My FanFic: Continuation from 082504 - Page 16

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Posted: 20 years ago
aww guli...not fair...u left us in suspense...well nice job...i hope kripas baby is safe....and i hope angad and karthick teach that mishti a lesson...anyways keep up the great work and continue soon
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Part 45

Angad grabs the doc by the collar

Angad: Finish what you were saying!!

Doc: If you guys hadnt brought her on time then she wouldve lost the baby!!!

Everyone is shocked!

Doc: Ur baby was saved becuz you came at knick of time!!!!!!!!

Everyone is relieved

Misthy is mad

You can tell on her face

K looks at her

He realizes it was her plan

He comes to her and slaps her one

Everyone is like why did he slap her

K explains that it was her

A: Is this true?

M doesnt say anything

Angad is disgusted!!

M leaves!!!

Everyone goes in and see Kripa

Kripa is sleeping

Angad sits next to her

K is like thank god!!!!

The real hero is him!!!

Angad: I dont know how to thank you!!!!

K: We are family!!! we will do anything for each other!

Angad smiles

Doc tells everyone to leave the room and let her rest

Angad tells everyone to go home and he will wait

No one wants to But he insists

Angad waits outside the room

Kripa opens her eyes

Angad comes in

Kripa is very grateful that K saved her

Angad said that it was all Mishty!

Kripa is shocked!!!

A: All becuz she wanted us to break up!

Kripa is angry!

Doc says that she is better so she can go home today!

Later in that afternoon..

Kripa leaves the hospital

Everyone is waiting for her

She arrives

Naina comes there and hugs her

She sits down on the couch

K comes there

Kripa stands up and thanks K for everything

K says no problem!!

Kripa gives him a hug and everyone is happy

Misthy is throwing tantrums and throwing things all the place

She is yelling how she isnt gonna spare none of them and will ruin them!!!!



The End
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Posted: 20 years ago
great work 😛
wicked mishty 😡 😡 😡
contiue soon 😉
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Posted: 20 years ago
great job guli...i hope everything will be ok now,...great part keep up the great work and continue soon
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Posted: 20 years ago
PArt 46

M now knows that Angad will never be hers!

Now she doesnt care

All she wants is for the whole family to be destroyed!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

She thinks of something so all of them would suffer!!

But what?

Khanna house

Everyone is happy

No more tension amongst anybody anymore

Kripa brings up the topic for K getting married

K is saying no that he doesnt want to get married

Everyone insists!

Kripa: yes you have to! and i will pick the eldest daughter in law of this house!

K is like now i have no choice!

Kripa starts bahu hunting for K

She has seen many girls but none of them dont match!

She keeps looking and looking

SHe even knows K pictures but he rejects all of them

Kripa keeps trying and trying

Kripa is determined to get one!

She comes across one girl

She is very nice and sweet

She comes from a rich family and everything

Lots of money etc..

Her family members are obssesed with only their money and their status!! Their daughter doesnt care about that!!! She lives her own life

Kripa goes and checks her out

She likes her

The families come together

They get along very well

The problem is that her fam thinks they are all that and The girl doesnt like that!

She likes the enviornment at Khanna house

Even though they are rich and everything they dont act all that!

So both family agrees and now set a wedding date

K likes the gal

I will name her Priya!

Priya thinks that K isnt that bad either!

K and Priya get to know each other a little better and become close

But Problems arise when Misthy comes to know about it

She knows the fam very well

She talks the parents and tell them how K is crazy and what not!

The family is shocked!

Priya listens but she knows everything cuz K told her the whole truth about him!!

She doesnt know Misthy that well!!! And K didnt tell Priya what M tried to do!

So she doesnt care!

The family gets upset about K.... (they dont know that Priya knows)

They go to Khanna house and break it

Everyone is shocked!

K thinks that its Priya that told them!

Misthy finds out and is happy!!!!!

M: if you guys think this is bad...just wait and watch to see what i can do!! becuz i will give you so much sorrow that wouldnt even dream of it!!!!!!!

She laughs!!!!!!!!!!!




