Oh sorry my bad i was so habituated with seeing "Yuvi" that even "Yuv" has started to look like "Yuvi"
Oh sorry my bad i was so habituated with seeing "Yuvi" that even "Yuv" has started to look like "Yuvi"
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Day 2 : Some foreign feelings with Chai
"Tanya, jaldi uth ja. Mujhe sight seeing karna hai", screams Yuvika near her ear. Tanya groans " Tu chali ja na woh handsome ke saath jo tujhe kal mila tha. Mera nindh ke piche kyu padi hai!?". Yuvika suddenly thinks about Neil. Undoubtedly he's handsome but she's not going to accept that infront of Tanya. "Handsome?!. Mujhe toh woh average laga", says Yuvika. Hearing her, Tanya wakes up in a jolt. "Average?!. Mazak ka bhi limit hoti hai Yuv!. Woh tujhe average laga kyunki tere pasand toh Karthik jaisa hai. Tujhse baat karna hi bekar hai", says Tanya while rolling her eyes at her.
"Agar itna hi pasand hai tujhe toh tu rakh le. Mere piche kyu padi hai?!", exclaims Yuvika. Tanya grimace at her. "Jab tak main jinda hoon, teri setting main uss handsome ke saath karake rahungi", says Tanya. They get ready to explore the location.
Yuvika was exploring the green scenary of early morning. She was feeling peace. She remembers Tanya's words about Karthik. She & Karthik's so called relationship is already approved by her parents. Also Karthik going to pursue job at USA in following years means she have to stay with him far away from the family. Her mother always say "Karthik accha ladka hai, tu shaadi karle". Which gives her kind of churn feeling from inside like it's not right thing. Although her father says" Zindagi mein ek goal hona zaruri hai". For her, her father is everything.
Yuvika was in a deep thought when Tanya nudges her excitedly. Yuvika's trance gets break & looks at her annoyed. "Kya hua ab?",asks Yuvika. "Yuv, dekh tera handsome....white shirt pe kya lag raha hai!", exclaims Tanya. Yuvika looks at the direction. There stands Neil with plain white shirt, dressed like a formal but with jeans, busy clicking pictures. "Sach mein bhagwan ne bohot fursaat se banaya hai Neil ko", thinks Yuvika while looking at his handsome face. "Chal...usse milte hai", saying this Tanya drags Yuvika with her. Neil was feeling good seeing his photography came out good.
Suddenly he hears someone calling his name. He looks behind & sees Yuvika-Tanya. "Good morning ladies",greets Neil giving full blown smile. Yuvika's heart skips a beat seeing his smile. They also wishes him. "Tum photographer ho?",asks Yuvika while Tanya excuses herself from them. "Nahi. Actually yeh mera hobby hai. But try karta hoon ki pictures acche aaye", says Neil. "Mujhe dekhna hai pictures", says Yuvika. "Yeah sure", saying this Neil starts showing her pictures.
After a while Tanya comes there & says "We should explore waterfall nearby". Three of them explores waterfall areas. Yuvika was awestruck while viewing the scenary. They were standing minimum 3rd floor from ground equivalent height. Suddenly her foot gets tangle with rocky surface & she was about fall. Neil catches her arm from behind but they both fell into water from that height. Tanya screams & runs down to ground to save them. While both Neil-Yuvika falls into water. Neil manages to swim but Yuvika was drowning. Neil swims fast to get Yuvika on his shoulder & gets successful in it. They reach at deck & Neil sees Yuvika is unconscious.
Neil starts panicking. Tanya comes there & says "Neil, do something till then I'll take some help from locals". Neil nods at her. Neil thinks to give CPR to Yuvika. He takes his handkerchief & places it on her mouth. Neil starts giving CPR to Yuvika. After a few minutes, Yuvika starts coughing & tries to sit up. Neil hurriedly pats her back. Yuvika tries to breathe normally but ends up breathing heavily. "It's okay. Zaida pressure maat do khudko. Dheere dheere sans lo. Sab thik hai", mutters Neil while patting her back. Yuvika looks down at handkerchief & frowns. "Woh tumhe CPR dena tha isiliye maine apna handkerchief use kiya", says Neil. Yuvika nods at him then suddenly her mind clicks about CPR.
