DoDilMilRaheHain-Part 46 pg 145..IOTM - Page 102

Originally posted by: pwincess kanzi

i loved ure promo! plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cntd sn! 😳

aww thanks will continue soon!

Kajal 😛

Originally posted by: cute_unknown_fr

nice promo but who the strangers? 😕
i think kripa&angad(but i m not sure)
loved u r all parts 👏 👏 👏

hm AK..well lets see! lol

thanks

Kajal 😛

Originally posted by: muskaan_2008

plz cont soon

will try!..i mean will continue in this hour! lol

Kajal 😛

Part 45B- Dance!

Atul and Anjali glanced furiously at each other. Crossed their arms and looked away...Anjali walked onto stage pasting a fake smile on her face as the two were called on stage.

The music began to play..
(the song is Ek Uncha Lamba Kad)

Anjali had her hands on her hips, a small smile of sarcasm on her face thinking,'Oh so he is going to be funny by not coming on the stage is he?' She turned her head to find Atul not standing there. She looked back at the audience, enjoying the performance. Anjali turned her head and found Atul standing beside her, doing rap gestures with his hands, and beginning
to walk around her, as she her eyes followed him. Had she done the wrong thing yelling at him?

ek uncha lamba kad, duja soni vi tu had
Atul and Anjali hit shoulders with each..more so Atul jutted his shoulder in her face and she gasped, a bit shocked! He was better at the rehearsels,she decided to let it slide.
teeja roop tera cham cham karda ni) - 2
Atul took his hand and it played across her face but this wasn't the move..Atul was supposed to be twirling her, therefore she had stuck out her hand and leaned in, only to find empty air making Anjali stumble. Now Atul responded to that move as Anjali leaned back and fell. She was on her bottom, arms crossed fuming. Atul offered her an hand but as Anjali went to accept, Atul took it away and ruffled his hair. Anjali pushed herself up fuming..deciding to give it one more chance.
main avi teri ute marda ni - 2
This time Anjali and Atul were supposed to play a game of cat and mouse..cat being Atul and the mouse Anjali. But Atul ran away from Anjali instead, Anjali decided to chase him making the audience laugh, remembering Atul's solo 'dance.'
nain chak chak chak, tujhe tak tak tak - 2
Atul stopped running and advanced on her. She stumbled off the stage making Atul laugh..'this is what she got for insulting him. She was truly the one and only Miss.Snobby Stuck Up!'Atul backed off and began doing random moves..as Anjali climbed back up on the stage..gave one look to Atul and stormed off as Atul walked off waving bye and taking a bow as the Atul
applauded to this mayhem of a performance. As the music tuned off to a wavy occurance and then silence.

Anjali and Atul came off stage and stormed off in different directions, but equally angry. As Ridhima saw them leave, she came out from the curtains. It seemed she had decided to use Armaan's method and watch secretly. Armaan walked up to and saw her sighing, she looked so adorable. With loose bouncy curls, bangs straightened and covering her eyes a little, and her dress. What was even sweeter was the she was wearing Armaan's earrings..she looked so cute.
'Not late right?' he said adjusting his tie, smiling.
'Just on time! Ready?' she said, smiling; pulling on her scarf quite loosely.
He nodded and led her onto the stage as Dr.Kirti called for them again.

The music began playing. (Armaan and Ridhima are dancing to the song Ek Din from Naqaab... http://www.lyricsmasti.com/song/4718/get_lyrics_of_Ek-Din-Te ri-Raahon.html)

Ridhima's scarf blew off her shoulder, she followed it. Her eyes on the scarf, which landed on Armaan's face. Her body clashed into his muscular frame. Armaan pulled the scarf off and held out her hand, offering a dance. She took it and placed a hand on his shoulder as he placed his on slender waist. They moved their feet back and forth, staring deeply into each others eyes, letting their hearts take control over everything, the dance and mind. Armaan and Ridhima were just lost in each other's eye, lost in a feeling called love.

[Ek din ..Ek din teri raahon
Baahoon mein panaahon mein
Aungaa khojaunga
Ek din tera ho jaunga ]2

Armaan let go of Ridhima's waist, but clutched her hand tightly. The turned their backs to the audience, looking sideways at each other, smiling as the audience smiled even more. They had only just begun to dance and by far this would be their fav. dance because the two dancers were lost in love, silently falling deeper and deeper in the ocean that was already too small to contain their blossoming love. Ridhima was standing with her arms out and Armaan was standing behind her, his hand holding on to her hand ever so delicately, the other exploring the feel of her arm. Her eyes were closed, as head tilted back to rest between his neck and shoulder and a smile played across her face. Ridhima walked behind Armaan, and slid an arm through his and leaned back as Armaan's arm came to support her back. Both still clutching each other's hands, their only source of support to believe this was all true. Without each other's special touch, they would not be able realize that this was reality, not a figment of their imagination. He straightened her and began pulling her closer, not part of what they had practiced..but something his heart was telling him to do..he came closer as her eyes opened and he stared deeply into them, smiling as his heart lurched forward..he wanted to get lost in those eyes for ever...

