ViDev ka DARD-E-DIL; ViDev;OS

Posted: 1 years ago

Dev saw a nightmare about vidhi and thought to go and check on her. He just took his hoody out and got ready and about to go out of the house.

Kya ho raha hai yaha. He heard his ma asking him.

Dev: ma, mein mein jog ke liye jaa raha tha.

Satya: jogging .. ja ja par iss bath ka Dyan rakhna ki kahi kutte bhi tumhare sath jog pe na aaye..

Dev: kya ma, main har roj jatha Hu na yeh pehli baar thodi na hain..

Satya: oh !!! mujhe yeh bath patha nahi hai tum roj raat ko 12 baje jog karne jathe ho. And she can’t control to facade seriousness and laughed hard.

Dev facepalmed himself and laughed too.

Satya: jao jao aaj se aadat dalungi tumhare mid night jog se pehle sone ki.

Dev:ma aap bhi mujhe chida rahi hai pehle vo abhi mujhe tease kar raha hai mera bada bhai banke.

Satya: main tumhare liye bahut khush Hu dev .

Jao par dhanse jana our jaldi aana 

our ek baat vidhi ko jyada pareshan mat karna kahi sasur ji ko patha na chale.

She laughed hard and escaped from there.

Dev got embarrassed and finally laughed with whole heartedly.

He know now he can’t take his car . So he went by an auto near to her mohalla and from there he started to walk.

He entered in her gali where mandir is there and sighed by seeing the empty gali and tried to find his luck. He just praying ki milapini ma BAs vidhi ka ek jhalak dikhado main samajh jaunga ki ham sahi raste pe hai our aap hamare saath hain. He just opened his eyes and turned his head to balcony there he saw an angelic face shining under moon light and adoring the bright full moon. His eyes sparkled and his face lit up and a wide relaxing smile came on to his lips.he just thanked milapini ma for giving blessings to their relationship and smiled with determination to fight for their relationship which may come in their way.

He adored his moon adoring the full moon on full moon night. 

Her face is glowing under the moon light and her eyes are looking dreamy that she is visualising something close to her heart. But the next what he saw broke his heart . Her dried tear marks ,week ness and tiredness of her body made him restless. First he thought to go from there when he saw her adoring moon dreamily. But now he can’t go without meeting her.he has to meet her and assure her that everything will be fine soon and he is with her in every step of their fight for their relationship.

He just saw the surroundings and felt no body noticing he climbed the pipe and reached the balcony where she is standing and watching moon.

He went near to her and stood in some distance and whishpered Vidhi. Not getting any response he slowly called her again and this time she heard the noise and turned to him.

Vidhi: shocked by seeing him in her house and bend her face down.

Dev just looked plainly and asked soyi nahi abtak. Theek tho ho. He tried to touch but stopped after seeing her hesitation.

She just nodded her head and about to go from there. He just holded her wrist and said suno na …she stood there but looking down. 

He smiled faintly and said main samajh sakta Hu vidhi papa ne mana kiya hoga mujhse milne ki our bath karne ki haina…

Her eyes got welled up but didn’t dared to look into his painful eyes.

He stood like that for some seconds and said  patha nahi vidhi aage kya hoga par jo bhi ho ek baath samajh lo ki  jo bhi ho tum iss ladai me akele nahi ho main Hu tumhare saath. Har mushkil ghadi me main tumhara sath dunga bas yeh yaad rakhna.

Chalta Hu  and he about to go and remembered her wrist is in hold and just rubbed her palm with his thumb to assure her. 

When his thumb touched her Palm she tried to control her hiss cause of the sudden pain shoots in her palm but it came as whisper.

She about to go but already it happened which she didn’t want to..

He heard her hiss and got confused and held her hand gently and opened her palm and his vision got blurred with his clouded teary eyes. He just blinked his eyes with pain and the two tear drops fell on her palm .

Vidhi felt her pain got soothed away and wound started to heal.

Dev gulped with pain and asked her kyon Kia tumne aisa… vidhi .. kuch to bolo kyon… he can’t able to talk further .he felt like his words is not coming out because of the pain he is feeling by seeing her in pain.

Vidhi…. He just whispered..

