KAISA YEH PYAAR HAI-NEW FAN FIC

HI GUYS SO I THOUGHT OF THIS CONCEPT FOR A FAN FIC, WONDERING IF SOMEBODY WHO LIKES TO WRITE FAN FICS WOULD LIKE TO WRITE THIS ONE, I'M NOT VERY GOOD AT THIS STUFF.

 

THE KHANNAS;

ANGAD; SAME AS SHOW, BUT IS PRITVIS BEST FRIEND

NANIA; LOVING AND TOTALLY OPPOSITE IN THE SHOW

DILIP; LOVES HIS FAMILY AND WOULD DO ANYTHING FOR THEM

KARTICK; LOVES MISHTY AND IS ENGAGED TO HER

AALYIA; MARRIED TO JOSH ANGADS BEST FRIEND

THE SHARMAS;

KRIPA; SAME AS SHOW, WIDOWER OF PRITVI SECRETLY LOVES ANGAND WHO DOESN'T KNOW THIS

GAYTARIA; SAME AS SHOW

HER FATHER; RICH SUCCESSFUL BUSINESS MAN

MISHTY; LOVES HER FAMILY MANAGES KRIPA'S CARRER AND ENGAGED TO PRITVI

JOSH; KRIPAS BROTHER AND MARRIED TO AALLIYA

BOSE

DAMANI; SAME AS SHOW

PRITVI; DEAD BUT IS ALIVE  IN THIS MOTHERS MEMORIES

CONCEPT:

KRIPA AND PRITVI WERE  FRIENDS AND THEY HAVE JUST GOTTEN MARRIED A MONTH AFTER MARRIAGE PRITVI MEET WITH AN ACCIDENT AND INSTANTLY DIES, KRIPA IS RELIVES BECAUSE WHAT THE FAMILY DIDN'T KNOW WAS THAT HE WAS A DRUNK AND ALWAYS ABUSED HER, TWO MONTHS  AFTER HIS DEATH   AALYIA AND JOSH HAVE JUST GOTTEN MARRIED AND ARE HAPPY, AALYA AND JOSH KNOW THAT KRIPA LOVES ANGAD AND TOLD NANIA AND DILPI AND ARE PLANNING ON MAKING AN ANNOUNCMET , IT'S MISHTY AD KARTICKS ENGAGEMENT PARTY WHERE DILIP AND NANIA ANNOUNCE THAT IN TWO DAYS ANGAD AND KRIPA ARE GETTING MARRIED SHRAMAS AND KHANNAS ARE HAPPY, AND ANGAD IS SHOCKED BECAUSE HE NEVER THOUGHT OF KRIPA THAT WAY, AND THAT SHE WAS HIS BEST FRIENDS WIFE

WHO EVER IS GOING TO WRITE THIS CAN YOU PM ME THERE'S JUST SOMETHING I WANT TO ADD IN THE STORY BUT I DON'T WANT TO ADD IT HERE,

Eddited By Mods:-Plese do not use Capital Letters & Huge font size..

Edited by Nannu - 18 years ago

darling please continue?
nazia

PROMO

WE SEE A CAR ACCIDENT AND THEN SUDDENLY SEE AT THE BOSE HOUSE SOMEBODY'S FUNNERAL PROCDURE HAPPENING, AND THEN YOU SEE PRITVIS PHOTA AND A MAN SAYING VO LADKA KUN THA?

SOMEBODY PLEASE CONTINUE WITH THE FAN FIC I CAN'T WRITE THEM, BUT WHO EVER DECIDES TO WRITE IT PLEASE PM ME I NEED TO GIVE YOU THE STORY,

SOMEBODY PLEASE CONTINUE WITH THE FAN FIC I CAN'T WRITE THEM, BUT WHO EVER DECIDES TO WRITE IT PLEASE PM ME I NEED TO GIVE YOU THE STORY,


PLEASE SOMEONE

dat was a wsum,plz continue............. 😆 😆 😆

y dont u continue da story ur self so far da promos hav been gud if u get urself in a writer's block ppl who like da will obviously help out... 😊 so plz continue soon!

OKAY HERE I GO TELL ME HOW YOU LIKE IT

PART ONE

BLACK SCREEN THAT SAYS TWO MONTHS AGO,

YOU SEE AN DULHAN GETTING READY AND SHE IS VERY EXCITED AND HERE ARE A BUNCH OF PEOPLE HELPING HER GET READY, IN WALKS GAYTARY

G:UFF HO JALDI KARE, AUR KITNA WAQT LAOGE?

