Tishnagi- Mahi&Shabd FF.....part-17. 7/06

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Tishnagi

Mahi Malhotra- She is the youngest daughter of Malhotra family. She works as Financial Analyst in M&S Constructions. She is a best friend of Shabd. She is very cheerful and playful.

Shabd Sareen- He is the only son of Sareen family. From last 3 years, he is studying master in business administration in USA. He loves Mahi from childhood. He is very caring and easy going person. For him, the only thing matters is that Mahi's smile.

Abhimanyu Rai- He is a Air-craft pilot. He works in the Air-force. He loves Mahi so much. One thing about him is that what he wants he will get it anyway.

Rajveer Malhotra- He is CEO of M&S Construstions. He is a very caring husband and father.

Kaveri Malhotra- She is housewife. She loves her daughters too much. She always wants her daughters to get good Sasural.

Vikram Sareen- He is also joint CEO of M&S Constructions. He is very caring husband and father.

Maya Sareen- She is housewife. She loves her children so much. She always so worried about Shabd because he never says about what he wants. She wants Mahi to become her daughter-in-law.

Kamya Sareen- She is youngest daughter of Sareen family. She is not in good condition. She is mentally depressed. She has a dark past. She is very close to Shabd and Mahi. She always obeys Mahi.

Veer Khurana- He married to Malhotra's older daughter Soni. He loves his family so much. He is the owner of Khurana Hotels. His parents died at very early age and he is the only one in his family.

Soni Khurana- She is oldest daughter of Malhotra family. She used to work with her husband but after becoming mother she quits. She is very close to her sister Mahi.

Simran Khurana- She is daughter of Veer and Soni. She is only 3 years old. she is very sweet baby.

 

Background of the Story

Yeh Kahani shuru hoti hai Punjab ke Chandigath ki. Ek aisa seher jo rango se, khushiyon se, pyaar se bahe felake aapka swagat karta hai. Isi seher me rehte hai do parivar Malhotra aur Sareen. Rajveer Malhotra aur Vikram Sareen ki dosti pure seher me jani jati hai. Jaise yeh log dost the waise hi Business me barabar ke Patners the. Yeh kahani hai Mahi ki jo pyaar me apne se bhi jyada yakeen karti hai. Jo bhi Mahi se milta hai woh pyaar me yakeen karne lagta hai. Yeh kahani hai Shabd ki jiske liye dosti ka dusra naam pyaar hai. Yeh kahani hai Abhimanyu ki jiske liye pyaar junoon hai. Mahi aur Shabd bachpan ke saathi hai. Dono ek saath pale bade ek saath college ki. Dono me aaj tak koi bhi raaz nahi chupa. Jaha pe Abhimanyu ek pardeshi banke aata hai. Ab dekhna yeh hai ki Mahi ek pardeshi ka saath deti hai ki apne bachpan ke saathi ka. Kaun hoga jise Mahi ka pyaar naseeb hoga. janne ke liye besabri se hamari kahani padhte rahiye.

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Part-1

USA....

"Welcome all People to Ferewell Party For one and only Shabd Sareen........ple welcome Shabd Sareen on the stage....Mr.Shabd Sareen ple come to the stage......"

Raj: Yeh Shabd kaha chala gaya.......

Meet: zaroor bahar garden me chand ko dekh raha hoga..........pata nahi kya dekhte rehta hai........

Suhani: chalo.........usko bulake late hai............

Sab log bahar jake dekhte hai to koi hai jo chand ko dekhne me khoya hua tha......

Raj: Shabd.......tum yaha kya kar rahe ho........

Suhani: aaj yeh party humne apne dost ke liye di hai..........yeh tumhare liye party hai aur tum.......

Meet: Shabd aisa kya hai is chand me jo tum use dekhte hi rehte ho..........kiska chehra dundhte rehte ho is me........kaun hai woh..........kaisi hai woh..........

Raj: ple shabd aaj to tumhe hume batana hi hoga..........

Shabd piche mudta hai aur haste huye andar party me chala jata hai............

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gumsum chaandani ho, naajani ho, ya koi hoor ho

dilnashi ho, dilkashi ho ya jannat ka noor ho

maasha allah, maasha allah, maasha allah

tum saba ho ya ghata ho kehkasha ho saayba ho

subah ki pehali kiran ki jaisi, bebaak alhad pawan ki jaise

khushbuyein tum lutaati ho masti mein chur chur

maasha allah, maasha allah, maasha allah.....

tum haya ho, tum rida ho, tum wafa ho, tum nasha ho

khaamosh nazarein sada jaisi tumhaari baatein duwaayon jaisi

har nafas mein tum samaayi ho phit bh ho itani door

maasha allah, maasha allah, maasha allah.....

gumsum chaandani ho, naajani ho, ya koi hoor ho

dilnashi ho, dilkashi ho ya jannat ka noor ho

maasha allah, maasha allah, maasha allah....

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Raj: mind blowing Shabd.......aaj pehli bar humne in teen saaloin me tumhe gate huye suna hai..............not bad........

