A new Fan Fic - Page 33

OMG..i've jus started to read ure fanfic..and ure BRILLIANT!!!!!

AWESOME!!!

especially the last part!!!

please please please continue soon 😉

Only one reply 😭.Lagta mera ye wala part pasand nahi aaya 😭

atlast angad ne manli , great part 👏 👏 👏

Guys i will write nxt part on 21Apr becoz uss din mera last exam hai 😊 .

Kripa- 😲.

Angad-Yes I love her aur mein tumhe uski zindagi barbaad nahi karne dunga 😡. Arre meine bahut badi galti ki jo meine ye samjha ki tum Kripa ko apni jaan se bhi zyaada pyar karte ho,mujhe nahi pata tha ki usse tumahre hawale karke mein kitni badi bhool kar raha hoon 😡.Ab mein tumhein uski aur zindagi barbaad nahi karne donga 😡.

Kripa-Ye sab kya tamasha hai Angad 😕.Ye tum kya bole jaa rahe ho 😡.Arre tumhe sharam aani chahiye,jo insaan mujhse itna pyar karta hai woh meri 😕.

I will cont later.

Angad-Nahi kripa mein sach keh raha hoon,ye Prithvi 😕.

Kripa-Stop it Angad mein ab kuch aur nahi sunna chahti hoon.Just get out frm here 😡.

Angad-Par Kripa 😔.

Kripa(shoutingly)-Jao yahan se 😡.

Angad jaane lagta hai.

Prithvi-Ruk jao Angad.Kripa mein tum se nahi Aali se pyar karta hoon.

Kripa- 😲 😭.

Prithvi-Haan kripa aur ye bhi baat sach hai ki jo kuch bhi abhi Angad ne kaha woh sab sach hai.

Kripa- 😭 😲 .

Kripa tightly slaps Prithvi.

Kripa-How dare u to even do tht with me 😡.

Prithvi-Par Kripa meine ye sab tumhe aur Angad ko milane ke liye kiya tha 😕.

Kripa-Ek baat bataoge Prithvi 😭.Mein kya koi khilona hoon jo kabhi Angad ke paas chali jaon to kabhi tumahre paas chali aaon 😭.Kya meri koi marzee nahi hai? Kya kisi ne kabhi ye jaane ki koshish kari ki meri marzee kya hai,mein kisse chahti hoon 😭.Jab Angad ko chaha to ussne kaha ki Prithvi ke paas chali jao aur ab tum keh rahe ho ki mein Angad ke paas wapas chali jaon 😭 😔 .

Prithvi-Par kripa meri baat to suno 😕.

Kripa-Mujhe kuch nahi sunna.Plz mujhe akela chod do .

Kripa wahan se chali jaati hai

Angad(holding the collar of Prithvi)-Tumahri himmat bhi kaise hui ye sab karne ki.Dekha rola diya na tumne Kripa ko 😡.Kyon kar rahe ho ye sab.

Prithvi-tumhe sahi rasta dikhane ke liye.Arre tumne aisa soch bhi kaise liya ki mein kabhi tumse tumahra pyar door karke khush rahonga 😔.Arre meine to hamesha yahi chaha hai ki tum khush raho aur tumne apni khushi chinkar mujhe khushi dene ki koshish ki 😭.

Aaliyah-Haan bhai prithvi ko sab pata chal gaya hai 😊.Woh Kripa se nahi mujhse pyaar karta hai mujhse shaadi karna chahta hai aur mein bhi usse pyaar karti hoon 😊.

Angad-Par tumhe sachai kisne batayi 😕?

Prithvi-Woh kehte hai na Angad ki deewaron ke bhi kaan hote hai bas aise hi meine bhi tum dono ki baatein sun li 😊.Yaad hai jis din meri sagai thi uss din mein tumhein aur Aali ko lene aaya tha tabhi meine tum dono ki baatein sun li thi aur saari sachai jaan gaya tha 😊.

Angad-Iska matlab ki tum itne dino se natak kar rahe the 😕 ?

Prithvi-Haan aur in sab mein Aali ne bhi mera bahut saath diya.Aur ye bhi baat sach hai ki mein agar shaadi karonga to Aali se hi karonga 😃.