[Yeh dil to na keh yeh baatein
dil to na keh saka]2

The began to back of slowly, unwillingly letting go of each other's hand so it could be caught moments later. The waved them arms out slowed, and Ridhima twirled into Armaan's arms and he caught her hand and moved back and forth, just waltzing around, in each other's arms..forgetting their choregraphy..the audience didn't notice though. They were all holding their
breathes like they had never done before. Even Kripa was watching intently,her heart pouring out all her pains from before, as a single tear came out of her almond eyes. She blinked her eyes..this is what true love was. The meaning of love was in front of her. Had she ever really loved Shabd that she should blame Ridhima for ruining her life..she had to find out. Ridhima
held on to Armaan's hand, stodd next to each other, bending away from each other, glancing into each other's eyes. Ridhima leaned on to Armaan's shoulder when Armaan tugged on her hand, as he slipped his hand around her waist and lifted her up, Ridhima's hand wrapped around his shoulder and her legs up, knees bent. Armaan walked in a circle and put her down.
They walked back and forth kicking their legs up and down, snapping their fingers. Ridhima took Armaan's hand and he twirled her...both smiling, staring into each others...both happy..they had forgotten that they were performing in front of an audience...they were lost in each other. Armaan stopped twirling her and held her again. They moved their feet back and forth, hands holding onto each other, then Ridhima fell back in a dip with Armaan staring into her serene eyes.

[Tu jaane na tu
Chaahat meri kitni betaab hai ]2
Ho jo barso meri palkon mein tha
Tu wohi khwaab hai

Ridhima and Armaan, slid away from each other..and then Armaan came and then Ridhima ran up to him, and he lifted her in his arms..she felt like a bird. Her eyes were closed and he walked in a circle and then placed her on the floor. She begin to spin and ended up in his arms...He lifted her up infront of him, so that one leg wrapped around his hips, her other hand around his shoulder and he was supporting her from her waist..he turned in a full circle like this and then played with his hands, so that she jumped in the air and he caught her side ways, and made her spin in a circle..(the move they practiced a bit when they were in the dance studio)...Armaan held on to Ridhima's hand and leg as she bent back and then plunged forward. She jumped into the air in his arms, leaning to his right, her hair spread across his face as he inhaled her rose-like essence.

[Har ghadi har ghadi yaadoon mein
vaadon mein iradon mein
Aungaa khojaunga
Ek din tera ho jaunga ]2

Armaan let her on her feet and she faced him as they held each other's hands and moved back and forth. Armaan twirled in really fast and then she leaned back and moved in her in semi -circle and pulled her up very fast..close to him. She then stood still like a ballerina and Armaan did some fancy hip-hop moves..the music changing just for him..his magic was inveitable. Armaan slid his arm around Ridhima's waist and walked behind her and they bent forward...together. Armaan's hand felt its way up her back and fastened her zipper. At first her expression was surprised, her lips forming in a little 'o' but then they curved into a smile, feeling the silky cloth against her back. They leaned backwards and she turned around, gazing into his eyes. They began doing salsa moves, only conentrating into each other's eyes.

[Yeh dil to na keh yeh baatein
Dil to na keh saka ]2

Ridhima stood behind Armaan, stepped forward as Armaan stuck out his leg, tripping her. He caught her just behind her head and dragged her forward. Then he pulled her up, and next thing you know she was standing on his hands, but for a spilt second. Ridhima backflipped into the air and landed right behind him. Her hands wrapped around him from behind and she slid to the ground as he held out his hands between his legs and pulled her up. He put one arm around her waist and the other was holding Ridhima's other hand, streched out to their side. Armaan led Ridhima one way and then the other. The audience noticing how they didn't even have to look at the ground once..this was so much better then the other performance. You could feel the love from the beginning but now also the passion. Well the woman could feel the love and passion as the men, including Ridhima's own father, just watched the two perform. Kripa just felt like giving Ridhima a hug so she could forget all the bad feelings they held before. Ridhima never ever had felt like this before and Kripa knew that. She was very sure that Shabd and Ridhima's love was only one sided, from Shabd's side..but what about what happened in the garden that day. Was it all a plan or was it all unintentional? Kripa promised herself she would find out right after the performance and her first help would be the man sitting next to her..who seemed to be having tears in his eyes? Kripa looked at him a little shocked, but shook her head and watched the performance, smiling hestitantly.

