Tishnagi- Mahi&Shabd FF.....part-17. 7/06 - Page 8

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Posted: 15 years ago
#71
omg nooooooooooo poor Shabd... 😭

good work...keep it up! 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
#72
awesome job! amazing writing! 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
#73
no no no ...leave shabd...oh plzzzzzz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#74
this was soo sad...when will shabd realize Mahi loves him and not Abhi..hope its soon...continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Part-17

Mahi: Shabd...........aap taiyaar ho gaye........

Shabd: kyun kaha jana hai........

Mahi: aapko yaad nahi kya..........aaj ravivar hai aur main her ravivar ko aapke saath Gurudwara jati hoon............aur is baar to hume mannat bhi puri karni hai..........aapka Dream Project jo ab pura honewala hai.........

Shabd: woh main aise hi bhool gaya.........

Mahi: koi na koi baat to hai jo aapko pareshan kar rahi hai....bataiye na kya baat hai......

Shabd: kuch nahi sirf kaam ki tension hai..........ab chale......

Mahi: haa............

Shabd aur Mahi Gurudwara pahunchte hai............

Mahi: Shabd......woh mannat ki chadar to main gadi me hi chod aayi.......

Shabd: tum chalo.....main leke aata hoon......

Mahi: thik hai.......

Mahi chalne lagti hai jab ek zor se truck aake Shabd ko takkar marke chala jata hai.........

Mahi: Shabddddddddddddddddd.......................

Mahi daudti huyi Shabd ke pass aati hai........aur Shabd ka sir apni god me leti hai......

Mahi: shabd......aankhein kholiye.....aapko kuch nahi hoga........Shabd main aapko hospital leke chalti hoon.......bhaisaab meri madad kijiye........koi to meri madad karo.....

do char log aake Shabd ko Taxi me rakhte hai aur Mahi taxi ko leke hospital phunchti hai............

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Mahi: Doctor..........Doctor..........

Doctor: kya baat hai..........

Mahi; Doctor...........dekhiye na mere pati ko kya ho gaya.......woh kuch bolte nahi.........

Doctor sees Shabd.......

Doctor: yeh to police case hai......hume police ke aane tak intzaar karna hoga..........

Mahi: Doctor......main aapke aage haath jodti hoon........ple mere Shabd ko bacha lijiye.........dekhiye kitna khoon beh raha hai.........aap ilaz shuru kijiye.....main police ko khabar kar dungi..........ple Doctor.......yeh meri zindagi ka sawaal hai.............

Doctor: dekhiye.....aap samaj nahi rahe.............yeh ek kanooni mamla hai....

Mahi: police aake kya karegi haa........kya woh Shabd ka ilaz kar sakti hai.....nahi na to............main aapse apni zindagi ki bheekh mangti hoon.......ple Shabd ko bacha lijiye..........

Doctor: Nurse........inhe andar de jao..........operation ki taiyaari karo......tab tak aap sari formalities puri kar dijiye........

Mahi; Thank you so much...........

Doctor bhi OT me chala jata hai.........

Mahi sari formalities puri karke Soni ko phone karti hai........

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Mahi: hello....Soni.......

yeh kehne ke saath hi rone lagti hai.........

Soni: tu ro kyun rahi hai.....kya hua........Shabd thik to hai na......

Mahi: nahi Soni.........Shabd ka accident ho gaya hai.......

Soni: kya.......kab hua ........yeh sab......

Mahi: main yeh sab bad me batati hoo......ple tum aur Jiju jaldi se aa jao.......

Soni: tu ghabra mat.....hum abhi aa rahe hai.......kuch nahi hoga Shabd ko.......

Mahi phone rakhti hai...........

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Thodi dair me Soni aur Veer aate hai......

Veer; shambhalo apne aap ko.......

Mahi (cries): kaise sambhalu............meri zindagi mere samne durr ho rahi hai aur aap keh rahe ho sambhalu............

Soni: kisi ki zindagi aur maut ka faisa hamare haath me nahin hota........

Mahi (shouts): lekin Shabd ki kismat ka faisla karne ka hakk sirf muje hai aur maine apni kismat Shabd ke saath likh di hai..........

Jab ek nurse khoon ki bottle leke daudke ja rahi hoti hai......

Mahi: Nurse........Nurse.............Shabd kaise hai..........

Nurse: Sab umeed nakamyab hai..............kuch bhi kehna muskil hai..........aur woh waha se chali jati hai...........

Mahi (cries really hard): aise kaise woh muje akela chod ke ja sakte hai.......kuch nahin hoga............kuch nahin hoga.........

Mahi tut jati hai aur Soni use sambhalti hai aur use wahi pass me padi chair pe bithati hai.................

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Thodi dair baad Doctor operation theater ke bahar aata hai lekin uska chahre ka rang uda hua tha..............

Mahi (afraid to ask): Doctor........Shabd thik to hai.........kya main use mil sakti hoon........

Doctor: Sorry .........Kuch bhi kehna muskil hai..........bahot hi khoon beh gaya hai aur woh bhi koi treatment ko response hi nahin kar rahe.............i am really sorry........lekin ab unke chalne aur bolne ki shakti woh kho chuke hai..........

