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Posted: 18 years ago
wow!!! continue soon!! cant wait to read more..
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Posted: 18 years ago
Prithvi-What 😲 ?

Aaliyah wahan se chali jaati hai.

Prithvi(thinking)-Iska matlab Aali mujhse pyar karti hai 😲 aur usne mujhe iss bare mein kabhi nahi bataya. Mujhe Aali se baat karni chahiye.

Prithvi Aali ka gadi se picha karta hai. Woh Aaliyah ki gadi ke aage apni car rok deta hai.

Aaliyah-Ye kya batamezee hai 😑 😭 .

Prithvi-Mujhe tumse baat karni hai.

Aaliyah-Par mujhe tumse koi baat nahi karni 😭 .

Aaliyah jaise hi jane lagti hai Prithvi uska haath pakdkar usse apni taraf khinch leta hai.

Aaliyah-Mera haath chodo 😑 😭 .

Prithvi Aaliyah ke lips par apni ungli rakhta hai

Prithvi-Kuch mat bolna please.Mujhe pehle kyon nahi bataya πŸ˜• ?

Aaliyah-Tumhein pehle bhi bata chuki hoon phir batati hoon that I Hate U 😭 .

Prithvi-Jhooth bol rahi ho.

Aaliyah-nahi 😭 .

Prithvi-haan

Prithvi Aaliyah ke aur paas aa jaata hai.

Aaliyah-chodo mujhe

Prithvi kisses Aaliyah on her lips very passionately.

Aaliyah(prithvi ko dhaka deti hai)-Chodo mujhe 😭 .

Aaliyah jaane lagti hai

Prithvi-Mein Angad ki sachaai jaan chuka hoon Aali aur ek baat sun lo I Love U 😊 .

Aaliyah- 😲

Aaliyah-kya jaan chuke ho tum?

Prithvi-yahi ki Angad ne ye sab sirf mujhe aur kripa ko milane ke liye kiya tha.Woh bhi kripa se pyar karta hai.Aali plz help me mein sirf Angad aur Kripa ko milana chahta hoon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
Aaliyah-What 😲 ?

Prithvi-Haan Aali aur kya tum nahi chahti ki Angad aur Kripa ek saath ho?

Aaliyah-Mein aisa hi chahti hoon par koi fayeda nahi hai kyonki bhai kabhi tumahre aur kripa ke bich nahi aana chahega.

Prithvi-To kya woh ye bhi nahi chahega ki uski pyaari si lil sis ki shaadi uske best frnd se ho πŸ˜‰ ?

Aaliyah-what 😲 😳 ?

Prithvi(in proposing style)-Haan aali will u marry me 😊 ?

Aaliyah- .

Prithvi aur Aaliyah ek doosre ko hug karte hain.

Prithvi-I Love U Aali

Aaliyah-I Love U Prithvi.

They both kisses each other very passionately.

Aaliyah-Ab hamein ye sochna chahiye ki kaise hum Bhai aur kripa ko milaye πŸ˜• .

Prithvi-woh sab tum mujh par chod do 😈 .

Aaliyah-tum karne kya wale ho πŸ˜• ?

Prithvi-Just wait & watch baby 😊 .

Next day Prithvi Angad ko phone karta hai.

Prithvi-Hey dude kya chal raha hai.

Angad-nothing tum batao phone kaise kiya.

Prithvi-yaar meine aaj Velocity mei ek choti si party throw ki hai so i want ki tum aur aali dono wahan aao 😊.

Angad-nahi yaar mood nahi hai

Prithvi-I dont know anything bas tum aur aali wahan sharp 10:00 clock wahan aa jana 😊 .ok

Angad-theek hai 😊 .

Party mein

Aaliyah(hugging prithvi)-Hi prithvi

Prithvi(hugging back)-Hi Aali 😊 .Looking tooo sexy πŸ˜‰ .

Aaliyah-Thanx 😊 .Well tumahra plan kya hai πŸ˜• ?

Prithvi-just wait & watch.

Kripa party mein ek bahut hi chota sa top aur macro mini pehn kar aati hai. She was feeling very embaressed.

Angad-ye kripa ne kya pehna hua hai 😲 .

Kripa- πŸ˜” .

Prithvi-hi kripa.U r looking tooo hot πŸ˜‰ .

Kripa-Prithvi ye tumne mujhe kaise kapde diye hain pehne ke liye.I am feeling so uncomfartable πŸ˜” .

Prithvi-chilax Kripa.Its mi partu aur yahan saari ladkiyon ne aise kapde pehne hain to tumhein kya problem hain 😑 .Dont be so behanji type.Chalo lets dance πŸ˜‰ .

Kripa-Apna dance apne paas rakho.Mujhe koi dance nahi karna 😑 .

kripa ek kone mein beth jaati hai. Uske paas Angad aata hai.

Angad-hi kripa 😊 .

Kripa-hi angad 😊 .

Angad-ye tumne kaise kapde pehne hai πŸ˜• ?

Kripa-mujhe ye kapde prithvi ne diye the?

Angad-just relax.ab tum mere saath ho so be comfy,ok.

Kripa-

Angad-mein tumahre liye coke lata hoon 😊 .

Angad ke jaane ke baad kuch boyz aakar kripa ko harass karne lagte hai.

Angad- 😲 😑 .



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Posted: 18 years ago
I think tht u all does not like mi fan-fic 😭 thts why i always recieve so less response 😭 .
khushi19 thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
your fanfic is great cont soon Edited by khushi19 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
that was really great. please continue soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
plzzzzzzz continue soon. i love your fan-fic. 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey when r u gona cont plz cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
your fanfic is going great pls cont soon πŸ˜†