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Posted: 18 years ago
Great part.
loved it.
So Jai finally got it that BD is Bani...a girl.
Like that he was able to reason himself....a reason for BD is hiding her identity....liked it that he didn't lash out on her for hiding the truth.
Jai and Roshni split up good......he went back to US....oooooohhhhhhh he is 29 and a business tycoon....loved it.
plz cont. soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago

Finally he realised that BD is actually a girl!😉

Phew!

The way Bani remembered the quotes and her fetish for books tells a lot about her personality👏 - I also loved the fact that you kept the original Bani somewhere alive in BD - Family comes first!😛

The lady who died was Kiran - right?

Sheenu, was that scene taken from KS during the whole Park Road issue?.........It sounds pretty familiar!🤔

Yay, he broke up with Cobra!👍🏼.....though I fail to understand why he was dating her in the first place!😕

So now we have a 7 year leap!😃

P.S. Sweety, try to get some sleep!!😆

Edited by nibbles - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
OMF...jai knows that BD Is a girl...lol...thats good...and haila...why do i get the feeling that it was banis mom that jai hit...haila...oh dear lord...park road raaz...lol...im sure that u will handel it better than ekta did... 😃 loved the update...so so so glad that cobra and jai are done...and please dont bring in reptile... 🤢 🤢 ...and if u must...torture her til the ends of the earth!!!! 😈
JAZ
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Posted: 18 years ago
Sheenaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!

I finally caught up with the last two parts. So sorry for not posting comments earlier.

I was going to ask you about why Jai always reffered to Bani as a "he" I was like am I going crazy? lol! But you cleared up the confusion.

Needless to say, I loved the update. I absolutely love the "weird" relationship they both share. the fact that he looked after "him" not knowing that this was the girl he was at one point going to fall in love with (yes i'm getting ahead of myself and I have no problem with that cuz I KNOW its going to happen lol!)

Did I tell you I love Bani? (I think everyone knows about my obbession with Bani) 😆 But the fact that she doesn't care about racing even though Jai is willing to finance her for the next six years (it was six right?) and she still chooses her family in their time of need, my respect for this girl just trippled! 😳

Ok, I hate thsi Roshni! Just can't stand her! please kill her off (pleaseeeeeeee....im begging!)

Jai killed Bani's mom, didn't he? I knew it! 😭

Now he's got the curse from her father and he'll never be able to find true happiness. I hope Bani comes back into his life soon, they will complete each other. They both will give each other the happiness they both deserve.

Sheena please update soon. I'm loving the story so far. I can't wait to read more. zaida mat tadpana Bani aur Jai ko yaar. Warna....

Anam
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Posted: 18 years ago
shoba...this was awesome....so you have now fastforwarded a 1998 or something i think
and u kept the whole KD getting killed in an accident track...
why???this will definitely cause problems...ohh...i dont like this track...
sheena pleazse update soon...please....
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: joa123

i'm first...
wow u hav updated



😆😆😆 Yes, I have!!
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: love is fire

Great update Sheena!!

Finally he recognised her!!! such a duffer!! 😆

Love Bani's character! So sweet and innocent 😛

Hmmm the accident sounds like the one in KS, hope it doesnt turn out the way it did in KS 😭 😛

Waiting for the next part!! do continue!!!



Rads,

Finally he recognized her!! He better - I am a huge Bani fan, she is very mature yet very innocent. She sort of grows on you - the accident is one of the reasons why Jai leaves India again! It will be slightly different in this FF.

Thanks for the comments!!
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Taz234



11.30 in the morning here...and ur still up over there!!! Don't u sleeep? hahaha😆
As for being paagal..yeah mein bhi tumhari hi tarah completely paagal hoon...aur shayad paagal hi rahoongi!!! 🤣 And i blame jai for my paagalpan!!! i was normal until he came along!!! 😆 😳 😍

Now let's start a pagalpan club, first CCC and now Poorah Pagalpan People (PPP) club!! 🤣 My feeling is that before Jai came along, it was dormant and now it has risen it's ugly head!! Kyo?🤣🤣🤣

Ok I'm back with my long comments...ab toh uth gayi hogayi hogayi...did make that cucumber sandwich for u...but phir bahut bhook lagi toh kha gayi....sorrryyyyy!!! 😆 Will make plenty more next time!!! 😆


You ate my cucumber sandwiches!! Girl, how could you??😭😭😭I am going to tell mummy ji that you are not sharing again.....😡😡😡



Oh wow sheena…this story is getting goooood!! Jai finally grasped BD is a she and not a he!!! 😆 Loved the prank they had played on Barnali as kids…horse dung!!! 🤣



Thanks honey - I knew you would love the horse dung thing, I have to tell you about a real story of how we used to play pranks on unsuspecting souls with this kind of trick - only with the human kind!! My cuz's nanny (He was a guy) used to wrap the gift in nice little packages and leave them on the road (and all of us used to hide on the balcony upstairs) to watch people do all kinds of things with the well placed gifts!! It was hilarious!!🤣 I told you I was pagal!!