Mahi: yeh aap kya keh rahe ho....aapko Shabd ko kisi bhi hal me thik karna hi hoga..........main aapke samne apne pyaar ki bhikh mangti hoon.........ple Doctor kuch karo........mere shabd ko bacha lo........

Doctor: Mere se jo ho saka woh maine kiya............ab tumhari dua aur pyaar hi unhe thik kar sakta hai.....

Mahi; thik hai main apne Shabd ko thik karungi.........kisi bhi kimat pe....

Doctor: dekho beti........jitna ho sakta tha woh to maine kiya na............lekin ab hume sabkuch bhagwan pe chod dena chahiye.....

Mahi: kya main ek bar Shabd se mil sakti hoon.......

Doctor: woh aisi halat me nahin hai.........tum nahin dekh paongi......

Mahi: ple Doctor...........Shabd ko meri zaroorat hai......

Doctor. thik hai..........

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Mahi Shabd ke kamre me aati hai..........Shabd bed pe behosh so raha hota hai..........puri bendages me lipta huya oxygen mask aur dono haath me IV lagai huyi...........Mahi Shabd ke pass aake bethti hai.....Mahi ko Shabd ka hasta hua chehra yaad aata hai..........

Mahi (Shabd ka haath pakad ke): Pata hai Shabd..........aaj main aapko kaise jane doon apne aapse....bolo Shabd kaise jane doon............per aaj muje aapse juda hone ke ehsaas se bhi meri ruh kamp uthti hai...............Shabd aapne hi to kaha tha ki main aapki apni hoon......to aaj kaise aap muje chod ke ja sakte hai........Shabd maine aapse se shikha hai ki hum apno ke liye jite hai to main chahti hoon ki aap mere liye jiye...........main jina chahta hoon aapke saath.............aapke pyaar ke sahare...........main aapse bahot pyaar karti hoon .........aur aapko mere pyaar ka vaasta..........ple Shabd utho...........laut aao wapas mere pass...........I love you Shabd..............I love you............

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Mahi roti huyi bahar chali jati hai jaha pe woh Abhi ko dekhti hai........

Mahi: abhi dekha..........aaj mere Shabd ki kya halat hai......Doctor ke rahe hai ki ab woh kabhi chal nahi payenge.....woh kabhi mujse baat nahi karenge..........tum batao na kya woh thik to honge na........

Abhi: Mahi....woh ab bejaan lasj ban chuka hai........ab tumhe uske saath rehne ki koi zaroorat nahi........

Mahi: ABhi.........woh mere pati hai..........main apne pati ko chod ke kahi nahi jaungi........

Abhi: kaun sa pati......woh jo khud ke pairo pe khada nahi ho sakta......woh pati jo tumhari baatoin ko nahi sun sakta........woh pati jo kehne ko tumhara pati hai.....woh tumhe woh khushiyaan nahi de sakta jo main tumhe dunga...aaj maine koshish to puri ki thi use mere raste se hatane ki lekin uski kismat achchi nikli........

Mahi zor se Abhi ko ek thapad marti hai.......

Mahi: aaj muje sharam aati hai ki maine kabhi tum jaise insaan se pyar kiya..........jo insaan dusro ke pyaar ko nahi dekh sakta woh kya mujse pyaar karega.......aaj main hamesha ke liye tumse apne sare rishtey todti hoon......aur kya kaha.....Shabd kabhi muje khush nahi rakh payenge.......unhone muje woh khushi di hai jiske liye meri zindagi choti pad jayegi...........aaj se main Shabd ke liye jiungi.......aaj se Shabd meri zindagi jiyenge aur main unki..........aaj se main Shabd ka sahara banungi.........ab woh akele nahi hai........main aur mera pyaar hai unke saath....woh bahot hi jaldi thik ho jayenge..........aur yeh ek patni ka apne pati se waada raha.........ab yaha khade kya ho nikal jao yaha se..........

Abhi waha se chala jata hai aur Mahi rone lagti hai...........

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Soni: nahi Mahi tu kyun ro rahi ho......

Mahi: yeh sab ki jimedar main hoon.....aaj shabd ki is halat ki jimedar main hoon.........

Soni: nahi........ab yeh waqt rone ka nahi hai..........abhi to tumhe shabd ki himmat banni hai.........abhi shabd ko sabse jyada tumhari zaroorat hai........

Mahi: maine jo kiya woh thik kiya na......

Soni: tune jo kiya bilkul sahi kiya..........aaj main dekh rahi hoon ki aaj woh mahi nahi balke Shabd Sareen ki patni Mahi sareen bol rahi hai..........tu sab kuch waheguru pe chod de woh sab thik kar denge......

Mahi aise hi soni ke gale lagkar rone lagti hai..........

Edited by goodkashish - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#76
This was such a sad part! But it was a really good part. Please make Shabd all better! Update soon! Edited by taran13 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#77
owww.... its a great part... poor shabd... please update soon... waiting
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Posted: 15 years ago
#78
aww so sad! 😭 Abhi is so ruthless!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#79
hey this was an amazing part, the story just keeps on getting better, its totally worth the wait
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Posted: 15 years ago
#80

greattt fanfic...please hurry and continue

 
Pooja😊