted by: cool@sify.com

hey it was superb............ now finally da truth is out........ thinking wht stored spicy things in ur mind..............let me know after next chap it its spicy enough😉 do cont soon...........& do pm me when u will cont & thnx 4 da pm...........

Thanks for reading and commenting, will pm u when i post the next update😊

Heebaaaa...hey hunny so sorry...I fell asleep 😆

But oh my god...whaaaaaaat an update...damn I wish you'd write ten pages all the time 😳 😆 ...I LOVED it...nice and long

Goooooood...I LOVE youuuuuuuuuuuuuu for making Neev repentent and confessing...PHEW...I was literally reading that part with my heart in my throat... 😆 😆 😆 ...you know me and Neev 😆 😆

But yes I completely understand what happened...dont worry it about honestly, I think it was great the way you did it. 😊

I also understand why Prachi wasn't able to explain to him, we've seen it in the show many times he doesn't listen to her...

I feel terrible for the both of them though... they've lost so much time together...

Oh my god...what a twist of fate...just as Milind finds out the truth, Prachi accepts Angad's proposal 😕

I'm so looking forward to how you unfold this...btw...I forgot to mention...absolutely loved the mother son talk...I remember you saying that Suk and Nandani mamma...had slightly selfish reasons for wanting Milind to marry Ayesha...did they not like Prachi much?

Thnak you soooooooooo much for this lovely and long update hun... 😃

wow he finally knows the truth..hopefully he and prachi will get together soon...dont want to see them seperated any longer...continue soon please.. 😊

Heebs, just loved this part! 😳

It was just lovely part………so Ayesha was behind their misery . seems like they were married cause they have a daughter together.
I am glad milind found out the truth before it was too late. Now hopefully he can reach prachi before she gets engaged to Anangd.

Again this is for u 👏
hope u update soon!

Originally posted by: zcbcc34

Heebaaaa...hey hunny so sorry...I fell asleep 😆 rims you fell asleep..or you were watching Jay's six pack😉😆

But oh my god...whaaaaaaat an update...damn I wish you'd write ten pages all the time 😳 😆 I didn;t even notice it was that long....only when i was copying it from word....i was like wow..did i write all that...lol...I LOVED it...nice and long

Goooooood...I LOVE youuuuuuuuuuuuuu for making Neev repentent and confessing...PHEW...I was literally reading that part with my heart in my throat... 😆 😆 😆 ...you know me and Neev 😆 😆 I know....even i didn;t have the heart to make him full evil...but he will make an re-entry...i think you will like it...

But yes I completely understand what happened...dont worry it about honestly, I think it was great the way you did it. 😊 Thank you...i was a bit scared posting it...glad u liked it😊

I also understand why Prachi wasn't able to explain to him, we've seen it in the show many times he doesn't listen to her... I know...though things are going to change now...its going to be the other way around

I feel terrible for the both of them though... they've lost so much time together... Milind has his mind determined to get her back...lets see how Prachi reacts

Oh my god...what a twist of fate...just as Milind finds out the truth, Prachi accepts Angad's proposal 😕 There is another twist...though its more for Prachi...

I'm so looking forward to how you unfold this...btw...I forgot to mention...absolutely loved the mother son talk...I remember you saying that Suk and Nandani mamma...had slightly selfish reasons for wanting Milind to marry Ayesha...did they not like Prachi much? No...nothing like that...i wanted to add it in this chap...but i will in the next chap...there will a Milind-Suk conversation...it will clear up...

Thnak you soooooooooo much for this lovely and long update hun... 😃

THANK YOU RIMS🤗
Was actually writing the next part...but then got stuck as I couldn't find the lyrics...will try to post it for tomorrow😊

Originally posted by: chillingal16

wow he finally knows the truth..hopefully he and prachi will get together soon. They will....how sooon...Euh...even i don;t know..lol..dont want to see them seperated any longer...continue soon please.. 😊

Thanks hun😊
Glad u liked it...