Vidhi:main theek Hu sir .. kuch nahi hua hai mujhe.. aap jayiye bahut raat ho chuki hai.. said still looking down .

He held her chin and lifted her head and seeing in to her eyes asked ab batao … bahut dard hua hoga na..

Vidhi: smiled faintly and pointed his heart and said aapka dil ka dard ka kya hai sir.. aaj meri vajah se aapko ithna kuch sehna pada.. mujhe pata hain aap apni puri jindagi aapki papa ki naam roshan karne me lag gaye hai. Iske liye bahut mehnat kiya hai aapne . Par aaj ek jhatke se aapki khaandaan ka naam jhuk gaya . Meri vajah se..

Dev: Vidhi…

Vidhi: aaj tak sab log aapko ithna ijjat dete the, media , friends, business partners.. office staff par aaj sab log aapke baare me kya kya rai banaya hoga main soch bhi nahi Sakthi sir.. sirf mere vajah se..

Dev: nahi.. vidhi..

Vidhi: aapki chehre ke daag ko aapne saaf Kia par aapki dil me jo daag lag gaya na aap usko mita sakte hain.. boliye .. mujhe pata hai.. bahut dard ho raha hai na.. aapki puri jindagi ka mehnat aaj meri vajah se barbaad hogaya..

Meri vajah se.. sir .. iss saari fasat ka jhad main Hu.. sirf main..

Dev: Vidhi .. mere bath suno.. tumne jo kuch bola sab sach hai sivay ek baath ki. Inn sab se mujhe thoda dard ho raha hai par tumhare vajah se  nahi. Jo kuch bhi hua haina isme tum akele nahi ho ham donon ka barabar ka hissa hain.our hamne koi galati nahi kiya hai.

Maine bola na mujhe ab kisi bhi baath se koi farak nahi padta hai. Bas tujhe iss dard se bachane keliye main tumhe khud se door rakhna chahta tha.. kyonki main tumhe aisa dard me nahi dekh sakta our tumhari khushiyan aise nahi cheen sakta. Par ab baath bahut bigad gayi hain . Ab iss mushkil ghadi me main tumhe akela nahi chod sakta. Chahe tumhare parivar mujhe tumse milne de ya nahi par ek bath yaad rakhna main har pal tumhara sath Hu . Koi bhi problem aaye tumhe akele samna nahi karne dunga main Hu tumhare sath. aaj ke baad jo bhi ho kuch bhi …tumhare akela ka nahi apman ho dard ho kushi ho ladayi ho kuch bhi ho bas hamara hain hamara donon ka kisi akela ka nahi..maine hi tumse kaha ki hamara rishte ka koi future nahi hai.koi ummed mat rakhna. Par ab main vaada karta Hu ki hamara future jo bhi ho ham donon milakar ye ladayi ladenge our jeetengi bhi.kyonki hamne koyi galti nahi kiya hai our pyar karna koi guna nahi hai.

Par tumne aaj jo bhi kiya usko dobara repeat Kia na ..pata nahi main kya kar baithunga..

Vidhi: sir.. abhi aapne kaha na sab kuch hamara dono ka hai . Tho iss dard me main aapko akela kaise chod sakta Hu. Jaisa apne iss puri duniya ke saamne mere ijjat bachane keliye aapki dil ko jalne dia na jan buchkar ..bas aise hi main bhi milapini maa ke saamne meri haat our dil dono jalne dia. Kyon ki  main aapko dard me nahi dekh sakti Hu Aapka dard ko chahkar bhi mita nahi sakta isiliye aapki dard me thoda hissa maine bhi leliya jaisa aap har baar mere dard me mere sath nahi choda.. jaise aap hospital me mere sath dene keliye sab ki bathe chup chap sunlia mere ma aapko kitna insult Kia par aap fir bhi mera sath nahi choda..

Dev: nahi chod sakta vidhi .. kyonki main tumse pyar karta Hu our ab tum mera jindagi bangayi ho..

