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Part-14

Shabd aur Mahi shaadi karke gharwalo ke saath Sareen House aate hai.......

Maya: tum dono yahi ruko.......kuch rasame nibhani baki hai.......

Maya pehle dono ki arti karti hai.......

Maya: Mahi......ab is kalash ko apne baye pair se girake is thal me apne pair rakh ke apne ghar me apne pehle kadam rakho...........

Mahi jaise Maya kehti hai waisa hi karti hai.........

Maya: Mahi........main samaj sakti hoon........is waqt tumhe kaisa mehsoos ho raha hai.........lekin main tujse vaada karti hoon ki is ghar me kabhi tumhe koi pareshani nahi hogi.......aaj se yeh ghar tumhara hai......ab is ghar ko sambhalne ki jimedari tumhari hai.......dongi na mera saath is ghar ko banane me.......

Mahi: Jee............

Vikram: Mahi.......thak gayi hogi.........Kamya .......Mahi ko Shabd ke kamre me le jao............

Kamya:chalo Mahi.......

Kamya Mahi ko leke Kamre me jati hai............

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Kamya Mahi ko kamre me akele chod ke chali jati hai......Mahi ko kuch samaj me nahi aa raha tha ki kya kare.......jab use yaad aata hai ki Abhi hamesha kehta tha ki jab koi baat pareshan kar rahi ho to khuli hawa me ek saans leke dekhna pareshani yun gayab ho jayegi..........Mahi jake khidki khol ke chaand ko dekhne lagti hai jab.........Darwaze ke aawaz se Mahi palat ke dekhti hai to Shabd hota hai........Mahi phir se chand ko dekhne lagti hai............

Shabd: Chand ko dekh rahi ho.........

Mahi: nahi to.....

Shabd: to iska matlab Taree gin rahi ho.......

Mahi: maine aise to nahi kaha........

Shabd: ab batao kya baat hai............jabse shaadi huyi hai tum kuch buji buji si lag rahi ho..............

Mahi; kitna ajeeb hai na........main kitni bar is kamre me aayi hoon lekin aaj pata nahi dil me ek ajeeb si becheni ho rahi hai..........

Shabd: kyunki kal tak tum is kamre me meri dost ki hasiyat se aati thi aaj yeh kamra tumhara hai meri patni ke hasiyat se.......

Mahi: shayad isi liye.........ek din me rishtey kaise badal jate hai na.........kal tak main aapki dost thi aur aaj aapki patni hoon........

Shabd: hum pati patni rahe na rahe lekin hamare beech dosti ka rishta bana rahega.........kyunki kehte hai ki dost banke zindagi aasani se kat jati hai.......

Mahi: jiske pass aap jaise dost ho unhe zindagi se aur kya chahiye.......aap bahot achce hai.......

Shabd: achchi to tum ho.............tumhari yeh achchai se to sabhi ko pyaar ho jata hai.........

Mahi: aapse kuch kehna chahti hoon..........main nahi janti ki main aapse kabhi pyaar kar paungi ki nahi.......lekin main apni aur se puri koshish karungi..........

Shabd: aur main bhi apni aakhri saans tak us lamhe ka intzaar karunga.........kyunki muje apne pyaar pe yakeen hai ki woh ek din tumhare dil me mere liye ek khaas jagah zaroor bana dega........lekin aaj main jo manguga kya woh muje dogi tum..........

Mahi: aap keh kar to dekhiye...........

Shabd: muje meri pehle wali mahi lauta sakti ho..........

Mahi; aap meri khushi ke liye apni sari khushiyaan kurabaan kar sakte hai to main aapko aapki Mahi zaroor lauta dungi..........lekin shayad unke liye waqt lagega...........

Shabd: main tumhari madad karunga us Mahi ko wapas lane me...........

Mahi: Shabd.........raat kafi ho gayi hai..........aap ko so jana chahiye..........

Shabd: sahi kaha........tum bhi so jao........

Shabd kapse badal ke pillow leke sofe pe jake so jata hai.........Mahi wahi bed pe bethi Shabd ko dekhti hi rehti hai..........aur aise hi Mahi waha pe so jati hai...........

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Subaah ki pehli roshni Sareen House pe girti hai...........Vikram hall me beth ke akbaar padh raha hota hai...........Maya breakfast ki taiyariyaan kar rahi hoti hai aur Kamya abhi tak so rahi hoti hai jab Shabd jogging karke aata hai..........

Vikram: good morning beta..........

Shabd: good morning dad..........

Maya: beta..........Mahi taiyaar ho gayi.........abhi Rajveer Bhaisaab aate hi honge Mahi ko pagphere ki rasam ke liye le jane...........