[Yeh Jhukti nazar
Jaane jigar hosh lejati hai ]2
Mein kaise kahon
Ek ajnabi dard dejati hai

Ridhima and Armaan slow danced this part. Swaying in each other's arms..Armaan twirling her in and out. Ridhima occasionally doing fancy moves (sorry dont know much about slow dancing...dont do it much! 😛)..Ridhima and Armaan were learning so much from each other during this dance. The few minutes they stared into each others eyes, they could read each other's hearts. They knew what they were feeling..and it seemed to be so right at the moment, and little did they know it was probably one of the rightest things they had done..well more for Armaan. 😃..

Chupke se Chupke se teri neeedon mein
Khwaabon mein khayalon mein
Chaaunga Khojunga

Armaan and Ridhima broke out of their slow dance and begin to dance beside each other. Moving their arms in a circular motion, unable to get their eyes of each other. The audience was watching them like there was no tomorrow, and there probably was no tomorrow because only God knew what was coming for them..they might as well die for what lie in store was something what they were least expecting especially Ridhima...her life was going to turn upside down.

[Ek din ..Ek din teri raahon
Baahoon mein panaahon mein
Aungaa khojaunga
Ek din tera ho jaunga ]2
[Yeh dil to na keh yeh baatein
dil to na keh saka]4

Ridhima and Armaan returned to the slow dance as the music faded. The audience opened and closed its eyes as one to find Armaan and Ridhima resumed in the same spot as the beginning of the dance. Ridhima looking into his eyes, his hand still left hanging and the scarf strewn across his face. Ridhima glanced at his hand, just took the scarf of his face and walked away. He walked away too. She looked back and smiled at him. He looked back and smiled at her, ruffling his hair. (They both looked back at the same time! So sweet na?) They stopped, like time stopped as the curtains fell, signalling the end of the competiton.

Dr.Kirti came on to stage as people began talking about the final performance...even Kripa began talking aniamtedly to Angad about the dance and she was saying good things. Not about Armaan but about Ridhima..actually good things. Can you believe it? Well, Angad couldn't and neither could Minnie. The while the youngster had been sitting there all she had heard was negative views about Ridhima from that Kripa..but now she was speaking things so sweetly..how come?

'Please people settle down! The results are in! May we please have all the participants on stage?' said Dr.Kirti in Hitler ishtyle.
Sapna and Shabd walked onto the stage first, looking cheekily at each other, smiling. Next came Atul and Anjali, not looking at each other. Their anger hadn't melted yet. Awww.. (imagine Atul mad..so sweet!) Next came the 'perfect' couple, Armaan and Ridhima. Armaan's hand was around her waist, and Ridhima was just waving to the audience. They smiled sweetly back, Ridhima's father didn't mind at all..after all he knew Armaan since a kid and had his faith in him and his daughter.

'Thank you!' said Dr.Kirti. 'Well first of all great job everyone! Very well choregraphed. You guys all had lots of nerve to come and dance alone, especially Dr.Ridhima..you did it all alone,
no help at all! I must say, you performed very well!'

'Thank you ma'am!' said Ridhima, blushing a little.

Kirti smile at her and continued,'Well, for the awards now. We have a runner up male and female and first place male and female awards. The runner up..male is a hard working doctor at Saanjeevani. He recently joined and did a bhangra style! Congratulations Dr.Shabd Sareen.' Shabd walked up to his co-worker and excepted the award, leaving Atul and Armaan
nervous. Who had recieved first place male?

'Runner up...female is a new intern who has been working very hard..she has learned lots and performed very well, an attitude dance! Dr.Anjali Gupta, congratulations' and Anjali's anger melted as she went and accepted the award, a huge smile on her face.

'Our first place..male did a brillaint job..we had some hidden talent in Saanjeevani that we learned about today! The winner is..Dr...Armaan Malik! Though Dr. Atul your dance was very well performed but more so a comedy display then the dance! So sorry! But job well done to all of you!' Armaan went up to Atul and gave a buddy hug, as Atul laughed. They both went
and got the award..Armaan went and stood next to Ridhima again. She smiled at him, and gave him a thumbs up.

'And our first place female is...must say she worked very hard and did something totally new. She grasped the mind of the audience quite well, did something risky. Yes I am talking about Dr.Ridhima Gupta! She performed all by herself..and was the only one! Congratulations!' said Dr.Kirti. Ridhima went and hugged Sapna and Anjali. Then she went up to Dr.Kirti and accepted the award, surprisingly Dr.Kirti pulled her into a hug, a quick one but it was a hug!

