Khadoos in Love!! prt 96 pg 144, 08/07

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Hi guys, I have to open a new thread for KIL as I was told there was too much chatting on the last one n less of the FF so here it is.

But I just want to share what my teacher wrote on my class nine report card. (yeah I keep my report card to remember the good times, I was intelligent then)

Sanam is an able student. She needs more practice in Mathematics for which she goes for extra help to her subject teacher. Her efforts in this direction should continue to be sincere. She sometimes becomes talkative and must curb this habit during classes.

So can you blame me, it's tough to teach an old dog new tricks. Am I chating again. Sorry sorry.

For previous parts pls go to the link below.

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasamh-se/459855/khadoos-in-love-prt-64-new-thread-link

Prt 73 pg 3, prt 74 pg 7, prt 75 pg 12, prt 76 pg 16, prt 77 pg 25, prt 78 pg 31, prt 79 pg 36, prt 80 pg 43, prt 81 pg 49, prt 82 pg 53, prt 83 pg 57, prt 84 pg 61, prt 85 pg 68, prt 86 pg 76, prt 87 pg 82, prt 88 pg 91, prt 89 pg 100, prt 90 pg 108, prt 91 pg 114, prt 92 pg 121. prt 93 pg 126, prt 94 pg 131, prt 95 pg 138, prt 96 pg 144

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Part 64

Bani opened the door, jai stood there with his torn shirt, disheveled look, she thought his eyes were moist too, he stood there like a child who wanted the candy but knew couldn't have it, not yet, he had been naughty. Her heart went to him to see him like that. They stood there silently, eyes locked with each other. Though the radio was loud and raghav was blabbering all they cud hear was heartbeat.

Uncomfortable moments, electric tension, no one dared speak or dint want to, Jai wanted her to say something, his head was buzzing 'bani pls, pls say something, say you hate me but say something damn it"

Bani on the other hand was too overwhelmed, she looked at his disheveled state, he looked enticing, her body inflamed. Nothing unusual in that. it happened at the mere thought of him, not to mention what actually seeing him did, especially now, after so much that had happened. She cursed herself for being so much under his spell. She had to get her nerves under control which were fluttering maddeningly. She had to talk.

Bani pointing to the radio – What is all this….

Jai noticed her voice shook, she sounded uncertain, yeah he knew the feeling. He wanted to comfort her, but wasn't sure that was what she needed. Or if he could stop at that. He came to her, moving swiftly. Only one thought in his mind, he could not loose her, he needed her for his survival.

Jai – Bani will you marry me?

A simple question, or was it?

Bani,s zapped – Mr walia….

Jai – Bani will you marry me, NOW?

Bani – Mr Walia what are……

Jai impatient – bani just answer me, yes or no?

Bani simply – Yes

Now jai zapped – You will!!!!

Bani smiled slightly – should I say no?

Jai thrilled to bits – no no I mean god after wot I did, I did expect a no, bani common lets go, we'll get married in a temple right now.

Bani – Mr Walia I will marry you but not now, not like this. You can't make hasty decisions like this, we will marry when both of us are ready, not like this in compulsion.

She was so sensible, so matter of fact, so logical at times, it bemused him.

Jai – bani it's not under any compulsion, I love you and I want to marry you.

Bani – It won't be right. We have to think about others and not just ourselves. And don't you think we also need to talk.

Jai couldn't stand the despair in the slump of her shoulders. He lifted her into his arms and murmured "you are right darling, we need to talk"

She turned her face to him, questions in her beautiful eyes. He wondered how she seemed able to peer into his soul. He carried her to the sofa and put her down, made her sit. He slouched on the floor, holding her hands in her lap, their heads at level. Jai spoke softly.

Jai – Bani I am really sorry for…..

Bani simply – I could have slapped you when I saw you.

Jai was like "whoa the lady is blunt" he said instead – you sud have, but the kick was not bad either.

Bani – did it hurt?

Jai – yeah it did, still hurts. Its gonna be blue by tomorrow.

Bani – good I am glad. You deserve the hurt.

Jai thought "oh god she is after my heart, I love her so much"

Jai – yes bani I know I do, but you dint deserve it, wot I did was unacceptable. I was angry at myself.

Bani had the confused look, angry at himself, why?

Jai continued – agreed earlier I was angry at you for not accepting the gift. My huge ego cud not accept that n I got mad at you but then when we reached here and saw you all huddled up in a corner, fear in your eyes, looking so fragile, I wanted to take you in my arms and kiss you senseless, the only thought was to bring you up here and love you, rather ravish you. And I freaked, I thought oh god the control that I had over my emotions just goes out of the window as soon as I set eyes on you. All rational thinking stops there. Call it passion, call it love, call it need, call it wotever, takes over. A 23 year old girl comes into my life, and has control. Control over Jai Walia. Can you imagine what that did to me? For the past 16 yrs I have not let anyone break the barrier I made around myself. At that moment I was angry at myself for letting you do that. I lashed out on you, I hurt you in the only way I could. But all that I said to you was actually true for me.

She listened to him quietly; he was speaking the truth, which man would ever do that. Which man would come and tell his woman that he was sacred of the feeling she aroused in him. That he was insecure by those feelings. Only an honest man, a man with integrity.

Jai continued – Bani I can't promise you I will not be angry in the future, if I did then it wud be a blatant lie. You know how I am. But I will promise you one thing, I will try to control it, wotever it takes bani, if I hav to meditate or join yoga or go for Art of Living, wotever.

Bani – Mr Walia you don't have to do any of those things, I like you as you are.

Jai – you do?

Bani nodded shyly. He had been completely honest with her, now it was her turn. (main pagal ho jaoongi inki honesty se)

Bani – Mr Walia I am sorry too, I should have taken that gift in the first place. If I had known all this will happen coz of that then i…..

Jai cut her off – no Bani I realize now that wot you did was right, never let your pride or self respect go thinking of the consequences. Then that won't be my Bani. The Bani I love and respect.

Bani smiled – but you had bought it with so much love, I should have thought of that.

Jai gave her his most dazzling smile– don't worry darling, here take this.

He pulled out the jewelry box, it was similar to the previous one. (Well most of the jewelry boxes in India r red n square)

Bani was zapped, just now he was talking big bout not letting her pride go and now this. Did she understand the man, she was so confused, But she dare not refuse, she took it hesitantly.

Bani – you got it again, I…..I mean you found it…..

Jai pointed to the box with his head – go on open it sweetheart.

Bani opened it and was instantly amazed, she had the biggest smile on her face, ear to ear, she looked delightfully happy. Jai thought he would make re-cycled jewelry all his life to see that smile, that one look of ecstasy on her face. (walia empire mere naam kar dena boss)

Bani – omg omg this is so beautiful, she looked up at him, you made it?

Jai laughing – no I woke up the cobbler in the middle of the night. Of course I made it sweetheart, anything for you.

Bani – Jai this is the most awesome gift I have ever received, the most precious. I will keep this all my life, guard it with my life.

Jai – sweetheart it is not more precious than you.

They both looked at each other, eye lock.

Bani softly – can I kiss you?

It put a knife in his heart, yes she was unsure of herself now, he had chipped her confidence somewhere and she was not like "yeah let's make up with a kiss" kinda girl. He got up and sat next to her, took her in his arms.

Jai – bani do you need to ask that, do I still need to prove what you are to me, how much you mean to me..

Then he took her lips in a very soft kiss, just touching it lightly with his own lips. She kissed him back then. They hugged each other, with lots of kisses following that first one, tender, soft, light kisses. It was not about passion or want, it was bout love, trust, care and togetherness. It was bout reunion of two souls.

Later he was just lying on the couch, she had her head on his chest, his arms wrapped around her. Both lost in feeling each other. Both hearts beating as one.

Jai – Bani….

Bani – mmmmmmm

Jai – look at me.

Bani lifted her and rested her chin on his chest.

Jai – happy?

Bani nodded.

Jai – am I completely forgiven?

Bani again nodded.

Jai – thank you. I will sleep well now. I was worried that you won't.

Bani – humko malum hai ishq masoom hai, dile se ho jati hai galtiyan.

Sabr se ishq meroom hai.

Jai laughed – now I know there is nothing to worry. Bani I think I should leave now, its getting late.

They both got up, jai moved towards the door.

Bani stammered – I want you …..to stay.

The words were spoken so softly he barely heard them. Two simple words, but it meant so much, he looked at her she was ready to surrender everything now, all that she had, her love, her trust, and her complete being to the man she loved, totally completely.

Jai looked at her intensely – I cant….. I can't make promises for being rational if I do.

Bani – stay.

The word was a plea. He closed his eyes and tried to think of noble things, honor and all that. It didn't work. He took a step forward with a groan, into her arms. He opened his eyes as she slipped both hands around his waist and leaned her head against his chest. She moved her hands up and down his back under his shirt.

Jai huskily – I can't promise anything platonic if you keep that up.

Her hands went to the few buttons he had on the shirt. Her hands trembled.

Jai – let me.

His voice deeper as need overrode scruples and all that baggage. She dropped her hands to her sides, inviting him to finish the task, he was glad she was looking at him and could not see how his fingers shook as he undid the buttons.

She lifted her arms to him. It was more than a mortal man could resist, and he had never claimed to be a saint. He stepped forward and felt her heat all along his body.

Jai kissing her neck– you're beautiful, so beautiful, it takes my breath away.

Bani – that was a song.

She pressed her lips to his neck and causing lightning to flash into every part of him.

Jai ran a fingertip from her forehead, over her nose, down till her stomach – you are the most incredibly stunning woman I've ever seen.

She pressed fervent kisses on his throat and chest. Her incoherent thoughts flew to her tongue – you make me feel that way. Beautiful. Sexy. Hot. Cold. Frightened.

He tipped her chin up with a hooked finger said fiercely– you don't ever have to be afraid of me, don't you know I'd do anything to keep you happy, and will never hurt you again.

He said this feeling humble and courageous at the same time. He knew he had hurt her but now no more. He looked at her, her pupils were dilated with passion and her eyes gleamed in the dim light from the lamp. A flush spread upward from her throat to her cheeks. She stirred too many things in him, this woman with her stubborn independence, her pride and her honesty. He wanted to show her more than pleasure. He wanted….too many things. He couldn't begin to enumerate them.

Jai – will you have regrets in the morning?

Bani kissed his collarbone – I don't know. I guess we won't know until the morning, will we, and by then it won't matter.

A shudder went through him, he gathered her again into his arms, her lips quivered under his as he touched them, then her arms slipped around his shoulders as she arched against him.

The last of his principles fell away. Her touch ignited a need that wouldn't, couldn't be denied. Reasoning didn't enter into the equation.

He fell on the sofa, taking her weight as she came down with him. But it was not big enough for a man his size, he rolled over on the floor, slipped a hand under her hair and held her head in position to deepen the kiss. For a long time he only kissed and caressed lightly along her back. He had never known passion could be so totally engrossing. The world narrowed to this room, to her, and the places where he caressed. Bani closed her eyes. Bright veils of light flashed through her mental vision like magical draperies controlled by a genie.

The ring of the phone was like a bomb blast in their ears. They had no clue what that sound was or from where, the phone persisted rigging. Bani was the first to realize it was her land line. She tried to get up. Jai cursed under his breath, choicest of words.

Jai ordered – ignore it damn it.

Bani – it could be important, it's late in the night, omg Rano.

Jai and bani had completely forgotten bout Rano she could be here any moment.

Part 65

The ring of the phone was like a bomb blast in their ears. They had no clue what that sound was or from where, the phone persisted rigging. Bani was the first to realize it was her land line. She tried to get up. Jai cursed under his breath, choicest of words.

Jai ordered – ignore it damn it.

Bani – it could be important, it's late in the night, omg Rano.

Jai and bani had completely forgotten bout Rano she could be here any moment.