Shabd: woh bas aati ho hogi...........

jab Mahi sidiyon se neeche utharti hai...........wahi lal rang ka salwaar kurta..........upper se parinda...........haath me dheir sari choodiyaan.........pairo me khankti paayal..........maang me sindoor aur gale me mangalsutra..........Shabd bas Mahi ko dekhta hi rethta hai.........

Maya: aa gayi.........achcha hua.........abhi tumhare mama aur papa aate hi honge aaj pagphere ki rasam hai na is liye............

Mahi: thik hai....main aapki koi madad kar doon.....

Maya: koi zaroorat nahi jab tak tumhare haath ki mehndi ka rang nahi utarta tum koi kaam nahi karogi.......samaji........

Mahi: jee............

Jab Rajveer aur Kaveri aate hai.................

Vikram: aa Rajveer.........bahot sahi waqt pe aaye ho.........hum log nasta karne hi wale the........chalo aao.....

Mahi jake Kaveri ke gale lag jati hai.........

Maya: are maa beti me kya baatein ho rahi hai.........mahi kahi apni maa se apni saas ki sikayat to nahi kar rahi...........

Mahi: jab meri do maa hai to main kaise ek maa ki dusri maa se sikayat kar sakti hoon..........

Kaveri: haa..........maya......pehle muje Mahi ke liye bahot chinta hoti thi lekin ab nahi hoti........tere ghar jo ise bheja hai...........

Jab watchman aake Shabd ko ek envelope deke jata hai..........

Vikram: Shabd kya hai yeh.........

Shabd: Papa........yeh letter aaya hai ki jo maine Kamya ke ilaj ke liye london ke jis hospital me baat ki thi unhone accept kar liya hai..........ab hamari kamya phir se thik ho jayegi.............

Maya: tum sach keh rahe ho na........koi mazak to nahi............

Shabd: nahi..........yeh dekhiye........unhone to hume foran bulaya hai taki jald se jald ilaj shuru kar sake...........

Vikram: main jene ki taiyariyaan karta hoon..........

Rajveer: ruko Vikram hum bhi tumhare saath chalte hai..........

Vikram: tum.........

Rajveer: haa.......main aur kaveri bhi saath me chalte hai............shayad kab zaroor pad jaye..........

Vikram: lekin business.........

Shabd: woh main aur Mahi sambhal lenge..........

Maya: lekin beta tumhari abhi abhi nayi shaadi huyi hai aur hum.........

Mahi: aapka jana zaroori hai....hamare liye puri zindagi hai..........

Maya: thik hai sab yahi chahte hai......main kamya ko batake aati hoon..........

Kaveri: maya.........hum log bhi nikalte hai...rasam puri hote hi main Shabd ko phone kar dungi take yeh wapas Mahi ko lene aa jaye...........

Rajveer: kaveri........suno tum mahi aur Shabd ko leke ghar jao......tab tak main aur Vikram jane ki taiyaariyaan karte hai............

Shabd: thik hai.........chaliye Mama.........chalo mahi...........

sab log apne apne kamo me vayasth ho jate hai..........

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Kaveri jake un dono ko darwaze ke pass khade rehne ko kehti hai........phir woh aake un dono ki aarti karke unhe ghar me aane ko kehti hai..........Mahi pure ghar ko dekhe hi ja rahi thi......

Kaveri: aise kya dekh rahi ho.......

Mahi: ek hi din me yeh ghar kitna badal gaya na.......

Kaveri: haa shadi ke bad maayka paraya ho jata hai.........lekin tere bigahr ghar bahot suna suna lagta hai........

Shabd: aisa hai to thik hai main aapke saath rehne aa jata hoon......

Kaveri: aisa ho sakta to main kabhi tum dono ko jane hi nahi deti..........main apne bacho ko aise hi apne pass rakhti..........

Mahi; aap udas kyun ho rahi hai.......hum aapse thode hi dur hai...........jab aap hume dekhna chahenge tab ek phone kar dijiyega............hum log yun aa jayenge..........

Kaveri; woh to hai.........ab tum dono betho main kuch khane ko lati hoon.......

Shabd: mama..........besan ke ladoo banaye hai......

Kaveri: banaye hai na tere liye...........

Shabd: aap meri sabse favorite ho...........aap ke alawa to mera koi dhyaan hi nahi rakhta.............

Kaveri: jootha kahi ka.......

Shabd: sach.......

kaveri kitchen me chali jati hai......

Shabd: thank you......

Mahi: kis liye....

Shabd: aaj muje meri pehle wali mahi lautane ke liye..........

Mahi: tab to aap apna thanks apne pass rakhiye..........muje nahi chahiye......

Shabd: are wahh..........ab to tum pehle ki tarah mujse ladne bhi lagi...........

Mahi; maine kaha tha ki ek bar soch lijiye.......lekin aapko to pehle wali Mahi chahiye thi.........to ab to kuch nahi ho sakta..........

