Originally posted by: Taz234
11.30 in the morning here...and ur still up over there!!! Don't u sleeep? hahaha😆
As for being paagal..yeah mein bhi tumhari hi tarah completely paagal hoon...aur shayad paagal hi rahoongi!!! 🤣 And i blame jai for my paagalpan!!! i was normal until he came along!!! 😆 😳 😍
Now let's start a pagalpan club, first CCC and now Poorah Pagalpan People (PPP) club!! 🤣 My feeling is that before Jai came along, it was dormant and now it has risen it's ugly head!! Kyo?🤣🤣🤣
Ok I'm back with my long comments...ab toh uth gayi hogayi hogayi...did make that cucumber sandwich for u...but phir bahut bhook lagi toh kha gayi....sorrryyyyy!!! 😆 Will make plenty more next time!!! 😆
You ate my cucumber sandwiches!! Girl, how could you??😭😭😭I am going to tell mummy ji that you are not sharing again.....😡😡😡
Oh wow sheena…this story is getting goooood!! Jai finally grasped BD is a she and not a he!!! 😆 Loved the prank they had played on Barnali as kids…horse dung!!! 🤣
Thanks honey - I knew you would love the horse dung thing, I have to tell you about a real story of how we used to play pranks on unsuspecting souls with this kind of trick - only with the human kind!! My cuz's nanny (He was a guy) used to wrap the gift in nice little packages and leave them on the road (and all of us used to hide on the balcony upstairs) to watch people do all kinds of things with the well placed gifts!! It was hilarious!!🤣 I told you I was pagal!!
She had shoveled some horse dung into a colorful wrapping and packaged it with the help of Sunny's son George; she put it in a gift bag and had left it outside Bernali's room. BD, George dragged Jai to see the drama. When Bernali came out and saw the bag, she was so thrilled to see the gift, she thought that it was a gift from Udai Walia – without waiting to go inside, she had picked up the bag and brought out the package. Much to the delight of the audience, she had squeezed it, prodded it to guess what was inside, leaving the two eight years olds into peals of laughter – and finally opened it eagerly, ripping the wrapping paper and dropping it in horror when she found out the contents inside.
Such a cool prank!!!! 🤣 She thought it was a gift from Udai…hahaha….the fact she was squeezing it before she opened the package…🤣 yewwwww…
Like I said, it was a real story!!😉😉😉
Bani had reached the barn next to the sunflower farm and waited patiently for Jai to finish. She loved this spot; the yellow sunflowers moved in the light breeze, the green stalks were almost drooping with the disappearance of the sun beyond the hills. The sky was streaked with various purple shades. The young male and the ebony stallion were making their way across the trail now – she blushed with confusion, he looked like a magical knight, his sinewy thighs squeezing the powerful muscles of the horse. As he came closer and stopped next to her, She didn't understand the feelings he invoked in her and for the first time wanted to escape the proximity.
Wow this paragrahph was so dreamy…Bani waiting for Jai at the barn..the yellow sunflowers…light breeze..ufff!!! And then jai emerging on the ebony stallion…ufff..haiii..ufff!!! He looked like a magical knight!!! Haiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii…jaadoo toh mujhe pe already chal gaya!!! 😳 😍 Bechari Bani at that age was losing it…ajeebse feelings paida ho rahe the…aur yahaan hum badon ka bhi haal kuch aisa hi hai??? 😳
She is beginning to fall for him even at the age of 12. Most girls have infatuations at this age and have ajeeb feelings, they don't know what they are, so they are sort of scared too!!😳 Well, Jai will be her knight in the shining armor!!
Bani talking about her mother and family was really sweet…poor thing has to go through all that at such an early age…wants to race but mothers health is her main concern. Loved Jai being sympathetic towards her and understanding her plight…awwww…
She always has a solid head on her shoulders, mature, understanding and living for others!! Jai admires her for all these characterstics.😊😊
"It is unfulfilled dreams that keep one alive." Bani unconsciously said it aloud. She was quoting reverend Robert Schuller. Awwww…great line! 👏 Jai sending all those books for her…such a darling…tabhi itni smart ho gayi hai Bani rani!!!
She has always been smart, except for the Bani/Bondgiri she indulges in occasionally!! 😡😡😡
That's when he heard the thud – when he and Roshni got down, they saw a woman lying on the ground, seriously hurt. Jai took her to the hospital and tried to help her every which way he can – but it was of no use. The woman died the next morning. When the husband came to identify her body, Jai offered to give financial assistance to him, but the man refused to accept it. He blamed Jai for bad driving and cursed him with bad luck for an eternity. He went on to tell Jai that he would never receive love and that all his near and dear would desert him one time or the other. OMG!!! That must have been Bani mother!!! 😲…but jai it was an accident hun…don't blame urself!!! Bani's dad cursing Jai…nahinnnnn…accident tha!!! 😔 Plz don't curse the poor guy!!! Mujhse bardaast nahin hoga!!!
I was wondering if I should add this to the storyline, but did it because she was one of the reasons why Jai goes back to the US.
He left for US again, Roshni was too eager to go back with him. He couldn't bring himself to marry Roshni after living with her for seven years and they parted with bitter animosity when he refused to succumb to her wishes.
Thank god he didn't bring himself to marry that Roshni…so he went back to the US and she stayed on in India…just can't wait for him to come back now…I'm sure its soon…he didn't meet Bani after that race I guess…but I'm sure plenty more races in future….god I love all these leaps that are coming in the story…tooo good!!! 👏
Thanks, I am a little scared of all the leaps, I don't know how they are all going to come together, there will be some more racing scenes - but I have to steer the story to the LOVERS eventually!! 😕😕😕
Keep it up Sheena…this ff is getting better and better!!
Thank you sweetie, loved your comments!!
Taz!