That was such a lovely chapter...but please include more Videv scenes in the next one...and more conversations between HP and Vidhi... really want a confrontation scene of Vidhi/HP... please turn this into an FF.❤️🥺
chapter 2 bhi acha ha, although i was hoping vidhi and dev to meet again. But ni mile. 😔 Next part mein mila dena plss. Waise yeh part poora dev ke pov se tha, want to know about vidhi's pov also. 😊
Right now I didn’t have that planned . But I will try to include . About FF I don’t know wether I can make it interesting if it’s long. Thank you for your interest in my story.❤️
Ya Shveta, vidhi ki part bhi milega .. par pehle. Vale chapters of story dev ki taraf se dikhane ka plan Kia Maine.. how he handles the unexpected happiness and the sadness that brings along by forgetting all his conceince in this stage of his life . How he find himself with a new perspective just because of one moment. And ViDev meeting hogi but how it’s possible that when dev himself doesn’t want to hope.that’s I want to make interesting when destiny brings them close again and again unexpectedly specially they are in denial mode and whether it gave him sukoon or it pushes him into more dark.
Just a silly thought of mine . Hope you all like it.
Thankyou Shveta for your support.
Loved it especially where Dev daydreams about Vidhi... Always had a soft corner for majnu dev 😅
You just rocked ❤️❤️
I am just loving the story... 😍😍 the way Dev is daydreaming about Vidhi is just mind blowing
Want to read the next one soon.. ❤️❤️🙏
Sorry dude schedule bht hectic chal rha ha time hi ni mil rha bilkul bi kuch bi read krne ka.. but i am glad that meine time nikala is masterpiece k liye ❤️❤️
Continue soon
Shinika, amazing story line. Please continue, I want to see the end of this HP too. Lol
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