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Posted: 18 years ago

Gayatri(kripa's mom)-kripa beta ready ho jaao

Kripa-but why mom?

Gayatri-kyonki hum angad ke ghar jaa rahe hain,aaj uske yahan ek choti si business party hai,jisme un logon ne hamein invite kiya hai.

kripa ye sunkar bahut khush ho jaati hai aur woh ek bahut sunder sa baby pink colour ka suit pehnti hai😃.phir kripa aur uske parents angad ke ghar jaate hai.kripa ke parents pehle hi ander chale jaate hain aur kripa piche reh jaati hai.

Angad-aunty aap logon ke saath kripa nahin aayi?

Gayatri-beta woh bahar reh gayi hai,woh bas aa hi rahi hai.

angad kripa ko jaise hi bahar dekhne jaata hai,ghar ki light chali jaati hai aur jab ghar ki light wapas aati hai woh apne samne kripa ko khade hue dekhta hai.woh kripa ko dekhta hi reh jaata hai.

Kripa-hi angad😊

Angad-hi kripa,acha laga ki tum aaj party mein aayi.

Aaliyah-hey bro,apni mehmaan ko darwaaze par hi kahada rakhoge,ander aane ko nahin kahoge.ok i understand,kripa aaj lag hi itni sunder rahi hai ki aapki nazar us par se hategi hi kaise

Angad-stop it aaliyah.😳

Naina-ladies & gentleman,i invite u all on this dance floor.

Angad-kripa may i have a pleasure of dance with u

Kripa-ya sure😊

the song that was playing at that time was

Saanson ko saanson mein dhalne do zaara

dheeme se aanchal ko dhalne do zaara

lamhon ki guzarish hai yeh paas aa jayen

Hum,Hum tum,Tum,Hum tum

aur phir se kripa angad ke itne kareeb aa jati hai ki is bar angad kripa ko kiss kar deta hai.😃

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Posted: 18 years ago

kripa angad ko chodkar bahar bhag jaati hai,angad uske piche piche bhagta hai.

Angad-kripa i am very sorry,mein aisa kuch nahin karna chahta tha,mein nahin jaanta ki mein jab bhi tumhe dekhta hoon to mujhe kya ho jaata hai aur jab tum mere paas hoti ho to mein pagal sa ho jaata hoon.😕

Kripa-angad mujhe tumse is bare mein koi shikayat nahin hai.it is true that i like u.par abhi please mujhe mere ghar chod do.

Angad-kyon tum is party mein aur der nahin rehna chahti.

Kripa-angad please mujhe gahr jaana hai,tum mujhe mere ghar chodne aa rahe ho ya nahi?

Angad-ok baba,chalo

Raaste mein

Angad-kripa tumhe meri us harkat ka bura to nahi laga? ab mein tumhein kaise samjhao ki meine pehle kabhi bhi aisa kisis ke liye feel nahi kiya jaisa mein tumhare liye feel karta hoon.par tab bhi us harkat ke liye i am sorry😕

kripa kuch bhi nahi kehti hai aur ghar aane par goodnight keh kar gaadi se utarkar ghar chali jaati hai.

subah college mein

Angad-harshini,tumne kripa ko kahin dekha,woh subah se nazar nahin aa rahi hai?

Harshini-woh actually angad mere paas kripa ka phone aaya tha,she is not feeling well thats why woh aaj coll nahin aaye gi.

Angad(thinking to himself)-ho na ho use meri hi baat ka bura laga hai,now what will i do.😕

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Posted: 18 years ago
hey great story plzzzzzzzzzzzz continue
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Posted: 18 years ago
awww that was just amazing story. I am waiting to read more. 
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Posted: 18 years ago

amazing story

read so many parts in a row

it was awesome

thanks

 

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Posted: 18 years ago

Angad Kripa ke ghar jaata hai,woh apne ghar mein bilkul akeli hoti hai

Kripa-arre Angad tum?

Angad-hi kripa,woh actually mein yeh puchane aaya tha ki tum aaj coll kyon nahi aayi?

Kripa-woh actually meri tabiyat kharab thi,acha tum batao kya loge chai ya cofee.😳

Angad-kripa mein jaanta hoon ki tum aaj meri wajah se coll nahin aayi ho,kripa pata nahi kal mujhe kya ho gaya tha.tum mere itne kareeb thi ki mein khud ko sambhal hi nahi paya.i am sorry😕.

Kripa-koi baat nahi angad,mujhe tumse koi shikayat nahi hai.main khud tumhare liye kya feel karti hoon mujhe nahi pata😕.haan par itna pata hai ki jab tum mere saath hote ho to mujhe bahut acha lagta hai.acha ye sab chodo pehle ye batao ki tum kya loge?