Bani went n took the call. Jai sat up reclining on the sofa, trying to get his breathing to normal. Listening to the conversation, he cud make out it was Rano. Bani returned.

Bani still a bit shaken – uhh… it…it … was….it was Rano.

Jai – Yeah..

Bani – she… she… will be….here in 10 minutes.

Jai – yeah..

Bani very uncomfortable – I'll…..I'll….mmm get u some water.

Jai smiled – get me a bottle.

Bani dashed to the kitchen. She stood by the sink thinking, holding her stomach " o god wot was I doing, wot if Rano had walked in,wot wud she think. I am supposed to set an example for her. Omg I asked him to stay, wot will he think, wot kind of girl am I. This is not the way I was bought up. This is not the values I got from my mother. This is not our tradition. O god wot do I do now?" all sorts of thought that a girl wud have was running in her mind. She felt ashamed, tears burned her eyes.

Jai called out – Baniii

Bani gulping down the tears – yeah yeah I am coming.

She took out a bottle of water from the fridge n went to him, sat down on the sofa beside him.

Bani gave him the bottle, he drank thirstily.

Bani – Mr Walia I am sorry….

Jai turned his head up to her – Bani stop apologizing for something that was not your fault. It was quite mutual. More mine coz I sud know better.

Bani on the verge of tears – but I was the one who stopped you….oh god wot if rano had come.

Tenderness, the strange, confusing tenderness that only she had ever aroused, surged through him. One thing was true. He wud do anything to keep her happy. No one wud hurt her, not while there was life in his body.

Jai got up n sat next to her holding her – Bani bani I know wot you are thinking, but darling don't do this to yourself, don't persecute yourself. I know all this was a mistake…..

Bani very mater of fact tone – I can't keep my hands off you, I forget everything.

That made jai laugh.

Jai laughing – bani I don't want to keep my hands off you so don't worry we are in the same boat, we'll think of something.

His laughter warmed her all the way through. She smiled at his humor, knowing he was giving her time to become comfortable.

Bani smiled – I think we sud not meet like this, u sud not come here. We sud meet with people around us.

Jai – ya I think so too, you are too hazardous for my heart.

Bani – I am serious.

Jai laughed – I was serious too when I had asked to be just friends.

Bani – well you cud not keep your promise but I can. Do you want me to promise that I will not meet you like this?

Jai folded his hands – nahi meri amma I don't want you to promise any such thing. I'll go n talk to masi n ask her to fix a date as soon as possible. Theek hai

Bani smiled and nodded. Jai pulled her nose with a "badi jaldi hai shadi ki hhmmm kya baat hai"

Bani shyly – aapko nahin hai.

Jai comin close to her – main to aaj abhi shadi ke liye tayaar hoon, tumne mana kiya.

Bani laughing n pushing him away – now you go b4 Rano comes.

Jai also laughed – yes and b4 we r back on the floor n get caught.

Bani blushed.

Jai – she most probably wud have killed me. She is always after me. She is my nemesis.

Bani – she likes you.

Jai – hhhmmm I like her too, she is a nice kid.

Bani laughed – Kid? U r going to marry her sister n I am just 2 yrs older to her.

Jai teasing – ab us mein meri kya galti hai, u r a kid too but u enticed me. You fell in love with me n I just cud not see u suffer.

Bani – you are so conceited. But I love you.

Jai took her in a hug – I love you too, n now I must leave b4 that sister of yours comes.

Jai gets up too go.

Bani – Mr Walia how can you go like this.

Jai zapped – bani don't start it all over again.

Bani going red to her toes – I mean look at you, you can't go with a torn shirt.

Jai looking down at his shirt, pulling it together a bit – it's ok bani, ghar hi to jana hai and its late sab so rahe honge. Main chala jaoonga.

Bani – no wait, there will be those gfn boys down there n they love to gossip. And chotu the lift man….

Jai – oh ya don't remind me, he even warned me.

Jai tells her, they both laugh

Bani – he is crazy, I shouted at him one day, he always leaves the door to the lift open n plays around when I am getting late for office. You know how my boss is, he bites my head off if I am late.

Jai nuzzling her neck – I am sure your boss is in love with you n wants to see you in the office when he is there.

Bani laughing – I think so to, but he is a workaholic, he comes b4 time, how can he expect me so early?

Jai – don't worry darling, now that he is having late nights or sleepless nights, he will be late too. And now b4 it gets more late wot do we do about my shirt.

Bani thinking – Rishi is also not there, I wud hav got u his shirt. Ok give me your shirt, I'll try n find the buttons and put them on it.

Jai flirting – you always want my shirt off don't you, r u sure u will be able to handle me without a shirt.

But he took it off n gave it to her. bani just pulled her tongue at him and started going towards the bedroom.

Jai called bac – u want me to come darling, help u look for the buttons.

Bani turned – you just stay there Jai walia.

Jai laughed – ya see I knew I am too hot to handle.

Bani ignored him n went in, jai laughed a full throated rich laugh, he stood there drinking from the bottle.

Rano came in using her keys, she had her back to jai while locking the door, jai cursed in a low voice, he was standing in the middle of the living room without a shirt.

Rano – di I am back n I will never go out with rishi again he is so……….she had turned n seen Jai….Wot the hell r YOU doing here like this.

B4 jai cud say anything rano was at him

Rano shaking a finger at him – Jai Walia wot hav u done.

Jai calmly – nothing as yet.

Rano screaming – Jai Walia don't even think bout it, I will kill you with my own bare hands.

Jai rolled his eyes impishly - these days all I think is that

Bani came out with his shirt – Rano relax his shirt was torn, I just took it to stitch.

Jai wickedly – btw Rano…..

Rano – shut up you are so disgusting.

Jai – let's say I am a red blooded man.

Bani's eyes were still all red n swollen from all that crying, rano noticed this.

Rano – di why r your eyes so red, hav you been crying, she held Jai's shirt who was trying to put it on n shook him, did you make my Di cry.

Jai took off his shirt, crumpled it in his hands n threw it on the floor.

Jai – hato yaar main shirt hi nahin pehnta, dono behene mere shirt ke peeche padi hai. I will go home like this.

Bani went hysterical, she picked up his shirt n gave it to him, rano stood there zapped.

Bani laughing –Mr Walia common don't behave like a kid, here wear it and Rano don't worry, we had a fight and I tore his shirt.

Rano – you did?

Jai complaining – and she even tore my poster.

Rano – I am sure you deserved it. Wot did you do Jai?

Bani teasing – sud I tell her wot you did.

Jai pleading – no bani no please.

Rano curious – Di now you have to tell me common di.

Bani told rano bout her not accepting the gift and jai getting angry for it, she skipped the details bout wot Jai had said n done, she told bout how Jai apologized with the jewelry and the request.

Rano pulling his cheeks – wow Jai I am impressed. Wot a way to make up. I wud not expect so much mushiness from you. You sure r a surprise a minute. I wish some other guys were like you.

Jai blushed – well Rano its nothing like that, she was really very angry n I had to make up, I hurt her.

He looked at bani n they both got lost in each other. Rano coughed.

Rano – can we have you both back?

They stood there chatting when rano noticed the bruise on Bani's neck.

Rano – Di wot happened to ur neck.

Jai n bani exchanged looks. B4 jai cud say anything

Bani – ah rano I think it is an insect bite.

Rano is smart she dint buy that.

Rano teased – Di does that insect have initials JW.

Jai coughed on the water he was drinking. Rano burst out laughing.

Jai – Bani I think she just called me an insect. I am not gonna leave your sister.

Rano went behind Bani – Jai at 36 u still don't know how to kiss a lady, you gotta learn boy.

Jai trying to pull her out – oh ya you gonna teach me, common let's see….

Rano – y sud I, u already hav a target, practice there.

Bani pushed them both – stop it both of you.

Jai – why don't you tell your sister, she is the one putting wrong ideas in my head?

Rano – no one has to put them Jai, you already have them. She imitated him 'red blooded man'

Jai – God look who's talking. Both you sisters r as bad. I am gonna get out of this asylum.

Rano – Jai we are the innocent angels. Now go and talk to Rishi.

Jai groaned – now where did rishi come in between kissing lessons.

Rano – shut up Jai get your mind away from it for a lil while. Rishi is upset over something and won't talk to us, maybe he will talk to you.

Bani also had a pleading look.

Jai –I spend an eventful evening with my girlfriend and now u want me to go talk to some sulking majnu.

Rano – common Jai cant you do that much for me.

Jai – tumhe badi chinta hai Rishi ki hhhmmm kya baat hai Rano?

Rano – he is a good friend Jai.

Jai – wot bout me am I not a good friend, why you sending me there at this time when I am so tired?

Rano – Di please tell him.

Bani – Mr walia please and she pushed him towards the door.

Jai - haan haan ja raha hoon, god you girls are just slave drivers.

Bani – come back and tell us wot he said.

Jai quietly in her ears – of course sweat heart I'll be back, can't leave without saying good night to you.

Rano shouted – go on lover boy.

Jai threw the bottle at her and left.

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Part 66

Jai rang the bell.

Rishi – leave me alone Rano just go.

Jai – Rishi it's me Jai n u better open up or I break the damn door.

Rishi grumbled 'that was all I needed' but opened the door.

Jai laughed at his disheveled condition.

Jai – ye kya haal bana rakha hai, kuch lete kyon nahin?

Rishi – common in jai. so wot brings the great JW to my house at this hour?

Jai – your friends. Or sud I just say Rano. He laughed

Rishi irritated – Jai I don't find it funny.

Jai calmly – Rishi neither do I, I am very tired I want to go and sleep.

Rishi - so why don't you do that?

Jai annoyed – cut the crap rishi, bahut ho gaya. Sab pareshan hai tumhare liye and all you can think is bout yourself.

Rishi felt guilty – I am sorry jai, main bas……acha bolo kya loge?

Jai – that's better, whiskey hai?

Rishi nods, he goes and makes the drinks.

Jai – I don't think you sud be drinking.

Rishi – I need it.

Jai – common Talk.

Rishi – Jai your shirt…..

Jai cut him off pointing a finger at him – not a word, not a word on my shirt, I've had enough, I am gonna frame this shirt n put it in my room. It has become 'talk of the town'.

Rishi taken aback – chill Jai why r u getting so emotional, I was just gonna say u hav different color buttons on your shirt.

Jai – can we please talk bout you n not bout my buttons?

Rishi – wot bout me, I am fine just one of those lousy days.

Jai – ok let's start with, why did you go to Delhi all of a sudden?

Rishi looked at jai, he had a determined look, he was not going till he knew and Rishi wanted to talk to him. He knew he cud trust jai.

Rishi in a low voice – I broke of my engagement to aiyesha.

Jai had no expression, he was not surprised. Rishi was puzzled.

Jai – was she very upset?

Rishi – actually no, when I went to meet her to tell her bout it, she was the one who told me that she dint want to continue this relationship, this so called relationship.

Jai was surprised now – oh so it was she who broke it. Is that why you are so upset?

Rishi – well it was mutual, look Jai ours was a arranged thing and we both were happy at that time, but then she met someone and she fell in love with the guy. I don't blame her coz we hardly ever met or talked. We were strangers to each other. I was actually very relieved when she said she wanted it to end. We parted as friends.

Jai nodded –Whatever happened is for the best. No use dragging a relationship when nothing exists. So then why are you so upset?

Rishi kept looking at Jai quietly.

Jai just said– Rano right?

Rishi got up frustrated – u gone crazy jai? Where did Rano come into this?

Jai also getting angry – No Rishi u gone crazy, you love Rano, agar main galat bol raha hoon to bol de, say that you don't love her?

Rishi hit the table with his fist.

Jai – common rishi say you don't love her.

Rishi in a tortured voice – it's wrong, I can't, I mean….. I shouldn't, its all wrong.

Jai calmly – so you are accepting that you love her.

