Fan fic: Afsana pyaar ka - Page 15

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Posted: 19 years ago
so so interesting plzzz con soon cant wait longer plzzzzzzzzzzz 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
tat was very sweet!! plz cont soon!! i can't believe they got mrried tat fast!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
i just read the whole thing... its awesome
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continue soon i'm looking forward to the next part
Kayla~
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Posted: 19 years ago
wow you are a great writer, i just finished reading it
its simply awesome 👏👏👏plz continue soon
Edited by swt_jagmeet - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
awesome part continue soon !!!! 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
PLZ CONT SOON...ITS GETTING SO GOOD!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
plz don't make us wait for so long...continue.
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Posted: 19 years ago
hey con i cant wait longer plzzzzzzzzzzzz 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago

sorry guys i was at my maasi's house so i wasn't able to continue

Angad tries again but kripa's holding his hand really tight as she is scared of something ( the incident), angad notices this. Since he has no other choice he sits down and falls a sllep sitting next to kripa. In the morning kripa wakes up and finds angad sitting on the floor, his head is on the bed and then she remembers the moment when angad filled her maang with sindoor, and a tear drops from her eyes on angads hand which wakes up angad, before angad could notice kripa wipes her tear. Angad wakes up and looks at kripa nad then looks at his hand which kripa is still holding, but kripa doesn't notice yet she is looking at angad, angad looks back at her and they are into each others eyes, then kripa realises that she is holding angads hand both kripa and angad look at kripa's hand which is holding angads, they both look back at eachother, and not wanting to kripa lets go of angad's hand. She gets up from the bed, get her clothes and goes into the bathroom. After 30 minutes kripa comes out drying her hair, while angad enters the room talking on his phone, both angad and kripa don't notice eachother and both of the bump into eachother, angad saves kripa from falling his hand is around kripa's waist and both of them are staring in each others eyes, when aaliyah comes in.

Aa: bhai (without noticing)
aa: oops wrong timing, by now angad has let go off kripa, and both are standing side by side
a: aaliyah
aa: sorry, well main appko yeh batane ayee thi ki ajj sham ko ek choti si party rakhe hai ghar pe
a: okay
aaliyah leaves the room where kripa also follows her
in the evening kripa is sitting in front of the mirror wearing a pink sari, with silver embroidery, and a light set. When angad comes out off the bathroom. He lean back at the edge of the wall staring at kripa who is trying to close her mangulsutra but is unsuccessful, angad is smiling looking at this.
K: angad mere madaat nahin karsakte wah se ghoore ja rahe ho
a: ok
angad closes the mangulsutra, and both of them go downstairs, kripa and angad reach downstairs and are being congratulated by many people. After a while everyone is enjoying the party when naina comes to angad and kripa and tells them to go and dance, and angad takes her to the dance floor. Both of them are staring at each other and
in the background the song is:Aise Na Mujhe Tum Dekho
Seene Se Laga Loonga
Tumko Main Chura Loonga Tumse
Dil Mein Chhupa Loonga

Hmm Hmm

Tere Dil Se Ae Dilbar
Dil Mera Kehta Hain
Pyar Ke Dushman Log Mujhe
Dar Lagta Rehta Hain (X2)

Thamlo Tum Meri Baahein
Main Tumhe Sambhaloonga
Tumko Main Chura Loonga Tumse
Dil Mein Chhupa Loonga

Aise Na Mujhe Tum Dekho
Seene Se Laga Loonga
Tumko Main Chura Loonga Tumse
Dil Mein Chhupa Loonga
Hey Hey Hey Hey

Hmm
Dheemi Dheemi Aag Se Ek
Shola Bhadkaya Hain
Door Se Tumne Iss Dil Ko
Kitna Tarsaya Hain (X2)

Main Ab Iss Dil Ke Saare
Armaan Nikaloonga
Tumko Main Chura Loonga Tumse
Dil Mein Chhupa Loonga

Aise Na Mujhe Tum Dekho
Seene Se Laga Loonga
Tumko Main Chura Loonga Tumse
Dil Mein Chhupa Loonga
Hmm Hmm Hmm Hmm

Pyar Ke Daaman Mein Chunkar
Hum Phool Bhar Lenge
Raaste Ke Kaante Saare
Door Kar Lenge (X2)


Jaaneman Tumko Apni
Main Jaan Bana Loonga
Tumko Main Chura Loonga Tumse
Dil Mein Chhupa Loonga

Aise Na Mujhe Tum Dekho...


Edited by Angad's angel - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: swt_jagmeet

wow you are a great writer, i just finished reading it
its simply awesome 👏👏👏plz continue soon

thank you swt_jagmeet welcome to the forum 🤗

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