Shabd: aur hona bhi nahi chahiye.........kyunki muje yeh Mahi bahot pasand hai.........waise aaj agar mohale ke ladko ne tumhe dekha hota to bhag jate ki kahi phir se unhe tumhari jutti na pade.......

Mahi: aap bhi na......main itni buri bhi nahi......

Shabd: woh to bechare woh batayenge jise so joote pade ho tumhare haath ke...........

Mahi: aap to aise keh rahe hai jaise aapko mile ho........

Shabd: hamari aisi kismat kaha...........aapke haath ka jutta bhi hume pyaar lagta.........

Mahi; aapse baat karna hi bekar hai............

Shabd: aur mujse shaadi karna............

Mahi sirf Shabd ko dekhti hi rehti hai.......jab Kaveri aati hai aur woh log aisi hi baatein karte hai aur thodi dair bad Shabd aur Mahi wapas Sareen House chale jate hai..................

 

 

 

Edited by goodkashish - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#63
wow..your stories are great..your writing and attenion to details are also amazing, please continue fast...
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Posted: 16 years ago
#64
OMG! WONDERFUL UPDATE! "aur mujhse shaadi karna"... that made my heart leap! keep these chapters coming! =D
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Posted: 15 years ago
#65

Part-15

Aaj Shabd aur Mahi ki shaadi ko pure do mahine ho gaye hai..........London me Kamya ki tabiyat me thoda sudhar aaya hai lekin abhi bhi kuch aur waqt lag sakta hai.........Veer aur Soni khushi ke saath busy hai........Mahi aur Shabd bhi business ko sambhalne me busy hai.............

Ek din subaah Shabd office ke liye taiyaar ho raha tha jab Mahi kamre me aati hai..........

Mahi: Shabd......

Shabd: achcha hua Mahi tum aa gayi..........tumne meri woh file dekhi jiske liye aaj main meeting me janewala hoon......

Mahi: woh to maine kal raat hi aapki beg me rakh di thi......

Shabd: achcha Mahi.......tum taiyaar to hona.........hume bas kuch hi dair me nikalna hoga..........

Mahi: Shabd.......aap jaiye........aaj meri tabiyat kuch thik nahi lagti........

Shabd: kya hua........chalo Doctor ke pass chalte hai........

Mahi: Shabd main bilkul thik hoon...........aap meeting ko attand kijiye.......aaj me pura din aaram hi karungi.......sham tak to thik ho hi jayega........agar nahi hua to hum kal doctor ke pass jayenge........

Shabd: thik hai....lekin tum ghar ka koi kaam nahi karogi........aur tum waqt pe dawai logi aur thik se khana bhi kha lena.......main jald se jald aane ki koshish karunga.........

Mahi: aap khamkha pareshan ho rahe hai.........ab aap jaiye.....dair nahi ho rahi........

Shabd: main to bhool hi gaya........

Mahi Shabd ko chodne bahar tak jati hai.........

Mahi: Good luck Shabd.......

Shabd: Mahi.......i am really nervouse........aaj main akele kaise sambhal paunga.......

Mahi: dekhiye......Shabd....hamari aur dekhiye........muje pura yakeen hai ki aap yeh sab kar sakte hai.......maine aapke is project ke liye maine Gurdware me matha tekne ki mannat li hai........jaise hi aap safal hoge hum waha jayenge........

Shabd: tumhe lagta hai main kar sakta hoon to main kar sakta hoon.........bye...........

Shabd jane hi wala hota hai ki mud ke Mahi ke forehead pe kiss karta hai......

Shabd: thanks Mahi.......

Mahi: bye..........

Shabd waha se jane lagta hai.........

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Mahi andar jake apne kamre me sab kuch thik karne lagti hai jab Shabd ka phone aata hai......

Shabd: Mahi......

Mahi: haa Shabd boliye......kya hua phone kyun kiya......

Shabd: maine tumhe aaram karne ko kaha tha........aur tum yeh kya pure kamre ki safai kar rahi ho........

Mahi yaha waha dekhne lagti hai..........

Shabd: ab aise gurna bandh karo......main waha pe nahi hoon.........lekin main tumhe bahot achche se janta hoon........ab chup chap se aaram karo.........warna main abhi ke abhi ghar aata hoon......

Mahi: ghar aane ki koi zaroorat nahi.........main ab sone ja rahi hoon..........

Shabd: apna khyal rakhna....thik hai......bye.........

Mahi: bye...........

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Dopahar ke do bajte hai Mahi apne kamre me bethi TV dekh rahi thi jab phir se Shabd ka phone aata hai........

Shabd: Hi.......

Mahi: Hi shabd........kaisi rahi aap ki meeting.......

Shabd: abhi bhi puri nahi huyi.......is waqt lunch break hai.........waise tumne kuch khaya ki nahi........

