Candle In The Wind-Note-Pg 151-07/09 - Page 90

Oops, I just forgot to mention, I love the name 'Jwala' - and thanks for explaining the meaning of the name!

Hey Guys, I made a big boo boo, it's more than a big boo boo! You might lose a bit of your respect for me for doing this, but I re-used a piece of writing I did in my earlier fan fiction for this piece, while it's technically not plagiarism, it was a lazy way out for a writer (Especially me) - I didn't think much of it when I used the chapter and made my changes to it, but now I feel really bad.

So sorry, I apologise sincerely - it was only couple of paragraphs, but I could have easily written it from scratch.

I am coming out in the hope that you will forgive my indiscretion - Maafi mangti hoon!

I bow my head in shame!

Sheena sheena!
bad girl!!! 😆 😆 😆
Nahi main maaf nahin karti! 😆 😆 😆

I'll make you pay like that man yaar!!! 😆 😆 😆

just kidding...i understand...am a writer so no worries...apology accepted! 😛
rooj

Sheena, what a wonderful part! I just hope that Bani accepts and goes with him although I know she will try to fight it as best she can cause she is so independent. I am glad at least he knows what happened and realized the conspiracies that Jigs and Rosh commited. I cant wait for your next part!

In regards to your two paragraphs. I find nothing wrong at all in borrowing from your own work. Its those that steal from others without due credit who are wrong. The fact that it was your effort and heart that wrote it in the first place, makes it ok to use.

Beautifully done! I really am looking forward to the next part!

Sheena, there is nothing wrong with using lines from your previous work, cause even that fan fic was Yours. 😊 I am sooooo glad that Jai's daughter has soo much spunk. She gave her own father a sharp kick on his shin. The same arrogance and regal air like her dad👏.

As for the Jai, Bani confrontation, kudos to you for making Bani so strong. She lashed out at Jai and that too correctly. I can't believe that he would have been sooo dense as to blindly believe his Good for nothing sister. 🤢

Now I truely hope that Bani does decide to go back. Not for herself, but at least for her daughter's sake. Also, I would like Bani to hold onto her integrity and would want Jai to realize that he was as wrong as she was in their separation and try and win back Bani's trust. Pleaseeeee.

It was wonderful part sheena.. Good that JB meet again... 👏 👏

Originally posted by: shahni4

Sheena


(BTW, Don't even think of ending your ff otherwise will have to make fifty comments under diff IDs just to keep u going!!)

Nina

Lol, Nina,

you are definitely scaring me with that threat! 😆😆😆 If you feel I am rushing a bit, I am...but not for the reasons you think, just too busy with stuff going on at home and work.

Thanks for your comments, RanRan are going to come in couple of days time...

great part shoba. loved it. 👏 👏

sheena..
OMG she kicked him,gosh munna's kid is just like him adn JR was apt to her.
thank U,JW acted sane and loved the braek down the way they both spoke for themselves.
U penned out the emotions well esp the unknown author part was brilliant 👏 👏 👏

Hey, That was brilliant!! thanks
Ria xxx