They were that close a while ago?!. She flushes red. Neil sees it & thinks she caught fever. "Mujhe lagta hai tumhe bukhaar chad gaya hai. Hume jaldi camp jana chahiye", says Neil. Yuvika nods at him not knowing what to say now. Soon Tanya comes there with locals. Locals tell them to stay in a hut till noon as it's going to rain. They'll help them to arrange foods. Neil takes help from a local woman to bring tea ingredients. He starts making medicine tea as Yuvika needs it.
Meanwhile Tanya was giving teasing glance at Yuvika & Yuvika avoids her gaze. "Yuv, bata na kya hua tum dono ke bich?. Kuch hua hai na?!. Mujhe pata hai kuch hua hai. Tu kyu chupa rahi hai.... details bata mujhe", says Tanya excitedly. Yuvika glares at her. "Mujhe ghur ke koi fayda nahi hai", says Tanya. Yuvika sighs at her & says "Neil mujhe CPR diya aur...."but gets cut off by Tanya's screaming. Tanya was happy. Neil comes there hearing scream. "Tum log thik toh ho?. Kuch hua Yuvika ko?", says Neil. Yuvika glares at Tanya & Tanya thinks to say something. It's raining already. "Woh Yuv ko barish bohot pasand hai toh excited ho gayi", says Tanya while making Yuvika's jaw drop. "Barish toh har kisiko pasand hai. Tum dekhna chahogi bahar aake?", says Neil. Tanya signals her to say yes. Yuvika nods at him.
Tanya helps Yuvika to sit on a chair inside of hut. Neil gives her tea. "Yeh medicine chai tumhe peena hai aur isse fhekna maat", says Neil. Yuvika makes faces still reluctantly drinks it. "Yuck. Kitna karwa hai", exclaims Yuvika. "Karwa chai accha hai tumhare liye", says Neil while sitting beside her. Tanya excuses herself from there while winking at Yuvika. Yuvika scowls at her. Neil & Yuvika stares at raining atmosphere. "Woh hume barish khatam hone ke baad nikalna hai. Tumhare liye thik hoga?", says Neil. "Mujhe koi problem nahi hai. Waise thank you Neil mere jaan bachane ke liye", says Yuvika. Neil gives her smile & says "Dosti mein sorry aur thank you nahi chalti". Yuvika chuckles hearing him.
Flashback ends
How ironic is that today they become friends again. Yuvika thinks about it while laying down on her bed. She was searching about Avni D'Souza & Neil takes her to rage room. Although when she was introducing Karthik to Neil, she felt heavy burden on her heart. Also Neil was looking bit different like his emotions changed in a minute. She started questioning about her feelings after 2 years from that day
Part 2 was really nice....waiting for the next part
I am loving the narrative style in this SS
The way you are incorporating those Rishikesh trekking trip flashbacks in between present scenarios of Yuvika's life that's exactly how Flashbacks should be narrated
Kuch sikhoooo Swastik
Thank you for this much demanding Rishikesh trekking trip flashbacks
Swastik kab denge show mein????
At least make NeiVika talk about it
Added this SS link in NeiVika AT
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Loved it , I was telling nah you are a great writer 😉
+ Tanya is just like Isha . Waiting for the next part ....
Originally posted by: Spandan24
Loved it , I was telling nah you are a great writer 😉
+ Tanya is just like Isha . Waiting for the next part ....
Thank you
well be ready for next dhamaka in this ss
Hint is jo abhi tak neivika mein hua nahi
really !!!!Originally posted by: The_annoymus
Thank you
well be ready for next dhamaka in this ss
Hint is jo abhi tak neivika mein hua nahi
Shit I can't wait now , try to update asap
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