Fan fic: Afsana pyaar ka - Page 16

Originally posted by: cutest_angel

hey angel!!! well it has been a long time since i havent read ur fan-fic!! but now i finished reading it...n its soooo amazing!! i didnt knew a-k would marry this fast!! but now i m wondering wht will happen when every1 comes to know that prithvi isnt dead??!! i mean how will kripa react to it??? anyways plz continue soon!! 👏

hey cutest_angel thank you don't worry she won't find out this soon that prithvi is still alive

arite i finally caught up wit ur story awesome i must say cont soon👏👏

great part... looking forward to new parts so dont delay to much plssssssss 😊
Kayla~

that was awesome..especially the song!!!

i love that song!!!!

that was cute pLZ continue soon..............i mean ASAP

hey darlin..u r awesome...puhlease continue soon!!! 😛

The party is over and everyone has left, kripa is sitting in front of the mirror taking out her jewelry. She opens the drawer and finds a note in there. She reads it: Main tumhare zindagi barbaad kar doonga yeh vaada hai mera. Kripa gets scared when angad comes in as soonest she sees him she runs into his arms, crying.

A: kya hua kripa
kripa doesn't reply she is still crying
a: kripa kya hua tum roh kyun rahi ho
kripa still dosen't reply, so now angad holds kripa from her shoulder and makes her face him.
A: kripa batao na kya hua
now kripa hands him the note and angad reads it.
A: kripa tum bhi na koi mazak kar ra hoga
k: angad par koi aisa mazak kyun karega
a: kripa tum mat daro main hoon na
angad makes her sit on the bed
a: tum so jao
angad takes a pillow and is about to get up whan kripa holds his hand
k: angad mujhe chod ke maat jao
a: kripa main yahi to hoon
k: please angad
angad sits on the bed while kripa sleeps next to him holding his hand really tight, after awhile angad also falls asleep.
In the morning kripa wakes up while angad is sleeping, kripa lets go of angad's hand and goes in the bathroom, when she comes out drying her hair with a towel angad is still sleeping peacefully kripa sits down next to him, just looking at him the water from her wet hair falls on angad's face which wakes up angad. He looks at kripa who is staring at him.
A: kripa
k: huh
a: kya hua
k: kuch nahin
a: okay
gets up and goes into the bathroom,
at the dining table when angad comes down everyone is sitting down, he sits down next to kripa.
N: angad parsu Mr. Mehta jinka shimla main buisness hai unki party hai hum main sai koi nahie ja sakta to tum aur kripa chale jana
a: par mom
d: par war kuch nahie, tum don ja rahe matlab ja rahe ho aur ek hafte tak wapis bhi mat anaa ajj sham koi hi nikaal na hai
a; ok dad
kripa doesn't know why but she is happy for some reason, then teddy comes and gives kripa a letter saying someone had came to give it to her but she was sleeping.

wow nice part but a little to short plz right some more when ever u got time thanks

great part... continue soon 😃
Kayla~

love it it was wonderful
continue soon