'Congratulations to all the winners, and Dr.Sapna. Your dance was great but could have been better if you had more attitude! Very well choregraphed and performed..but Ridhima beat you to first place by doing a solo performance! And now..I would like to call Mr.Angad Khanna and Miss.Kripa Sharma up on stage to announce the couple winners!'

Angad and Kripa walked on stage, both smiling.

'Well..for the third place couple that will have to be Drs. Atul and Anjali because they performed an incomplete and totally non sync dance! Try harder next time guys!' said Angad, giving them a small trophy. Atul and Anjali both touched each others hands as they reached for the trophy. They both left it, and it clinked on the stage.

Angad stared and continued,' Second place goes to a vert sweet adorable couple that grasped the audience's full attention! Yes you guessed right, Drs. Shabd and Sapna! Congratulations to them!' said Angad clapping as Kripa gave them their prize. This meant that first place went to Armaan and Ridhima. Both were shocked as Angad called their names, ' First place goes
to the only couple left, Drs.Armaan and Ridhima! Great dance guys, you got the audience's undivided attention. You could feel the passion in your dance, the power that made us stay glued! Brilliant!' said Angad, shaking Armaan's hand and giving Ridhima a hug. Kripa handed the award to the two and she actually smiled at Ridhima and Ridhima returned her smile.

But Armaan looked at the two suspiciously and glanced at Angad, who just shrugged his shoulders. Ridhima gave Armaan a hug and bowed to the audience, once again giving her flying kiss. The audience cheered as they walked of the stage.

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Next Day

'Welcome Interns, Staff Members and Doctors! This is the first Intern of the Month Award for this year! There was touch competiton especially between Drs. Armaan and Ridhima. Both performed quite well! They have improved and learned alot, proven by their actions! But sadly only one intern can win this award and this month that intern is...'

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After the long delay, I again leave you in suspense! Hehe, how nice of me! Well this is the end of the competition! Hope you liked it! Will continue faster..its easier now! lol Do

Comment..good or bad!

Love Kajal 🤗

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okay okay gussa mat hona...sorry just came back from practice a little while ago...and I knew I was forgetting something...so instead of sleeping I'm here fulfilling a promise I made to my sweet Kajal! 😉

Before I get to details...here is a little shayari from me to you about your recent update...

Aisa laga ke hum the waha

Asli duniya ko bhool kar koh gaye hum jahaan

Likhavat thi kamal ki jisme har ehsaas tha jawan

Aisa pyar ka naach socha tha kahaan

Dil se taali uss ke liye jisme khoobsurat kahyaal samate hai jahaan!

-Shweta

to Kajal! 😊 (hope you liked it!)

Okay firstly I loved the whole Atul and Anjali scenes....I could completely imagine it myself! simply superb....and the dance between Ridz and Armaan...can I say WOW!!!! greatly described...I felt like every emotion was present in every step...and believe me dancing is my passion I wouldn't lie to you about that! 😳

I'm kind of surprised to see Kripa's sudden change of nature though....something just seems too right about her...which makes me feel that she isn't genuine YET! So I wonder if Armaan and Ridz will confess...hmmm so you're keeping us on our toes with that one right?

Just wanted to tell you that you are an amazing writer...and I know you've heard the whole age thing before...but really I feel so proud! you are just tooo good at this! 👏👏

You just need to update quicker! 😆 Okay luv ya! ek jaado ki jhappi! 🤗

Tab thak ke liye yeh jaadu ki jhappi lo! 🤗

👏 omg!!!this part was totally amazing...u finally updated it and it was great!!!thank you soo much for the pm...do continue soon..
luv,
palak.

Originally posted by: p_a_l_s

👏 omg!!!this part was totally amazing...u finally updated it and it was great!!!thank you soo much for the pm...do continue soon..
luv,
palak.

thanks palak glad u liked it! ur so sweet! ..no prob for PM..soon is not in my dictionary! lol..will try and continue!

Kajal 😛

Kajal...

You did it once again dear....that was simply superb 👏 👏 👏

I lovedd it sooooooooooo much.....
😃 😃
It requires lots of patience and hard work for writing such good parts...Hats-off to you for all ur effort....
Keep it up...👍🏼

A bigggg 🤗 from my side

the dance sequence was wonderful. i guess i have to read again to completely understand the steps and will try to comment again. it was great. AR's dance has lots of paaion and u have written it amazingly. please continue soon

simply owesome...u have written an owesome part...!..
the dance moves were owesome...being a dancer myself i like to read the dance moves..! 😉
continue soon 😉