Candle In the Wind; Note Pg160;New Thread - Page 113

Originally posted by: Sheena_Row

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Originally posted by: frndsnstrngers

hey sheena

i read your note at the end ... dear it is nothing of that sort... your ff is very good...and very enjoyable....notice the views...observe it ...it increases with each day

loved todays part...after all that accident is out..but Bani is matured enough to understand... I think the problems will be sorted out.....and good know that Jai is not secretive

Originally posted by: smitra110

Hey you have no need to be doubting your abilities as a story teller, your FF is really good and realistic. I wait for the updates so please don't run yourself down. Great work.
Somali

Originally posted by: sanam84

see i read then came to coment n then saw Tazo n ur comment bout JW n phata hua shirt, then all else went from my mind but will still try. 🤣

Hmm, between the phata hua shirt and black briefs in the shower (Thanks Saby) how do you expect us to concentrate on any thing?🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪

Sheena i dont do serious commenting, yaar wo jo serious bone hota hai wo bhagwan mere andar dalna bhool gaye so i just hope u dont mind. chal hat i know u luv my comments 😆 (see tazo now i am laughing at my own joke)🤣

Tazo virus is spreading like wild fire.....Yaar, I don't have a serious bone either, I just pretend like I do, meetings mein jaati hoon aur I have a silly grin on my face, I look at my fat boss and I think of JW, I look at my angry boss and I think of JW, I look at my nice boss and I think of JW, so I always have a silly grin!! 🤪🤪🤪🤪

I am glad both won, that is wot i call picture perfet, both hugging n crying. it was a good end 👏 👏 . na teri na meri, baki Baba ki. (this is a bhihari sayin a bit rude so left out few words)

send me a PM, I want to hear it!! I got to send you some more mazedaar jokes....I got up in the morning and saw Taz's enlarged joke and laughing like crazy!! 🤣🤣🤣🤣Thank God, Sunny had already left, otherwise he would have sent me to a pagalkhana!

When Jw was retching first thoughts were OMG he is.....then sanity returned n i was like Nah ye thod hota hai 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣

Yaar, you are too funny, six months per aisa thodi hoti hai kya, that all happened when his stomach was a little bit smaller (Like three months) 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

ye jai stare bahut karta hai, sumone sud tell him its not good to stare jab dekho 'he stared' any FF u read he does that, isko to staring compotition mein bhejo mere saath, i to am a expert lets see who will win. 😉

🤣I think I will win hands down, the way I was staring at the picture you put up yesterday, I thought that somebody pried open my lashes so my lids wouldn't come down!! 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

he bought a sari matchin gulmohar, that reminded me of the song from Devta

Gulmohar Gar Tumhara Naam Hota
Mausam-E-Gul Ko Hasaana Bhi Hamara Kaam Hota

Aayengi Baharein To Abke Unhe Kehna Zara Itna Sune
Mere Gul Bina Kahan Unka Bahaar Naam Hota
Gulmohar Gar Tumhara Naam Hota...

Shaam Ke Gulabi Se Aanchal Mein Ek Diya Jala
Hai Chaand Ka
Mere Un Bina Kahan Uska Chaand Naam Hota
Gulmohar Gar Tumhara Naam Hota...

Wah, Wah!! Kya Khoob hai! Lovely song yaar!👏👏👏

he took her to show the land scape, oh i know all bout land scaping hav done a full course on that. 🤣
🤣Perhaps you can give JW some lessons, lot of digressing of course!! Kyo?? 😉

The raaz is out ok but i think this sud not effect the relaton ship as bani knows it was not an accident her mom comitted sucide n it was no fault of JW, i mean i hope she understands that.

I hope so too yaar, you know how these things go! parents are precious!

i am more worried bout Jai thinkin of not letting her race again, i hope it does not lead to ego clash, coz there is no cure for that.

Me too yaar, me too! He is such a Khadoos, need to be careful around Bani, she too is 'Arrogant Bani', Kyo??😉😉😉


ok i am done wid the FF now to u, abe ............... 🤬 🤬🤬 who said ur FF is not good, abe🤬🤬🤬 u just keep writeing i lov it, aur update mein itna din mat lagao warna 🤬🤬🤬

Gosh, I will send you a PM, forward you the rude email from some one!😭

ok i think i did well wid a groggy mind, not bad i am proud of you Sammy 🤣 🤣 🤣

Me too Sammy, me too! Kabhi bhi so jathi kya? And you were calling me a budhi!!

Originally posted by: rooj-i

Happy Commenting Sheena!!!
great part sheena,
i love it!!!
Congrats to Bani!!!

Thanks Rooj, How are you? Long time no talk!!😛😛

love the fact that Jai picked the sari for Bani...so sweet!! 😳
also loved the fact that Bani picked her hat to give to him...and not just any but the fav. one...

Yes, that's her lucky charm and she gave it to Jai!! 😃😃😃

Ok now to your raaz...well no surprise there...i figured before he married her...but i'm afraid what will come next..

I don't know yaaar, everything is going too fast with this Raaz!!

like i said i fear you because you will have the major and most horrible twist later in this story...and it involves what pundit have said...why do i fear that Jai might die? 😭 😭

Yaar, don't worry so much, Jai will never die, Bani will never die - I won't do that you or myself!!😉😉

and now i'm beginning to get Karan's role now after that little twist...

First I have to pry Karan from Swati's grip!! 😆😆😆
anyways great part
continue soon please
rooj

Originally posted by: btkr

Loved it Sheena, as usual. I swear, if u write anything similar to KS's storyline, it is adios from me. Mein to beemar ho jati hoon when I think about the show 😆 ...so continue the way u wish, u know u will write well.

Bina,
Thanks honey!! Now I am scared about changing the storyline!! 😆😆😆 The real show is getting a little too sick for me too!!

Loved the photo finish/dead heat. I enjoy the fact that u tend to focus more on Jai's feelings and emotions - refreshing change, used to seeing more of the girl's perspective...

Thanks sweetie, we are all human and thrive on human emotions, men have feelings too, and I always wonder about the males, how they react to something.

Feel bad for J that the conversation about the mom had to happen the night before he left for Scotland - hope Bani will eventually be able to be rational..

I hope so too, although I hoped that it wouldn't happen before he left to Scotland!
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bt