Rishi – Yes Jai yes, but don't you see……I have always treated Bani as my sister. Always been like a bro to her.

Jai – But she is not or rather they are not your sisters, you are not related also in any way damn it.

Rishi ran his hands thru his hair frustrated.

Jai – rishi dekh I understand what you are saying, you always treated bani as your sister, then he smiled, and it sud always remain like that, that bought a slight smile to rishi's face Jai was taking care of his interest, but Rano you hardly knew, she was always away in Pune. And when you met her your feelings for her were different. It's ok. Nothing wrong in that.

Rishi still not convinced – Is it? I mean wot will bani say, oh god she will most probably kill me.

Jai – aisa kuch nahin hoga. Look at it like this, I love Bani, I am going to marry her, but it does not mean Rano will also be……

Rishi stiffened – she better not….

Jai laughed – oh ho all possessive haan mere majnu. I am just giving a hypothetical example.

Rishi blushing a bit – well…..

Jai - Are Rano is like a kid for me, she is the same age as Anu, not that I will ever be an uncle to her, she will kill me even if I said that, I'll always be her jijju, I'll always be protective towards her as an older brother. So what I am saying is these relationships are complicated. You cannot define them into one bracket. Now who wud have thought I wud fall in love with someone so much younger to me but I did and in the beginning I too protested but then I had to give in to my feelings, I had no choice, I just cud not help it.

Rishi – oh yeah we all can see that. I am witness to it all.

Jai – ya you've been a pain. But now I will be a pain to you n rano, you just wait n watch buddy.

Rishi unhappily– you will be a pain if that happens.

Jai – common Rishi don't be so sad, it does not suit you. Tell her you love her.

Rishi – Jai she will be shocked, she has known me so long but never shown any interest. We have just been friends.

Jai – rishi rishi at times you can know someone all your life n not know what they mean to you and when you realize it's either too late or you don't accept it. You run away from it and then are miserable all your life. You don't want to do that do you? You have to tell her. If she does not love you then at least you will have the satisfaction of knowing that. tab tum majnu banke ghumna. Abhi se kyon.

Rishi taking a deep breath – I think you are right Jai, I will have to take my chance.

Jai – yes that's like the Rishi I know, common go n tell her.

Rishi – relax buddy abhi nahin, let her finish her exams.

Jai – why wait till that long?

Rishi laughed – jai you are in love so you want to set everyone up haan?

Jai rubbing his hands in glee – I want my revenge. Tum dono ne bahut taang kiya hai mughe aur bani ko, ab hamari bari hai.

Rishi – theek hai theek hai you take your revenge, but let me do this my way. I mean she has her exams in 10 days and it won't be fair if I go n unload my baggage on her at this time. She might get upset, confused coz I don't think she loves me, not yet. Let me charm her n then when the time is right I will tell her.

Jai impressed – sahi hai, bilkul sahi ja raha hai. Yes I guess it won't be right to distract her now. Chal I'll just have to wait till then. Yaar rishi I was just thinking…..

Rishi – what?

Jai in a thinking mode – is all this right, I mean you n rano….

Rishi worried – what do you mean, abhi to you said its all ok….

Jai – haan maine bola magar ab jab main apne bare mein sochta hoon tab…..

Rishi – Tab kya….

Jai – I mean when you n rano r not together still you guys become kabab mein hadi jab tum dono saath hoge to mere romance ka to bilkul kachara ho jayega. Aur phir tum mere rishtedaar bhi ho jaoge. Mere dahej mein aaoge. Yaar that's gonna be a problem.

They both laughed.

Rishi – don't worry jai we will be too busy ourselves. I will keep rano away from u guys.

Jai – wah abhi se planning, you know what the best solution is, we both get married together and go to different places for our honeymoon.

Rishi all exited – yes yes let's do that.

Jai – theek hai but you will have to hurry up, coz I am not gonna wait. As soon as Rano's exam finish I am getting married.

Rishi n jai keep teasing each other.

Jai – ok rishi now I must leave, I have to be in the office tomorrow very early, got meetings all day.

Rishi – right buddy and thanks a lot.

Jai – common we are going to be brother in laws, ab support to karna padega na aur in dixit behno se bacne ke liye we will need all the support.

Rishi – I get wot you mean, they are devils.

Jai – sssshhhh Rishi sun liya to kayamt aa jayega.

Rishi – ya right but still you made me feel better so thanks.

Jai – Rishi even if I went looking I wud not find a better boy for Rano than you.

Rishi – What does that mean?

Jai smiled – ab Rano ki responsibility meri bhi to hai na.

Rishi laughed – yes yes big bro absolutely.

Jai - one more thing, parso holi hai you have to come to my place. Theek hai.

Rishi – I'll be there. Shyad mera kaam ban jaye

Both laugh n Jai finally leaves. He goes to the dixit sisters.

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Jai walked towards Bani's flat, he realized he had forgotten his Cell in Rishi's house, he went back and knocked.

Rishi – ab kya hua? Phir se Rano ne bheja?

Jai laughed - are Rano ke alawa bhi kuch sonch le, I left my cell here.

Rishi smiled sheepishly – oh, common in.

Jai – nahin bas cell de de.

Rishi goes in to get the cell, Jai sees the whiskey bottle on the table n rishi's glass again full, he comes in and takes the bottle.

Rishi – are what are you doing, where are you taking my bottle?

Jai – coz you not drinking any more. I am not getting my one n only Sali married to a sharabi.

Rishi – Wah Jai when u drink its ok, when I drink I am a sharabi?

Jai – I never over drink, now you get some sleep.

Rishi – Neend nahin aa rahi jai, thoda pi loonga to so jaoonga.

Jai smiled wickedly – Rishi…

Rishi looked at him

Jai sang in his velvet soft voice–

silli silli tapti raaton mein, jalta hoon mein barsaton mein

dooba dooba har pal yaadon mein, dil kya kare

apney mein hi khoya rehta hoon, kehna hai kuch kuch kehta hoon

pain ajab sa sehta hoon dil kya kare, ho... aankhon aankhon mein

ho... baaton baton mein, ho... le gaya koi, ho... de gaya koi

He went round Rishi laughing and raising his one hand in

salaam-e-ishq ishq ishq salaam-e-ishq

Rishi was laughing, he knew his time had started but he wud not let Jai have the last laugh, not as yet.

Rishi – Jai arz karta hoon….

Jai roared with laughter – tu arz karta hai abe tu to seedha chala ata hai, lagta hai sudhar raha hai, chal kar arz… irshad irshad..

Rishi – aap hi ke gane ki do line sunata hoon zara guar farmaye and then he sang

raaastey bhool jata hoon mein kyon bhalla

bewajaah gungunaata hoon mein kyon bhalla

nikloon mein phati jeans phenke (he pulled at his jeans, yep Jai is wearing black jeans remember)

SHIRT ke na hosh BUTTON ke (rishi pulled his shirt Jai was laughing his head off)

bajjte hain sab sur dhadkan ke dil kya kare

ho... aankhon aankhon mein, ho... baaton baton mein

ho... le gaya koi, h... de gaya koi

now rishi went round him doing

salaam-e- ishq ishq ishq salaam-e-ishq

Jai hitting him on the back – I cud never win in this cud I not from you n Sid. And this shirt is now sure going on the wall. Ab tune gana bhi ga diya.

Rishi – Wot's the story of the shirt Jai.

Jai – long story bro, later abhi let me go Rano n Bani will be waiting.

Rishi – Jai don't say a word bout Rano.

Jai – Bani ko bhi nahin?

Rishi exasperated – Nahinnnn Bani ko to bilkul nahin. Kuch bhi bol dena but not the truth.

Jai – yaar pitwayega tu, do you know wot she will do when she gets to know?

Rishi teased – scared jai haan The Jai Walia is scared of a five foot four inch girl.

Jai – Rishi Dynamite comes in all shapes n sizes, tumhe kya pata kitna daant khata hoon main.

Rishi – common Jai cant you do this for me?

Jai laughed – both you n rano r emotional blackmailers, she said the same thing to me.

Rishi all happy – aur kya kaha usne. Mere bare mein kuch bola?

Jai – abe chal hat, adhi raat ko khani nahin sunana mughe.

Rishi putting his arms round his shoulders – yaar put in some good word for me. I'll do the same I will really praise you to bani.

Jai laughed – you really got it bad bro. aur mughe koi sifarish ki zaroorat nahin hain, i know she loves me a lot.

Jai leaves with a big smile on his face, the thought of bani always did that.

He opens the door to Bani's flat, rano and bani were sitting in the living room chatting.

Rano – has someone ever taught you manners, don't you know you should knock or ring the bell.

Jai mock surprise – what to come to my own sasural, nah, no one told me that.

Rano – aye hai sasural n all my god, sud I start calling u Jamai Raja.

Bani – shut up both of you, don't start, Mr walia what did Rishi say?

Jai giving her the bottle – here keep this, he was drinking I took it from him, you had promised you'll get some whiskey for me but never did.

Bani – I will throw this also, you drink too much.

Jai sat down on the floor in front of bani and put his head in her lap, looked up going all filmy

Jai – Mat Pooch Yaar Ki Kitni Pee Hai Humne

Teri Aankon Main Zindagi Dubo Di Hai Humne

Ab Kanch Ke Pyalon Se Humein Kya Lena

Tere Honthon Se Peene Ki Kasam Kha Li Hai Humne

He was tracing the outline of her lips, she hit his hand away with "mr walia behave"

Rano – hey Ram koi shram hai ya wo bhi pe gaye.

Jai - itne sexy sher ke baad ye reaction, kya yaar u guys r boring.

Rano – sexy, it was a third class road side majnu sher.

Jai – why are you not in bed as yet, it's past your bed time.

Rano – who says?

Jai – I say for now, baad mein tumhara pati bolega.

Rano – oh get lost, tell us what happened? Did he talk?

Jai teasing her – oh pati ke naam pe wo yaad aa gaye.

Rano – god you are drunk today you are behaving so cheap. Di just ….

Jai – acha baba bolta hoon har baat mein Di….. he broke his engagement.

Rano n Bani both shocked – omg he broke his engagement but why?

Jai told them all bout aiyesha also wanting the same and Rishi being relieved etc.

Bani asked the loaded question – If that is what he wanted then why is he upset?

Jai uncomfortable lying to her – are his parents were upset so obviously he will feel a bit upset, but don't worry he is fine now. Quickly changing the topic, ok listen I need to go now, it's late.

Bani stroking his hair gently – ya it's two already, you must be knackered, we'll talk tomorrow.

Jai thanked his luck that she dint question him too much, he did not want to lie. They both got up. Bani n jai walk to the door rano stood in the middle of the living room with a wicked smile on her face.

Rano – Jai

Jai turned – hhhmmm

Rano – straight to bed, no calling Di and no drinking.

Jai zapped – why do I feel married, and not to one but two Devils.

Bani n Rano – because we both love you.

Jai – god save me. I know you love me darling but Rano…..

Rano pouting – common jai how can you say that. I have loved you even b4 u knew di. I have all your paper clippings, I can prove it.

Jai smiling – oh yeah, you know wot rano when you finish college come and join Walia groups, I will put you at a good scale with high perks.

Rano – salary Jai and here I was thinking you will make me a partner in Walia groups, you know share in the profit…..

Jai – god one is after my heart n the other my money.

Rano – just making it easier for you to choose Jai.

Jai – I pity the guy who marries you. But anyways who's gonna marry u is the bigger question.

Rano – hav u not seen the queue Jai?

Jai naughtily – I don't know bout the queue but sure know of one.

Rano looked at him with a puzzled expression, and jai bit his tongue he had said it but then he quickly changed the topic so that no one sud ask wot he meant.

Jai – can u excuse us now, I want to say goodnight to my fiance, my wud be wife.

Rano – don't let me stop you, go on say it.

Jai – I wud like to do it in a little privacy please.

