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Bepanah Ishq...Limitless love...VaNi,Dev Nalini,Ranveer-Ruhi(KK-Jenni)

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Bepanah Ishq...Limitless love...Part 1

 I dedicate this SS to TiffanyVaychilingum who wants an angry boy sweet girl story on Karan Kundra-Jennifer.Like she wished I included parents and brothers who pamper her a lot.I dedicate this SS to Salley145 who wants me to include Dev Nalini in this story.I dedicate this to her again as she wants me to include Dev Alia childhood scenes.Thanks for Dev Alia childhood edits Salley.Thanks Salley for suggesting the movie Ajab prem ki ghazab kahani for Saransh Alia.I have taken only the main idea of this movie for SaraLia.


A beautiful girl was shown sleeping on the bed covering herself with a sheet.


 

A lady came and opened the windows which let the sun rays fall on the girl's face.
She murmured :Maa...why did you open the window?Let me sleep.
She:Sleep?It's morning now.Very late.Now wake up.
Girl:No way.
She:Then see what I am going to do.
She sprinkled water on the girl's face.She woke up:Maa...what did you do?
She giggled:Finally my Princess Ruhi has woken up.
A smile appeared on Ruhi's face.
RUHI:Maa..you are naughty...

She:My naughty Ruhi's mother has to be naughty.Right?


They both laughed.

Itti si khushi
Itta sa tukda chand ka
Khwabon ke tinkon se
Chal banayeinn aashiyaan



Ruhi pulled her mother's cheeks:My cute Maa.
Her mother smiled.

Itti si hansi
Itti si khushi
Itta sa tukda chand ka
Khwabon ke tinkon se
Chal banayeinn aashiyaan



She is Preesha Khurana.
Ruhi’s elder brother Saransh came with brush and paste:My sweety..brush your teeth.


Ruhi:Bhaiyya...
Saransh:Open your mouth.
She opened her mouth.
Saransh brushed her teeth.



Dabe dabe paaon se
Aaye haule haule zindagi
Hothon pe kundi chadha ke
Hum taale laga ke chal
Gumsum tarane chupke chupke gaayein
Aadhi aadhi baant le
Aaja dil ki ye zameen
Thoda sa tera sa hoga
Thoda mera bhi hoga apna ye aashiyan

 

 


Ruhi’s younger brother Dev came and said:The tea is ready.



Ruhi:Thank you my dear Dev.


Dev made Ruhi drink tea with his hands.



Itti si hansi
Itti si khushi
Itta sa tukda chand ka
Khwabon ke tinkon se
Chal banayeinn aashiyan

 



After taking bath Ruhi returned to the room.

Then came Ruhi's father..Rudraksh Khurana.
Rudraksh:Hey Ruhi..see what this is?Break fast for my princess.

 

Ruhi:Papa..you too?

Rudraksh smiled and started feeding her food.Ruhi also fed him back.

 





Naa ho chaar deewarein
Phir bhi jharokhe khule
Baadalon ke ho parde
Shaakhi hari pankha jhale
Naa ho koi takraarein
Are masti thahaake chale
Pyaar ke sikkon se
mahine ka kharcha chale



They all had cute family moments tickling each other...chasing each other and enjoyed.

Dabe dabe paaon se

Aaye haule haule zindagi
Hothon pe kundi chadha ke
Hum taale laga ke chal
Gumsum tarane chupke chupke gaayein
Aadhi aadhi baant le
Aaja dil ki ye zameen
Thoda sa tera sa hoga
Thoda mera bhi hoga apna ye Aashiyan

F)Itti si hansi
Itti si khushi
Itta sa tukda chand ka
Khwabon ke tinkon se
Chal banayeinn Aashiyan

M)Itti si hansi
Itti si khushi
Itta sa tukda chand ka
Khwabon ke tinkon se
Chal banayeinn Aashiyan(Barfi).




Ruhi in her office...

A staff called Ruhi:Ruhi Madam...Boss is calling you.

Ruhi got tensed.

Ruhi:Why is he calling me now?

Ruhi entered the cabin of her boss.

Her boss stared at her.

Ruhi:Ranveer Sir!Did you call me?

Ranveer:If not you,who should I call?I can't call an outsider.Right?

Ruhi thought:I just asked him whether he called me.But for that he is talking too much.

Ruhi:Sir,why did you call me?

Ranveer:How dare you ask me why I called you?

Ruhi said in her mind:Oh no...this guy's temper!

Ruhi:Sir...I did'nt mean it...I ...I just wanted to know why you called me.Is there anything important?

Ranveer:What do you mean by whether anything important is there?For me,everything in this office is important.Because this is my office.

Ruhi:I know that Sir.So I wanted to know for what important work you called me.So that I can do it with justice.

Ranveer:Justice?What justice?Are you doing your work with sincerity?

Ruhi:Yes Sir...I am doing my work with 100 percent sincerity.

Ranveer threw some papers at Ruhi.

