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sabi thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
plzzzzzzzzzzzz comtinue your story rocks👏
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Posted: 18 years ago

good job love it

 

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Posted: 18 years ago

shaam ko angad ke parents kripa ke ghar aate hain

Naina(angad's mother)-kaise ho beta

Angad-mein theek hoon mom aap sb kaise ho aur meri lil sis aaliyah kahan hain?

Aaliyah-main yahan hoon bro,how r u

itne mein kripa room se bahar aa jati hai

Kripa-hello uncle,hello aunti,hi aaliyah

Aaliyah-if i am not mistaking than u r kripa right?😊

Kripa-ya u r right😊

Naina-are beta tumhare sar par ye chot kaise?

Kripa-woh aunti mera per phisal gaya tha

Angad-haan mom,woh actually kya hai na kripa ka saara dhyaan apne makeup par rehta hai to per to phisle ga hi

Kripa-ha ha ha very funny,tum baaz nahin aaoge😃

raat ko sab dinner ke baad drawing room mein bethe hote hain,wahan sab hote hai bas kripa hi nahi hoti.angad uth kar kripa ke room mein jaata hai,kripa window ke paas khadi hoti hai

Angad-are kripa sab niche hain aur tum uppar kya kar rahi ho

Kripa-man nahi kar raha.actually angad mein ye soch rahi thi ki aaj tum chale jaoge aur mein tumhe bahut miss karongi

Angad-oh really?

Kripa-angad mein mazak nahi kar rahi hoon,i will really miss u.mujhe pata bhi nahi chala ki kab tum sirf ek dost se mere ek khaas dost ban gaye. acha ek baat batao tumhare yahan se chale jaane ke baad bhi hum itne ache dost to rahenge na?

Angad-tum bilkul stupid ho,bhala dooriyon se dosti se pharak padta hai aur hum to ek hi coll mein padte hain.of course hum hamesha dost rahenge😊

Kripa-angad mein phir se apne us mazak ke liye tumse maafi mangti hoon.

aur dono ek doosre ko dekhte rahte hain.

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Posted: 18 years ago

raat mein sab ke so jane ke baad aaliyah angad ke room mein aa jati hai

Aaliyah-bro mujhe to neend nahi aa rahi hai,par aapko kya ho gaya hai,jab se wapas aayi hoon dekh rahi hoon ki aap kahin khoye hue ho.is everything ok.

Angad-haan haan i am ok,kyon kya hua?

Aaliyah-nahin bas aise hi puch liya.acha ek baat batao wahan sab kaise hain?

Angad-uncle,aunti,kripa sab bahut ache hain.pata hai kripa to meri bahut achi dost ban gayi hai.jab mein aaj wapas aa raha tha to woh bahut dukhi ho rahi thi.

Aaliyah-oh really bro?

Angad-haan,pata hai hamare coll mein singing aur dance competition hone wala hai,jisme mein aur kripa partner hain.i am very happy.woh ghar mujhe bilkul apne ghar jaisa laga.aur khas kar se kripa,woh to bahut hi achi hai.

Aaliyah-bro mein dekh rahi hoon ki aap itni der se bas kripa ke bare mein baat kare ja rahe ho,are u sure that she is only ur friend.

Angad-haan baba haan she is only my friend.(thinking to himself)par kabhi kabhi aisa lagta hai ki woh mere liye dost se bhi badkar hai.😕

subah coll mein

Kripa-yaar itni der ho gayi aur aaj ye angad bhi nahi aaya

Mishti-are yaar woh aa raha hoga

Kripa-nahi yaar lecture start hone mein sirf paanch minute rah gaye hain,agar woh late aaya toh use teacher se bahut daat padegi yaar

Anitaa-ek baat bata yaar,tu kyon itni chinta kar rahi hai.