Rano showing shock – now why wud you want to do that she is your fiance not your wife as yet. wait till she is your wife.

Jai in the same shocked tone – now why wud I say goodnight to my wife, we would just fall asleep together.

Rano – you are so disgusting.

Jai – then why don't you just leave us alone?

Bani – Mr Walia just go.

Jai sulking – no I am not going, ask her to go.

Rano enjoying every moment – me not going either JIJJU.

Jai – you know wot Rano, I'll get you for this when you and your Boyfriend….

Rano giggled – Jai first I don't have a boyfriend second I am not gonna let him kiss me, kissin is so yuch. And she made a disgusting face.

Jai threw his head back and laughed he looked at bani – Is it darling, have you not told her anything.

Bani blushed and punched him in the stomach.

Rano – you are such a dog.

Jai chased her with 'u called me a dog', she ran in her room, jai locked the door from outside.

Jai shouted - Rano I know I am a dog, sleep well sweet heart.

Rano – jai walia open this door right now.

Jai – JAI WALIA always gets wot he wants. U keep barking my love.

Rano kept screaming, jai took bani in a tight hug.

Bani – jai pls lemme go n open the door.

Jai – in a minute sweetheart first let me get my goodnight kiss.

Bani – you don't know wot you getting yourself into.

Jai – bani the day I realized my love for you I knew I was in trouble. I just dint bargain for double trouble but I am enjoying it, hav no complains.

Bani – Mr Walia please…

Jai – sure sweetheart wotever you want.

He took her mouth in a long satisfying kiss. She also kissed him back, she cud never resist him.

Jai – happy now.

Bani – I meant please go.

Jai – liar, u wanted this too.

Bani – acha baba now go n get some rest. Call me once you reach.

Before jai goes he shouts to Rano who was still screaming.

Jai – good night Rano, and if you ever get a chance to kiss do let ke know if it was yuch

Rano screamed – u swine, u dog, u creep, lemme out or you'll regret it all your life

Bani – y do u keep troubling her?

Jai – n y do u keep taking her side, u sud be on my side.

Bani pushed him – aap akele hi kaphi hai.

Jai – haan wo to main hoon, but tell that nutcase I love her too, aaj bahut taang kiya.

Bani – haan baba bol doongi ab aap jayiye.

Jai teasing her - thodi der pehle "stay" now "go" I tell you women can never make up their mind.

Bani just glared at him angrily.

Jai sweetly –Theek hai Theek hai ja raha hoon naraz kyon hoti ho…..


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Jai teasing her - thodi der pehle "stay" now "go" I tell you women can never make up their mind.

Bani just glared at him angrily.

Jai sweetly –Theek hai Theek hai ja raha hoon naraz kyon hoti ho…..

Jai leaves n bani goes and opens the door to Rano's room, she is furious.

Rano – where did he go? I am not gonna leave him. How could he lock me?

Bani laughing – Rano he's gone, n were you also not troubling him, wot cud he do?

Rano smiling now – Di now u takin his side, but di I am telling you I am gonna get my revenge n you not stopping me.

Bani – acha baba it's between u n him, I am not getting into this, but Rano be careful he has a very short fuse.

Rano grinning – oh yeah, but I am sure the problem is not temper anymore; it must be something else the way he keeps looking at you.

Bani – behave yourself

Rano grinned – look who is talking? You should behave; don't think I don't know anything.

Bani blushed – Rano you don't know anything, now go and study for a while.

Rano goes back to her room sayin "ya I hav not done any today all because of you n that creep"

Bani laughs n goes in her room, lying on her bed thinking of all that happened in just that one day, smiling to herself. She was overjoyed; she looked at the kangans, shook them and remembered how Jai had put them on, that slight rub of his thumbs, it bought color to her cheeks, all those moments she spent with him. He had those moments of rage but that was an inherent character of Jai Walia, u cud not take that aspect out of his character, it would not be him then, but even when he had kissed her angrily she had felt….. Flames swept over her at the memory. Later he had been so wonderful, passionate and tender and all the things a woman could desire. And yet, she'd wanted more. She wanted to be with him, in his arms, smell the masculine smell of him……….her phn rang 'yaad kiya dil ne kahan ho tum, Jhoomti bahaar hai kahaan ho tum' this was the msg tune set for Khadoos. She took the phn n saw the msg.

My room still has your sweet smell

The side of the bed where you lay is still warm.

Darling I wish you were here

I wish i cud hold you one more time

I wish I cud smell you one more time

I wish I cud kiss you one more time

I wish then that time wud stand still

One more time.

They both were having the same feelings of just being together. She looked at his poster, felt terrible to see it ripped from the middle; she started looking for the cello tape, found it in the kitchen on the fridge. (navs isi liye tumhe nahin mila ye pagal hai tape bhi koi kitchen mein rakhta hai) she came back n was going to tape it when the phone rang.

Well do I even need to say who it is? (It's 2 for god's sake. When they gonna sleep)

Jai – kya yaar itna romantic sms ke baad bhi no reply.

Bani – I am busy.

Jai – acha? doing what? Must be thinking of me?

Bani – I was angry and I tore of the photo of the guy who means most to me, I am trying to tape it. I feel bad.

Jai – darling don't feel bad, it's just a poster, this guy is ready to replace it with himself n I can promise you he will make you more happy than that poster.

Bani – he already did, it's been a wonderful day Mr Walia. Thank You.

Jai – yes it's been a wonderful day, we got engaged, we cried we fought, we made up and then (he chuckled) we practically made……..

Bani cut him off – Mr Walia stop it no one asked you to go into details.

Jai – but bani the last part was the best, we need to discuss it in detail.

Bani – u know wot I think, Rano is right, you are disgusting.

Jai laughed – ok then I will say wot I said to her, I am a red blooded man and I am entitled to think of my more intimate moments.

Bani shyly – Mr Walia if you want to talk about that then I am going to cut the phone.

Jai - are if I cant talk intimately to you then who, I am sure u wont like it if I did it with some one else.

Bani – just try n see, you won't even know wot hit you.

Jai chuckled – I still don't darling, I am still reeling under the effect.

Bani – sleep Mr Walia, no use getting romantic on the phone.

Jai – bolo to wahan aa jaoon . Bas bol ke to dekho darling.

Bani – Good Night Mr Walia. U r just behaving cheap.

Jai laughed – bani bani ruko, I'll sleep just give me a kiss.

Bani – over the phone, no Mr Walia I am not doing any such thing, wickedly, I'll kiss you tomorrow when I see you.

Jai – hai mai mar jawan, you are just too good at torturing, but I will hold you to that promise babes remember that.

Bani laughed – pleasure will be all mine Jai Walia.

Jai – witch.

Bani disconnected the phone with a smile and then kissed it with a 'I luv u"

In the morning Bani leaves for office. Rano goes to Rishi's house. Rishi opened the door, he had slept well after talking to jai. He had felt at peace with himself. He looked good.

Rishi – hi rano, wot a surprise first thing in the morning.

Rano – I hope it's pleasant.

Rishi thought to himself 'only if u knew, I wud like to keep this surprise in my house forever'

He said instead – well that I am not telling, tum se panga nahin le sakta, common in.

Rano came in he closed the door after her.

Rano – So rishi, sorry bout your engagement.

Rishi was uncomfortable, he did not want to talk bout it, not to her, he was uncertain, he knew what it was to be unsure around a person of the opposite sex, although it wasn't something he'd experienced in a long while. But he was feeling it now.

Rishi running his hand thru his hair – Well I am glad it's over……I mean there was nothing in that relationship. I mean…….

Rano – Rishi if you don't want to talk lets leave it at that then.

Rishi – nahin Rano it's not like that, I mean there is nothing to talk.

Rishi was sayin all the wrong things, he was sounding like an uncaring Bast*rd, but he cud not help he was just being honest. he was nervous around her, he dint want to say anything that wud freak her out, oh god all he wanted to do was take her in his arms n tell her how much he loved her. The thought freaked him actually; he straight went into the kitchen n stood by the sink breathing heavily. Rano came.

Rano – Rishi wot's up, you not feeling well? Do you have a hangover?

Rishi – nah I am fine, I'll make some coffee.

He tried but he was too clumsy, kept dropping things.

Rano – Rishi wots wrong with you, I came to ask you a favor but looking at you I think I better not. You will ruin it.

Rishi – no no Rano I am fine, you just make the coffee, I'll be back.

He went into his bedroom n closed the door, stood leaning on it. He spoke to himself in a low voice stamping his foot ' Rishi Rishi kya kar raha hai, gather your wits boy, u behaving like a girl jise pehli baar koi ladka dekne aya hai' he then looked in the mirror, he was blushing 'well I am in love for the first time n it sure feels good' he remembered Rano said she wanted a favor ' are main kuch bhi karoonga bas wo bol ke to dekhe' all exited he went back after taking few deep breath.

Rishi all exited – haan Rano bolo kya favor chhiye?

Rano – let's go sit in the drawing room n talk.

She carried the coffee n put them on the center table.

Rano – Rishi wot I want you to do is, as you know kal holi hai…………..and she told him.

As she spoke Rishi's expression changed from smiling to shock to complete terror.

Rishi – YOU GONE MAD, you want me to do that n that also wid Jai Walia, he will kill me. In his mind he thought 'tum shadi se pehle vidhwa kyon hona chahti ho'

Rano – Rishi…..

Rishi got up – No rano, no not this, you don't know wot u askin for, u dont know the guy, he has a horrible temper. Mughse pucho I know.

Rano – common Rishi he wont do anything, main hoon na.

Rishi shaking his head – nahin main nahin karoonga. Bilkul nahin

Rano sat there pouting like a kid.

Rishi – rano……

Rano – don't talk to me, I am going she got up n reached the door

Rishi quickly got his guitar n strummed n sang – (from Khanna & Iyer)

rootho na tum mujhse, o baby listen to me

jahaan jaaoge tum, mujhe paaoge tum

just me, just me

Rano looked back at him and smiled she came n sang

Rano –

kya khona, kya paana, ji lenge hum jindagi

yuun hi tanahaayi mein, aahon ki geharaayi mein

trust me, trust me

Rishi –

pehle sataati ho, phir muskuraati ho, yeh kya ada hai kaho

Vada hai, ye tumse vada nahin todoonga

jahaan jaaoge tum, mujhe paaoge tum

trust me, o baby trust me

Rano laughed – Are we done.

Rishi smiling - yes

Rano – then Rishi do it for me, tell him I asked you n u cud not refuse me.

Rishi instinctively – that's true, I can't refuse you, not now.

Rano puzzled – wot do you mean?

Rishi kicked himself mentally – I….I mean I cud never refuse a beautiful girl like you. It was out before he cud stop himself.

Rano laughed – Rishi Kapoor I think you have completely lost it, you are flirting with me…..

Rano's eyes lit up n b4 rishi cud say anything

Rano - but you know wot now I hav another idea.

Rishi groaned – another, pls tumhara pehla idea hi marvane layak hai.

Rano – rishi listen, Jai thinks I can't have a boyfriend or no one will be interested in me, so I am thinking why you don't just pretend to be my boyfriend. Just for a little while, please don't say no.

Rishi was thrilled to bits, he was like 'if I asked something else today I wud get it, it's my day'

Solemnly he said – Ya why not, I'll be too happy to help you there.

Rano – done, but don't come too strong coz then he will know, lets take it slow as if we fell in love. Show some interest in me tomorrow.

Rishi felt like jumping up n down, he kept sitting just nodding his head.

Rano – fine then, I am gonna get Jai Walia, he first poured water on me then he locked me in my room, he's had it. She rubbed her hands in glee. And DON'T forget wot I told u about tomorrow if u need help ask chotu.

Rishi – Rano I don't think we sud do that, I mean he might not like it. I like your second idea lets stick to that.

