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Posted: 18 years ago
Thanks Guyz for loving mi fan-fic 😊 .Here's the next part.

One Guy-Hey sweety wanna go out with us πŸ˜‰ .

Another Guy-Ya sexy we will take care of urs πŸ˜‰ .

Kripa-hey give me a break.Tum jante bhi ho ki mein Prithvi ki fiance hoon 😑 .Agar usse pata chal gaya to woh tumhein chodega nahi 😑 .

Guy-Prithvi se kaun darta hai sweety πŸ˜‰ .Come on na u will enjoy our company.

Woh dono ladke kripa ko zabardasti apne saath le jane   lagte hai.

Kripa-Please leave me,chodo mujhe 😭 πŸ˜• .

Angad ye sab dekh leta hai.

Angad-How dare u to even touch her 😑.I will not leave u.

Angad un dono ko bahut marta hai.Prithvi ye sab dekh leta hai.

Prithvi-Angad stop it πŸ˜• .Angad chodo unhe 😲 .

Angad-Arre kaise dost hai tumahre tumahri fiance ke saath hi batameeze kar rahe hain 😑 .

Prithvi-Angad tumahri himmat bhi kaise hui inke saath aisa karne ki.They r mi frnds damm it 😑.Aur mein jaanta hoon ki inhone kuch nahi kiya hoga 😑 .

Kripa-Ye tum kya keh rahe ho Prithvi.Ye dono mujhe tang kar rahe the 😭 😑 .

Tht guys-Nahi prithvi hamne kuch bhi nahi kiya ye to kripa hi thi jo πŸ˜•

Angad-U i will not leave u 😑 .

Prithvi-Please Angad dont spoil mi party 😑 .

Kripa-par prithvi πŸ˜• 😭

Prithvi-mein kuch nahi sunana chahta please 😑 .

Angad-to tumhein kripa se zyaada apne in doston par bharosa hai 😑 .Arre mujhe ab pachtava hota hai ki meine kyun 😑 😭 .Leave it.

Prithvi-Dekho ab kripa meri wife banne wali hai aur meri marzi mein jo bhi karoon samjhe 😑 .

Kripa-then theek hai prithvi.Mujhse milne tak ki bhi koshish mat karna 😭 .

Kripa party se bhag jati hai.Angad bhi uske piche bhagta hai.

Prithvi-Aali plan successful πŸ˜‰ .

Aaliyah-ya prithi 😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
ni part!! plz continue soon and plz make ur parts more longer pplz
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Posted: 18 years ago
oh my god pritvi is such a sweety, he is gonna get them togather. πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ nice update. πŸ‘ πŸ‘ continue soon. 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
Angad Kripa ke piche bhagta hai.

Angad-Kripa ruko .Meri baat suno kripa πŸ˜” .

Kripa-Kya suno 😑 😭 .Sunne ko kuch bacha bhi hai 😭 .Dekha tumne party mein kya hua.

Angad-Kripa meri baat suno

Kripa-Kuch nahi sunna mujhe 😑 .Kya kaha tha tumne ki Prithvi mujhse bahut pyaar karta hai.Woh mujhe bahut khush rakhega.Dekh liya kitna khush rakh raha hai woh mujhe 😭 😑 .

Angad-Dekho kripa prithvi ko sach nahi pata hai.Agar usse sach pata hota to woh bhi meri hi tarah react karta πŸ˜• .

Kripa-Arre kitna apne dost ki galtiyon ko chupayoge 😑 😭.Tumhe dikhta nahi ki usse meri koi parwah nahi hai 😭 .Woh mujhse pyar nahi karta aur na hi mein usse.Mein tumse pyaar karti hoon Angad 😭 .Please mujhe chod kar mat jao.Mein tumhare bina nahi reh sakti.

Angad-Nahi Kripa tumhein galat fehmi hui hai prithvi tumse bahut pyaar karta hai 😭 .

Kripa-Par Angad 😭 .

Angad-Try to understand kripa.

Kripa wahan se roote hue chali jaati hai.Angad laut kar party mein aata hai to wahan Prithvi aur Aaliyah koi bhi nahi hota hai.Prithvi aur Aaliyah were kissing each other very passionately & they were spending some very intimate moments.

Angad- 😲 😑

Aaliyah Angad ko dekh leti hai.

Aaliyah-Arre bhai aap 😲 .

Angad-Tum gaadi mein jaakar betho aali 😑 .

Aaliyah-Par bhai 😲 .