Vidhi: our aap meri jindagi…

Dev hold her hands very gently and said kal ham milengi ya nahi ye to nahi pata hai par ham dil se ek hai. Bas yeh yaad rakhna . Tumhe himmat rakhna hoga khud ke liye our apni family keliye. Yeh bahut lambi ladayi hain vidhi aise bhavanaon me aakar khud ko kamjor mat banao. Hamara pyar hamara takat hai  kamjori nahi..

Main chalta Hu bahut raat ho chuki hai.tumhari parents hame aise dekh Lia tho uski pareshani our badhega. Maa baap jyada din bachon se naraz nahi raha sakte hai. Tumhe unhe manana hoga. Ye yakeen dilana hoga ki tum uski beti ho koi galati nahi kar sakte ho..tumhe tutna nahi hain . Sar uthake jeena hai.mujhse promise karo khudka our apni parivaar ka dyan rakhogi.

She smiled and assured with her eyes.

He released her hands and just traced her wound gently with his fingers and said theek hai phir jao.. jao apply the ointment.. bhulna math..

He waved his hand and went from there while praying milapini maa to meet them again soon.

Vidhi went to her room and slept….




guilt stricken ,heavy hearted and teared up broken Bimla came from hide out and took the ointment and went to Vidhi room to treat her daughters wound .

SHINIKA 

Posted: 1 years ago

Very beautiful yrr show mein bhi kaash ye kuch aisa dikhaye to mzaa aajaye but show walo ko to maut hi pd jati hai jb videv scene dikhane hoto

Bht dard se bhra tha but tumne bht shi se isko present kia👍🏼

Ab kuch romance se bhraa os bhi likhna taki weekend mein sb khush ho jaye😆

Posted: 1 years ago

Wow... Kaash serial mein bhi aisa kuch hota... Unhone to scene hi kharab kr diya... But aapne bahut acha likha hai.. 

Posted: 1 years ago

Originally posted by Shinika


Dev saw a nightmare about vidhi and thought to go and check on her. He just took his hoody out and got ready and about to go out of the house.

Kya ho raha hai yaha. He heard his ma asking him.

Dev: ma, mein mein jog ke liye jaa raha tha.

Satya: jogging .. ja ja par iss bath ka Dyan rakhna ki kahi kutte bhi tumhare sath jog pe na aaye..

Dev: kya ma, main har roj jatha Hu na yeh pehli baar thodi na hain..

Satya: oh !!! mujhe yeh bath patha nahi hai tum roj raat ko 12 baje jog karne jathe ho. And she can’t control to facade seriousness and laughed hard.

Dev facepalmed himself and laughed too.

Satya: jao jao aaj se aadat dalungi tumhare mid night jog se pehle sone ki.

Dev:ma aap bhi mujhe chida rahi hai pehle vo abhi mujhe tease kar raha hai mera bada bhai banke.

Satya: main tumhare liye bahut khush Hu dev .

Jao par dhanse jana our jaldi aana 

our ek baat vidhi ko jyada pareshan mat karna kahi sasur ji ko patha na chale.

She laughed hard and escaped from there.

Dev got embarrassed and finally laughed with whole heartedly.

He know now he can’t take his car . So he went by an auto near to her mohalla and from there he started to walk.

He entered in her gali where mandir is there and sighed by seeing the empty gali and tried to find his luck. He just praying ki milapini ma BAs vidhi ka ek jhalak dikhado main samajh jaunga ki ham sahi raste pe hai our aap hamare saath hain. He just opened his eyes and turned his head to balcony there he saw an angelic face shining under moon light and adoring the bright full moon. His eyes sparkled and his face lit up and a wide relaxing smile came on to his lips.he just thanked milapini ma for giving blessings to their relationship and smiled with determination to fight for their relationship which may come in their way.

He adored his moon adoring the full moon on full moon night. 

Her face is glowing under the moon light and her eyes are looking dreamy that she is visualising something close to her heart. But the next what he saw broke his heart . Her dried tear marks ,week ness and tiredness of her body made him restless. First he thought to go from there when he saw her adoring moon dreamily. But now he can’t go without meeting her.he has to meet her and assure her that everything will be fine soon and he is with her in every step of their fight for their relationship.

He just saw the surroundings and felt no body noticing he climbed the pipe and reached the balcony where she is standing and watching moon.