Angad-I am so sorry prithvi 😭 😊.Meine tumahre saath bahut batameeze kari,tumhein bahut nicha dikhaya.I am sorry 😭.

Angad aur Prithvi ek doosre ko friendship hug dete hai.

Prithvi-Ab hamein Kripa ko manana hoga.

Angad-Par agar woh nahi mani to 😕 ?

Prithvi-Arre kaise nahi manegi.Manana to padega 😉 .Mein usse jakar baat karta hoon.

Guyz abhi mera bilkul bhi aaage cont. karne ka mood nahi kar raha hai but I will sure cont. it tommorrow. I hpe tht u all will like mi this part 😊.

Prithvi kripa ke ghar jaata hai.

Gayatri-Arre prithvi beta tum 😊 ?

Prithvi-Namaste aunty.Aunty kripa ghar par hai 😊 ?

Gayatri-Haan beta woh apne kamre mein hai par ek baat batao kya tum dono ke bich ladai hui hai 😕 ?

Prithvi-Kyon aunti kya hua?

Gayatri-Beta jabse aayi hai tabhi se royi jaa rahi hai.Meine pucha bhi ki kya hua to kehti ki plz mujhe akela chod do 😕.Beta aaj tak meine isse kabhi itna rioote hue nahi dekha,mujhe to bahut chinta ho rahi hai 😕 .

Prithvi-Aunti mein usse baat karta hoon 😕.

Prithvi Kripa ke room mein jaata hai.

Prithvi-Hi kripa.

Kripa-Tum? tumahri himmatbhi kaise hui yahan aane ki 😡 .Kaha tha na ki khabardaar kisi ne mere paas aane ki koshish bhi ki 😭.Arre itna to dukh de diya ab bhi kya koi kasr bachi hai jo phir hurt karne ke liye aa gaye.Jao yahan se 😭 😡 .

Prithvi-Meri baat to suno .

Kripa-just get out 💔.

Prithvi-Theek hai kripa mein yahan se chala jaata hoon par kya ek baar bhi tum meri baat nahi sunogi 😔.

Kripa-Itna sab kuch sunne ke baad mujhe aur kuch nahi sunna hai.Tum plz yahan se chale jao 😭.

Prithvi-Kripa Angad ne ye sab sirf tumahre aur mere liye kiya tha.Woh tumse bahut pyaar karta hai isliye ussne ye sab kiya.

Kripa-Matlab kya hai tumahra 😕 .

Prithvi-Pata hai kripa jab hum kisi se apni jaan se bhi zyaada pyaar karte hai na to hum hamesha yahi chahte hain ki jis insaan se hum pyar karte hain usse zindagi ki har khushi mile.Hum hamesha yahi chahte hain ki uss ko sabse zyaada pyarkarne wala insaan mile.Angad ne bhi yahi soch ki tumhein mujhse zyaada aur koi pyaar nahi kar sakta isliye usne ye sab kara par pata hai Kripa aisa karke usne ye sabit kar diya ki tumhein usse zyada koi pyaar nahi kar sakta 😭 😊 .Plz Angad ke paas laut aao wo tumahre bina bilkul adhura hai.

Kripa- 😭.

Prithvi-Plz Angad ke paas laut aao.Kal shaam woh tumahara Hotel Kingston mein wait karega.Plz accept him & forgive him for his mistake Kripa 😊.I beg u plz Angad ke paas wapas chali jao aur mujhe mere gunah ka paschatap karne do.Kal shaam ko theek 8:00 baje wahan pahuch jana.Angad tumhein wahan tumahra wait karte hue milega 😭 😊 .

Kripa window ke paas khadi hoti hai.

Kripa(thinking)-Kya karoon kuch bhi samajh mein nahi aa raha hai.Kya mujhe Angad ko ek chance aur dena chahiye 😕.

Gayatri-Kya soch rahi ho beta 😊.

Kripa-Haan 😲.Kuch bhi nahi.