Mahi: abhi abhi kaka Soup deke gaye hai........abhi bas TV dekhte dekhte Soup hi pi rahi thi..........waise aap ne kuch khaya.....

Shabd: nahi.......bas kuch logo ka intzaar kar raha hoon.......ab tumhari tabiyat kaisi hai........

Mahi: thik hai.....lekin abhi bhi thoda bukhar hai........

Shabd: achcha ab main rakhta hoon woh log aa gaye.........bye

Mahi: Bye.......aur lunch karna mat bhulna........

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Thodi dair ke baad phir se Shabd ka phone aata hai.......

Mahi: Shabd ab kya kiya maine.....

Shabd: apni dawai lena bhool gayi na tum.........

Mahi: woh bas main lene hi ja rahi thi........

Shabd: ab pehle dawai kha lo........aur suno......muje aane me thodi dair ho jayegi......tum khana kha lena aur so jana......thik hai.......

Mahi: thik hai...................aur aap raat ka khana to ghar pe hi khayenge na......

Shabd: nahi........woh kuch clients ke saath hai.......lekin tum kha lena........Bye......

Mahi: bye.........lekin raat ko aap shambhal ke aaiyega...........

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Mahi neeche hall me bethkar magazine padh rahi thi jab Soni ka phone aata hai........

Mahi: Soni.....tum........kaise yaad kiya aaj muje..........

Soni: woh abhi abhi Shabd ka phone aaya tha ki tumhe bukhar hai......

Mahi: bas kuch nahi hai thoda sa hi to hai......yeh Shabd bhi na Subaah se kitni bar meri khabar puchne ke liye phone karte hai....aur ab tumhe bhi pareshan kar raha hai........

SonI: pareshan nahi.......isse to Shabd ke pyaar ka pata lagta hai...........kitni parwaah karta hai........uski aawaz me bhi dard tha.........janti ho Mahi..........Shabd tumse bahot pyaar karta hai......

Mahi: Janti hoon........woh mujse bahot pyaar karte hai...........itna pyaar karte hai ki badle me kuch mangte bhi nahi......kabhi kabhi muje bahot bura lagta hai unke liye.........

Soni: agar itna hi bura lagta hai to kyun usko apna nahi leti.......Mahi........jitni jaldi tum is rishtey ko apna logi utna tumhare liye achcha hoga.......ek baat kahoon tumse.......bura mat manna........lekin Abhi kabhi tumhara pyaar tha hi nahi........jo hume chod ke chale jaye woh kaise hamara ho sakta hai......tumhara pyaar hamesha se hi Shabd tha... ......is liye koi na koi aise halat tum dono ke beech bante rahe ki tum dono ek dusre se bandhe rahe.......yeh to upperwale ka nirala khel hai........kahi aisa na ho ki tumhe bahot dair bad pata chale aur tab tak bahot dair ho gayi ho.........

Mahi: main tumhari baat ko bahot hi achche se samaj rahi hoon...........tum thik keh rahi ho........woh yaadein hi kyun yaad rakhi jaye jisse dard milta ho.......isse achcha yeh hai ki Main Shabd ke saath woh yaadein banau jise yaad karke mere chehre pe hasi aa jaye............

Soni: ab lagta hai kahi na kahi Shabd ne tere dil me jagah bana li hai.......

Mahi: main tumse jooth to nahi bolungi lekin yeh sach hai ki jab bhi woh mere pass hote hai to kuch ajeeb sa mehsoos hota hai.......uske saath rehna muje achcha lagta hai..........uska mera khayal karna muje achcha lagta hai....aisa lagta hai ki main kabhi thik hi na ho.........raat ko Shabd ka intzaar rehta hai......shabd ke pasand ka khana banane me ek ajeeb sa maza aata hai.........pata nahi lekin agar yeh pyaar hai to haa Soni main Shabd se pyar karne lagi hoon..........itna pyaar ki tumhe bata nahi sakti........Shabd thik hi kehte the ki uska pyaar kabhi to unke liye mere dil me jagah bana hi lega.........aur aaj woh jagah Shabd ne le li hai.............

Soni: aaj main bahot khush hoon..........aakhir tumhe apne pyaar ki pehchaan ho gayi.......ab dair bilkul mat karna aur jald se Shabd ko jake bata dena ki tu use kitna pyaar karti hai..........

Mahi: bas sahi waqt ke saath main unhe bata dungi.......

Soni: achcha ab main rakhti hoon........lagta hai Veer aa gaye.....

Mahi: jiju ko mera namaste kehna......aur jald se jald hume milne aana ..............bye........

Soni: bye..........

