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Posted: 19 years ago
#41

bery nice....plz continue! 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: happe

it was very nice part
but sorry for late reply, its just you continue after long time so didn't know until now 😛

sorry for continuing(spelling mistake) late. im trying to set my schedule but everytime it gets messed up.

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Posted: 19 years ago
#43
that was great plz cont soon. 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#44
can sum1 esle cont plz ...........
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: chocochip

can sum1 esle cont plz ...........

sssssooooooooooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrryyyyyyyyyyy!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!

promise to write a long part tomorrow, something exciting is going to happen.

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Posted: 19 years ago
#46
ok im back after the long break. and as promised it will be a long one. there are going to be many spelling mistakes, im not good at hindi. so sorry in advace.

RECAP:

all day long kripa didn't speak to anged. at the end of the day when anged came to drop her home, she still wasn't talking to him. anged stopped the car infront of her house. he got out and helped kripa with the bags.
they go inside the house. it aws late and everyone was sleeping. he put the bags down.

a: kripa can i get a glass of water.
she just knods her head.


1 min. later

kripa hands him the water. but he put in on the table.

a: kripa mienie sorry kaha na. maaf kar do. plz.

k: kripa ignores him and turns around. anged was getting furious. he turns her around. kripa got a bit scared , she starts to walks backwards until she hit the wall. anged walks toward her and lock his arms around her.

AND NOW...

k: (in a worried tone) angad

a: (doesn't say a word, come closer)

k: yeh kya kara hay ho

a: (angry tone 😡)tum apne aap ko samaje thi kya ho, hain mein mantha ho ke meine tumhe hurt kiya, par mein tho sirf mazak kar raha tha, and kripa i apologized, par phir bhi tum asse behave karahi ho jaise mein exist nahi karta.

k: ( kinda angry😡) angad muhje choro

a: nahi choroonga

k: angad meine kaha muhje chor do

a: nahi

k: angad plz 😡

a: (he let's go)

k: (walks past him,angad and kripa have thiers back towards each other.she's mad, and lost in the moment 😡 ) hain tumhne muhje hurt kiya bahut hurt kiya. angad tum jaante kya ho mere baare mein. yehi ke mein prithvi ki widwa...angad kya tum yeh jaante ho ke prithvi kaisa tha...

a: vo mera sabse achaa dost tha, of cousre mein prithvi ko jaanta tha...vo ek bahut caring, senstive, loving, fun person.

k: galat...vo sab ke samne asa behave karta tha...asli(real)prithvi ko sif mein jaanti thi

a: 😕 tum kahna kya chaathi ho

k: yehi ke tum prithvi ko nahi jaantey the

a: 😕 saaf saaf boolu tum kahna kya chaathi ho

k: kripa tells anged something but we can't hear it.

after kripa falls to the ground crying.

a: 😭😲 hepls kripa stand up

k: yehi tha saach 😭

a: (turns so his back is towards kripa)mein nahi maanta...yeh saach nahi ho sakta

k: mein jaanti thi tum mera yakeen nahi karoge...yeh tumhari maarzi hain... par angad yehi saach hai.

angad, without saying anything leaves.we see kripa crying. screen turns black.

for the next couple of days anged and kripa don't tlak to each other, or see each other. the wedding was tomorrow.
(sorry guys im not indian so i don't know how the weddings are so i just gunna skip to the phera's)


we see angad and kripa dong their phera's >> they bring kripa home >> the finish doing all the retuals >> kripa in the room. it was getting late and angad still didn't come.

k: (in her mind) angad kider hai, kya angad abhi mujhse naraaz hai, kya meine angad ko prithvi aur mere barein mein bathakey aacha kiya?

we hear the door open and in comes anged. he looked kinda sad. he goes and sits next to kripa.

a: kripa dehko tum bhi jaanti ho aur mein bhi ke is shaadi sirf meine isi liye ke kyunki sab ka yehi fasla tha. par is ka matlab yeh nahi hai ke mein apne farz nehi nibaonga...par kripa u know what i mean

k: (kripa just knods her head)

a: (puts his had on her cheek) thanx for understanding
he gets up and goes to the bathroom to change. meanwhile kripa just sits there. and comes out and kripa goes to change. when she comes out she sees angad on his laptop.
he sees her.

a: kripa tum bed par so jao, mein kuch kaam finish kar ke sofa pe sojaonga

k: angad its ok tum bed pe so sakthe ho

a: kripa meine kaha na mein sofa pe so jaonga, ab ja kar so joa plz.

k: (she wasn't in the mood for fighting so she queitly did what angad told her to.)
after abotuan hour angad finished his work and went to sleep on the sofa.


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i know it wasn't exciting but plz just bear with me.

preview: stay tuned to find out
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Posted: 19 years ago
#47
great part 😛 please con. soon and make a-k fall in love 😆 thanx for con. 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: dream_kudi

great part 😛 please con. soon and make a-k fall in love 😆 thanx for con. 😊

ur always welcome. and making a-k fall inn love, i will have to think aboutit, just keep reading and we'll see.😉

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Posted: 19 years ago
#49
great part!! plz continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#50
long time since you cont anyways thanks for conting 😃

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