Fan Fiction Pyar - Page 12

Awesome story! I especially loved the begining when the kids called Vedika Mom! fabulous job! keep it up, please update soon Ziddi!

Part 23
Dk takes Disha on a motorbike couple minutes away from the farmhouse.

Disha: dk where are we going?

Dk: dishu jaanu plz wait?

Disha: ok but i have to say riding a motorcycle in the rain is funshe has her hands out and opens it so her hands and get wet

Dk: Disha hold me tight

Disha: jaanu don't be scared nothing will happen

Dk: we have arrived

He stops the motorcycle and gets out and Disha also gets out but its starts to rain. Disha lets go of Dk's hand and plays in the rain

Dk: Disha come on lets go indide

Disha (nodding her face like a kid)no dk me like the rain. Dk runs to the cottage porch and watches her from there. She spins herself around the rain and she is moving her arms and she is enjoying herself. Her salwar kamez has become transparent

Disha stops then she notices that Dk is not there then somebody kisses her neck from the back, and she is getting shivers on her spine and she is walking away from him and he holds her hand and starts kissing her and comes and slowly kisses her neck but she runs but her duppata gets stuck in his watch

Dk pulling Disha closely to him and going near her ear singing
Tum Paas Aaye Yoon Muskaraye (pulling Disha closly with her duppta)
Tumne Na Jaane Kya Sapne Dikhaye (and grabs her hand and twirls her around and she lands into his arm and his face is burried in her hair 😳 )

Ab To Mera Dil Jaage Na Sota Hai (kissing her ear)
Kya Karoon Haye Kuchh Kuchh Hota Hai (then lets go of her hand where she spins and he opens his hand so he can also enjoy the rain)

Disha (running to him) Ye Ishq Jaane Kaise Hua
Becheiniyon Mein Mann
Na Jaane Kyon Aane Laga

Dk:Tanhai Mein Dil Yaadein Sanjota Hai Kya Karoon Haye Kuchh Kuchh Hota Hai and Dk picks her up and twirls her around and takes her inside the cottage.

When they enter Disha is suprised to see that the cottage is lighted with candles and there is a table set for two and she looks at Dk and he nods his head in a yes and then Dk gives her a black dress. then Disha goes to the restroom and changes and Dk also changes when he turns around and he a beatiful disha wearing a strapless black knee length dress and he is shocked and he gives her a red roses and she smiles and takes it. They eat dinner and Dk puts slow music on and they dance in a cute way where Disha trips a little bit but Dk holds her and they are staring into eachother's eyes romanticly 😳 and then slowly and slowly dk pulls her up and starts kissing her and then he carries her and puts her down on the bed and slowly and slowly the sences fade way.

The End!
This part was planned by Dk and when Disha was playing in the rain he went inside to light the candles. 😉 Edited by ziddi - 18 years ago

plz cont soon. [=D>] [=D>] [=D>] [=D>] [=D>]

sweet of DK, hope to see what happens when Dhruv learns about Vedika! 😃

😳 how cute.

ziddi that was so romantic 😳 😳 😃
👏

AWSOME PARTS ZIDDI
THANX 😳

😳 😳 pleaze continue soon! 😳
thank you

 

Next Morning

Niks and Ved get ready to go jogging, when they go downstairs they see Mr. Arun reading the newspaper.

Niks and Ved: Good Morning Papa (he turns around and sees his two daughters)

Good Morning Betas, ready to go for walking

Ved: Yes Papa do you want to join us

 Arun: of course why not, since no one is ready, I will be back in ten minutes

 Ved: Di this will be  a great chance to tell Papa about Ant

 Niks (nervous): what no way

Ved: Papa won't be angry

 Niks: I don't know

Arun (comes in ) don't know what beta

Ved: nothing papa (all 3 walk out to a park that is near there house)

They stop under a tree shade

Arun:ok girls we will start from there and go around the park and come back (he walks in front of them)

Niks and Ved: ok papa (they are behind)

Ved: Di you should tell Papa Anatrish

Niks (shocked) right here right know

Ved: of course its morning and he won't get mad,

Niks: I don't know

Ved: oh come one perfect time, there are no distractions and no one to bug you come on,

Niks: no

Ved: fine if you don't tell papa then he will arrange your marriage with someone who you don't love

Niks: ok I will tell him (they catch up to Arjun who is on )
Ved and Niks: Papa wait

Arun: Nik you shouldn't run in this condition

Niks (is confused, Ved gives her Dad a worried look) what condition

Ved: Di papa meant not to run so you won't get tired, anyways Papa Niks want to tell you something

Arun: what, you guys can tell me anything we are friends

Niks & Ved we know
Ved: You guys can talk, I will go and jog near by, while you guys talk (she leaves, Arun looks at Ved and Niks)

Niks (is quiet) Papa i……..i……. i…….

Arun: Niks what is this…………i………….i.

Niks (has her eyebrows down) papa I like someone,

Arun: beta its natural to like someone as a friend

Niks: no papa I don't like someone but I am in love with someone

Arun (is shocked) who, what's his name

Niks: Papa his name is Anatrish Riazada

Arun: Anatrish Riazada

Niks: yes papa he is a really nice person,

Arun: where did you meet him

Niks I met him at Di's wedding and she explains everything to her dad,

Arun: beta I will talk to your mom and explain this to her,

Niks: really papa, thanks so much

Arun: for being the great dad, I know you don't have to tell me that,
Niks: oh papa (she hugs him, ) I wonder where Vedika is right now

Arun and Niks start walking to the place where Ved said she will be by.

Precap

Ved bumps into someone

 

Edited by ziddi - 18 years ago

finally niks told about antarish 😃

yeah great update, please update soon!