Originally posted by: kim02

Heebs, just loved this part! 😳 Thank you kimi😳

It was just lovely part………so Ayesha was behind their misery yes she was...bad like always . seems like they were married cause they have a daughter together. Maybe they were...and maybe they arent anymore...let see what happens...😉😆
I am glad milind found out the truth before it was too late. Now hopefully he can reach prachi before she gets engaged to Anangd. Ahh...Milind will be on time for what ever is stored for him...

Again this is for u 👏 Awww thank you
hope u update soon!

Thanks once again Kim🤗
Will try to update for tomorrow nite...

Heeba, there are a couple of things you may want to keep in mind. The title of your chapter needs to be "Back to the past" and not "Back at the past". I think when you said nostalgic when Prachi refused to join Milsi outside, you meant nauseus, did'nt you? Nostalgic means remembering the past and nauseus means feeling queezy in the stomach (like wanting to vomit). I though the second word may be what you would have meant because Pachi was carrying Diya then, was she not? (although she was not aware of it). You also have a tendency to write "At his surprise". It is "to his surprise". These things are more to do with English usage and I guess with time you'll get the hang of it. But as I already said the fact that your English is so good for somebody who started late is really amazing. Keep it up.

Coming to the story from now on I think Prachi may now no be prepared to leave everything and come behind Milind. The main thing that will be weighing on her is what it would do to Angad, a man who has always had put his life on hold for her sake and had taken care of her and her daughter when they needed support. Diya was also attached to Angad. Had Milind tried to get back with her during his earlier visit she would not have thought a second about anything else because she had not given Angad any hope explicitly. But having given her consent to him now backing out now would break his heart and she is too soft to do that. So she will decline Milsi's offer to take her back and Milsi may be about to leave with a broken heart. The twist would be that Angad comes to know who Milsi really is and what was the purpose of his second visit and may end up uniting the two of them again, stepping aside.

Originally posted by: optimist

Heeba, there are a couple of things you may want to keep in mind. The title of your chapter needs to be "Back to the past" and not "Back at the past". I think when you said nostalgic when Prachi refused to join Milsi outside, you meant nauseus, did'nt you? Nostalgic means remembering the past and nauseus means feeling queezy in the stomach (like wanting to vomit). I though the second word may be what you would have meant because Pachi was carrying Diya then, was she not? Yes she was...next chap will have that part from Prachi's point of view...thank you for letting me know....i was searching for the word....and i guess i got all confused...but thank you... (although she was not aware of it). You also have a tendency to write "At his surprise". It is "to his surprise". I do that a lot of time...but now i'll keep it mind...These things are more to do with English usage and I guess with time you'll get the hang of it. But as I already said the fact that your English is so good for somebody who started late is really amazing. Keep it up. Thanks a lot opti... really appreciate it...

Coming to the story from now on I think Prachi may now no be prepared to leave everything and come behind Milind. The main thing that will be weighing on her is what it would do to Angad, a man who has always had put his life on hold for her sake and had taken care of her and her daughter when they needed support. Diya was also attached to Angad. Had Milind tried to get back with her during his earlier visit she would not have thought a second about anything else because she had not given Angad any hope explicitly. But having given her consent to him now backing out now would break his heart and she is too soft to do that. So she will decline Milsi's offer to take her back and Milsi may be about to leave with a broken heart. The twist would be that Angad comes to know who Milsi really is and what was the purpose of his second visit and may end up uniting the two of them again, stepping aside. Prachi....like you said wont come back even if she wants to, she wont be able...and the main reason will be Angad and somewhere Diya also...but Milind, he wont leave heartbroken....he has things in mind....as for Angad...he will have a role to play....just not yet...but yes Milind's actions will make him suspicious.....

Thank you once again...will go and make the changes....

Heeba hun,sorry for this huge delay in commenting.

Chap 10:
Milind doesn't seem to be bitter towards Neev.Milind why you lying that you don't know where she is. 😡
Kabab mein haddi Ayesha came in time to stop Neev from uttering the truth. 😡 OMG yeh kya,looks like Prachi has decided to marry Angad. Aww...my MICHI babies
are going to get married to different people. 😭 😭 Milind just this one time please listen to your heart hun.There might have been something really important that you aren't aware of.
Uff...thank God he decided to meet Neev before his engagement.I hope Neev spits out the truth to him
in time to stop the engagement.