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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Tanmayi

didi....wheres the update...dying to read it...

i cant wait anymore.....plzzz update didi.... 😳 😭

tomorrow it be up for sure...its my promise...wht ever happens i will update...ok

soo sorry for making u ppl wait for this much time...

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Posted: 17 years ago

Part-51:-
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Recap: - Vidya gets saved from an accident by Tushaar. Sagar gets angry at Vidya but gets cool when Vidya apolozies and tells him that she will takecare from next time onwards. Surili gets shocked to see Tushaar and won't face him. Sdad asks Shalu that when is she going to her room making Chinu and Shalu disappointed, while Sagar and Vidya smiles to eachother looking at Chinu and Shalu.


Sdad tells everyone to go and take rest as its alredy 8:30. so, everyone starts leaving, while Sagar looks at the parking area and finds a new vehicle coverd there, so he asks Sindoora about that….

Sindoora: oh…..Sorry Sagar. I forgot to tell you. Kiran ne bheja Switzerland se. And keys are in your room.
Sagar: awwwww….its ook didi. Im really surprised, Kiran sent that fast. Oh God.
Sindoora: (smiles) Good Night Sagar.
Vidya: (who is standing next to Sagar, looks at Sindoora, smiles) Good Night didi.
Sindoora: (turns to Vidya) Good Night (and leaves to her room)
Sagar: (looks at Vidya, smiles) Chalo my darling….there's your bike.
Vidya: yes….chalthe hein….. (Blushes and runs to the bike where Sagar follows her)

Vidya reaches the bike and removes the cover from the bike and to her surprise, she finds a boquet of roses on the bike and a small slip saying: "To My Dearest Sister……Kiran & Anya". At the end of the slip its written there "look at the handle of the bike". Vidya has already a tear in her eye, where Sagar holds her and asks "what happened?" she then handovers the slip to Sagar ; Sagar reads it , looks at Vidya and hugs her saying "its ok dear….." where Vidys is still holding him. Sagar the continues "hey ….wont you see what 'your brother said' ….chalo…chalo….will see on the Handle"

Vidya raises her head and looks at Sagar, smiles and they both goes infront of the handle and find 'VidyaSagar' written on the handle. Vidya touches the handle and looks at Sagar.

Vidya: how cute……isn't it??? (Smiles)
Sagar: sooo….cute…..like you. As it's all your name and your bike.
Vidya: (blushes) hmmm…..i want to go for a ride……..
Sagar: what???!!!!! Ride???!!!!! That to now??? Are you crazy??!!!!!
Viyda: yes…..ride and now itself……yes im too crazy about my bike.
Sagar: No way….. (Goes to the cover which is on the floor and gets it to cover the bike)
Vidya: (grabs the bike cover from Sagar) if you won't feel like coming….then don't come. I will go…. (Gives a look to Sagar)
Sagar: Vidya…..please….its already 8:30 yaar. Kal chalthe hein….
Vidya: If I feel like doing something….then its final…that to its just 8:30PM.!!!
Sagar: (gives a helpless look, smiles) tum bohot ziddi ho….fine I will change my dress and be back in 5 minutes with keys….ok…..
Vidya: (smiles) yeh….i won …I won……
Sagar: haan….haan….kahi math jaao…. (Runs towards the door)

Vidya, who is looking at her bike and feeling so happy that she got a very nice bike….overhears someone talking…..she then goes to the place from where she is hearing some one's voice….and finds Chinu and Shalu there….and gets surprised to see them at that time . She hides herself behind a tree and hears to them…..

Chinu: Shalu….why are you late yaar???? You know that im waiting for you…
Shalu: arey Suno toh….just now I gave Tushaar what he wants and came back. Time toh lagegi na….you….here are shouting at me….hmm... (Makes her face)
Chinu: oh…Shalu…..please dear……im so sorry. Kal….kal….tumhe jaana hien na….so did you think anything about us…
Shalu: (is in bit tears) no…..dont know what to do. Im so afraid to tell mom about our love….even im afraid of Didi also…
Chinu: Shalu….please don't cry….we will solve it out together. Even my situation is also like that. Not getting anything what to do….
Shalu: fine….i can understand. Kal mein chali jaati hoon….we will think and solve it out later. Ok. Now I have to go…
Chinu: hmmm….i hope that's the btter way. Shalu….kuch der rukh sakthi Na... (Requests)
Shalu: no ….no….agar didi ko pata chaljaati toh…please...Love you…Good Night…Sweet Dreams…. (Walks away)
Chinu: Love you tooo dear…. (Gives a flying kiss to Shalu and leaves)

Vidya, who listens to all this, gets surprised and remains in the same state thinking about Shalu's words. When Sagar comes and holds her, she jumps up in fear and gets normal and tells that she was listening to Chinu and Shalu. Sagar smiles and says "what???!!! They both met here???!!!! Cha…I missed it…??!!!" Vidya replies "yes….." and tells him what all happened. Sagar tells Vidya that they will wait till they both admits and asks Vidya to wait and not to do anything….Vidya smiles and observes bike keys in Sagar's hand, gives a naughty look, grabs it and runs to the bike.

