Bina kisi Seemawon se ViDev OS - Page 2

Originally posted by: Helios10

This is the sweetest. 

Here is a little improvisation from my end.. hope you like it. If you want to integrate please feel free! 

Dev: Tumhe pata hai woh Dubai main Abhi ke saath main Priya ke liye bag laane gaya tha..

Aaise hi chalte hue wahan ek Victoria Secret ka shop dikha.. 

Waise uske store ke display window ke taraf Dyan nahi gaya kabhi, par us din socha tum kaise dikhogi... ek toh meri nayi naveli Dulhan ko chhod aaya tha..  I wanted to see your curvaceous, petite figure wearing this... 

Tumhari simplicity mujhe bahut attractive lagti hai, but I just wanted to.... and you have managed to knock me off and how!

Dev clears his throat, wraps his hands around her.. 

I know you love me but do you find me attractive??  I never asked... 

Vidhi blushes, woh us din college main jo kick maari thi... tab baki ladkiya aapko ogle kar rahi thi... I was so furious... but ghar jaake socha man main, khush hui ki yeh hottie meraa hai... aur aapki woh piercing ankhe, make me melt... woh mehendi ke din, kaise dekh rahe the aap mujhe.. I so wished you hugged me... and never let me go

Dev pulls her by the waist.. picks her up as Vidhi is left no choice but to wrap her legs around him... he puts her down on the study table.... moves all the stuff away... takes his shirt off and goes in for big and deep, long kiss... they make love to each other in unison, moving in tandem with each other,  in a rhythm like a beautifully choreographed  mis-en-scene! 

Lovely 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍 . I am glad that you read my OS and give an extension to it.. Mujhse aise likha nahi paata , I am very weak in portraying some steamy scenes. I prefer writing simple Hindi dialogues because mujhe wahi aati hein. Thank you so much Helios for writing this piece. Too good to read. Please write an OS when you gets time. 

Yeh khatam ho gaya . Aage kuch likh nahi paa rahi thi toh isi ke saath OS bana lee. Thank you for reading 

Thank you so much Shinika. I want Vidhi should take a bold stand this time . It was heart breaking to watch Jai taking Vidhi to that car . How can he interfere in her family time ? Aage kaa part nahi ho paa Raha hein mujhse. Aur mein likhungi toh bhi aapki tarah utni romantic likh nahi pawungi yaar.

Originally posted by: Revutty

Lovely 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍 . I am glad that you read my OS and give an extension to it.. Mujhse aise likha nahi paata , I am very weak in portraying some steamy scenes. I prefer writing simple Hindi dialogues because mujhe wahi aati hein. Thank you so much Helios for writing this piece. Too good to read. Please write an OS when you gets time. 

This is how far I can go as well.. steamy scenes apne hadh ke bahar hai 🤣also, this is the first time I wrote something like this. 

I am glad you liked it! 

Can I merge our write-ups, will be a well rounded piece. You don't need to credit me. 

Originally posted by: Helios10

This is how far I can go as well.. steamy scenes apne hadh ke bahar hai 🤣also, this is the first time I wrote something like this. 

I am glad you liked it! 

Can I merge our write-ups, will be a well rounded piece. You don't need to credit me. 

I feels so honoured that you came up with this thought... Mera toh bahut atrangi type ke hein .....I struggle with words very much. Aapki apni unique style hein and mere mein aise intense things joh bahut sahi tareeke se English mein baaki authors describe karte hein woh karne kee zero talent hein mujh mein. Aapki writings merge karne ke liye mujhse behtar authors hein . May be they can help you . Aur ahi baat emotions kee toh bhi har baar joh mujhe uss waqt dil mein aati hein mein wahi likhti hun....Zyada uss mein work bhi nahi karti.. Isliye aksar mistakes hone kee possibilities zyada hein.... Toh pata nahi kaise dikhega jab merge karke hoga. Aur aapko credit naa dun, yeh kaise hoga yaar? Aapki talent hein, aapki writing hein agar by chance maine kuch lee toh definitely aapko whole credits dungi .. ..Aap mujhe kaabil samjhe mere liye wahin kaafi hein. You can try asking to Monkish, Shinika, Chaostud, Srj9, loving 2missing2, LadyGaga 123.They are extremely talented and writes far better than me. Sorry if I said anything wrong. 