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Raat ke dus baj gaye hote hai........Mahi apna khana khake upper apne kamre me sone chali jati hai.........Mahi aise hi so jati hai jab kareeban ek ghante baad Shabd wapas aata hai....Shabd dekhta hai ki Mahi so chuki hai......Shabd jake Mahi ke pass me light on karta hai aur phir Mahi ke chehre ko chuta hai jab Mahi ki aankh khulti hai.........

Mahi: Shabd.........aap kab aaye.........

Shabd: bas abhi hi ...........ab kaise hai tumhari tabiyat........

Mahi: bilkul thik.........

Shabd: ab tum so jao......main kapde badal ke aata hoon.............

Shabd waha se jane hi wala tha ki Mahi Shabd ka haath pakadti hai.....

Mahi: Shabd.........kuch dair bethiye na.........

Shabd: main bas kapde change karke aata hoon.......phir baatein karte hai thik hai..........

Mahi: thik hai........

Shabd Kapde badal ke Mahi ke dusri aur beth pe bethta hai..........

Shabd: batao kya kiya aaj tumne........

Mahi: bas kuch nahi......lekin apne aap ko bahot hi akela mehsoos karne lagi thi.........yeh pura ghar muje jaise katne ko daud raha ho,,,,,,,,.....aap kabhi muje chod ke to nahi jayenge na........

Mahi Shabd ki god me apna sir rakh ke so jati hai..........

Shabd: kaise baatein kar rahi ho.......main kabhi tumhe akela nahi chod sakta.......agar aaj zaroori kaam na hota to main kabhi nahi jata......main hamesha tumhare saath hoon.......her waqt her faisle me........

Shabd dheere se apno ungliyan Mahi ke bal ko sehkane lagta hai........Mahi ko bahot hi achcha mehsoos hota hai.........Mahi Shabd ka dusra haath pakad ke aise hi so jati hai.........Shabd juk ke dheere se Mahi ke forehead pe kiss karta hai..............phir Shabd khud ko aur Mahi ko blanket se cover karta hai ..........phir woh light off karta hai aur Mahi ka haath pakad ke so jata hai..........Aaj Shabd Mahi ka woh akelapan dur karna chahta tha jisse Mahi ko darr lagta tha........Shabd aise hi so jata hai lekin kahi na kahi dono ke chehre pe ek ajeeb si hasi thi...........

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Subaah ki pehli kiran Shabd aur Mahi pe padti hai........Mahi dheere se apni aankhein kholti hai.......Mahi dekhti hai ki woh Shabd ke kitne Kareeb so rahi hai........Mahi ke chehre pe ajeeb si muskaan aa jati hai....mahi sharmake washroom chali jati hai.........Mahi ke chale jane ke bad Shabd apni aankhein kholta hai........Shabd pehle se hi jaga gaya hota hai lekin woh uth ke Mahi ko sharminda nahi karna chahta tha........Shabd uth ke bahar se newspaper leke apne kamre me aake padhne lagta hai..........thodi dair baad Mahi washroom se nikalke Dressing table pe taiyaar hone lagti hai.........Mahi apni chudiyaan pehenne lagti hai...........Shabd bas aise hi Mahi ko dekhe hi ja raha tha...........Mahi taiyaar hoke apna Mangalsutra pehenti hai aur mang me sindoor bharti hai..........Mahi aaine me se Shabd ko dekhti hai.......Mahi apne balo ko bandhne hi ja rahi hoti hai ki..........

Shabd: aaj ise aise hi rehne do khule..........

Mahi: kya kaha......

Shabd: tum khule baaloin me jyada achchi lag rahi ho..........

Mahi sharmake apne baal khule hi chod deti hai.......Mahi kamre se bahar jane hi wali thi ki..........

Shabd: aaj bahot khubsurat lag rahi ho.........

Mahi: thank you.......

Shabd (dheere se apne aap): Mahi ...........ab aur kitna intzaar karogi.........

Mahi: aapne kuch kaha........

Shabd: nahi.......tum aaj to office chal rahi hona......

Mahi: nahi..........aaj muje Market jana hai........ghar ka kuch saman lena hai...........bahot din se soch rahi thi lekin kal Kaka bata rahe the kuch chizo ki bahot zaroorat hai.......

Shabd: thik hai........tum sham ko taiyaar rehna .......hum log aaj bahar Dinner pe jayenge.......

Mahi: thik hai....kitne baje tak aap aajayenge........

Shabd: kareeban saat baje.......

Mahi: thik hai main taiyaar rahungi........aap taiyaar ho jaiye ......main aapka nasta lagati hoon............

Mahi aur shabd nasta karte hai.......Shabd Mahi ko market chodta hai aur office chale jata hai..........

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Dopahar ko Mahi woh coffeshope me jati hai jaha pe woh Abhi se pehli bar mili thi.............

Mahi Shabd ke khayalon me khoyi huyi thi...........