Gayatri-Beta mein tumahri maa hoon.Bacha kab kya soch raha hai,kaunsi baat usse pareshan karti hai maa-baap ko sab pata chal jaata hai.I think tumhe Angad ko ek chance dena chahiye 😊 .

Kripa- 😲.

Gayatri-Meine sab kuch sun liya tha beta aur mein bhi ye manti hoon ki woh tumse behad pyar karta hai.Tumhein usse milna chahiye aur saari galatfehmiyan khatam kar deni chahiye.

Kripa-Par maa mere saath jo Angad ne kiya

Gayatri-Beta par tum ye bhi to dekho ki ussne ye sab tumahri khushi ke liye kiya.Beta sacha pyaar karne wala bahut mushkil se milta hai aur jo tumse sacha pyar kare usse kabhi apne se durr mat jane do.I think tumhein Angad ko maaf kar dena chahiye.

Kripa-Aap sahi keh rahi hain mom.Thanks 😭 😊.

Kripa & Gayatri hugs each other.

Next day Angad ke ghar

Angad-Yaar woh aayegi na 😕?

Prithvi-Ofcourse yaar woh aayegi.Woh tujhe zarror maaf karegi 😊.Aakhir tu usse itna pyaar jo karta hai.

Angad-Yaar mujhe bahut darr lag raha hai,uska gussa bahut tez hai 😕.

Aaliyah-Oh ho bhai aap ladke hoke itna darte ho,kya hoga aapka 😕 .

Angad-Kya,yahan darta kaun hai 😎.

Prithvi & Aaliyah(together)-Aap.

Angad-Mein?Mein to nahi darta kisi se,woh to bas thoda sa nervous hoon.

Prithvi-Dekh tune 7:30 yahin par kar liye,ab chal jaldi wahan pahuch isse pahle kripa wahan pahuch jaye.

Angad-Yaar tune saara intezaam to kar diya hai na?

Prithvi-Haan baba worry not.Tu jaa 😊 .Best of Luck.

Aaliyah-Best of Luck Bro 😊 .

Angad-Thanx

Angad kisses Aali's forehead.

Angad-Bi 😊 .

Prithvi-Haan to miss Aali Angad to chala gaya,ab bache hum dono to kya ab hum 😈.

Aaliyah-No prithvi no 😳.

Prithvi Aali ki taraf daudta hai aur Aali bahgne lagti hai par Prithvi usse pakad leta hai aur usse utha kar ghar ke andar le jaata hai aur darwaaza band kar leta hai.Udhar Angad hotel pahuch jaata hai.

Angad-Ye kripa ab tak kyon nahi aayi.Waiter

Waiter-Yes sir

Angad-Saari tayari ho gayi?

Waiter-Yes sir

Kripa hotel pahuchti hai.Kripa ne bahut sunder si baby pink colour ki dress pehni hoti hai aur uss par bahut sunder se earings pehne hote hai.Kripa bahut sunder lag rahi hoti hai aur Angad ne Leather ki black jacket aur black jeans pehni hoti hai.He was looking very sexy very stunning in tht.Ander andhera hota hai

Kripa-Yahan itna andhera kyon hai 😕 ?Angad r u there.

Jaise hi light on hoti hai kripa par roses petals girne lagte hain aur piche background gana baj raha hota hai.

'Tune mujhe pehchana nahi'
'Jana mein koi anjaan nahi'
'Aashiq hoon mein tere naam ka'
'Deewana hoon mein,deewana nahi'

Saamne se angad aata hai.Woh kripa ki taraf badta hai aur half bend ho jata hai.

Angad-I am sorry kripa for all my mistakes par mein tumhein apni jaan se bhi zyaada chahta hoon.Tumhere bina zindagi ke bare mein soch bhi nahi sakta.Plz meri zindagi mein laut aao.Plz Marry me ❤️.

Kripa-Aur tumse kisne kaha ki mein tumahre bina reh sakti hoon.Sach to ye hai ki mein tumhein apni jaan se bhi zyaada chahti hoon.Plz mujhe dobara chod kar mat jana 😭 😊.Will u also marry me 😳.

Kripa aur Angad haskar ek doosre ko zor se hug karte hain & then they kiss each other passionately.Then they exchange rings.