Ranveer:What kind of designs have you made?Horrible designs!

Ruhi became upset.

Ruhi:Are these designs not good Sir?

Ranveer:No.These designs are utter flop.If we release jewellery of these designs,no one will buy it.

Ruhi got hurt.

Ranveer:Better make good designs.Otherwise you will be fired.

Ruhi felt sad.

Ruhi:Ok Sir.I will make new designs.

Ruhi left the room.

Ruhi:How will I make new designs?I am not getting any ideas now.Oh God!

Ruhi took papers and thought a lot.

Ruhi remembered her childhood moment.



Flash back...

Ruhi took a paper

 and drew a necklace.

Later she went near Preesha and showed it to her.

Ruhi:Mumma...see this.I drew a necklace for you.

Preesha looked at the design.She caressed her face and said:Wow Ruhi...It looks so beautiful.

Ruhi smiled.

Rudraksh came.

Ruhi:Papa,I drew a necklace for mumma.I want mumma to wear this type of a necklace.But I don't know how to get this necklace for mumma.

Rudraksh:Ruhi beta...when you become big you become a jewellery designer.That time you make this type of a necklace for your mumma.

Ruhi:Ok papa.

Rudraksh and Preesha hugged her.



Present....

Ruhi thought:I made some more cute designs in childhood.But those designs were ignored.But I can't draw them again and show it to Ranveer Sir.He may say that my designs are childish.I will make a jewellery design with the mix of those designs.

Ruhi drew a few designs which were a mix of her childhood designs.

Ruhi submitted her designs to Ranveer.

Ranveer looked at the designs.

Ruhi was so scared that she did not look at his face.

She thought:Now the bomb will blast.

Ranveer looked at her.

Ranveer:These designs are quite good.

Ruhi was relived.

Ruhi:Thank you Sir.

Suddenly he raised his voice:But if you again make those type of designs you will be fired.You got it?

Ruhi nodded fearfully.

Ranveer:Now just get out and continue with your work.

Ruhi left the room with a scared face.

She thought:Even if he gives a compliment,the next moment he will shout.What kind of person is he!



Saransh went to a movie theatre.

Saransh looked around to see someone.

Saransh:Where is Alia?

Alia came from behind:I am here Saransh.

Saransh looked at her and smiled.

Saransh:Where were you standing?I was searching for you.

Alia:I was here only.But because of the crowd,you could not find me.

Saransh:Ya.Did you get tickets?

Alia:Luckily I got tickets.Now it’s housefull.

Saransh:Thank God!You came here on time.

Alia:I have to reach here on time.Because you are always late.

Saransh got embarrassed.

Alia:Come..let’s go inside as the movie will start now.

Saransh:Ya.

They went inside to watch the movie.

 

After some time…

Saransh got bored.Saransh looked at Alia who was watching the movie.

Saransh:Such a boring movie it is Alia!I am going to sleep.

Alia:We paid money to watch this movie and you are saying that you are going to sleep?Don’t waste money.So shut up and watch the movie.

Saransh showed her a puppy face.

Saransh:Oh no…

 

After some time Saransh could not bear it anymore and slept on Alia’s shoulder.

Alia:This Saransh…!

Slowly Alia also fell asleep.

When the movie got over,hearing the footsteps of the people going out,they both woke up.

They were embarrassed.They went out and sat inside the car.

Saransh started driving.

Alia:You slept off fast.

Saransh said with a smile:You ordered me not to sleep.But you yourself slept.

Alia giggled.

Alia:What to do?I lost my control.

They both burst into laughter.







Dev was thinking of someone with a sad face.

Suddenly someone came near him and asked:Are you thinking of Nalini?

Dev was stunned.

Dev:Alia didi...how come you are here?

Alia:I am your brother's best friend since childhood.I can be expected here at any time.

Dev smiled.

Alia:Dev...tell me.You are thinking of Nalini.Right?

Dev:How did you understand it?

Alia:Since childhood we are sharing a sibling bond.We both are like brother and sister.Right?Then won't I understand what's going on in your mind?

Dev smiled.

Dev and Alia remembered their childhood moment.





Flash back....





Dev and Alia used to have a lot of fun in childhood.



Once Alia got cut up with Dev for not telling her about winning the foot ball match.

Alia:You won the match.But you did not bother to inform me.From Saransh only I came to know that.

Dev became sad.

Dev:Sorry Alia didi.After the match I was very tired.That's why I could not inform you.Please don't stop talking to me.

Alia smiled:Don't worry Dev.Can I stop talking to my dearest brother?

Alia pulled his cheeks cutely.

Dev smiled.





Present....



Alia:You are missing Nalini.Right?

Dev:I miss her very much.She is not coming to college after her scooter accident.She fell off the scooter and her hand got fractured.I don't know how she is.

Alia:You didn't ring her up?

Dev:I tried calling her.But as usual she is indifferent.Will she ever reciprocate to my feelings?