Sagar: Vidya…..ruko….
Vidya: (starts the bike with excitement) bethiyeh…. (Smiles)
Sagar: what????? I nee to sit back..??? No ji…..im afraid of bikes…..
Vidya: hello….sir ji….its my bike. If you want to go for a ride, you have to sit back…. (Smiles naughtly)
Sagar: hey bhagwaan….keep me safe….pata nahin yeh baawri kya karegi…. (Sits back on the seat and prays aloud "Jai Shiv Shankar")
Vidya: hum utna kharaab driving nahin karthe hein…. (And starts from there and slowly goes on to the roads)

Vidya drives the bike as if she got only one and very big chance and she has to prove. Sagar is sitting back and enjoying Vidya's driving. Sagar thinks to himself smiles and tells "Vidya…..Vidya…please ….please drive slowly yaar…darr lag raha hien….." Vidya listening to him says "aapne kahatha…..soo I wont…..i will drive with more speed….laughs" and increases the speed.

Sagar: Vidya….i didn't sit on a bike and your driving so fast yaar…I may fall down.
Viyda: acha….you have to experience my driving….

Sagar slowly starts leaning on Vidya and puts his hands on her shoulders. Vidya observes where Sagar's hands are and smiles to herself thinking that he might be afraid….. Sagar then slowly makes his hands to rundown and endsup at her waist…..Vidya shouts "awwwww…..remove your hands…humko bohot gudgudiyaan hein…" and she is shaking the bike with that. Sagar won't take the hands off and holds her more tightly.

Its thundering…..Sagar looks at Sky and says "Vidya….ghar chalthe hein….it may rain" Vidya wont listen to him and drives for a while and stops by a roadside. Sagar looks around and asks Vidya "ab kya hein…?"

Vidya: (showing towards a stall) I want to eat it…
Sagar: Vidya…..it won't be good for health. Chalo ghar chalthe hien….
Vidya: (walks to that stall) bhayya…..ek plate Pani Puri aur ek plate cutlett.
Sagar: (follows Vidya) hmm….i cannot say 'NO' to you. You know that and doing all this….
Vidya: (smiles) hmmm….humhe pata hien….aap ek baar khate toh you wont leave it….(hand overs a plate to him)

Vidya starts eating the pani puri and puts first one in her mouth and "mmmmm….mmmmm…..yummy…." Sagar is looking at his plate and looking at Vidya weiredly. Vidya observes that , takes one pani puri and asks Sagar to open his mouth and puts it in his mouth and tells him to eat slowly….Sagar biting it…..starts coughing as he swallowed pani directly….Vidya comes to him and pats him and says "araamse….first time yesa hota hien…"sagar looks at her with eyes filled with water.

Vidya feels so bad and says "chaliyeh hum chalthe hien….i cannot force you anymore….." and puts the plate back. Sagar looks at Vidya and says…….. "Hmmm….its really tasty….i like it…."Vidya's eyes widens, smiles…

Vidya: are you sure???
Sagar: yes…im very sure… (And eats the remaining in his plate)

Its starts drizziling, Vidya after finishing eating feels so cool and holds her hands tightly. Sagar pays the money and looks at Vidya, who is shivering. He takes off the jerkin which he is wearing and puts it on Vidya's shoulders. Vidya looks at Sagar and both stuck up in their world and come out of it when a big thunder sounds aloud. Vidya gets a bit feared and holds Sagar tightly. Sagar holds her and says "Vidya ….dont fear….chalo….chalthe hien…."

Vidya starts driving and is looking infront but her mind is else where. She is thinking why Sagar is not holding her …while she is in her thoughts, she hits a speed breaker and gets her senses back and controls the speed of the bike. By that jerk, Sagar unexpectedly holds Vidya and is slowly taking off his hands thinking Vidya may feel gudgudi….while Vidya holds one of his hands and puts it on her. Sagar looks at Vidya, smiles and holds her. Vidya feels so happy and rides the bike on roads as is she is the only one. It's like that only because of rain and that to its night, roads are a bit deserted.

Vidya is singing, laughing, talking and over all enjoying with Sagar. Sagar is thinking to himself "sach mein …Vidya ki joh bachpanayi thi voh sab baahar aagaya aaj" and smiles to him while Vidya's hair is coming on his face. He too is enjoying it.

At last they reaches home and slowly, silently parks the bike and goes to their room without disturbing anyone as its 12:00 AM.



Precap: - Tushaar comes and tells he loves someone, whom they all know verywell as their family member.


Hello dear Dulhanns.....how r u guys????? again a very late update.....heree im going to tell something big and shocking...".im going to end my FF".....please do comment....will be waiting for them....

Today is a bad for me....no food at all...and working working...some how i managed to type it up and posting here without going for my lunch.....