Rano – Rishi don't be a chicken, n its holi, u can get away with murder just saying 'bura na mano holi hai' common promise me you will do it.

Rishi – I hope I do get away with this, I don't wanna die yet. Rano glared at him, Ok I will do it, anything for you.

Rano laughed – you already started acting. Ok now let me go, she moved towards the door.

Rishi sang - Beqarar karke humein yoon na jayiye, aapko hamari kasam lot ayiye.

Rano giggled – stupid you don't hav to act when we are alone.

She left and Rishi threw his head back on the sofa elated, wot did she know, it wont need any acting, it wud be natural. He thought of calling jai n telling bout Rano's plans at least the second one but then he thought he will tell him later as jai wud be in the office n he was also getting late.

Jai is late for office. He does not like being late but he had got up late, n had got up in a good mood after ages. He was all smiles at the breakfast table, did not talk much as usual but seemed happy. Adi saw this n thought everything must have gone well.

Adi naughtily – Jai congratulations again.

Jai knew wot Adi meant smiled back conspiringly – Thanks Adi.

The others just looked at both of them puzzled. In the car jai told him about it all, Raghav also called to ask n jai said the plan had worked n called Raghav for holi.

As jai walked in the office first person he saw was bani talking to suzy, bani also saw him, their eyes met for few seconds, bani averted her gaze, she already felt hot color rising in her cheeks seeing him so fresh n in all black. The manager came to jai with some papers, jai walked with him while talking to him. As he passed bani he rubbed his arms along her back, just as if it was done by mistake, he turned and said 'sorry Ms Dixit'. Bani thought this was the beginning of torture, sheer torture. Jai stopped outside his door, finished talking to the manager. Turned back n came to where Bani n Suzy were chatting.

Jai – Suzy Wot happened to the new project file?

Suzy – Mr Walia I am working on it, will be ready in an hour.

Jai frowning – well then if you can stop chatting n hurry up it will be a big favor, I need it in 20 minutes.

Suzy sullen look – yes sir.

Jai in an authoritative tone – and as for you Ms Dixit, you did promise yesterday that we wud get the job done today, so if you came to my office we cud get started.

Bani felt like dieing there, the man was despicable, he stood all 6'4, in the middle of his office n was talking about ……..

Jai in his most khadoosest tone – could you please be kind enough to follow me, NOW.

Bani cud just muster a "yes Mr Walia' he walked, Suzy whispered "seems someone got out of the wrong side of the bed, all the best bani".

She followed him, seething in rage now. At his door he opened it with a 'after you'. Bani walked in, he followed n kicked the door with his foot n pulled her to him in one go.


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Bani cud just muster a " yes Mr Walia' he walked, she followed, seething in rage now. At his door he opened it with a 'after you'. Bani walked in, he followed n kicked the door with his foot n pulled her to him in one go.

Her back hit the strong wall of his chest n she could feel his warm breath on her neck as he started nuzzling it.

Bani struggling – Mr walia leave me.

Jai keeping a strong hold, his voice husky – not a chance, not until you do what you promised.

Bani irritated- Mr walia this is an office.

Jai nonchalantly – so what it is MY office.

Bani – yes and that is why you were being Bossy?

Jai biting her ears – baby I'll be the boss outside this room, u be the boss in here.

He turned her around, looking into her eyes, his own dark with passion.

Jai demanded – now kiss me.

Bani – No, let me go, else I'll hit you.

Jai – don't think, just do it, coz you really make up well after that.

The events of last evening played like a movie clip in her mind, she had asked him to stay..……… she wanted to hide in a hole.

Bani – how cud you say that, can you not think of anything else?

Jai his voice heavy – right now all I can think of is having you in my bed.

Bani's stifled gasp and reproving frown didn't do a thing to quell the hunger that surged through him. She cud feel his muscle twitching under her hand, he was trying to control himself from pulling her much closer, he bought his face closer 'what do you think'

Bani – you are disgusting now let me go Mr Walia. Someone might come.

Jai locked the door – here, is this ok, no one can come now.

Bani was completely shocked - have you completely lost it. You are making it worse; this is an office Mr Walia.

Jai murmurred – Wud you rather we go some where else? Where we could be alone?

Bani pushed at him and looked at him angrily with 'this is insanity, you have gone mad'.

Jai getting irritated – I am not asking you to make love to me, just asking for a good-morning kiss from my fiance, don't I deserve that much.

Bani annoyed – you make me sick, let me go.

Jai pushed her, opened the door – you are just acting hard to get, fine go and don't come back.

Bani walked out n went to her desk, jai slammed the door. Then it all started, whoever came got blasted. First it was Suzy, Bani heard Jai shouting at her. As Suzy came out

Bani – I am sorry about that, he does seem in a bad mood today.

Suzy – nothing new, don't worry we are used to it, he can have good days too n then he is all charming.

Bani was like 'oh ya tell me about it, he can charm a snake'; yes he was charming when he wanted to be.

Then it was Sahil, Ranbeer n the rest of the employees, all getting the first class khadoos treatment from Jai. Bani got irritated, she knew why he was in a bad mood, oh yeah she did n she was gonna get his head in its right place. She called Suzy.

Bani – Suzy Mr Walia does not want to be disturbed, so no calls n no visitors.

Suzy – ok, who wud want to visit him anyways given the mood he is in.

Bani – yeah right, thanks Suzy.

She opened the door and saw jai staring at her with a pen just dangling in his hand; well he must have been staring at the door now it was her. She closed the door n walked in, up to his desk, not taking her gaze off him. They stared at each other. Jai sat in his black leather chair like a lord.

Bani categorically – what's wrong with you?

Jai sulking – what's wrong with me?

Bani – don't answer a question with a question.

Jai – I don't know what you are getting at?

Bani – oh you darn well know, you are throwing a tantrum, shouting at every one who is coming here.

Jai pointing to the door with his pen – They can't do their work then of course I'll shout and it's not a tantrum as u put it.

Bani – oh no, THEY are doing there work, it's YOU who is not doing any thing, just sitting here dwindling your thumb, have you read the file Suzy brought. I need to take it to the other directors for signature.

Jai irritated at her guts – stop accusing me, why do I get the feeling I am not the boss here?

Bani – Mr Walia if you keep behaving like this I am resigning.

Jai threw the pen he was holding on his table n got up – don't threaten me damn it.

Bani – I am not threatening, just because u dint get a kiss…….

Jai – It's not about that I don't like………..

Bani – oh right it's not bout a kiss, we are back to square one, no one say NO to Jai Walia. Right?

That hit him in the gut.

Bani continued – nothing has changed right, you can't take a no, But Jai Walia from now on you will only get a no for everything till you learn to accept it. I will not be your plaything, to be used as and when you want.

Jai raging – I use you like a plaything, god damn you, and what about you……….

Jai had a sudden anger rising in him, how could she say that, but then it went as quickly as it came, he realized they were again clashing ego's, again trying to hurt each other by words, he calmed down., came to her.

Jai – Bani Bani listen to me, lets not talk like this, we will end up just hurting each other. Look I can't change in one day, I am trying, dheere dheere apne gusse ko control kar loonga. He smiled, his voice becoming soft, Dheere dheere na sunna bhi seekh loonga, give me some time.

He was the charmer now and she cud not resist his charisma. He was like a magnet and she felt attracted to his allure. She kept looking at him, waiting.

Jai – all right I am sorry I am behaving like a pig. But then Bani that is what you do to me. My heart does a summersault as I see you, look.

He took her hand and put it on his chest, well it was beating a lil erratically. Bani had a little smile playing on her lips. He let her hand go.

Jai – I get hit in the gut by a missile, my stomach goes all jitterbugs……..

Bani started laughing – ok stop there, lets not go below that.

Jai took her in a hug laughing – you are a devil and I love you, now can I get that kiss.

Bani punched him in the stomach – no you can't.

She moved away from him, he let her.

Jai sulking - Can't take this 'can look, but not touch" attitude anymore, it's gonna kill me.

Bani – stop behaving like a kid. Stop sulking.

Jai – I am behaving like a man, just a lovesick man who is not entitled to a kiss…….

Bani shook her head smiling – Mr Walia get some work done, you have a meeting with the TISCO chairman in 30 minutes.

Jai groaned putting his hand on his forehead – Sh*t I forgot bout that completely, you make me forget, can't get a thing done today.

Bani seductively – Don't worry I am here, I'll remind you of everything.

And she winked at him, which was a mistake, Jai closed up on her like a panther, her heart went into over-drive as his hands closed on her shoulders, his mouth claimed hers in a kiss that was gentle but hinted at passion kept on a tight leash.

Later Jai left for the meeting, telling her to go home n not wait as he wud be late, he wud see her in the evening.

But till late evening there was no sign, not even a call from JW. She paced the house restless, and then she cleaned the whole house, an odd thing especially since housework wasn't high on her priorities. (She is like me then) Rano tried to stifle her giggles but in the end failed and burst out laughing.

Rano – Di stop it, he must be busy.

Bani angry – even for a call………..anyways who's bothered he can go to hell as far as I am concerned.

Rano looked towards the door – Now Look who's here.

Bani came running out of the kitchen to find rishi.

Bani disappointed – oh it's just you?

Rano burst out laughing again n bani gave a dirty look.

Rishi grinned – Now that is the best welcome I got in years, wossup, waiting for someone?

Rano – Rishi don't, she will eat you alive.

Bani irritated – get out both of you and leave me alone.

Rano – yep Rishi lets go to your place, I need help with management accounting, as it is her hyper behavior is distracting me.

Rano n Rishi leave, bani goes back to cleaning when the bell Rang, she opened the door, it was the delivery boy from Chocossieur, he handed her a packet, all gift wrapped. She opened it and there was a bottle of coffee with a note in his bold handwriting saying "just to keep you awake, till I am with you' and a bar of 'Arabian delight' with a note saying 'tingle your taste buds till I kiss you again'. She cud feel herself blushing to her toes.

Later there was another gift, it was a white chiffon sari, the note read ' I know you don't want gifts from me, Please find the bill attached, I will get myself reimbursed from your salary. I want to see you in this tomorrow, and that is an order from your Boss." It was signed 'Khadoos.'

He did not come; she waited till midnight, drinking coffee, finished the chocolates, when he finally called. She took the call but did not talk.

Jai – hi baby.

No reply.

Jai – sorry I got held up, had to take them for dinner n the batteries of my phone died on me.

Jai – sweetheart talk to me, take my fatigue away. I am very tired.

Jai – fine if you wont talk then I am coming there.

Bani quickly – No Mr Walia, its very late n you are tired, u shouldn't drive.

His chest did the usual funny little pang under the breast bone as usual, whenever he heard her silky voice.

Jai – I knew you wud stop me, you care too much for me.

Bani – And you take advantage of that.

Jai – Bani did you get the sari?

Bani laughed – yes I got the chocolates also which I finished waiting for you. And I had at least six cups of coffee.

Jai – sorry babes I just couldn't get away, but you know how much I want to see you and now I just want to see you in that sari.

Bani – I'll wear it tomorrow, but I am not getting anything cut from my salary, she giggled.

Jai sweetly – fine I'll take my payment in kind then.

Bani – we'll see. What time will u be here?

Jai – around seven?

Bani laughed – Mr Walia why so early. Who plays holi at seven. Come around 9/10

Jai – let's make it eight, can't wait longer.

They keep talking, bani asks if there will be lot of people n he told her the office staff and few friends etc.

Bani – have u told Tarun n Maya

Jai – nah I don't want Tarun

Bani – but Mr Walia it does not look good, think bout Maya.

Jai feeling anger – but Tarun…….

Bani – look its late call them now, they r in Pune, obviously they wont be able to come but you wud have done your part.

Jai smiled – you are so sensible.

Bani – yes and now the sensible thing to do is sleep, good night.

Next morning Jai was at their door at 7.30.

