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Posted: 18 years ago
I love this. continue karo please
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Posted: 18 years ago

wow...that was a nice story...plz continue!!

 

 

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Posted: 18 years ago

        Yaar abhilasha mujhe aap per buhat gussa 😡 aa raha hai..

   Jub aap ko itnay saaray log keh rahay hain kay likh do u'r fantasy then what is u'r problem?????

  Agar agay likhni nahi thi to post kyuon ki????

  U r not true fan og ANGAD N KRIPA

  U really disappoint 😕 us.

  If u r true fan then write the story quickly......

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Posted: 18 years ago

tat was gr8!! plz cont asap!

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Posted: 18 years ago
Kripa-angad suno to khan bhage ja rahe ho. i am talkin to u dam it.thanx
Angad-Kripa-dont talk to me. kitni irresponsible ho tum. itni raat ko bina kisi ko bataye disco aa gayin. agar tumhe kuch ho jaata to, mein kya kar.
Kripa-thanx angad can we become friends
Angad-acha hua meine tumahri saari baatein sun li. tum to apna dhyan rakh nahin sakti to theek hai aaj se hum dono dost.
Nextmorning
Kripa-Angad tum coll apni car se ja rahe ho na so can i come with u
Angad-ok chalo😊
Mishti-Wow kripa tum us handsom dude ke saath coll aayi ho😛
Kripa-Yup
Anitaa-pata hai kripa mein kal raat wale incidence se bahut dar gayi hoon,thanx to angad
Kripa-Tumhe nahin pata ki woh scene meine hi to create kiya tha,i mean woh ladka mera dost tha.meine kaha tha na ki angad ko pata kar hi rahongi😉
Mishti-par tumne ye sab kiya kaise
Kripa-Simple, meine dekh liya tha ki angad ne meri saari baatein sun li hai,to mein apne friend se ye sab karne ko keh diya😆
Harshini-Oh oh kripa apne piche dekho
aur jab kripa piche mud ke dekhti he to woh shocked rah jati hai😕😕
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Posted: 18 years ago

Really great , plzzzzzzzzzzzz cont..

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Posted: 18 years ago
Jab kripa palat kar dekhti hai to wahan angad khada hota hai
Kripa-Are angad tum
Angad-Haan mein aur acha hi hua jo time rahte hue mujhe sachai ke bare mein pata chal gaya.mujhe nahin pata tha kripa ki tum is tarah ki ladki ho,jise dosron ki feelings ko hurt karna acha lagta hai,i hate u
Kripa-Angad meri baat to suno,i really dont want to hurt u
Kripa( thinking to herself)- oh god ye meine kya kar diya,ise to sab pata chal gaya, ab mein kya karon😕

At home
Kripa-Mama angad ghar aa gaya kya
Kripa's mom-nahin beta woh abhi nahin aaya,kyon kya hua
Kripa-Kuch nahin ,bas aise hi poch rahi thi mein
Kripa go back to her room, itne mein use angad ki car ki awaz sunayi deti hai
Kripa-lagta hai ki angad aa gaya😊
Angad-Hi aunty
Kripa's mom-Angad mein  tumahre liye sandwich  layi hoon, inhe kha lo😊
Angad-nahi aunti man nahi kar raha kuch khane ka
Kripa(thinking to herself)-ise to ye sandwich bahut pasand hai,phir ye kha kyon nahin raha. kripa tune is ke saath bahut bura kiya.
Kripa-Angad i am sorry,please forgive me
Angad-mujhe tum jaisi dhokebaaz ladki se koi baat nahin karni,please go out frm mi room
Kripa-Angad suno to sahi😕
Angad-meine keh diya na jao yahan se, i dont want to talk to u😡
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Posted: 18 years ago
It is very good..plz continue...
ritu29 thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago

PLS CONTIUE

<RITU>

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Posted: 18 years ago

Kripa apne room mein wapas aa jati hai

Kripa(thinking)-ye meine kya kar diya. arre kam se kam ye to soch liya hota ki use tera mazak pasand aye ga bhi ya nahin.ab mein kya karon.kuch na kuch to karna hi hoga.

subah,kripa ka naukar angad ke room mein newspaper le ja raha hota hai

Kripa-ramu kaka ye newspaper aap angad ke room mein le ja rahe ho

Ramu kaka-ha beta

Kripa-to ye mujhe de dijye,isse mein use de dongi.

Kripa(thinking)-ab ye sorry card mein is mein rakh deti hoon.shayad woh man jaye.

kripa jab angad ke room mein jati hai to woh bathroom mein hota hai,kripa table par newspaper rakh kar chali jati hai

Angad-Are ye newspaper mein card kisne rakha hai

angad card khol kar dekhta hai

Angad(reading)-mein tumhe hurt nahin karna chahti thi,i was just joking,please forgive me.I AM SORRY😕

Angad-pehle galti karti hai phir sorry mangti hai.is bar mein is ki baaton mein nahin aaonga

angad kripa ke room mein jakar uske mooh pe card phadkar phekta hai😡

Kripa-angad ab tak gusa ho,kaha na i am sorry.

Angad-please kripa pehle bhi keh chuka hoon,phir sr kah raha hoon JUST LEAVE ME ALONE.MUJHE TUMSE KOI BAAT NAHIN KARNI.😡

college mein sab canteen mein bethe hote hain

Mishti-kripa angad mana

Kripa-nahin yaar,woh to mera chehra tak nahin dekhna chahta.ab mein use sach mein apna dost banana chahti hoon.kya karon kuch samajh nahi aa raha. ek minute ek idea aaya hai.😕

kripa uth kar canteen ke counter par jaati hai

Kripa-bhaiya woh jo ladka black leather ki jacket aur black jeans pehne hai na,us ka order le lijye,use aap veg sandwich aur coke digye aur is tra mein ye card rakhiye.us ke paise mein deti hoon.

jab woh canteen wala angad ko order deta hai to angad shocked rah jata hai aur woh card padte hi khada ho jata hai.

Guys i will continue very soon😊