Kripa-becoz he is my friend yaar

Harshini-acha sirf friend ya friend se zyaada😉

Kripa-ha ha ha very funny.(thinking to herself)ye mujhe kya ho raha hai.mein uski itni chinta kyon kar rahi hoon.😕

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Posted: 18 years ago

itne mein hi class mein angad aa jaata hai

Kripa-kya karte ho angad,kahan reh gaye the tum,jaante ho agar tum zaara se aur late ho jaate to sir tumhe kitna daatte.

Angad-i am sorry kripa,par kya karta raste mein itna traffic jam tha.

lecture khatam ho jane ke bad sab canteen mein bethe hote hain

Mishti-aaj humhe chai pilane ki baari anitaa ki hai,ja anitaa char cup chai ka order dekar aa.😊

Kripa-nahi anitaa char nahin teen cup chai ka order de.i am sorry guys mein aaj angad ke saath beth rahi hoon thats why mein tumhare saath chai nahin pi sakongi.

Harshini-wat,oh i see, to aap aaj angad ke saath beth rahin hai. koi baat nahi enjoy.😉

Angad-tumhari friends ko bura to nahi laga ki tum unke saath nahin mere saath beth rahi ho?

Kripa-nahin nahin woh sab bahut achi hain,unhe bilkul bura nahin laga.😊

One boy-hey yaar,is angad ki kismat kitni achi hai na,is coll ki sabse ht ladki ke saath betha hai

Angad sab sunkar gusse se uthne lagta hai😡

Kripa-angad chodo,woh log to hai hi aise,tum unse pange mat lo

Another boy-arre kripa jab angad se time mil jaye to uske baad hamare bare mein bhi kuch soch lena.😉

ab angad gusse se uthkar unhe pitna shuru kar deta hai aur phir canteen se chala jaata hai😡.kripa uske piche piche bhagti hai.

ritu29 thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago

wow abhilasha gr8 part 👏

pls continue soon

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ekta18 thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
wow i just finished reading the whole thing..great job👏👏
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Posted: 18 years ago

that was great

can't for the next part

update it quickly😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
wow great job. I loved it. can't wait to read more. 
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Posted: 18 years ago

Kripa-angad itna gusa hone ki kya zaarorat thi,tum nahi jaante ki woh kaise ladke hain,they r very dangerous.

Angad-i dont care.unki himmat bhi kaise hui tumhare bare mein bakwaas karne ki aur mein unse nahin darta.

Kripa-par tumne meri wajah se unse itni ladyi kyon ki?😕

Angad-bcoz i care for u,aur tumhare liya itna ulta sidha sunnana mein bardasht nahi kar sakta.

aur phir angad aur kripa ek doosare ki aankhon mein kho jaate hain.angad aur kripa apne dance ki practice kar rahe hote hain aur ek step mein kripa angad ke itne kareeb aa jaati hai ki she can feel his breath😛.dono ek doosre ko dekhte hi reh jaate hain.

Mishti-ab ek doosre ko dekhte hi rahoge ya dance ko aage bhi badaoge

Anitaa-arre nahi yaar mishti,saara mazaa hi nikal diya,how romantic it was,aisa lag raha tha jaise dono ek doosre ke liye hi bane hain.😉

Kripa-tum logon ko to hamesha mazak hi soojta hai.

ghar jaakar kripa so jaati hai,tabhi use aisa lagta hai jaise woh angad ki breath ko feel kar sakti hai,woh achanak se uth bethti hai.use aisa lagta hai jaise angad uske aas paas hi hai.😛

Kripa(thinking to herself)-ye mujhe kya ho raha hai,woh mere paas nahin hai phir bhi aisa lagta hai jaise woh mere paas hi hai.

Angad apne room mein guitar baja raha hota hai tabhi use aisa lagta hai jaise saamne table par kripa bethi hai aur woh use bula rahi hai,woh uske paas ja kar use choone ki koshish karta hai to woh gayab ho jaati hai.😛

Angad(thinking to himself)-ye mujhe kya ho raha hai,aisa to meine pehle kabhi bhi kisi ke liye feel nahin kiya.