Edited by sanam84 - 18 years ago
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Part 70

Next morning Jai was at their door at 7.30.

Jai rang the bell, Rano opened n saw him, just walked off, Jai kept calling but she went in her room n banged the door. Jai smiled at the childish display of anger, he felt his pockets, the gulal (color) that Anu had given him just before he left was there. He wud get rano, it was holi she couldn't be angry for long. He walked in and shut the door, when he turned back he saw Bani, standing outside her room demurely, both stared at each other, eye lock, Jai actually skipped few beats, choked to see Bani in the white sari, she looked angelic, untouched, so delicate. He moved towards her in slow motion.

Bani watched him, he looked gorgeous in his well starched crisp white kurta pajama, well he looked gorgeous in whatever he wore, even in a torn shirt or a towel he looked striking. She blushed at her thoughts. Jai reached her.

Jai breathing out finally smiled – Hi beautiful.

Bani's heart melted at his smile and the warmth in his eyes.

Bani smiled shakily – Hi Mr Walia, you look good.

Jai his voice going thick with longing – Can I touch you.

Bani confused – what?

Jai – will you break into pieces if I did? You look so fragile.

She sort of dived into his arms, eager for his touch and the fire of his kiss, she wasn't disappointed. His mouth closed over hers with hungry tenderness she'd come to expect from him. His lips were warm and supple on hers. The kiss was tender as well as passionate. It lasted a long time. They had to come up for air.

Bani – we…we have to go.

Jai – I'd rather stay here.

Bani – Mr Walia….

Jai groaned – ok ok we'll go but first……..

He took out the packet of gulal, poured some on his palm, then with his other hand put some on both her cheeks with "Happy Holi Darling" and then in an instinctive reaction turned his palm upside-down on her head, right in the middle where her parting was. Bani took her hands to her parting n touched it with her fingers, then saw the color it was red.

Bani shuddered – Mr Walia ye apne kya kiya?

Jai himself was stunned at what he had done, it had been impulsive, he had not stopped to think. He was besieged by emotions.

Jai – Bani I myself don't know, when I saw the red gulal n then you, all I wanted was to see how you would look as my bride. My wife. You make me do crazy things.

Bani – But Mr Walia……

He took her face in his palms, bent down bringing his face level with hers and spoke softly, huskily.

Jai – Bani when I was coming here Anu gave me the gulal and said I should be the first one to put color on you. Bani I had Goosebumps believe me, I can't explain what I felt. I had such strong feelings in me. It scares to me to death. Now I feel responsible for you. It was a simple statement for her in context of holi, but for me it meant more, it meant the world. I know I am the first man you have ever loved and I want it to stay like that. I want to make you mine, protect you, love you and cherish you. I love you like hell and it scares me to death when I think of loosing you.

Bani touched his cheeks lightly – Mr Walia, I am yours, only yours and nothing in this world can change that. You have nothing to fear.

There was so much sincere passion, so much intensity in her voice, in her eyes, he wanted to crush her to him, he took her in a hug, they stood there with her head lightly resting on his chest, wanted to be like that forever. Bani moved back.

Bani – Mr Walia I will have to clean this, I can't go with you like this, I mean masi n dadi……the others….

Jai – yes Bani I understand, just a sec….

He took out his phone and captured her in it.

Jai smiled - now you can go, not that I needed this, you are in my heart I just need to close my eyes to see you, this is for you, if you ever try to run, I can prove you are my wife.

Bani smiled back – I am not going anywhere Mr Walia and she went.

Jai called her, she looked back – Bani, put lot of lotion on your hands and face so that no color stays on you. Tumpe sirf mera rang hona chahiye, mere pyar ka raang.

She was smiling as she washed her hair in the sink, she could hear him singing outside.

Mere rang mein rangne waali, Pari ho ya ho pariyon ki rani
Ya ho meri prem kahaani, Mere savaalon ka jawaab do, Do na

Dono taraf benaam si uljhan, Jaise mile hon dulha dulhan
Dono ki aisi haalat kyon hai, Haan phir itni mohabbat kyon hai
Mere savaalon ka jawaab do, Do na

Rano came out her room, dressed in a cream salwar kurta.

Jai – hi grumpy

Rano – shut up.

Jai – tsk tsk is that the way to greet your jijju on holi?

Rano –you r not my jijju as yet, where is Di?

Jai shrugged – believe me I am and I don't know where your di is.

Rano – then who were you singing to?

Jai – I am trying to call her.

Rano looked at him from top to bottom – BTW you look like Snow white.

Jai groaned thinking 'Rishi do you have any idea wot u getting into, I really pity u'

Rano wanted to burst out thinking wot he wud be looking like in a little while, 'Rishi you better do a good job else you r dead'

Jai – thanks rano you r so generous with your compliments.

Rano – Jai when you came u dint have any color on you, now where did that red on your kurta come from, now wot have u done, where is Di?

Jai – Rano why do I get the feeling that I am in a court or police station always being interrogated by you? Your Di is not a kid, she can take care of herself.

Rano – oh yeah with you around, I think you both looses it when together I have to keep a check on both of you.

Jai taking out the gulal – oh shut up n come here.

She didn't move, he moved toward her dancing a bit n singing 'do me a favor, let's play holi, rangon main hai pyaar ki boli'

Rano giggled seeing him dance like that, sang - ho mere pichhe pichhe pichhe kyon aaye
mera jiya jiya kyon dhadkaaye, jaa re jaa don't

She stopped as the next words were 'touch my choli'

Jai burst out laughing - y did u stop continue please.

Rano - hai bahana holi ka, paas aana chahe tu
chaand se mere chehre pe ,rang lagana chahe tu, ohhh holi hai aani jaani,
tere dil mein hai beimaani, main nahi hu itni bholi uuf ye holi hai ye holi….

They both laughed, he put some color on both her cheeks n hugged her with a "happy holi kiddo'

Jai – common now it's your turn, giving her the color.

Rano walked off with 'nah I don't play holi' she was giggling inside.

Jai – hey common neither do I, just do a tika to me.

Rano was thinking 'oh yeah I will do the Tika properly jai don't worry"

Bani came out her hair all wet.

Rano – Di r u crazy, u had a bath b4 playing holi…..no wait you were ready b4 Jai came……what happened?

Jai and bani looked at each other. Bani blushed a little. Rano watched them, shook her head.

Rano making a disgusting face – I don't wanna know, you both are impossible, Pata nahin kya karte rehte ho. Now let's go.

Jai – don't worry your time will also come.

She gave him a dirty look but she was to exited to retort back, Jai thougt he had won at least one battle. They locked the door n went down, as they were getting out of the building Rano pulled Bani back, jai dint notice, kept walking, suddenly he was drenched, drenched to the core, from head to foot.

Jai just looked down at himself shocked – what the hell…..what the BLOODY hell is this……..

He looked up from where the water had fallen, no it wasn't just water, it was absolutely dark yellow and was little sticky, Rishi stood on the first floor with a bucket in hand, jiving n singing.

Rishi – guess whose back, I'm back, I'm back, that's why they call me Slim Shady I'm Back, I'm Back.

Jai was screaming at him wiping his face n head at the same time – yeah I can see that, god I sud have left you in your majnu land if this is wot I get….. bloody hell

Rishi came running down, went to jai laughing his head off, rano had her hands on her mouth trying to smother her laugh, Bani n Jai stood there still dazed, jai trying to shake the water or wotever it was, off.

Jai hissed to Rishi – should I tell them bout your little secret….

Rishi put his arms round jai then pulled it back with an "eeewwww' laughing – Jai Jai its not my fault, it was Rano's plan, I just couldn't say no to her buddy, you know how it is?

Jai looked at Rano n Bani, they both were laughing now, had come little closer but Rano was behind bani holding her.

Enter chotu, the lift man with a sheet in his hands. (Imagine chotu as rajpal yadav in Waqt, absolutely serious, expressionless)

Chotu to Jai – saab Chadar.

Jai still zapped – wot? I mean kya hai?

Chotu – saab chadar.

Jai confused, frustrated – haan mughe dikh raha hai, chadar hai, magar kya karoon iska, ise pehen ke ghar jaoon?

Chotu serious face – nahin aap ise pehnege to gadi kaise chalyenge?

Bani and rano doubled up holding their stomach, Rishi cud not stand he sat down on the floor laughing.

Jai sarcastically – exactly my point, main bhi yehi sonc raha tha ki chadar pehan ke gadi kaise chalaoonga.

Chotu stood there looking at jai as if jai was the fool, Jai looked at Rishi

Jai – rishi wot does he want?

Rishi cud not talk, laughed more at jai's n chotu's bewildered expression, of course for different reason, he just shook his hand and head

Jai to chotu frustrated – kya karoon iska.

Chotu mater of fact as if Jai was asking the most stupid question – Saab seat pe dalna, daag nahin lage ga, haldi hai na, iska daag nahin jata.

Jai was, now what can I say u guys imagine his face yourself.

Jai screamed – haldi…….haldi……….u mean turmeric………oh god…oh god, this wont even come off…….

He looked at them one by one, they all nodded their head laughing. Only chotu was standing seriously with the sheet in his hand.

Rano laughing still hiding behind bani – 2kgs jai, just 2 kgs of pure turmeric, good for your skin jai.. She teased him, 'Do me a favor, let's play holi, rango mein hai pyaar ki boli'. Happy Holi jai JIJJU.

Jai stood there all yellow, looking down himself, didn't know if he should laugh or cry.

Rano teased him further – aaaawwww my poor snow white has turned into a yellow pumpkin.

Bani – Rano stop it, he'll kill you.

Jai – exactly Bani I am gonna kill her and you not stopping me this time.

Rano had already started running, with jai chasing her. She kept singing.

Look at the stars, Look how they shine for you,
And everything you do, Yeah they were all yellow,

I came along, I wrote a song for you
And all the things you do, And it was called yellow

So then I took my turn, Oh all the things I've done
And it was all yellow

Your skin, Oh yeah your skin and bones
Turn into something beautiful
And it was all yellow

I swam across, I jumped across for you
Oh all the things you do, Cause you were all yellow

I drew a line, I drew a line for you
Oh what a thing to do, And it was all yellow

(yellow: coldplay)


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#8


Part 71

Rano ran, Jai chased, she ran around n came to rishi.

Rano – Rishi pls pls bacha lo mughe.

Rishi – R u Crazy as long as he is behind you I am safe.

She ran to bani giving him a kick with her knees, he laughed, but caught jai as jai passed him.

Jai – Rishi leave me, I'll deal with u later.

Rishi laughed - Jai Jai, listen to me, even if you catch her, kya kar loge, maroge thodi na, abhi you cant do anything, you hav been done, but don't worry I'll get her.

That actually made sense Jai thought, he smiled.

Jai – yeah you are right, the only objection I have is on "I'll get her', no buddy this time I'll get her.

Rishi – ok ok this time we'll get her, theek hai. I am with you.

Jai looking accusingly – can I trust you after wot u did?

Rishi put his arms around him laughing – jai yaar she bullied me, u know how these sisters are, they get what they want.

Jai - So does Jai Walia. Now lets go, n u better be on my side warna……..he showed his fist to him.

Rishi put his hands on his heart – gentleman's promise.

They walked up to bani n rano, who was giggling uncontrolled seeing jai all yellow.

Jai to Rano – you just wait n watch.

Rano pulled her tongue – empty threats Jai jijju.

Jai – we'll see, I think main tumhare peeche Sid ko chod doonga.

Rano – is that a promise, Sid is cute. I luv him.

Jai shook his head – Bani sambhalo ise, bilkul bigad gayi hai.

Rishi – I second that. Stop going after married men, main hoon na.

Rano guessed he was doing the boyfriend acting, JW n Bani looked at him with a frown, B4 bani wud say anything, chotu who was still standing there goes "saab Chadar"

Jai finds it all very funny, puts his hand around his shoulders and walks him towards the lift.