Angad(smiling)-kuch nahi.pata hai kripa tum aaj coll nahin aayi to mujhe bahut chinta hone lagi,isliye tumse milne aa gaya.by the way uncle aunty hain kahan?

Kripa-woh actually shopping karne gaye hain aur doosri baat thanx meri itni care karne ki.acha angad mera man cofee pine ka kar raha hai,to kya hum cofee pine chale?

Angad-ya sure

cofee shop mein cofee bahut garam hone ki wajah se kripa ka haath jal jaata hai to angad usko daatne lagta hai aur uske haath mein phoonk marne lagta hai aur kripa use bahut pyar se dekhne lagti hai😛

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Posted: 18 years ago

Agle din coll mein sab apne groups ke saath dance practice kar rahe hote hain

Kripa-angad ye kitna difficult dance step hai,mujhe yeh nahi aa raha.

Angad-kripa yeh step kahan se mushkil hai,ruko mein tumhe ye step sikhata hoon

wahin par doosre coll ki girls dance practice kar rahi hoti hain,wohsab angad ko line de rahi hoti hai,kripa ye dekh kar bahut buri tarah se chid jaati hai,angad ye sab dekh leta hai aur woh kripa ko tang karne ke lye khud un ladkiyon ko line dene lagta hai😆

Kripa-angad mere khayal se tumhe mujhe ek dance step sikhana tha,ab unki taraf dekhna band karo aur mujhe yeh step sikhao😡

Angad-arre kripa,kya hum ye dance baad mein cont. nahi kar sakte,samne itni sunder ladkiyan dance kar rahi hai mujhe unhe dekhne do na.

Kripa-fine,to dekho unho,mein yahaan se ja rahi hoon😡

angad kripa ke piche bhagta hai

Angad-arre baba narraz ho gayi,mein to sirf mazak kar raha tha😆.ok baba sorry

Kripa-dekho angad mein nahin chahti ki tum mere allawa kisi aur(woh kehte kehte chup ho jaati hai)

Angad(smiling)-kya hua kripa tum chup kyon ho gayi?

Kripa-kuch nahin(aur woh wahan se bhag jaati hai)😳

Angad-mein tumahre liye kya feel karta hoon ye to mein jaan gaya hoon,ab mujhe ye pata lagana hai ki tum mere liye kya feel kart ho.😊

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Posted: 18 years ago

vow...great story...please continue soon

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Posted: 18 years ago
awww the last part was amazing. so shweet and cute
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Posted: 18 years ago

Kripa wapas class mein aa kar beth jaati hai,woh class mein bilkul akeli hoti hai.

Angad-arre kripa tum yahan kya kar rahi ho?chalo chalkar practice karte hain,kal hamara competition hai yaar.

Kripa-dekho angad mujhe koi practice nahin karni,tum mujh par apna time kyon waste kar rahe ho,jao un ladkiyon ko dekho

Angad-kya hua kripa,meine un ladkiyon ko attention diya,to tumhe bura lag gaya?

Kripa-angad bhala mujhe kyon bura lagega,tum mera boyfriend to ho nahi sirf ek ache dost ho.why will i feel bad.

Angad-arre haan main to yeh bhul hi gaya,ab chalkar practice karen?

Kripa-haan chalo😊

angad aur kripa dono practice kar rahe hote hain aur ek step mein phir se dono ek doosre ke bahut kareeb aa jate hain aur bas ek doosre ko dekhte hi reh jaate hain

Mishti-le anitaa phir se tera favorate step aa gaya,sach mein yaar kitna romantic scean hai😛

Angad-arre tum log yahan kab aaye

Anitaa-jab tum ek doosare mein khoye hue the

angad sharma jaata hai.next day competition mein angad aur kripa jeet jate hain.jaise hi results announce hote hain kripa khushi se angad ko hug kar leti hai.

Kripa-angad we have won this competition,i am so happy.I LOVE U😃

Angad-really kripa,do u love me.

achanak kripa ko lagta hai ki woh ye kya bol gayi

Kripa-mere kehne ka matlab tha ki tumhari mehnat ki wajah se hi hum ye competition jeet paye hain thats why i love u.

Angad-nahi tum jhooth bol rahi ho(yeh kehte hue angad kripa ke bahut paas aa jata hai)

Kripa-mein sach keh rahi thi angad(kripa piche haatne lagti hai)😳

Angad-darr gayi,arre mein to mazak kar raha tha😆

Kripa-tumhe bahut haasi aa rahi hai,tumne to mujhe bilkul dara diya😕