She had shoveled some horse dung into a colorful wrapping and packaged it with the help of Sunny's son George; she put it in a gift bag and had left it outside Bernali's room. BD, George dragged Jai to see the drama. When Bernali came out and saw the bag, she was so thrilled to see the gift, she thought that it was a gift from Udai Walia – without waiting to go inside, she had picked up the bag and brought out the package. Much to the delight of the audience, she had squeezed it, prodded it to guess what was inside, leaving the two eight years olds into peals of laughter – and finally opened it eagerly, ripping the wrapping paper and dropping it in horror when she found out the contents inside.

Such a cool prank!!!! 🤣 She thought it was a gift from Udai…hahaha….the fact she was squeezing it before she opened the package…🤣 yewwwww…



Like I said, it was a real story!!😉😉😉


Bani had reached the barn next to the sunflower farm and waited patiently for Jai to finish. She loved this spot; the yellow sunflowers moved in the light breeze, the green stalks were almost drooping with the disappearance of the sun beyond the hills. The sky was streaked with various purple shades. The young male and the ebony stallion were making their way across the trail now – she blushed with confusion, he looked like a magical knight, his sinewy thighs squeezing the powerful muscles of the horse. As he came closer and stopped next to her, She didn't understand the feelings he invoked in her and for the first time wanted to escape the proximity.

Wow this paragrahph was so dreamy…Bani waiting for Jai at the barn..the yellow sunflowers…light breeze..ufff!!! And then jai emerging on the ebony stallion…ufff..haiii..ufff!!! He looked like a magical knight!!! Haiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii…jaadoo toh mujhe pe already chal gaya!!! 😳 😍 Bechari Bani at that age was losing it…ajeebse feelings paida ho rahe the…aur yahaan hum badon ka bhi haal kuch aisa hi hai??? 😳


She is beginning to fall for him even at the age of 12. Most girls have infatuations at this age and have ajeeb feelings, they don't know what they are, so they are sort of scared too!!😳 Well, Jai will be her knight in the shining armor!!


Bani talking about her mother and family was really sweet…poor thing has to go through all that at such an early age…wants to race but mothers health is her main concern. Loved Jai being sympathetic towards her and understanding her plight…awwww…

She always has a solid head on her shoulders, mature, understanding and living for others!! Jai admires her for all these characterstics.😊😊


"It is unfulfilled dreams that keep one alive." Bani unconsciously said it aloud. She was quoting reverend Robert Schuller.
Awwww…great line! 👏 Jai sending all those books for her…such a darling…tabhi itni smart ho gayi hai Bani rani!!!


She has always been smart, except for the Bani/Bondgiri she indulges in occasionally!! 😡😡😡


That's when he heard the thud – when he and Roshni got down, they saw a woman lying on the ground, seriously hurt. Jai took her to the hospital and tried to help her every which way he can – but it was of no use. The woman died the next morning. When the husband came to identify her body, Jai offered to give financial assistance to him, but the man refused to accept it. He blamed Jai for bad driving and cursed him with bad luck for an eternity. He went on to tell Jai that he would never receive love and that all his near and dear would desert him one time or the other.
OMG!!! That must have been Bani mother!!! 😲…but jai it was an accident hun…don't blame urself!!! Bani's dad cursing Jai…nahinnnnn…accident tha!!! 😔 Plz don't curse the poor guy!!! Mujhse bardaast nahin hoga!!!


I was wondering if I should add this to the storyline, but did it because she was one of the reasons why Jai goes back to the US.


He left for US again, Roshni was too eager to go back with him. He couldn't bring himself to marry Roshni after living with her for seven years and they parted with bitter animosity when he refused to succumb to her wishes.

Thank god he didn't bring himself to marry that Roshni…so he went back to the US and she stayed on in India…just can't wait for him to come back now…I'm sure its soon…he didn't meet Bani after that race I guess…but I'm sure plenty more races in future….god I love all these leaps that are coming in the story…tooo good!!! 👏


Thanks, I am a little scared of all the leaps, I don't know how they are all going to come together, there will be some more racing scenes - but I have to steer the story to the LOVERS eventually!! 😕😕😕



Keep it up Sheena…this ff is getting better and better!!


Thank you sweetie, loved your comments!!


Taz!


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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: TINK

*Haila* 😳 Update.....will be bck 😃 😃 😃 ....hahahahaha 😆 ...thanx Sheena 🤗



Tinku,

Kaisi Ho?? That Eco still keeping you busy!! You want help with business and romance, ask Jai, he is the tycoon!!! I heard he is a kissology professor!!! 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: bugs_bunny

jai killed bani's mother...im sure its her!!

will bani ever find out??? so jai is 29 and a business tycoon??
when wil he meet bani next??? and bani's so little but she already has feeling for him awwww...

loved the reading the update...wasn't boring at all!



Hi Bugs,

He does kill her by accident - she will find out - He is a tycoon, they will meet in the next chapter again - yes, she is 12 and already falling for the Mighty Jai Walia!!

Thanks for saying it was not boring, you are very sweet!! 😳😳😳

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