M=MISHTY,

M: UFF MAMA DULHAN KE PALA SHADDI HAI WAQT LAGEN KA AND THEN SHE LAUGHS,

G: BETA JALDI KARO PRITVI CAN'T WAIT ANY LONGER

THEN YOU SEE A GIRL TURN AROUND THE CAMERA ZOOMS IN ON HER EYES AND THEN WE SEE THE WHOLE FACE AND IT'S NONE OTHER THEN OUR VERY OWN KRIPA

K: JALO I'M READY TELL PRITVI ADN THE PANDIT TO GET STARTED.
WHILE THEY WERE LEAVING IN WALKS A HANDSOME MAN NONE NONE OTHER THEN ANGAD

A: OH KRIPA YOU ARE LOOKING SO BEAUTIFUL

K: I KNOW WHAT ELSE IS NEW

A-K BOTH LAUGH

A: SO ARE YOU NERVOUS

K: A LITTLE

A: WELL LETS GO

KRIPA AND PRITVI ARE NOW MARRIED AND THET ARE AT HIS HOUSE NOW AND DAMINI IS WELCOMING IN KRIPA.

KRIPA IS SITTING ON THE BED AND THINKING THE HER SELF: I'M SO HAPPY THAT I MARRIED PRITVI NOT ONLY IS NE MY FRIEND, BUT I KNOW THTA HE WILL KEEP ME HAPPY FOR THE REST OF MY LIFE AND NOT LET ANYTHING HAPPEN TO ME" AND THEN SHE SMILES,

SUDDENLY SHE HEARDS THE DOOR OPEN, AND SHE STARTS GETTING NERVOUS AND SHY.

PRITVI WALKS IN AND THE CAMERA IS ONLY ZOOMING IN ON HIS FEET, ALL WE SEE IS HIM WALKING TO THE BED AND NOTHING ELSE. PRITVI SITS IN THE BED RIGTH BY HER

P: KRIPA?!!!!

K: PRITVI ARE YOU DRUNK

P: NO, WHY WOULD YOU SAY SUCH A THING?

K: BECAUSE I CAN SMELL ALCOHAL ON YOUR BREATH

PRITVI ANGARLY SLAPS HER AND KRIPA IS SHOCKED AND TEARS FORM IN HER EYES, PRITVI THEN OPENS UP HIS DRESSED AND KRIPA SEE'S THE IT'S ALL FULL OF BEER AND WINE. KRIPA THINKS TO HER SELF, OMG WHATS WRONG WITH PRITVI HE WAS NEVER LIKE THIS BEFORE

P: (LAUGHING AND SLURRYING HIS WORDS)KRIPA I HAVE A SECRET TO TELL YOU

K: (NERVOUSLY) WHAT

P: NOONE NOWS THIS BUT WHEN EVERYBODY IS ASLEEP I LIKE TO DRINK BOITTLES OF ALCOHAL, AND I GET VERY VIOLENT TO

K(CRYING) PRITVI WHY DIDN'T YOU EVER TELL ME THJIS BEFORE YOU RUINED MY LIFE I HATE YOU PRIVTI I HATE YOU
KRIPA HTEN RUNS TO THE THE BATHROMM IN LOCKS THE DOOR ALL SHE HEARS IS PRITVI SINGING AND DANCING, AN HOUR LATER SHE COMES OUT SIDE AND SEE'S PRITVI ON THE BED SLEPPING SO HE SLEEPS IN THE TUB

CUT TO PRESNT IME WITH KRIPA'S EYES CLOSED WITH TEARS COMING FLOWING AND HER REMEMBERING PRITVI DRUNK AND HITTING HER THEN YOU SEE A HAND ON HER SHOULDERS

SOMEOBODY: BETA

K: YES( SHE OPENS HER EYES AND WIPES HER TEARS)

WE SEE THAT THE PERSON IS A PANDIT

PA: BETA, PLEASE FIISH THE RITUAL

K: YES PANDITJI

THEN YOU SEE PRITVI'S PICTURE AND KRIPA PUTTING A GARLAND ON IT AND BREATHS A SIGH OF REALIF AND TURNS AROUND TO SEE EVERYBODY CRYING

CAN SMEONE PLEASE CONTINUE ONE WITH THE STORY AND PM ME THERE IS A PLOT I WANT TO GIVE YOU, I DON'T WANT TO WRITE IT HERE LET IT BE A SURPRISE.

THANKS

ANYBODY BODY CAN CONTINUE JUST MAKE SURE YOU PM ME Edited by kuch kuch hota - 18 years ago

Hey i liked your story it's nice plzz CONTINUE soon it

y can't u cont kuch kuch hota
its very good
plz cont soon