Meet: Lekin Shabd woh hai kaun........kya kabhi tumne use dekha hai.........her waqt tum sirf uske khayaloin me rehte ho........batao na kaisi hai woh.......

Suhani: Shabd ki pasand hai to bahot hi modern hogi.........kyun Shabd.......

Shabd (smiles): Nahi ..............lekin hai ek panjaban jo Chandigadh me rehti hai........

Suhani: Chandigadh ki........tab to wake hi tarife kabil hogi........ab bata hi do kaisi hai.......

Shabd: Kaha se shuru karu yeh samaj me nahi aata.............wake hi sach me tarife ki hakkdar hai............chulbuli, nakhchadi aur thodi si pagal hai..........abhi bhi bachpana nahi gaya uska lekin phir bhi sabse samajdar hai..........jubaan ki thodi si kadvi hai lekin dil ki bahot hi achchi........jante ho jab woh gussa karti hai to kya kehti hai "Fite muh"...........aur to aur gussa thanda karne ke liye ek hi kaam karti hai padoshi ke ghar ki khidki ke sheeshe todti hai.........sara maholla use pahechanta hai.....jab woh chalti hai to apna paranda haath me leke.......jab bhi woh maholle se nikalti hai to uski paayal ki chankat se aur choodiyaan ki khanak se uske aane ki aahat sunai deti hai..........aur jab bhi hum kisi baat pe ladte to hamesha mujse shart lagati thi.....main jeet ke bhi haar jata aur woh haar ke bhi jeet jata.........aur jante woh jeet ki khushi me mujse kya mangti........chandigadh ki famous Malai Kulfi.......aur jante ho woh muje tum nahi aap kehti hai.....kyunki kehti hai ki meri uski jeevan me ek khaas jagah hai......is liye woh muje aap kehke bulati hai.........aur woh.......

Meet: yeh sab to hum samaj gaye lekin dikhne me kaisi hai...........

Shabd: itni khubsurat ki chand bhi uske aage fika lage.........us chand pe to phir bhi daag ho sakte hai lekin uspe nahi.........chandi ke jaisi uske chehre ki chamak.............nashili aankhein.......gulab ke pankhdiyon ke jaise uske hoth.............raat ke andhere ke jaise kale ghane baal..........aur upper se gora rang.........aisi hai.........

Raj: kab se jante ho use.........

Shabd: jabse hosh savara hai bus use hi dekha hai.............use hi pasand kiya hai aur usi se pyaar kiya hai...........hamare beech kabhi koi baat chupi nahi........

Suhani: uska koi naam bhi hai kya.......

Shabd: Mahi......meri Mahi.........mere bachpan ki dost aur jawani ka pyaar..........

Suhani: kya woh bhi tumse itna hi pyaar karti hai.........

Shabd: pata nahi lekin is baar main uske dil ki baat janke rahunga.........waise main janta hoon ki woh bhi mujse bahot pyaar karti hai.................mere liye dosti ka naam Mahi aur Mahi ka naam Pyaar hai.......I love her so much...........

Sab log phir party enjoy karne lagte hai...............

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CHANDIGADH.................

Ek ladki kamre me khidki ke pass haath me baksha leke khadi thi..........Ladki sabse pehle us bakshe ko kholti hai..........phir usme se apni paayal nikalke pass me rakhti hai........phir apni chudiyaan .......phir apna paranda.....aur aakhir me ek tasvir hoti hai..........Shabd ki......

Ladki: Kaha ho Shabd...........kab se aapka intzaar kar rahi hoon........kab aa rahe ho luat ke...........Shabd muje aapki zaroorat hai........ple shabd wapas aa jaiye .........

Ladki ki aankh se aanshu nikalke Shabd ki tasvir pe girte hai....

Voice: Mahi..........jaldi se neeche aao hume dair ho rahi hai..........

Hum dekhte hai Mahi apne aanshu pochke apna dupatta thik karke neeche chali jati hai.......

Mahi: jee Papa........main taiyaar hoon........lekin aapne bataya nahi hum kyun ja rahe hai..........

Rajveer: woh bas aise hi Kamya ne zidd ki hai is liye......

Kaveri: aur waise bhi hum yeh koi pehli bar thode hi ja rahe hai..............ab chale Soni ka phone aaya ki woh bhi Vikrambhaisaab ke yaha pahonch gayi hai..........

Rajveer: to chalo na main to kab ka taiyaar ho gaya hoon.......tum log ki waje se hamesha diar hoti hai.........

Kaveri: hamari waje se.........rehne dijiye aap.......

Mahi: ab aap log phir se shuru ho gaye..........chale waha pe sab hamara intzaar kar rahe hai.........

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Rajveer, Kaveri aur Mahi sab log Sareen House pahonch jate hai...........

Vikram: aap log aa gaye bahot dair kar di...

Rajveer: ab aise hi sawaal karte rahega ki bethne bhi dega........

Kaveri: Kaisi hai Kamya......

Maya: Mahi ka intzaar kar rahi hai..........abhi abhi kitchen me Soni ke saath gayi hai..........