Jai patiently – chotu, bhai mughe chadar nahin chahiye, main aaj apni BMW nahin laya, jeep laya hoon.

Chotu same innocent tone – to jeep mein seat nahin hoti?

Jai ignored – chotu ek baat batao, tumhe ye chadar kisne di?

Chotu – aap ko nahin pata?

Jai thought 'I will kill him if he asks another question'

Jai – mughe kaise pata hoga, maine thodi di.

Chotu – achaaaaa, Mughe Rano di ne diya, bola jab Jai jijju ko haldi lag jaye tab de dena.

Jai nodded. Yeah he had guessed right. This was all part of her plan.

Chotu continued – Aapki shadi kab hai?

Jai zapped 'now where did that come from' – Shadi?

Chtu – haan aapko haldi to lag gayi, hamare yehan haldi ke baad shadi hoti hai.

Jai took out some money from his pocket, all wet n yellow – chotu jab meri shadi hogi main tumhe zaroor bulaoonga, ab tum ye rakho, bachon ke liye mithai le lena.

Chotu – meri Shadi nahin hui Jai Jijju.

This time jai had exactly the same tone n expression as chotu – to kya hua bache to honge na.

This time chotu is zapped, Jai leaves, smiling to himself at Jai jijju, was every one in the building goin to call him that, with Rano u cud expect anything. As he crossed near the stairs, few girls went

Girls - Jiijaajii Jiijaajii Hone Vaale Jiijaajii
Shaadii Ke Phere Hain Saat Aur Hamaarii Sharten Saat
Tumako Ho Manzuur Agar Tabhii Milegaa Diidii Kaa Haath
Jiijaajii Jiijaajii Hone Vaale Jiijaajii ...

Jai looked at them from the corner of his eyes, all 15/16 types, giggling and singing, he had seen them with Rano in the building, knew they were her friends, for the first time JW was embarrassed, he blushed, pressed his lips to suppress a chuckle, walked looking down, rubbing the back of his neck, shaking his head.

Jai to Rano – All this is your plan?

Rano nodded – this is only the beginning, this was for pouring water on me.

Rishi butted in – and jai I had no idea bout this, I just knew bout my part.

Rano proudly – Rishi if you want your plan to be successful then your right hand should not know what your left hand is doing.

Jai chuckled – and rishi aap ka kon sa haath hai?

Rano – I'll tell you when the time is right, for now I hav lots planned, but will give you in doses.

Jai looked at bani – oh is that so, well apni di ko bhi kuch seekha do, won't mind it from her.

Bani blushes – shut up, can we go now?

They walk towards the parking.

Jai- I did not bring the car, I bought my jeep, did not want it all colored.

Bani – good I luv that car.

Jai – so my car is more important haan, mera yeh haal tumhari behan ne kiya, use kuch nahin bola.

Bani – it's u n her, n it's holi.

Jai smiled – ok then don't stop me later.

Bani smiled at him – Have I ever stopped you.

Jai winked – always.

Rano –R u two done, can we go and I am not goin in that, I'll come with rishi.

Rishi – me not takin my car either, I'll take my bike.

Rano – I'll love the ride.

Jai – oh really u will, we are talking bout the bike ride right?

Rano smirked – go Jai go, think about how you gonna take revenge. Don't use your brains on other things.

She moved away with Rishi, Jai called back "remember Rano its War" rano dint look back, just dismissed him by waving her hand. Jai laughed. Took out his keys, all wet, he groaned.

Bani – Mr Walia you want to go up and change into dry clothes, or have a bath.

Jai naughtily – will you help me?

Bani sat in the jeep – I am glad Rano did that, serves you right.

Jai also got in – acha u r glad, don't worry you will help me get all this off.

Bani – wishful thinking, I am not doing any of those thing.

He started the jeep n they drove, kept talking.

Jai – why not now you are my wife, I made you mine.

Bani laughed – that was just gulal.

Jai – so what, don't you see in hindi movies they do it with blood, n then they r married.

Bani – you are becoming very filmy.

Jai – it's coz of the company, sangat ka asar hai.

Bani misunderstanding – I am not filmy.

Jai winked – I was not talking about you. I have other friends.

(we all know who he means don't we, are the most filmy member on this forum)

Bani – acha kon?

Jai – I am not telling, you will just get jealous.

Bani – not anymore Jai Walia, I know you are addicted to me.

Jai looked at her, kept driving and throwing glances at her, she felt bare, the way he looked at her. She blushed.

Bani – stop looking at me like that.

Jai – like what?

Bani – you know what I mean.

Jai huskily – no I don't tell me?

Bani – concentrate on driving.

Jai smiled at her – how can I concentrate on driving when you are driving me nuts. Now I am your husband and I have proof. So you must know what I want?

Bani shyly – not as yet Mr Walia, and how wud I know what you want?

Jai looked at her and smiled – bata doon?

Bani shook her head in the negative shyly. Jai sang softly.

Jai - Mere Dil Mein Aaj Kya Hai Tu Kahe To Maein Bataa Doon
Teri Zulf Phir Sawaaroon Teri Maang Phir Sajaa Doon
Mere Baazuon Mein Aakar Tera Dard Chain Paaye
Tere Gesuon Mein Chhipkar, Maein Jahaan Ke Gham Bhula Doon
Teri Zulf Phir Sawaaroon Teri Maang Phir Sajaa Doon

With one hand he touched her cheeks, pushed the hair back which kept coming on her face, she kept smiling at him. They reach Walia mansion. Rishi n rano are waiting, they go in together, the whole family is in the sitting room, and all burst out laughing at jai's condition. Bani n rano touch massi dadi feet, say hi hellos….

Massi – Are munna ye kya haal ho gaya tera.

Jai – Massi wo Rano aur Rishi ne………..

Dadi – billo sasural gaya tha to haldi lagwa ke aa gaya ab to jaldi shadi karwani padegi.

Jai - kya dadi aap bhi……

Adi – kyon Jai u don't want to get married, massi ne to kal pandit ji ko bulaya hai date nikalwane, chalo mana kardenge……

Jai immediately – nahin I dint mean that……..

Everyone laughs more, jai feels embarrassed.

Jai – massi main zara kapde badal ke ata hoon.

Massi – munna tune bani ko raang nahin lagaya, beta pehle use raang to laga de, maine anu ko bola tha…….

Anu – but I gave …….

Jai n Bani looked at each other, bani lowered her eyes, she remembered.

Jai – main bhool gaya.

Rano coughed. Bani glared at her, jai smiled, Anu got the thali with colors.

Massi – chalo ab tum dono ek doosre ko raang lagao, aur ye holi ke raang tumhari zindagi mein hamesha rahen.

Jai saw the colors on the thali, all colors blue, green, red….he took the red… bani's eyes shot up to him n she blushed like the color in his hands, he smiled n put it on her cheeks, then she did the same shyly as the others watched, eye lock, mostly everyone coughed.

Jai took off to change, Adi said it was ok as it was just the beginning n he will get more color but he felt his kurta sticky n stiff.

When he came down all changed in his white tennis shorts and t-shirt (are holi mein koi black nahin pehenta), he found everyone gone out in the garden, he called for Tony.

Jai giving him a slip of paper – Tony I want you to go to the Sharma stores and get this.

Tony – sir but it will be closed, aaj holi hai.

Jai – I hav spoken to Mr Sharma, tum peeche se jana, wo tumhe wahan milenge. He will give it to you. Now hurry up and go.

Tony – Sir kitna lana hai?

Jai – 5 kgs, I have told him bas ab tum jao.

Tony is like……….jai laughs at his expression and goes out to join the others.
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Part 72

Jai walks out in the garden, sees everyone standing, scattered but close, (like the whole family was there but….do u get the picture…. ). Some office people were standing a little away. He goes and joins the family. Notices the little frown on bani's face. Rano, Rishi were talking to anu, sahil n ranbeer, masi dadi were there but a bit engrossed in seeing that everything was ready (like snacks n drinks etc) So Bani was left with Adi n Jigs and Jai guessed that jigs must be being herself, must have said something to bani so the frown. Jai wondered where Sid, Janat n ragav were. If they were here then he cud leave Bani with them and go and meet the staff.

Jai put his hand on her back – You OK

Jigs dripping sweetness – Of course she is ok bhai, why wud she not be, she is in the Walia house after all.

Rano had overheard, b4 jai cud retort, she was at Jigs

Rano Sarcastic tone – So wot's the big deal bout Walia house. I would think the Walia house should feel gratified to have someone like my Di as their Bahu, who has always stood on her own, never needed any support even in the most difficult situations.

Jigs was shocked out of her mind, actually she was left speechless, she knew the dig was at her. No one had put her in her place so candidly. Jai had a very slight smile playing on his lips, he too felt it was high time someone told Jigs off, if Rano had not done that he sure wud have, not so bluntly but ……he had chosen bani as his would be wife, and no one had the right to insult her, not even his own sister. He would not tolerate that. He was happy Rano had taken the call this time, if it continued he wud sort jigs out but later, today was holi he did not want to upset anyone.

Bani too felt proud but still reprimanded Rano – Rano shut up, you don't talk to your elders like that.

Adi laughing – are Bani bolne do, koi to hai jo jigyasa ka muh band kar sake.

Jigs gave Adi a dirty look, actually she gave a dirty look to all of them and left to join Massi n Dadi. Jai n Adi both winked at Rano. Jai looked again towards the office staff, he sud go n greet them.

Jai – Bani I must go and wish the staff, you want to come.

Bani – nahin aap jayiye, it does not look good, I am still your PA in the office.

Jai smiled at her lovingly – for me you are this. He showed her his phone, he had set the pic as the wallpaper.

Rano – let's see, let's see.

Jai put the phone back in his pockets – No you have been naughty, you don't get to see it, you be nice to me and I'll show it to you.

Rano – Then dream on Jai Walia, its good to have dreams, may be one day they'll come true.

Jai – Jai Walia makes his dreams come true baby, but then Jai Walia does not dream about petty things, he dreams big.

Rano just imitates him 'jai walia dreams big'

Jai laughs, as he is about to leave, Sid and Jaan come, they all hug each other wid happy holi. Of course all the explanation bout Jai being all yellow follows. They have a hearty laugh.

Sid goes to jai n pulling his cheeks teases him –

banno terii ankhiyaan suramedaani, banno teraa mukhadaa laakh kaa re
banno teraa kangan hai hazaari, banno teraa kangan ...

Jai hits his hand laughing – stop it Sid, not me, I hav had enough since this morning, then he points towards Rano and does a 'sssshhhoooo'

Sid with a hurt look – Jai you treating your best friend like a dog?

Jaan – he is treating a dog like a dog.

Sid goes all cheap on her – haye meri Jaan, when you call me a dog, he breaths in n out winks at her, tab kuch kuch hota hai.

Jaan – behave Sid.

Jai – forget it jaan, kise bol rahi ho.

He walks off laughing. Goes and meets the office staff, they wish each other, he chats to them for a while, everyone has the sweets n stuff then they all leave.

He starts walking back, see Anu and her friends, stopped to wish them, they were all like zapped, I mean they came to Walia house often but JW had never said a hi or hello to them, he had always been the snooty, nose in the air type of business tycoon. But still they had been in awe of him, they had never thought him as 'uncle material' thought him to be the 'heartthrob of the country' the hottest guy in town, tall, well built n all the baggage associated with being 'hot n sexy dude' as they wud say. But JW had not given them a second look, wait not even that one astray look. Now they were all blushing like teenagers, going all shy on him. Jai stood there, his hands thrust in his back pockets, legs in a wide stance, twitching his shoulders, which he always did when uncomfortable or embarrassed. Spoke to them, smiled at them.