The End
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Posted: 20 years ago
that was good
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Posted: 20 years ago
great job guli...keep up the great work and continue soon hun
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Posted: 20 years ago
wow this iz a wonderful story guil continue soon!
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Posted: 20 years ago
Part 47

K is mad

He doesnt want to talk to Priya anymore

Priya is trying to talk to him but no use

She is sad

Kripa is tensed about the whole thing

Angad tells her to relax becuz she is pregnant

Kripa is going crazy

Angad takes her out for a few hours and to clear things out

Kripa doesnt want to but Angad forces her

They talk about random things

They go to the park and sit on a bench

They smile looking at other things

They see a old couple walking

A: That will be us in 50 years!

Kripa smiles

K: yes old fat and ugly!

A: Old?? Ugly??? and Fat.. look whos talking!

Kripa is shocked!

Kripa: what you are calling me fat!!!!??

A: Well... you do eat a lot and..

Kripa hits him

And they both laugh!

A: Dont worry about anything!!! everything will be fine!!!

K: I hope so!

A: And plus isnt ur baby shower coming up!

K: yes but i mean now..

A: Hey let ur baby shower come and we will talk about everything else later!!

They hold hands and walk

People are looking at them and are smiling

The old couple does to

They come back home

The atmosphere at the house is very dull

Angad tells them dont worry about it right now and get ready for the baby shower

becuz it is in 3 days

They are like okay

Preperations are on

Priya is calling K

K keeps hanging up on her

She is sad

She wants to talk to him but he wont listen

She calls up Kripa

but she is busy

M goes to Priya's house

She tells them they are having a baby shower and they dont care about anything what they said

her parents are digusted!!

Priya comes out and slaps Misthy

She is shocked!!

Her parents yell at her

Priya tells her parents that she knew everything about K

They are shocked!

M is angry!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 20 years ago
Part 48

M is angry!!

Her parents are supporting M in every possible way

She cant believe it!

Then they start talking crap about them

Priya is shocked!

She goes in her room

She tries calling K but still no use

M is happy about the whole thing!!

Priya calls Khanna house

Angad picks up

Priya is trying to talk but Angad says that ur family said enough so he tells her not to call back ever

But before he hangs up Priya tells him to listen

Both of them are talking back and fourth and Priya mentions M

Angad is shocked

Priya is talking but her dad comes there and hangs up the phone

her dad is saying that she will not go to that house!! and dont talk to people like them

Angad tries to talk to K

K isnt listening but then Angad tells him everything

Priya and her dad have a fight and her dad kicks her out of the house

Priya luckily has her phone and only that

She is crying and walking on the streets!!

K calls the house

Priya's dad curses him out and says that Priya is dead!!

K is shocked!!!!!!!!!!

dad: yes priya is dead for us!!!

K is a little relieved that she is alive... but she has been kicked out of the house

K looks for her

Angad tells everyone what has happened!

Misthy is happy!

She knows that priya will go into that house so she will ruin their lives in every possible way!!!

Priya is sitting in front of a temple

She is crying

K is looking all over for her

But cant find her anywhere

Priya is looking down and not realizing anything

Everyone at Khanna house are hoping that Priya is okay!

Naina: I hope she is okay!!!!

Kripa: Nothing will happen to her! And when he does find her he will bring her here!! i know!

A: I will not spare that Mishty!

He is so mad at her right now!

K is driving around and spots Priya

K: Priya???

Priya looks up

Quickly wipes her tears and acts as if nothing has happened

P: What are you doing here?

K: Priya..

P: look i know you dont want to talk to me.. i understand....

She starts walking and crying

K: Why are you lying to me?

Priya stops walking

P: I am not lying!!!!

K follows her and stops her

Turns her around

K: I already called ur house

She is shocked!

K: I am sorry that i wasnt talking to you!

Priya cries

He hugs her!

K: Come on!!

P: Where?

K: To my house

P: No i cant go there

K: Then where will you go?

P: Anywhere... but after what my parents said to urs... i wont be able to face them

K: My parents are like that and plus they are waiting for you anyways

P: They are?

K nods his head yes

She smiles

Everyone is waiting for K to arrive

K arrives

They are looking at him

Priya is behind him

Kripa has a feeling that she is behind him

Kripa: K bhaiyya move a little

K: Why?

Kripa: Come on.. move

Kripa goes to him and moves him and Priya is there

She is crying

Everyone looks at her

She looks down



The end

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