Originally posted by: Loving2Missing2

Bahot hi jyada khubsoorat likha hai tumne. Wonderful convo between ViDev....... N for me the best part was that she told Dev that Jai was talking bad and she slapped him.👏 Vidhi aisa sach mein kare to main 🤪 Vidhi ko cheer karungi 

Lekin pehale tumhein cheer kar leti hoon👏Kaise tum aise khataara track ko lekar itna khubsoorat bana deti ho aur baraabar uss nightie pe laati ho, jo ek baar dekhkar hum sab ke dilo mein bas gayee lekin baad mein kabhi dikhane mili hi nahi..... Voh ab sapne mein milati hai jo tumhare OS padhaneke baad aate hain

Mujhe woh car promo dekhke gussa aayi..Aur woh BTS dekhke Dev ke liye dukh huwa jab Vidhi raat ko late aayi aur Dev bhooke peth chair mein thake huye so Gaye. Phir mujhe laga kee shayad kuch emotional saa scene milega, kuch intense conversation hoga..Par wahan pe bhi kuch nahi huwa . Official matter keh rahi thi Vidhi. Phir phone mein lag gayi..Dev se baatein ho nahi paa rahi thi. Aur Dev bhi kaise khade the kuch personal baatein nahin kar rahe the..Woh scene kaa execution mujhe accha nahi laga..Toh Mujhe  yeh khayal aaya kee donon ko baat karne hein iss baare mein..Mujhe woh Vidhi pasand thi jab Dev ko conference room se jaane se rok rahi thi yeh kehte huye kee aapko hi aapke Bhai par vishwas nahin..Woh Vidhi joh masoom hein, par kamzor nahin..Baat jab mudde ki aati hein toh woh himmat se kehti hein .....Woh adda pehachanne mein abki writers peeche mud rahe hein. Aisa mujhe laga pata nahi kitne log iss baat pe agree karenge ? Toh socha kee inke beech conversation kaise dikha sakte hain? Phir aise hi yeh OS ban gayi..Nighty phir se aayi , abb kya hein kee uska kabhi toh istemal honi chahiye. Makers woh bhi dikhate nahin.... Mujhe toh uss nighty mein khoob saare romance dikhe..Kaagaz, Cabin, Chai, Pyaas aise kitni choti choti Cheezein hein NUKSH mein joh ViDev ke pyaar ki silent witness hein..... Shayad isliye phir se Nighty aayi. 

Thank you for reading ☺️

Thank you so much 

Originally posted by: Revutty

I feels so honoured that you came up with this thought... Mera toh bahut atrangi type ke hein .....I struggle with words very much. Aapki apni unique style hein and mere mein aise intense things joh bahut sahi tareeke se English mein baaki authors describe karte hein woh karne kee zero talent hein mujh mein. Aapki writings merge karne ke liye mujhse behtar authors hein . May be they can help you . Aur ahi baat emotions kee toh bhi har baar joh mujhe uss waqt dil mein aati hein mein wahi likhti hun....Zyada uss mein work bhi nahi karti.. Isliye aksar mistakes hone kee possibilities zyada hein.... Toh pata nahi kaise dikhega jab merge karke hoga. Aur aapko credit naa dun, yeh kaise hoga yaar? Aapki talent hein, aapki writing hein agar by chance maine kuch lee toh definitely aapko whole credits dungi .. ..Aap mujhe kaabil samjhe mere liye wahin kaafi hein. You can try asking to Monkish, Shinika, Chaostud, Srj9, loving 2missing2, LadyGaga 123.They are extremely talented and writes far better than me. Sorry if I said anything wrong. 

Aree.. it's totally fine. 

I am not looking for a collaboration at all, just that ye aapke write up se inspired tha, toh I reached out. You write really well. Keep up the good work. 

Please read and drop your views 🙏

So beautifully written,a much needed nd beautiful convo between ViDev.Loved it❤️