Voice: mere bare me soch rahi thi na........

Mahi achanak se piche mudke dekhti hai to uske pairo tale se zameen khisak jati hai..........

Mahi: ABHIIIIIIIII..........

Abhi: haa mahi.......tumhara Abhi.........kaisi ho.......

Mahi: thik hoon.........lekin tum........main kuch samaj nahi pa rahi...........

Sameera: Hi.....Mahi......mera naam Sameera hai.......Abhimanyu ke saath Amritsir base camp pe kaam karti hoon.........woh us hadse ke baad jab hume Abhimanyu mila to uski yaadash chali gayi thi........ab kuch hi din pehle woh thik hua hai.....aur jaise hi thik hua woh bas tumse milne ki zid kar raha hai.......aaj bhi use lagta tha ki tum yahi hi milogi..........dekho Abhimanyu maine tumse kaha tha na ki main tumhe tumhari Mahi se mila dungi.........

Abhi: tumhe muje dekh ke khushi nahi huyi...........

Mahi: khushi to bahot huyi...........lekin ab main woh Mahi nahi rahi................Abhi.....meri Shaadi ho chuki hai...........shayad tumne meri maang ka sindoor aur gale ka mangalsutra nahi dekha.........main apne Pati Shabd se bahot pyaar karti hoon...........

Abhi: tum aisa nahi kar sakti........tum muje dhoka nahi de sakti........

Mahi: dhoka maine tumhe nahi hume hamari kismat ne diya hai..........main apni zindagi me Shabd ke saath aage badh chuki hoon.....tum bhi apne liye koi saathi chun ke zindagi jina shikh lo..........

Abhi: main tumhare bigar nahi reh sakta........

Mahi: aur main Shabd ko nahi chod sakti.......usne mera muskil ghadiyon me saath diya hai............aur ab main sirf unse pyaar karti hoon..........ab main saat janmo tak unki ho chuki hoon.........

Abhi: main Shabd ko tabah kar dunga........main use aise tabah karunga ki tum khud mere pass aa jaogi..........main tumhe kabhi Shabd ke saath khush nahi rehne de sakta.........tumne mujse meri khushiyaan chini hai ab main tumse tumhari khushiyan chinunga.........

Mahi: tumhe jo karna hai karo.......lekin ek baat ka yaad rakhna..........jitne zakhm tum Shabd ko donge..........uska dard sirf aur sirf muje hi hoga......kyunki main unki ardhangi hoon........aur main khud mar jaungi lekin Shabd pe koi aanch nahi aane dungi.........yeh mera tumse vaada hai...........

Mahi gusse me waha se chali jati hai...............

Sameera: Abhimanyu.........ab aur kuch nahi ho sakta......Mahi ne bilkul thik kiya.........kab tak woh tumhara intzaar karti........use bhi to hakk hai apni zindagi jine ka.......

Abhi: lekin sirf mere saath...........main us Shabd ko nahi chodunga......

Sameera aur Abhi bhi wapas Basecamp pe chale jate hai...........

 

 

Edited by goodkashish - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#66
I am sooo glad you continued...this story is getting very interesting...I want shabd to know that mahi loves him before Abhimanyu starts to ruin everything. Please hurry with the next part. Thanks
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Posted: 15 years ago
#67
😭 😭 😭 owww...i want shabd and mahi together...i hope nothn hapens to shabd...plz nooo
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Posted: 15 years ago
#68
woah, wasnt expecting abhi to act so mean =[... but we all know that mahi and shabd are gonna live happily ever after (or they better! lol)

continue soon =D
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Posted: 15 years ago
#69

Hey...just read the entire ff all in one go...it's really good. You have amazing writing. Please continue soon!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#70

Part-16

Mahi us Coffee shop se nikal ke Soni ko phone karke Park me aane ko kehti hai..........jab Soni park me aati hai to Mahi bench pe bethi ro rahi thi......

Soni: Mahi.........kya hua tu ro kyun rahi hai...........Shabd ne kuch kaha.....

Mahi: nahi Soni.......Shabd mere liye bhagwaan hai aur bhagwan se kaise galti ho sakti hai.........galti to meri Kismat ki hai Soni....

Jab Shabd waha se nikalta hai.....

Shabd: are yeh to Soni ki car hai..........zaroor Veer ke saath aayi hogi.....main milke chalta hoon.........

Shabd jake unse milne hi wala hota hai jab woh Mahi ki rone ki aawaz sunta hai aur mahi ki baat ped ke peeche se sun raha hota hai........

Mahi: Soni.........kyun Abhi meri zindagi me wapas aa gaya........kyun......abhi abhi main apni zindagi Shabd ke saath jina shikh rahi thi tabhi Abhi ko wapas aana tha..........

Soni: main nahi janti ki Abhi kyun wapas aaya hai......lekin tera dil kya keh raha hai........

