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Posted: 16 years ago

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH mi lil ishuuu!!!!
omg your fanfic totally rocks dude
i just caught up with it! and boy m i hooked!
while reading i was either😭 or πŸ˜ƒ or😳 or just a mixture of all! lolz!
i loveeddd part 3! AWESOME!
awwww if only you proposed to me like dis😳
hahahaha lolz!!!
so yea i am totally loving this!
continue ASAP!
love you baby!

-maddi

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Posted: 16 years ago
πŸ‘ pls continue soon
can't wait for the next part
the proposal scene was too gud
continue soon
will be waiting πŸ‘
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Posted: 16 years ago
owesome.!! marvelous!! splendid!!

plz continue soon πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey everyone thank u sooo much for likin my fanfic! but ya after the happenin events in DMG which have me really ticked off i thought i give u a sweet update n all so hope u all like it.

Armaan comes home
Armaan- mom dad!!..where is everyone?? dadi?
n suddenly comes n twists armaan's ear
armaan looks- o dadi!!! and hugs her
dadi-so where is my bahu?
armaan- bahu?
dadi- dont try to act smart i along with ur parents know everything..u think u were gonna get engaged n we
were gonna do nothing
armaan- wait but how
armaan mom comes in- becuz we r ur parents
dad- ur father-in-law called us..dr.shanks called us
armaan lowerin his eyes- o i see
mom- n so wat r u here for now..u deicided everything wat u want us to do now huh?
armaan- come on mom..it jus it happeend so fast n
mom-shut up..now ur not gonna stay in that lil apartment of urs but stay here with us..till ur weddin
dad- yup n there is soo much to do! n little time
armaan- but
mom- no buts..omg u gotten soo skinny n take him instead n starts feedin him

Well thats armaan's parents Abhay and Kiran Malik, and armaan is an only child which is to why he is such a brat.

Hopstial
armaan- hey angie where's ridz? i havent seen or talk to her since yesterday
angie- well armaan jiju..before marriage girl n boy arent suppose to be meet in the first place n
second she is on leave so u wont see till ur weddin day
armaan- kya!!! i'll be dead till then
atul- dont worry armaan u'll see her soon after all ur weddin is in 2 weeks
armaan- 2weeks!!
atul - why too early
armaan- how am i not gonna see her for 2 weeks?

Armaan goes to his staircase n calls ridhima
ridz- hello? kaun?
armaan- tumara dhula raja
rid- oo wat do u want
armaan- so when u comin to see me
rid- armaan i cant
armaan- see this is the problem with u..here i am dyin to meet u n u tell me u cant
if u dont come see i'll get really mad!
rid- fine be mad
armaan- fine! n closes the phone

At night time rid stands on her balcony when suddenly she sees someone climbin her pipe line
rid- armaan?
armaan- hey jannu n comes up on her balcony
rid panics wat r u doin here?
armaan- why do u always panic when u see me, i climb such a long pipe n u dont see me panicin n scared n i came to see u..if u dont want i can always find
rid- shut up..i dont panic jus that i dont want u beaten with sticks πŸ˜† so go before u get caught
armaan- pyar kiya to daar na kya?
rid- ok meri Shah rukh khan..now u met me so go
armaan- nope i want a kiss
rid- armaan!
armaan- riddhima
rid hears someone comin and see looks bak n quickly gives armaan a kiss on his cheeks
rid- happy now go!
armaan smiles- very happy
n climbs bak down

So over the next few days poor armaan has done nothing but count days, as in hopstial ridz doesnt come
anymore, n after hospital his mom wont go toh kya kare bechara armaan?

armaan calls atul- hey champ today is riddhima's mehindi right
atul- ya right
armaan- okie..so listen up..i have a plan
atul- KYA!!

In the evenin guests r arrivin at Ridz house, armaan n atul come too but not as themselves but dressed up as 2 women both covered there faces with the dupttas
armaan in pink and atul in orange

atul- armaan i have a feelin were gonna get caught n beaten
armaan- shut up..i jus have to give something to ridz n we'll go home
atul- wat u wanan give
armaan thinks- actually there isnt anything to give i jus wanna meet her
atul- kya!
armaan covers atul's mouth
n suddenly riddhima comes smilin down bein brought down by anjali
both armaan n atul can do nothing but stare the function starts n armaan goes to pull ridz aside but cant since she is always followed by anjali muskaan or sapna then armaan gets an idea..he goes n tells atul to go talk to anjali
poor atul does without thinkin and lifts his veil anjali recongize him and so while the girls r busy kickin atul out armaan gets his chance n grabs riddhima
n pulls into a room

rid- do i know u
armaan lifts his veil- its me
rid- armaan! tum n starts to laugh
armaan- shut up i came to see u since its been so long (n hugs her) i missed u..see wat i do for u n then there is u
rid- so u want me to dress like a guy n come to ur house
armaan- very funny
rid- awww dont get mad..i think u look very cute.. n i missed u too
armaan- really?
n suddnely anjali comes
anjali- o riddzy ur here i was lookin for u all over n looks at armaan n whose this?
rid- oh jus no one u go i'll be right there n angie leaves
rid- ok u met me now go!..its only one more night
armaan- sighs fine..but even one night is
rid- u finish ur diagloue later i have to go now and runs away but comes bak n kisses armaan on the cheek
leavin armaan smiling n suddenly remembers his mom who must be lookin for him n then remembers atul
armaan- oh shit.. i hate weddins why couldnt i have done court marriage

plz do leave comments lettin me how it was..n also if u all have any ideas for scenes for the weddin do let me know i love to hear it n maybe fit them into the story cuz me is short on ideas n all so ya if u have any ideas let me know k 😊

cheers

isha
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey
yaaay ist 2
comment lol
dat was great
poor arman cnt belive
der getin married
aaahhh cnt wait 4 da
next parts
xxx
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Posted: 16 years ago
really gd goi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! cnntd sn!!!!!!!!!!! πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 16 years ago
awesome update!... will right more later... g2 run
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey lil_isha15,
      Just loved the part.plz continue soon maybe............2day............just loved it.
CONTINUE SOON!!!!
                  Luv
                  Zahra
Posted: 16 years ago
hey lil_isha loved your FF,a fresh intro..pls continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
tht was so cutttteeeeeeee funny n hilarious πŸ˜† .plz continue soon.or else ill die for sure in short time..lol....
luv ur ff
ishiqa