Fan Fic: Pyaar Main Kabhi Kabhi - Page 74

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Posted: 20 years ago
gr8 part n just 1 step away from century for this fan fic so post the nxt part soon 😉
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Posted: 20 years ago

Originally posted by: Evee

Superb neha!!!

hurray!!! AK getting married!!! ab tum beech main koi naya twist mat la dena .. 😆

evee we still have mystery guy who is apparently obsesses with kripa....i still think it is that ejaz guy....and one more page till you will have completed 100 pages!!! i am gonna say congrats in advance cuz when you do reach 100 pages i will probably be fast asleep!!😆

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Posted: 20 years ago

Originally posted by: kool_gal

HIIIIIII NEHA
i just caught up with ur fan-fic, 3 things:

1. ur an amazing writer.

2. i love ur fan-fics.

3. 🤗 for a-k union, i love uuuuuuu

and continue soon

hehe thanks! kya tumko mera twist pasand aaya???? 😆

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Posted: 20 years ago

Originally posted by: Evee

Superb neha!!!

hurray!!! AK getting married!!! ab tum beech main koi naya twist mat la dena .. 😆

sooch rahi ho lakin kuch sooj nahie raha lagta hai Ekta Ji ko phone karna para ga. 😆

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Originally posted by: simplyconfused

evee we still have mystery guy who is apparently obsesses with kripa....i still think it is that ejaz guy....and one more page till you will have completed 100 pages!!! i am gonna say congrats in advance cuz when you do reach 100 pages i will probably be fast asleep!!😆

Thanks sooooooooooooooo much!

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Posted: 20 years ago

Originally posted by: Evee

Congratulations!!!!!!!!

Neha..the rani of fanfics!!! another 100 pages..man this fanfic just got started!

Keep going!!!
Evee

I know! 👏

for myself, i think THIS is my best fan fic! Ok i'll stop praising my self lol! Thanks again!

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Posted: 20 years ago
neha congratz u da bomb gurl rok on wit your fan fics👏👏
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Posted: 20 years ago
i lov ur fan fic.😃.............lovly..........i only read this 1 n dreams all da line😃 ,it is truely beautiful..story👏..........continue it.😳...don't stop be4 u finished my dreamssssssssssssssssss.🤢...🤢..............i lov ittttttttttttttttttt👏
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Posted: 20 years ago

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hehe thanks! kya tumko mera twist pasand aaya???? 😆


bohot pasand aaya!!! 👏 👏 ur the best
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Posted: 20 years ago
Part 62

The pundit ji arrives and Gaytri wants to show him there Kundlies first!

As the pundit ji checks there kundlies everyone has a tensed look on there faces, finally PJ looks up.

PJ: In dono ki kundalio main sab guun milta hai, lakin.

G and Naina: Lakin?

PJ: Inka pelha saal shadi ka bauth katnaio sa gusraga. Kisi tara yeh pelha saal katjay tho baad main sab kuch teek hai.

G: Ya hum yeh kisi tara kaam nahie karsak tha?

PJ: Ji, dono Kripa aur Angad ko varat rakna paraga, isia main suraj chalna tal kuch nahie kha sakta, aur suraj dhalna par ek he thali main sa khhana hai.

Anagd and Kripa agree and with this they starts the Chuniy Charana ki rasam.

Misty and Kartick are sitting togeather, Naina tiliks both of them and then puts the chuniy around Misty and the same is followed with Kripa and Anagd.

Everyone is happy, Kartick takes Mishty out to Dinner while neha and Aaliya fource Anagd to take Kripa out to dinner but first he's got to ask.

So Kripa is sitting in front on the mirror looking at her self when Angad enters being pushed in from Aaliya and Neha.

He goes and stands behind Kripa.

A: Kya hua? Dekh rahi ho ki tum kitni............... BADSURAT ho!

K: Oh shut up Anagd.

A: Ok, main tumsa yaha kuch pooch na aaya ho.

K: Kya?

A: Well, kya main aapni hoona wali biwi ko Dinner ka liya invite karsak tha ho,

Kripa stands up and faces Anagd.

K: Well mera hoona wala pati ji let me think.

A: Ok! Think.

K: Fine! Lakin...

A: Lakin?

K: Resturant mera choice ka hoga.

A: Ok!

K: Ok tum neecha wait karo i'll be there.

A: Ok!

K: Ok!

Anagd goes down stairs and waits for Kripa.

He's reading throught a magazine when he hears Kripa comming downstairs.

He turns and sees Kripa comming down, u see the light dim, and a spotlight beams on Kripa.

She looks Gorgeous, wearing a white Saari with lots of glitter on it, its shinning, she's wearing a small diomand bindi, with long earing dimond, and she's wearing heals about 3 inches high, her hair flying. As Kripa walks down Anagd walks towards her, there eyes are locked, finally Anagd and Kripa are face to face.

K: Angad.

But Anagd is lost in her.

K: Angad.

Still no answere.

Kripa is confused, and then she relizes why angad looks so lost.

She puts her hand on his cheek, and says, Anagd kya hua? Booth deek liya?

A: Hmm... still lost, nahie Pari dekhli.

Kripa is shy and looks away, she looks back at him and now hits his arm.

K: Anagd? Kaha ho?

A: Embarrased- Haan kya... hmm...

K: Ok ab bas karo! Aur can u help me.

A: Kya?

Kripa rolls her eyes and then opens her fist, and in it lays a neckless, i couldnt put it on.

A: Ok, turn.

K: Kya?

A: God, he turns her around and takes the neckless from her hand putting it on.

A: Done.

K: Thanks!

A: Chala.

K: Ya.

A: So kaha?

K: Um... Oberois!

A: Perfect, lets go.

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