FF Ankho hi Ankho me Ch 19pg 54 & End

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jigna_07

@jigna_07

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Posted: 18 years ago

#411

tin i can't believe u ended it but i was perfect
ranveer is out of the hosue
aji came back and india got its independence! 😃 😃 😃
jai became the business man again
please write another FF soon 😃

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Sheena

@Sheena_Row

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+ 3

Posted: 18 years ago

#412

What a fitting end to a beautiful story. Loved the swadeshi movement backdrop for a love story between JB. Loved the strength of both JB, how they helped the movement, before, during and after.

It was just right that he got called to Delhi for taking care of the economic policy, the British educated Walia is not completely out of the picture yet. The three piece suit and the chiffon saree with the kid in Baba suit were all great attention to detail.

Enjoyed the FF thoroughly.

Thank you and have a wonderful Navratri and Durga Puja.

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scifichick

@scifichick

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Posted: 18 years ago

#413

Wow Tiny, you ended this on a perfect note. A lovely end to a beautiful love story.

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kiranc

@kiranc

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Posted: 18 years ago

#414

Wonderful ending to a great story.Enjoyed reading this FF which was quite different from the other FF's. It was good to see Aditya finally speak up and how Ranveer was showed the door. Loved how u made Jai a swadeshi and helping people after the independence.

Thank you for the great FF.

Hope to see a new FF from you.

Happy Navarathri

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k12345

@k12345

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Posted: 18 years ago

#415

Nice story and great narration. As usual a very different story line. I liked the way you potrayed Jai being swadeshi.

I really liked the way Aditya showed the door to Ranveer. Also how Bani has opened her voice as the malkhin of the house.

Looking forward to more.

-Priya

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Rachna

@-Rachu-

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Posted: 18 years ago

#416

wow that was a ice ff finally jai n bani came together 👏 👏 👏
weldone tin
luv
Rachna
xoxox

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Nandita

@nandita1209

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Posted: 18 years ago

#417

Good that the family did not forgive Ranveer for his betrayal of Jai… Aditya was right.. a person who can back stab the man who has loved and provided him all through his life , can do the same with any of his other relations also…

Finally Jai and Bani are together with their bundle of joy… Atharva.

Thanks for entertaining us with such a beautiful and engrossing fan-fic… Never realized that it has moved so fast and even come to an end……

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sonu4ever

@sonu4ever

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+ 2

Posted: 18 years ago

#418

Aweosme ending 👏 👏
i really loved this ff, it was really original 👏
Hope u'll start another ff soon 😉
Humera. 😊

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daviashree

@davia389

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Posted: 18 years ago

#419

that was a great end.. lookign forward to ur new updates
davia

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divan

@divan

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Posted: 18 years ago

#420

Jayati, really nice ending, with Aditya standing up to Ranveer. The events of that era very well weaved into your story and you did a great job. 👏

Hope you will give us another wonderful story to read.

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