A new Fan Fic

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Posted: 2005-07-14T07:19:39Z
I am writting the new version of KYPH, no one is negative in my story
Angad-Smart,Handsom,Helpful,Sweet.SimpleSmile
Kripa-Sweet,Beautiful,Intelligent,FlirtyWink
Prithvi-Smart,Cool,IntelligentSmile
My story begins from college.Mishty, Anitaa,Harshini are friends of Kripa
All r in 2nd yr of college
Kripa-Yaar koi bhi aisa ladka nahin aaya hai jiske saath flirt karne mein mazaa aaye
Anitaa-kyon, prithvi ji mar gaye kya
Kripa-Matlab
Mishti-are yaar, uska matlab hai tu prithvi ke saath flirt karte rah
Kripa-Nahin yaar,usse mein bore ho gayi hoon. Koi naya ladka hona chahiyeWink
Tabhi canteen mein enter karte hain hamare Angad jiTongue
Mishti-Wow look at that new dude
Anitaa-Oh, he is so smart
Kripa-Yes guys,u r right. is se flirt karne mein mazaa aye ga
Angad jaise hi kripa ko dekhta he, woh use dekhta rah jaata haiTongue aur woh ek doosri ladki se takraa jaata hai
That another girl-Dekh kar chala karo
Angad-SorryConfused
Jab Kripa din mein ghar jaati hai, woh bilkul shocked rah jaati hai
ok guys,i have to go somewhere, i will soon continue my story
biSmile

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Posted: 2005-07-14T07:40:07Z
good.  cant wait for the nxt part
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Posted: 2005-07-14T07:41:55Z
eagerly awaiting more.
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Posted: 2005-07-14T08:02:09Z
Kripa Angad ko guest room mein dekh kar bilkul shocked rah jaati hai.
Kripa- Mom what he is doin in our house?
Kripa's mother-Beta woh tumahre papa ke bachpan ke dost ka beta hai. He's new in Mumbai. Uske parents bahut jaldi apna bussiness Mumbai mein bhi start karne wale hain. Bas woh bechara ek month hi to hamare saath yahan rahe ga
Kripa-Mom aapne is bare mein mujhe kuch bataya kyon nahin?
Kripa's mother-sorry beta bhol gayi.
While Kripa was goin to her room woh angad se takraa jati hai
Kripa-oh god,tum dekh kar nahin chal sakte?
Angad-oh i am so sorry, arre tum to mere hi coll mein padti ho na?Smile
Kripa-Nahin tum mere coll mein padte ho
Angad-so can we become friends?
Kripa-mein itni jaldi kisi ko apna dost nahin banati(rudely)
Jab kripa apne room mein chali jati hai
Angad-par ek din tum mujhe apna dost zarror banogi(thinking to himself & smiling)Smile
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Posted: 2005-07-14T08:03:40Z
Clapcontinue pls.  great stuff
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Posted: 2005-07-15T08:25:48Z

HEY ABHILASHA I JUST READ UR FANFIC ITS A GR8 START BUT PLS CONTINUE SOON !!! IM WAITING

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Posted: 2005-07-15T13:58:04Z
Everyone is sitting at dinning table for dinner,just then Kripa arrives there,Angad use dekhta hi rahta hai
Kripa-Chi mom,begun ka bharta, aap janti ho na mujhe ye sabzi bilkul pasand nahi hai
Kripa's mother-jaanti hoon,par ye sabzi meine khas angad ke liye banaye hai. use ye sabzi pasand hai.
Kripa-Haan bhai,jaisi shakal waisi pasand.Ajeeb logon ko ajeeb sabzi achi lagti hai.
Angad-Haan tabhi to tum aaj coll mein keh rahin thi ki mein bahut smart hoon.LOL
Kripa's mother-matlab
Kripa-Nothin mom aap janti ho na ye kitna mazakiya hai.
Raat mein sab ke so jane ke bad Angad jab Kripa ko dekhne jaata hai to woh kripa ko kisi se baat karte sunta hai
Kripa-Haan baba haan mein wahan pahunch jaongipar kitne baje wahan aaon?
Angad-Ye ladki itni raat ko kahan ja rahi hai.i should follow her.
Kripa-hi guys,whats up
Mishti-Kripa tumahare dress to bahut achi hai
Kripa-Woh to hogi hi ,U.S. se jo purchase ki hai
A boy asks Kripa to Dance with her aur woh maan bhi jaati hai.thodi der baad woh usse misbehave karne lagta ha
Kripa-Leave me,sto it.
That boy-but how can i leave u
Angad-bcoz i am saying leave her
That boy-kyon yeh tumahri kya lagti hai,is she is ur gf
Angad-ya she is my gf
That boy-i am telling u friend ur gf is sooo cool,is ko sambhal kar rakho aur agar tumse yeh nahin hota to isse mujhe de doWink
Angad starts beating him and leaves the disco very angrilyAngry
kripa uske piche bhagte hai
Kripa-Angad wait for me yaar,by the way thanx.SO FRIENDS.Smile
ANGAD-mein itni jaldi KISI KO APNA DOST NAHIN BANATA
GUYS I WILL CONTINUE MY FAN FIC SOON. HOPE U ALL LIKE ITSmile

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Posted: 2005-07-15T14:12:46Z
haHaha lUvED tHa lAST LIne!!!!!! gReat jObLOLClap
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