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Beautiful and Emotional OS


Geet at present is taking care of her son 

while always chanting to her Maan in silent to hold onto her 

Geet single handed grew her son alone while Maan always waited

for Geet

he was actually planning to marry her after his business trip but his sister

made sure that Geet disappears from all their lives especially Maan's

fate played and Geet had to model the ramp where both Geet and Maan

see each other 

another great aspect was Maan never doubted Advay is his son 

even telling his correct age 

finally Maan taking Geet and his son home and finding out his sister 

is the cause of his Geet disappearing from his life .

Posted: 3 months ago

emotional n beautiful story

geet dreaming n feeling maan around her whenever she is in trouble

maan also missing geet n trying his best to find her 

maan's sister  herself open secret of geet being away from maan's life

maan has no doubte about advay as his son with his perfect age

love wins finally  

Posted: 3 months ago

Congrats on the OS! 

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Beautiful OS... fabulously written

those words "hold on to me...." takes Geet back to her past

sad that she managing everything alone

alas she cannot accept that he is not there with her

so Geet is a single mom

admire how she handled everything 

but its indeed tough

she asked Maan to hold on to her and give her strength

well she saw Maan at a grocery store but thinks its her imagination

hmm that Maan felt that Geet was there

liked that he has not forgotten Geet

pleased that he knows that she is waiting and asking him to hold on to her

their connection is surreal

at least he refused to meet Sameera

hate Ruchi

angry that she sent Geet away and lied to Maan

good that Ruchi's husband shouted her

upset that she ruined Maan and Geet's lives

thanks to her Advay grew up without a dad's love

finally Maan and Geet meet

the world certainly stopped for them

of cos Geet ran away

as expected Maan went after her

Geet's restlessness was justified

wonderful that he is at her Geet's place

emotional moments.... 

her feelings well portrayed

nice that he assures her that he is there for her

though she denied that Advay was his, he knew better

Maan's anger seeing how she suffered was reasonable

upset that Maan missed out on his son's life

now they are together

loved that he wants to introduce his wife and son to the world

Ruchi was taken aback

Gosh she blurted out what she did

dismayed what she did to Maan and Geet

great that Maan knows the truth 

glad that Maan warned Ruchi and put her in her place

Geet's thoughts are understandable

Geet wants Maan to hold on to her

aww Maan will never let Geet go and will hold on to her

Edited by khwaishfan - 3 months ago
Posted: 3 months ago

Beautiful os 

All emotions beautifully written 

Posted: 3 months ago
Originally posted by taahir004


Beautiful and Emotional OS


Geet at present is taking care of her son 

while always chanting to her Maan in silent to hold onto her 

Geet single handed grew her son alone while Maan always waited

for Geet

he was actually planning to marry her after his business trip but his sister

made sure that Geet disappears from all their lives especially Maan's

fate played and Geet had to model the ramp where both Geet and Maan

see each other 

another great aspect was Maan never doubted Advay is his son 

even telling his correct age 

finally Maan taking Geet and his son home and finding out his sister 

is the cause of his Geet disappearing from his life .

thank- you so much for your wonderful words. smiley31
smiley27for wonderful review 

Posted: 3 months ago
Originally posted by aparna3011


emotional n beautiful story

geet dreaming n feeling maan around her whenever she is in trouble

maan also missing geet n trying his best to find her 

maan's sister  herself open secret of geet being away from maan's life

maan has no doubte about advay as his son with his perfect age

love wins finally  

thanks for always commenting smiley27
yeah love wins..in Maaneet world love always wins for mesmiley36


Geet Hui Sabse Parayi 


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