Angad-Meine kaha na gadi mein jaakar betho 😑 .

Aaliyah-Ji bhai.

Angad prithvi ke paas jaata hai

Angad-Ye sab kya ho raha tha prthvi 😑 .

Prithvi-Kya ho raha tha? Acha woh kuch nahi

Angad-Dekho Prithvi meri behan se door rehna samjhe 😑 .Thodi sharam karo tumahri shaadi hone waali hai aur woh bhi usse jisse tum pyar karte ho.

Prithvi-Par pasand to mein Aali ko bhi karta hoon πŸ˜‰ .

Angad Prithvi ka colar pakad leta hai.
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Posted: 18 years ago
WOW da part waz interesting!!continue soon!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
continue sooon!!

take care
Laiba
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Posted: 18 years ago
Angad-Pasand ka matlab ye nahi ki tum meri behen ke saath kuch bhi karte raho. Dekho Aali se door rehna, uske dost ho to dost hi bane rahoaur khabardar meri behen ko dobara chua bhi 😑 .Mein ye bhul jaonga ki tum mere dost ho 😑 .

Angad wahan se chala jaata hai.

Prithvi-Hone wale saale ji mujhe kab tak apni behen se door rakhoge πŸ˜† .She's mine aur dekhta hoon ki uss tak pahuchne se tum mujhe kaise rokte ho πŸ˜† .Aali is mine aur usse mujhe koi duur nahi kar sakta πŸ˜† .

Angad gaadi mein aakar beth jaata hai.

Aaliyah-Bhai kya baat hai aap ka mood bahut off lag raha hai πŸ˜• .

Angad-Dekho Aali aaj meine jo bhi dekha hai woh sab theek nahi hai 😑 .Tum Prithvi se door rehna samjhi 😑 .Uski shaadi hone waali hai.

Aaliyah-Par bhai mein usse

Angad-Tumhein ek baar mein samajh nahi aata aur haan aaj se tumhara Prithvi se milna julna band 😑.Tum Prithvi se door hi rehna samjhi.

Next Morning

Prithvi-Hi Kripa 😊 .

Kripa- 😳.

Prithvi-Happy Holi Kripa 😊.

Kripa-Same to u 😳.Angad aur Aali kahan hai.

Prithvi-Meine unhein bulaya tha par Angad hai jisne aana se hi mana kar diya πŸ˜•.Tum usse aur Aali se baat karo na shayad maan jaye 😊.

Kripa-Theek hai

Prithvi(thinking)-Yes plan succeeded.Ab meri Aali bhi Holi khelne aayegi 😊.

Kripa Angad ko phone karti hai.

Kripa-Hi Angad.Happy Holi 😊 .

Angad-Same to u kripa 😊.

Kripa-Angad tum holi khelne mere ghar nahi aaoge πŸ˜” 🀒 .

Angad-Nahi Kripa sorry mera holi khelne ka koi mood nahi hai.

Kripa-Please Angad mere liya aajao.Phir mein tumse kuch nahi mangogi 😭 😊 .

Angad-Acha theek hai mei aata hoon.

Kripa-Aur haan Aali ko bhi lete aana.

Angad-Woh uski kuch tabiyat kharab hai isliye woh nahi aa payegi.

Kripa-Tum usse yahan lekar to aao kya pata uski yahan aakar kuch tabiyat theek ho jaye.Plz Angad mujhe bhi acha lagega 😊 .

Angad-Acha theek hai.

Angad(thinking)-Mein Aali ko apne saath le to jaa raha hoon par usse Prithvi se door rakhna hoga.
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Posted: 18 years ago
come on!! plz post the next part!! 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
Guys sorry itne dino se aap sab ko nxt part ke liye wait karaya 😭 but now i will cont soon & thats mi promise to u all πŸ˜ƒ .Aajkal mere college ke exams chal rahe hain so plz plz wish me luck.
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Posted: 18 years ago
Angad aur Aali Kripa ke ghar pahuchte hai.

Angad-Aali mein tumhein yahan laaya to hoon par ek baat ka dhyaan rakhna,bhul se bhi PRITHVI KE PAAS JAANE KE SOCHNA BHI MAT 😳.

Aaliyah-ji bhai πŸ˜”.

Kripa-Hi Angad,Hi Aali 😊.

Angad & Aaliyah-Hi 😊.

Prithvi-Hey hi guys πŸ˜ƒ.Hi Aali πŸ˜‰.