Mahi: kuch samaj me nahi aa raha........ek taraf mera pyaar hai to dusri aur mera pati.........abhi jisne muje pyaar karna shikhaya aur dusri aur Shabd jinhone muje Pyaar ka matlab shikhaya........abhi jisne muje khushiyon me mera haath thama tha aur ek taraf Shabd hai jinhone mera hath muskil khadiyon me thama................Abhi jo mere ek aawaz nikalne pe use pata chal jata hai to dusri aur Shabd jise main kuch na kehke ke bhi woh sab samaj jate hai............Abhi jo apni khushi pehle dekhta hai aur Shabd jo apne aap se jyada dusro ko pyaar karte hai..........Soni...main us nadi ki tarah hoon jinke do kinare kabhi bhi ek nahi ho sakte......meri bhi ek tarah abhi hai jiske saath main pyaar ki kasme khayi thi.........aur dusri aur Shabd jiske saath maine saat janam saath bitane ki kasme khayi hai..........ab main kiski kasame puri karoon.......ek ka haath thamungi to dusre ka haath muje chodna hoga...........agar Abhi ka saath chodti hoon to ek premika bewafaa kehlayegi...........agar Shabd ka saath chodungi to ek patni bewafaa hogi.......ab tum hi batao main kya karoon.......main us daurahe pe hoon jaha se muje do do manzile dikhai de rahi hai......

Soni: is raste me ya to ek premika ko bewafa hona padega ya to ek patni ko...........lekin koi bhi faisla karne se pehle us insaan ke bare me zaroor sochna jo abhi bhi tumhare dil me basta hai........aisa koi faisla mat karna jise kisi sache ka dil dukhe.......aur yaad rakhna tum jo bhi faisla logi unme me tumhare saath hoga..........tum samaj gayi........ab tu ghar ja Shabd ghar wapas aata hi hoga........aur sun jab tab Abhi ka mamla khatam nahi hota Shabd ko kuch mat batana.........

Mahi: thik hai..........ab main chalti hoon phir baat hogi..........

Soni: apna khayal rakhna......

Mahi: jee.....

Mahi aur Soni apni apni car me nikal jate hai.....

Shabd: Mahi abhi bhi Abhimanyu ko bhula nahi payi.........aur yeh to khushi ki baat hai ki Abhi zinda hai........aur wapas aa gaya hai.........muje mahi ki asli khushi use lautani hogi......muje Mahi se duriyaan karni hogi taki Mahi khud muje chod ke Abhi ke pass rehne chali jayi...........aur aakhir yahi to pyaar hota hai ki hum apne pyaar ko woh sari khushiyaan de.........aur Mahi ki khushiyaan Abhi ke saath hai........Mahi main tumse vaada karta hoon ki main tumhe aur Abhi ko milwaunga.................

Shabd ghar chala jata hai.........

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Mahi ghar pe dinner laga rahi thi jab Shabd aata hai..........

Mahi: aap aa gaye......aap fresh ho jaiye tab tak main aapki plate laga deti hoon.........

Shabd: muje bhukh nahi.....tum khalo.......

Mahi: aise kaise bhukh nahi..........aaj maine aapka manpasand khana banaya hai.....

Shabd: Mahi.....maine kaha na muje bhukh nahi.......

Shabd yeh keh ke apne kamre me chala jata hai aur sofe pe beth ke file padhne lagta hai jab Mahi khana leke aati hai..........

Mahi: kya hua......office me kisi se zagda hua....

Shabd: nahi......aur waise bhi main kyun kisi se zagda karunga............

Mahi: dekhiye meri aur bataiye kya baat hai........Shabd mujse jooth mat boliyega........

Shabd: woh aaj kal office me bahot kaam rehta hai woh dono papa nahi hai to.........

Mahi: main samaj sakti hoon.....main kal hi aapke saath chalungi........lekin is waqt aap khana kha lijiye.....

Shabd: maine kaha na ki muje nahi khana.......

Mahi: mere haathoin se bhi aap nahi khayenge..........

Mahi Shabd ke samne apne haath me roti leke khadi hoti hai............

Mahi: ple mere liye........

Shabd mahi ke haath se khana kha raha hota hai.........

Mahi: pata nahi pati ko ehsaas kyun nahi hota ki unki patni bhi bhukhi ho sakti hai.........

Shabd: i am sorry maine sara gussa tumpe nikal diya.....

Shabd aur mahi ek dusre ko khana khilate hai.........Jab Mahi plate rakh ke wapas aati hai to Shabd sofe pe takiya leke sone ki koshish kar raha hota hai.........

Mahi: shabd aap chahe to bed pe so sakte hai.........

Shabd: aur tum.........

Mahi:main bhi wahi.......aap ko yaha pe taklif ho rahi hai.......