Alia patted his shoulder and said:Relax.Don't over think.You are so cute that she cannot resist for long.

Dev blushed.











Nalini was in her room.Her mother Revathi went near her.

Revathi:There is a happy news.Your dad is coming back today after his long business tour.

Nalini smiled slightly.



After some time Revathi's husband Rakesh reached home.

Rakesh:Where is Nalini?

Revathi:You want to know only about your daughter and not me?

Rakesh smiled caressing her shoulder. 

Rakesh:You are not less than my daughter Revathi.But I am worried about her health.When I was not here,she had accident and she had fracture.

Revathi:Don't worry Rakesh.Nalini is getting better now.Her bandage will be removed soon.






Rakesh:That's a relief.







Revathi took Rakesh to Nalini's room.

Rakesh smiled:I am back beta.

Nalini gave him a weak smile.

Rakesh:How are you feeling now?

Nalini:I am feeling better now.

Rakesh:I was not here for a long time.So I couldn't take care of mu daughter.From now onwards I will take care of you.

Nalini:No need dad.I am actually alright now.You take rest.You travelled a lot.Right?










Rakesh:Are you sure?

Nalini:Yes dad.

Revathi:Nalini is right Rakesh.You take rest.

Rakesh:Ok.Take care Nalini beta.

Nalini nodded.

Rakesh and Revathi went out of the room.Nalini closed the door.


Edited by jasminerahul - 1 years ago
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Posted: 1 years ago

Wow so Jenni plays Ruhi here, the waking up scene and Preesha, Saransh and Dev pampering Ruhi was cute. Hey wait, a similar ff was written by you earlier, right? It was RiKara ff where Gauri had alzheimers? Right? Ruhi Ranveer scene made me remind of kk’s old serial Kitani Mohabbat Hai. Ruhi’s childhood moment with RuSha was cute. Ranveer is really an angry young man 😂 first he compliments and the next moment he blasts. Alia saying Saransh is always late was funny. Earlier u said Anika’s face shape doesn’t matches Alia, so then how did you decide to take her here? Both sleeping over each other’s shoulder was cute, hilarious and romantic. Dev calling Alia didi sounded so funny, hahahah. Dev Alia fb scene was so cute, reminds me even Namita Dubey had great bonding with Dev in Bade bhaiya ki dulhaniya, Alia Dev both have same bonding like that. Shocked that Nalini had her hand fractured and ignores Dev’s calls. Alia complimenting Dev was nice. Rakesh Revati are Nalini’s parents, that’s hilarious, can’t stop laughing thinking of the scene in yhc, where Rakesh was Nalini’s boyfriend and Revati her sautan. Why does Nalini look so sad? Waiting for next, perfect pics.

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Thanks a lot.

Yes,the 1st scene was inspired from my RiKara SS Saathiya.

I have not seen KMH.Were the leads angry boss and employee there?

U got me wrong.I told you that Surbhi Chandana and Nakul do not suit Dev and Nalini's roles as their faces are not round.I had suggested you SC as Alia.But you said her eyes do not match little Alia's.

Ha ha.During that track in YHC I wondered how Nalini had affair with an old man like Rakesh.They look like father daughter only😆


Originally posted by: salley145

Wow so Jenni plays Ruhi here, the waking up scene and Preesha, Saransh and Dev pampering Ruhi was cute. Hey wait, a similar ff was written by you earlier, right? It was RiKara ff where Gauri had alzheimers? Right? Ruhi Ranveer scene made me remind of kk’s old serial Kitani Mohabbat Hai. Ruhi’s childhood moment with RuSha was cute. Ranveer is really an angry young man 😂 first he compliments and the next moment he blasts. Alia saying Saransh is always late was funny. Earlier u said Anika’s face shape doesn’t matches Alia, so then how did you decide to take her here? Both sleeping over each other’s shoulder was cute, hilarious and romantic. Dev calling Alia didi sounded so funny, hahahah. Dev Alia fb scene was so cute, reminds me even Namita Dubey had great bonding with Dev in Bade bhaiya ki dulhaniya, Alia Dev both have same bonding like that. Shocked that Nalini had her hand fractured and ignores Dev’s calls. Alia complimenting Dev was nice. Rakesh Revati are Nalini’s parents, that’s hilarious, can’t stop laughing thinking of the scene in yhc, where Rakesh was Nalini’s boyfriend and Revati her sautan. Why does Nalini look so sad? Waiting for next, perfect pics.

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Posted: 1 years ago

Ruhi is the pampered princess of her family.

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Posted: 1 years ago

Loved it dear

Awesome and beautiful start 🤗

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon 😊

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Posted: 1 years ago

One brother to brush her teeth, one to bring her tea. Ruhi has it all.

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Yes it was like that in kmh

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Ruhi has one hell of an angry boss. Hard to please and rude and angry on top.

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Alia has a lovely bond with the family too. Whats up with Nalini?