Bani sitting on the grass, watched him. He was coming out of his self made exclusion, melting the thaw that he had built around him, she felt happy for him. He was trying, she cud see that. but she could also see the way the girls were reacting to him, it reminded her of the time she had first met him, she had been so aware of him, why first, even as she watched him now, in his white t-shirt which hugged his body like a second skin, muscles trying to burst out from within the sleeves, hip hugging shorts, those long bare legs……..color crept up from her toes to her cheeks. She cud feel the jitterbugs as he wud say.

Jai came to them, Bani watched him walk, long strides, she smiled up at him, he plonked himself besides bani, put his head in her lap, looking up at her shaking his head.

Jai – Kids I tell you.

Bani ran her hand in his hair lovingly – No Mr Walia the way they reacted to you I won't call them kids.

Jai smiling – did it make you jealous?

Bani shyly – maybe just a bit, but you seemed to be enjoying the adulation.

Jai's heart did a rock dance in his heart to see her blushing. He touched her cheeks…

Jai - Tere Bin Sanu Sonya, Koi Hor Naiyo Labhna ,
Jo Dekhu Ruh nu Sakun na Chuke jo Nakhra Mera...

Sid – Jai hum sab bhi hain yehaan yaar, thoda humse bhi baaten kar le.

Rano – forget it Sid these two lovebirds make me sick. Inka kuch nahin ho sakta.

Jai just ignores them continues singing, while bani does not understand a word of it, but still loves it, just letting herself drown in his velvet voice.

Rano – Di did you even understand a word of it.

Bani smiling down at jai not even looking at Rano– I understand the language of love, one day I am sure you will too.

Rano – Di please….

Rishi – she is right rano one day you will.

Rano smiled at him – if you say so.

Sid is like 'ye kya ho raha hai' jai also has a frown, he knew about Rishi but Rano being so sweet to him, nah he was confused, Had Rishi said something to Rano, well he wud hav to wait n ask Rishi later. Right now he was busy drowning in her eyes. All had gone quite.

Rano – this is so boring, common guys its Holi lets do some dhamal.

Sid – Jai sud I throw her in the pool?

Jai – are Sid anyone of us can do that but that wont be any fun, I wud love to see her jump in, all on her own.

Rano – oh really Jai, but you know what; I am not here for swimming lessons.

Jai – we'll see.

Rano frowned at him, thinking wot was he talking about, was he up to something, nah he was too busy lookin at Di, right now he was useless, his brains all mush. She was safe.

Jaan – Jai

Jai – hhhhmmmmm

Jaan - how did you get hurt?

Jai looked at jaan then, all confused.

Sid – hurt, what hurt?

Jaan – he has a bruise on his shin.

Sid teasing her – behave jaan stop looking at his legs.

Jaan gave him her worst look, while jai laughed; his eyes darted back to Bani, who was going all red.

Jai looking at bani – I hit the corner of a table.

Sid – wot a liar u r, which table has a round corner like that, no buddy it's a knee butt. I know it all.

Jaan – oh ya you wud, you have been hit so many times by all your previous girl friends.

Sid – ya I am an expert at injuries given by females, I have been hit all over, so jai kisne mara tumhe, mai to pit ta tha coz I was being naughty, tu kis liye pita. Bani you better keep a check on him now…….no wait, you did it………

Rano burst out laughing – Sid ask him about the torn shirt……

Jai – stop it you guys, stop discussing our private life, right sweetheart?

Eye lock. Intense eye lock.

Sid – Jai, Massi.

Jai quickly got up, looking around; Massi was near the pool talking to biji. Jai got up with 'Sid I wont leave you' Sid ran to Massi, with jai after him..

Sid held massi n sang –

Massi dekh aa dekh tera munna bigda jaye
Biji dekh aa dekh tera munna bigda jaye
Isko changi kudi koi dikla de, jaldi se shadi karwa de
Dekhega na upar neeche, bhagega na age peeche
Biwi tang karne ayegi, ispe pehre bithayegi
Bache wache ho jayenge, isko raste pe layenge
Ispe daal di zimedari, mushkil hal hogi tab sari
Amma dekh…….

Jai – masi aap hato….

Massi – Are munna jane de mazak kar raha hai….

Jai like a kid – kya masi subah se sab mere peche pade hai…

Sid from behind massi- shadi bhi to tu kar raha hai munna, to limelight mein kon rahega….

Massi – Sid bas kar ab, mat tang kar mere munna ko…..

Jai – massi ab aap mughe munna mat bolen please.

Massi and dadi laugh, sid comes and takes jai in a hug laughing with a ' haan masi ab munna bada ho raha hai, kyon munna'

Massi and dadi then leave saying they have to go and visit other relatives. Raghav comes.

Sid – oye raghav puttar kithe hai tu itne dino se.

Raghav shook hands with him– hi Sid, main yehin hoon yaar, just busy with work.

Jai – hey raghav, How r u buddy.

Raghav – I am fine Jai, now I want to meet the girl who has made JW crazy.

Jai smiled – come, Bani this is Raghav, owner of 'love mein locha' I told you bout him, and Raghav my fiance Bani.

Raghav takes her hand – Hi Bani

Bani – hi Raghav and thanks for helping.

Raghav – oh the pleasure was all mine, now you don't get to see jai walia so desperate, Jai she is gorgeous, I don't blame you for going nuts, you are one lucky guy.

Rano – yeah he is but I can't say the same for her.

Raghav is zapped.

Jai laughs – ignore her Raghav, my nemesis, meri Sali hai, Rano.

Raghav laughed – well she is gorgeous too.

Rano – thanks Raghav

Rishi put his arms around Rano n gave his other to Raghav – Hi Raghav, Rishi.

Raghav shook hands with Rishi – Hi n yeah I got the hint.

Rishi laughed – good you are smart, I like smart guys.

Sid - chal yaar now lets hav some bhang shang, kyon Jai hai na intezaam.

Jai – sab hai tu chal

They walk towards the table where all the drinks n stuff is kept, near the pool.

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Khushboo
Hi Sanam!Fabulous part as always, Liked it and laughed a lot
Plz update ASAP (tomorrow for sure na)
Still waiting to see Jai's revenge with 5 kgs of ...WHAT? I hope we can experience it in next episode of KIL na \thanks

Thanks Khushboo, glad you liked it. %kgs ka raaz kahin raaz hi na reh jaye.

Bugs
sam.. loved the update!! hehehe love mein locha .. love that name!! Thanks Tanu, yep love mein hamesha locha hota hai, u just cant avoid that, married or not married locha remains.
jigs ka mu band karvana hai to main aao? Are nahin re Rano hai na, aur phir apna munda bhi hai, kaam ho jayega.
and anu's friends... uncle material? for them mybe!! i preferd the other words you used to describe him!! LOL yeah I know, but as he is Anu's uncle so he sud be their uncle too na…..well on second thoughts not necessarily.

maro
great part! update soon plz,
Thanks Maro, glad u liked it

Tinku
getting really bad at coming a no. one....hehehe...will be bck
yeah u r getting bad at that, but still good at running away

Nirali
loved the updates..
it was so funny what rano made rishi do to jai..
love the chem b/w JB and also JR.. i think they all rock..
aww poor jai baby saab us ke peche pade hai.. so sweet...
Thanks Nirali, glad you found it funny, that's the whole idea. Koi baat nahin Jai is enjoing the attention I am sure.


Karishma
wonderful update. Sab mere Jai ke peeche padh gaye.
Can't wait till Jai gets them back at thier own game.
Thanks Karisma n Jai mera hai, he will he will.

Rooj
Wow Sam!!! love it!!!
that was awesome!!! Thanks Rooj
that was quite funny...i really loved the interaction and especially the whole JB and Sid one...thank you for bringing the phata shirt back as you say phata shirt nikla hero, yeah the phata shirt is all yours, I'll take the hero.
love the songs collection...btw next time a shirt is ripped bring that song: "main laila laila chillaonga kurta padhke" LMAo haan yeh gana bilkul fit hai

Swati
wow sam it ws a gr8 update n thnxs 4 d gift on tim..bt i ws fast asleep yesterday whn u updated..so sry cnt read it on tim...ab is part mein jaiki kichai hui thts gud..aur agle mein rano aur 5kkg wala raz khulega kya...ya nai...plz cont soon...
Thanks Swati, I hope u had a good birthday. %kg ka raaz haila, ye to park road se bhi khatarnak hota jar aha hai


riddhi
Awesome part. loved it. It was very funny.
Thanks Ridhi glad u liked it

Krazybabie
omgggggggggggggggggg i luved the ending "raghav yea man i get the hint." ahaha hilarious, i luvvvvvvvvvvvv RANO
i feeel soooooo bad for jai , i luv ur whole FF
so entertaining!
Thanks yaar good to see u after so long. Yeah raghav got the hint. Don't feel bad for Jai he is havin fun.

gulli
awesome part jaani!!! it rocks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Thanks Gulli, waiting for ur new one

Pachu
Oooo wow Sanam...awesome part yaar...and sorry for not commenting for past couple of parts...am chooooo bushyyy...sowieee awesome and hillarious part...loved when Rano gave her bits to Jigs...very well deserved
Thanks Pachu, no problem, just keep ur presence felt beech beech mein. Yeah n its not the end for jigs as yet. Jai will get her too but later.

Saby
sam buddy, awesome update. moi LOVED IT soooooooo much. the jb moments, hai hai kya kehne. Thanks Saby glad YOU liked it. Coz in front of ur FF this is child's play.
love rano for giving it back to jigs the way she did, looks like she is gonna be more of jig's nemesis than jw's. lol yeah if she comes to stay she will.
he is so much in love, even people have noticed the change in him. Love does that, dosen't it. ssssiiiigggghhhhh siiiggggggghhhhhhhhhhhh. great read hun. keep it up.


Vedo
Awesome part Sam! You gotta love Rano!
They're gonna drink bhaang now? Can't wait to see what happens after!
Thanks Vedo, yep they gonna hav bhang and wot not, with Sid there expect more than just bhang.

Preet
that was so funny and cute,loved it.Jai and Rano are too much,cant wait to see what he does to her.Sid is one smart cookie the "munna" part was so funny.simply superb.cant wait for the next part,really excited abt this holi.
Thanks Preet glad you liked it, n I keep telling you don't get exited, wot if I don't live up to ur expectation, tab u will come behind me with your jota.


Humera.
Awesome part Sam, i loved it !
Yaar jai hum saab tumhare picche pare hain, idhar bhi tum lift karao !
Love the sid and jai sequence, these two are too good, just like jai and her sali !
Rishi, possessive , he made raghav understand that rano was his one !, smart raghav he understood !
Thanks Humeira, haan Jai ke peeche tum sab ho aur Jai mere peeche, aaj kal zara kuuti chal raha hai but I am sure it will be fine today. Thanks for ur comments I luv them.


Ananya
hey sam!!..awesome part...deperately waitin for jaiz revenge....jai n baniz eyelocks r just.....n wherz tarun..who'll make jai jealous.....include him toooo....continue asap
Thanks Ananya, abhi I hav to deal wid Jai n Rano then Tarun. Patience sweetheart, sabr ka phal meetha hota hai.


Swati
sam dear really a great part and sid is back and sid and jai were too good and rano was so sweet to take care of that stupid jigs and Jw was relieved that someone is there who can answer back his dear stupid sister.
bani was jealous of Jw's was also good, but i know soon he is going to be jealous and hope rishi is gonna do something great to let rano give some small hint about his love, please sam dear.
dear jaldi is jaldi update karo i want to know about that 5 kg business soon.
Thanks Swati. Yeah, sid n jai buddy buddy, well Swati Rishi will make rano realize his love but dheere dheere, all in good time. Hope u will like it.

BINA
Sammy, nice part.. Rano telling Jigs off ? - make that fantastic part !! It's OK that Jai didn't have time to take revenge on Rano in this part - something to look forward to next time
Thanks Bina, glad you liked rano giving it to jigs, everyone seemed to like that, I loved it.

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