Shabd: ab yaha sone ki aadat ho chuki hai............

Shabd yeh kehke aankh bandh karke so jata hai.........

Mahi (apne aap se): yeh Shabd ko kya ho gaya.......kal kitne khush the.......aur aaj......lagta hai koi na koi baat hai kahi Abhi ne to.........nahi Abhi aisa nahi kar sakta....................nahi yeh mera wahem hai......woh koi office ke kam se pareshan honge.........main subaah baat kar lungi..........

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Subaah main Mahi Shabd ko jagane aati hai.....

Mahi: Shabd.....uthiye.......aapko office ke liye dair ho jayegi............

Shabd: bas do mintes.......

Mahi: shabd........aath baj gaye hai.....

Mahi hsabd ko hilane lagti hai jab Shabd mahi ka haath pakad ke so jata hai.......aur Shabd ko ehsaas hota hai woh foran se Mahi ka haath chod ke Wash room chala jata hai......

Mahi: yeh aaj kal mere saath aise kyun pesh aa rahe hai...............

tabhi mahi ka cell bajta hai......

Mahi: hello......

Abhi: Good Morning my jaan.....

Mahi: tum ......tumne yaha kyun phone kiya.........maine kaha na mera tumse koi rishta nahi........

Abhi: rishta tum itni aashani se nahi tod sakti..........

Mahi: tum chahte kya ho........

Abhi: tum mujse milne aaj gyarah baje coffee shop me aa rahi ho.........

Mahi: nahi main koi tumse milne nahi aanewali ...........samje tum........

Abhi: thik hai tum nahi to main khud Shabd se milne unki office chala jata hoon......
Mahi: tum aisa kuch nahi karoge........tum shabd ke pass nahi jaoge.......

Abhi: to tum aa rahi ho.....

Mahi: thik hai lekin sirf aakhri bar tumhare saath sare rishtey khatam karne...........main tumse bad me baat karti hoon Shabd aa rahe hai............

Shabd: Mahi..........tum office aa rahi ho na....
Mahi: nahi woh aaj muje meri ek saheli se milne jana hai bahot din ho gaye.............

Shabd: mahi tum sirf haa ya naa kaho.........muje tumhare joothe bahane nahi sunne..........

Mahi: main sach me janewali hoon........

Shabd: maine kab kaha nahi janewali...........bye main chalta hoon..........

Mahi: nasta to akrte jaiye...........

Shabd: muje bahot kaam hai.......main office me kar lunga........

Shabd yeh kehke chala jata hai.................

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Mahi Abhi se milne usi coffee shop me jati hai....

Mahi: kyun bulaya hai muje.....

Abhi: aise hi tumhe dekhne ka mann kiya.......

Mahi: tum bhool rahe ho ki main ab tumhari nahi hoon......

Abhi: tum bhool rahi ho......tum mujse pyaar karti ho sirf mujse.......

Mahi: is galatfemi me mat rehna..........main tumse pyaar karti thi lekin aaj sirf aur sirf Shabd se karti hoon................

Abhi: aisa nahi ho sakta........tum apne pehle pyaar ko nahi bhula sakti......

Mahi: shayad tum kabhi mere pyaar the hi nahi.........shayad Shabd hi bachpan se mere pyaar the............Abhi tum samajte kyun nahi.........ab meri shaadi ho gayi hai aur main apne pati ke saath bahot khush hoon....

Abhi: khush hoti to tum mujse milne nahi aati........

Mahi: main yaha tumse milne zaroor aayi hoon lekin main yeh kissa khatam karne...........main tumhare haath jodti hoon...........muje bhool jao...........muje meri zindagi me akela chod do.........

Abhi; tumhe main kaise akela chod sakta hoon.............jo khud muje meri zindagi me akele chod ke chali gayi ho.........

Mahi: main tumhe dhoka nahi diya tha..........kismat ne hume dhoka diya...........aur agar kismat muje dhoka na deti to shayad main kabhi apne sache pyaar ko na pehchan sakti.........aur uske liye main tumhara sukargujar rahungi.......

Abhi: tumhe kya laga ki tum muje aise chod dogi aur main tumhe jane dunga...............khel to ab shuru hoga..........tum dekhti jana kaise ek ek kar ke main tum dono ki zindagi me duriyaan laata hoon........

Mahi: tum aisa kuch nahi karoge........

Abhi; main aisa hi karunga......aur tum chah kar bhi kuch nahi kar paogi.............good luck for your Husband's life...........

Abhi yeh kehke chala jata hai.....

Mahi: Abhiiiiiiiiiii.............Shabd ko chod do tumhari dushmani mujse hai............maine tumhe dhoka diya.........uski saza tum muje do..............mere Shabd ko nahi...........

Edited by goodkashish - 15 years ago