Anyways.....love to hear ur precious comments....and dont forget to leave ur comments on "Ending my FF"...😳

its me........Nandoo😛

Edited by Nandoo - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

1st 😃

Sorry couldn't comment on your last update, but I just read both of them and they were fab 👏

Tushaar is back 🥳 yaar I miss him in Dulhan 😭

Vidya was going to get hit by a car 😭😭 all cause of Sin 😡

I wonder how Tushaar knows Surilii 😕

SV were just too cute 😳😳 the bike scene was so cute 😳 but CS aren't that far behind them 😆😆

You are ending this FF 😭

Yaar please don't do that, but if you do, then please start another one soon 😊

Can't wait for your next update 😉

From Shireen 😳

Edited by snsali_pooja - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
DIDIIIIII AAP KO MERI KASAM....PLZ DONT END THIS FF!!!!!
okay...I think i'm getting to filmy 😆
Par did...plz dont end this FF...
Ur FF is in the first plce on the poular topics of dulhann...
Plz don't end this FFFFFFFF!!!!!!!!!!!

***Fantastic update!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
awesome update! I hope you get to eat soon Nandoo! if you have to end this fic soon, I hope you come back with something new soon! 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
OMG...Nandoo ur update was just fantastic 👏 u fullfilled ur promise about updating on friday...i was so excited wen i saw u update coz i was luking forward to it....im also looking forward to ur next update wen u gonna update ?...oh yes dnt even think about ebding this FF coz it is jus awesome 😳 how can u even think about ending it ? come on Nandoo u have to listen to me !....soz im replying late coz i went to school as i am feeling much better then before 😃 and i jus saw ur update...and i commented on it ASAP 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: snsali_pooja

1st 😃 yes dear....u r the first...

Sorry couldn't comment on your last update, but I just read both of them and they were fab 👏 thts ook dear...ohhh great u read both the parts.....Awwwwwww Thanks a bunch yaar...😳

Tushaar is back 🥳 yaar I miss him in Dulhan 😭 yes he is back to give a jhalak.....yes i too miss him....a supporting hand....a well smart person...😃

Vidya was going to get hit by a car 😭😭 all cause of Sin 😡 yes that sin's acts are becoming more sinfull....😡

I wonder how Tushaar knows Surilii 😕 hmmm i tooo wonder on tht part dear....😉

SV were just too cute 😳😳 the bike scene was so cute 😳 but CS aren't that far behind them 😆😆 ohhhh really dear...i have to admit it that SV are damn cute...and CS rocks all the way along with them...😳😉

You are ending this FF 😭 yes dear...have to ...coz my timings and work are not allowing to continue.....wht to do...no other way...😭😭😭

Yaar please don't do that, but if you do, then please start another one soon 😊 hmmmm i have to end it yaar...and yes u can expect a new and trendy story soon from my side....i already selected a name for it tooo....😳😃

Can't wait for your next update 😉 yes u will get it soon.....

From Shireen 😳 love ya...Nandoo

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Posted: 17 years ago
Hello Nandoo di..
Sooooooooooo sorryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy I didn't really but i did read ur update but i am sure you know the reason why.. 😳
But this time i had to reply what on earth is wrong with Sindoora 😡 😡 😡 Poor Vidya 😭 You're update was fantastic!!!! 👏 ...

Ok Didi I totally understand why you wanna end this update cuz i am going through the same experince.. I cannot manage.. But I get emotional black mailed very fast and the my two good friend jino nai mere dono haat rokay way hain are stopping me for ending it.. But I DON'T WANT YOU TO END IT... 😭 Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz... Per main appko force nahi karoon gi cuz i totally understand but phir bhi plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz...
Anyways continue soon.
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: pinkpinkers

DIDIIIIII AAP KO MERI KASAM....PLZ DONT END THIS FF!!!!! Arey meri sweety pinky....yesa math kaho yaar...i cant say NO to you guys...but kya karoon ...my work and office not letting me to do it.....see today i have to update it but coz of my work i didnt even write the update yet....god knws whn will i get time....😕
okay...I think i'm getting to filmy 😆 haan thoda toh hien but after alll u r my sweety na...chalega...😛
Par did...plz dont end this FF... yes dear...im also not at all feeling like to end it,.....but have to ....dont worry....i guess u will get a sweet thadka from me soon....i even selected name for my next one....😉😳
Ur FF is in the first plce on the poular topics of dulhann... yes pinky...i saw that...i was super surprised to see that.....really sweet seeing that...😃😳😃
Plz don't end this FFFFFFFF!!!!!!!!!!! will try...but i can assure this much ki u will get my updates till i reach 150th page....coz it would be the end point for a topic here and end to my FF too....😭😛

***Fantastic update!!!!!!!!!!!!!awwwwwwwwwww Thanks a million meri choti sweety pinky....😳

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

awesome update! awwwwww Thanks a bunch dear....Sonali...I hope you get to eat soon Nandoo! yes dear...i ate that day by 10:00PM...you knw...if you have to end this fic soon, I hope you come back with something new soon! 😃aww thats a very nice thing in u dear....u expected correctly and u will get it too. u are very optimistic dear....😳...i thought of giving u ppl a surprise after sometime...whn u miss me and my FF with my next n new one......but i was unable to resist myself without telling u guys...i already selected title for my next one .....😳

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