Aaliyah- 😳.

Prithvi-Ab kya tum teeno yahin khade rahoge ya chalkar mere saath holi bhi kheloge 😊.

Angad-Guys Aali holi nahi khel payegi πŸ˜”.Woh uski tabiyat kharaab hai πŸ˜”.

Prithvi-Arre agar hamare saath rahegi to uski saari tabiyat theek ho jayegi,kyon aali πŸ˜‰.

Aaliyah- 😳.

Angad-Meine keh diya na that she is not goin to play holi 😑.

Prithvi-Ab tum hi isse samjhao na kripa πŸ˜•.

Kripa-Haan Angad plz maan jao na πŸ˜•.

Angad-theek hai.

Sab holi khelne lagte hai.

Angad-Kripa tum Prithvi ke saath khush to ho na?

Kripa-Haan ab woh mujh par dhyaan dene laga hai Angad.Mujhe ab lagta hai ki meine usse galat samjha tha.Pata hai aaj subah pehle mera mood bahut off tha par Prithvi ne mera mood to theek kara hi aur saath mein usne muje ye ring bhi gift mein di 😊.Mujhe lagta hai tht he really loves me.

Angad-Mein khush hoon ki tum uske saath khush ho 😊.
Ab ye aali kahan chali gayi hai πŸ˜•.

Kripa-Haan aur ye prithvi bhi kahin dikh nahi raha hai πŸ˜• .

Angad-Roko mein dekh kar aata hoon ki ye dono kahan gayab hain.(Thinking to himself)kahin aali prithvi ke saath to nahi πŸ˜• .

Angad sab jagah dhoond leta hai par usse Aali aur prithvi kahin bhi nahi dikhte.Angad jab upar dono ko dekhne jaata hai to usse ek kamre mein se kuch aawaaz aati hai.Us kamre mein aali aur prithvi hote hai.Angad un dono ko dekh kar shocked ho jaata hai.They were kissing each other very passionately.

Aaliyah-I love u prithvi 😳.

Prithvi-I love u too πŸ˜›.

Aaliyah-Pata hai pehle to bhai yahan aane ko maan hi nahi rahe the par jab unhe Kripa ne phone kar ke bulaya tab woh kahin jaakar maane.

Prithvi-Pata hai,meine hi to kripa ko ye sab karne ke liye bola tha.Mein tumse alag nahi reh sakta,I really Love u Aali 😊.

Aaliyah Angad ko darwaaze par khada hua dekh leti hai

Aaliyah-Bhai 😲 .

Angad-Oh to ab mein samjha ki kyon tum yahan aana chah rahi thi.

Angad gives a tight slap to Aaliyah

Aaliyah- 😭.

Prithvi-Arre sharam karo tum dono 😑.Prithvi tum to kripa se pyar karte ho na phir tum aisa kar bhi kaise sakte ho,chi 😑 aur aali tum kisi ladki ki zindagi kaise barbaad kar sakti ho.Mein abhi jaakar Kripa ko sab kuch bata doonga.

Prithvi-Jao zaroor jao par woh tumahra vishwaas nahi karegi kyonki woh meri muthi mein hai πŸ˜†.

Angad-Dekhte hai 😑.

Angad-Kriap mujhe tumse baat karni hai.

Kripa-Haan bolo

Angad-kripa prithvi tumhe dhoka de raha hai.Woh tumhe kya meri behen ko bhi dhoka de raha hai.

Angad kripa ko sab kuch bata deta hai.

Kripa-Shut up Angad 😑.Tumhein sharam aani chahiye,jo mujhse itna zyaada pyaar karta hai woh mere saath aisa kuch bhi nahi kar sakta.Chalre jao yahan se 😑 .

Angad-Par kripa πŸ˜•.

Kripa-Get out 😑 .

Kripa wahan se chali jaati hai.

Prithvi-Kahan tha na ki woh tumahri baat nahi sunegi.Nahi suni na πŸ˜†.Ab kya karoge.

Angad- 😑.

Prithvi-Oh mein to darr gaya πŸ˜†.Pata hai Aangad tumahri behen bhi bewakoof ban rahi hai aur woh bichari kripa bhi πŸ˜† .

Prithvi Kripa ke baare mein bahut cheap bate karta hai.Anagd ko gussa aa jaata hai aur woh Prithvi ko marne lagta hai.

Angad(shouting)-I love Kripa samjha I love her 😑.

Kripa- 😲.