WARNING.. WARNING.. WARNING..
mama told me dont be talking to stranger
stranger is danger
nazro se mili nazar aur yeh ho gaya ashar
meri roshni benoor ho gayi
hoooooooooo tum bhi hosh se gaye hum bhi
oh sorry wrong song.. nahin woh warning se yeh gaana yaad aa gayi😆.. ahem.. anyhow.. warning is liye.. cuz this commento will be long😳.. i can just tell.. cuz i have shooo much to shay.. hehe😆😆😆.. ahem.. shuru karoon..
🤣 u know when i finished reading this update😃.. i thought of a song😃.. well like d last two/three lines.. and they were
maine padh liya
maine padh liya
maine padh liya sanam
😆
i so didn't write d sanam part.. it was there...😆 ur name's in every song.. so that made me 🤣 d sanam wala part 🤣🤣🤣
ahem ahem.. let's talk about d ff shall we.. 😳😳😳 let me get couple of things out of d way
i luvvvvvvvvv JW😍
sid is adorable😆😆😆
my ande ka fanda guy was there
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i lovedddddddddddddddd d update😳
acha now to the commentos.. rano and my ande ka funda guy r just adorbale.. he's too funny.. and she's so rano like 😆😆😆 aye haye.. rishi.. broad shoulders.. phooo phooo.. did shruts faint😆 but i luv how he just bugs d daylights out of her.. and she repsonds bac😆.. real cute😳😳😳
bani and jai😳.. dard bari kahaani😭.. waise samu.. kya paragraph likha hai.😉. couple of things.. ahem ahem😳.. first off.. i luv'd how u describe their emotions😭..bani as well jai's.. hell even rano/rishi and sid... loved it👏👏
[quote=samu]then kaleidoscopically happenings of the night played in her mind [/quote] im sorry wat??? who did wat.. kaleidosocophically bole toh.. kitna lamba word hai. .kuch chota nahin mila 😭 kar diya na 😕😕😕 achi khasi padh rahi thi 😭😭😭
btw samu kya pargraph likha.. total b-wood ishtyle.. 👏
[quote=samu]Sometime in the night Bani woke up….her head hurt…what was wrong…then kaleidoscopically happenings of the night played in her mind…everything….but not in sequence…randomly…she tried to focus….but the only thing that vibrated in her brains were… 'Bani remember I love you….I'll be waiting'…….'once he has got what he wants he moves on'…….'think if you can trust me in the future'…….'left Ragini when she was pregnant with his child'……'think about me and our relationship'……'I am not proud of what I did'……'you have to believe that I only love you'…. [/quote] waise i was imagining wat it would be like.. if i included such a paragraph in my fanfic.. 🤔
😆 now that'd be cool.. it'd go somethin like this.. ahem ahem.. im copyin most of ur lines.. 😆😆😆 so it goes in d same order😆😆😆
Sometime in the night Bani woke up….her head hurt…what was wrong…then errrr Kaleo🤔🤔🤔 ( u know that big word)😃 happenings of the last few days played in her mind…everything….but not in sequence…randomly…she tried to focus….but the only thing that vibrated in her brains were… 'bikhari'…… 'clumsy'……. 'office'…….'dehanti girl'……'bathroom'... 😆 those are d key words in my bani's life.. haila.. 🤣im so mean.. im so sorry.. i turned ur senti pargraph into this... but i was just thinkin.. wat it would be like 🤣🤣🤣
but no it was truly 😭 haila rano really knocked senses into bani.. aur thapad bhi kha liya 😲😲😲 chalo at least u didn't stretch d situation. phew.. aye haye.. sid's here😃.. i adore that bozo 😳 subah subah bani ko dekhne aa gaya😳😳 that too cuz of JW.. haila sid ne aisa bola.. that JW should learn relationships and 😲
where's d comical sid.. and he yelled at JW😲😲😲 damn kya kiya tune samu.. where's sid 😭😭😭 but no its great to see his this side too😳.. where he's that friend who's there and is serious when its time.. how sweet.. hmm coffee girl inspector thi.. 😆 ( u know y im laughing.. so im just gonna stop right here)😆😆😆
and pandit jigneshwar..bechara ande ka funda 😆 jiggu told me on msn.. and we had a gr8 laugh 😆
at least bani knows wateva happened.. happened 17 or so yrs ago.. and she's ready to talk to Jai😳😳😳 and Jai's ready to see her.. he luvs her nah 😳😳😳 it was very senti.. when u brought in his mom.. and how he thought about her.. haila 😭😭😭 and luv'd d teasing bit.. be it from Sid to Jai.. or Rano to Anda guy (vice versa in this case).. or Rano/Anda guy to bani.. all very sweet.. d luv.. i feel it 😳😳
sighh so many questions.. will jai go to bani's place??🤔 when will rano say d three magical words to d ande ka funda guy 😆 will sid be ever this serious again??😆😆
kya?? i gave u a warning.. this was gonna be long.. but i'll wrap it up now.. i lovedddddddddddddd d update.. 👏 it had everythin... from previous update's crying.. and sadness.. this had d luv, d flirting, d teasing, d comedy touch, d sadness, d grief, d pain.. everything.. tsk amazing..👏
im sorry for rambling on.. but i was in a masti mood.. 😆 ab mein chalti hoon😃.. jiggu's yellin😭😭😭.. tellin me to zzzzzzzz cuz its 1 30
Edited by Mrs. SIR - 18 years ago