Veer: Mahi kitne din ho gaye koi khabar hi nahi......

Mahi: woh bas kuch kaam me jyada hi busy ho gayi thi.........

Vikram: kaam me itni busy mat ho jana ki apne liye waqt na mil sake.......

Mahi: waqt pasar karne ke liye to apne aap ko busy rakhti hoon...........main Kamya se milke aati hoon..........

Mahi waha se kitchen me chali jati hai........

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Kamya: Mahi......tum aa gayi........janti ho kal Mama ne kya kiya.......

Mahi: kya hua Kamya.....

Kamya: kal mama ne muje ice-cream nahi khilayi...........

Soni: kyunki tumhe pehle se hi zukam hai........

Kamya: lekin muje khana tha.........muje chahiye abhi.......

Mahi: Kamya........jab tumhari tabiyat thik hogi tab main tumhe leke jaungi..........main tum aur Soni sab chalenge...........

Kamya: promise......

Mahi: promise.....

Kamya: main Mama ko batake aati hoon..........

Kamya waha se chali jati hai.......

Soni: Mahi .........aaj phir se.......

Mahi: Nahi to main bilkul thik hoon......

Soni: agar aisa hi hai to kyun tumhari aankhein lal hai.........tum roke aayi ho na.......kab tak Mahi........Muje lagta hai agar koi tumhe sambhal sakta hai to woh hai Shabd........

Mahi: pata nahi Soni.......lekin pichle kuch din se Shabd ki bahot yaad aati hai....

Maya: Soni.........khana lag gaya ho to main sabko bulati hoon........

Soni: jee Auntijee.........aap sab ko bula lijiye...........

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Sab log khana kha rahe hote hai.....

Vikram: main aap sab se kuch kehna chahta hoon............

Rajveer: kya baat hai.........koi khas baat.......

Vikram: haa..........aaj hi meri Shabd se baat huyi...........woh parso aa raha hai.....

Maya: kya........aur aapne muje bhi nahi bataya.......

Kamya: mahi tumne suna.........bhai aa raha hai........

Rajveer: yeh to tune bahot achchi khabar sunai hai........

Veer: kitna waqt ho gaya kuch pata hi nahi chala.......

Soni: hum sab se jyada Shabd ko kisine miss kiya to woh Mahi ne hai..........kyun Mahi.......

Kaveri: Mahi........tum itni pareshan kyun ho rahi ho............

Mahi: main aap sab se kuch kehna chahti hoon..........

Vikram: kaho beta kya kehna hai.......

Mahi: main nahi chahti ki mere ateeth ke bare me Shabd ko pata chale.........woh kitne din baad ghar wapas aa rahe hai........woh kitne khush hoge aur main uske dukh ka karan nahi ban sakti......main Shabd ko dukhi nahi dekh sakti.......aap sab se meri darkhast hai ki aap Shabd ko kuch nahi batayenge............

Maya: lekin beta kabhi na kabhi to Shabd ko pata chalegana.....

Mahi: main khud Shabd ko bataungi lekin filhal aap log is baat ka khayal rakhe..........aap mere liye itna to kar sakte hai............

Vikram: thik hai........jaisa tum chahti ho waisa hi hoga. ........Hum Shabd ko kuch nahi kahenge..........

Mahi: Sukhriya aap sab ka........

Mahi yeh kehke Simran ko apne saath leke bahar chali jati hai.........

Kaveri: pata nahi lekin us hadse ne meri beti ki zindagi badal ke rakh di..........

Maya: sahi kaha tumne.........hum dono ek hi daur se gujar rahe hai...........meri Kamya ke saath bhi woh hadsa na hota to........

Kaveri: pata nahi hamari dono betiyon ko kis ki nazar lag gayi.........

Rajveer: hamare haath me to kuch tha nahi........yeh sab upperwale ke haath me hai........hum kuch nahi kar sakte.......

Vikram: sach kaha tumne..........hum janke bhi kuch badal nahi sakte........aap befikar rahiye......

Soni: mama muje lagta hai bahot hi jaldi Mahi aur Kamya ki zindagi me khushiyaan aanewali hai...........

Veer: aap log phir se yeh baat leke beth gaye........are aaj to khushi ka din hai.........Shabd wapas aa raha hai........hamare ghar ki shaan........

Mahi jo sab kuch sun rahi thi........

Mahi (apne aap se); pata nahi lekin shabd ke wapas aane ki khabar se khushi ke saath saath ek darr bhi laga rehta hai......hai waheguru.........muje himmat do ki main Shabd ka samna kar saku..........

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Edited by goodkashish - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
wow... AMAZING start... i REALLY wanna know wat this secret is...

plz continue soon =D

and jw, but how often do u think ur gonna update this story?
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Posted: 16 years ago
if i get good readers i will update everyday

but i dont get as many readers as i need

but thanks for appriciating

love

kashish
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wow great i want to read more dear 👏 👏 👏
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u hav given this ff a grt start, plz update soon. 👏