He went near to her and stood in some distance and whishpered Vidhi. Not getting any response he slowly called her again and this time she heard the noise and turned to him.

Vidhi: shocked by seeing him in her house and bend her face down.

Dev just looked plainly and asked soyi nahi abtak. Theek tho ho. He tried to touch but stopped after seeing her hesitation.

She just nodded her head and about to go from there. He just holded her wrist and said suno na …she stood there but looking down. 

He smiled faintly and said main samajh sakta Hu vidhi papa ne mana kiya hoga mujhse milne ki our bath karne ki haina…

Her eyes got welled up but didn’t dared to look into his painful eyes.

He stood like that for some seconds and said  patha nahi vidhi aage kya hoga par jo bhi ho ek baath samajh lo ki  jo bhi ho tum iss ladai me akele nahi ho main Hu tumhare saath. Har mushkil ghadi me main tumhara sath dunga bas yeh yaad rakhna.

Chalta Hu  and he about to go and remembered her wrist is in hold and just rubbed her palm with his thumb to assure her. 

When his thumb touched her Palm she tried to control her hiss cause of the sudden pain shoots in her palm but it came as whisper.

She about to go but already it happened which she didn’t want to..

He heard her hiss and got confused and held her hand gently and opened her palm and his vision got blurred with his clouded teary eyes. He just blinked his eyes with pain and the two tear drops fell on her palm .

Vidhi felt her pain got soothed away and wound started to heal.

Dev gulped with pain and asked her kyon Kia tumne aisa… vidhi .. kuch to bolo kyon… he can’t able to talk further .he felt like his words is not coming out because of the pain he is feeling by seeing her in pain.

Vidhi…. He just whispered..

Vidhi:main theek Hu sir .. kuch nahi hua hai mujhe.. aap jayiye bahut raat ho chuki hai.. said still looking down .

He held her chin and lifted her head and seeing in to her eyes asked ab batao … bahut dard hua hoga na..

Vidhi: smiled faintly and pointed his heart and said aapka dil ka dard ka kya hai sir.. aaj meri vajah se aapko ithna kuch sehna pada.. mujhe pata hain aap apni puri jindagi aapki papa ki naam roshan karne me lag gaye hai. Iske liye bahut mehnat kiya hai aapne . Par aaj ek jhatke se aapki khaandaan ka naam jhuk gaya . Meri vajah se..

Dev: Vidhi…

Vidhi: aaj tak sab log aapko ithna ijjat dete the, media , friends, business partners.. office staff par aaj sab log aapke baare me kya kya rai banaya hoga main soch bhi nahi Sakthi sir.. sirf mere vajah se..

Dev: nahi.. vidhi..

Vidhi: aapki chehre ke daag ko aapne saaf Kia par aapki dil me jo daag lag gaya na aap usko mita sakte hain.. boliye .. mujhe pata hai.. bahut dard ho raha hai na.. aapki puri jindagi ka mehnat aaj meri vajah se barbaad hogaya..

Meri vajah se.. sir .. iss saari fasat ka jhad main Hu.. sirf main..

Dev: Vidhi .. mere bath suno.. tumne jo kuch bola sab sach hai sivay ek baath ki. Inn sab se mujhe thoda dard ho raha hai par tumhare vajah se  nahi. Jo kuch bhi hua haina isme tum akele nahi ho ham donon ka barabar ka hissa hain.our hamne koi galati nahi kiya hai.

Maine bola na mujhe ab kisi bhi baath se koi farak nahi padta hai. Bas tujhe iss dard se bachane keliye main tumhe khud se door rakhna chahta tha.. kyonki main tumhe aisa dard me nahi dekh sakta our tumhari khushiyan aise nahi cheen sakta. Par ab baath bahut bigad gayi hain . Ab iss mushkil ghadi me main tumhe akela nahi chod sakta. Chahe tumhare parivar mujhe tumse milne de ya nahi par ek bath yaad rakhna main har pal tumhara sath Hu . Koi bhi problem aaye tumhe akele samna nahi karne dunga main Hu tumhare sath. aaj ke baad jo bhi ho kuch bhi …tumhare akela ka nahi apman ho dard ho kushi ho ladayi ho kuch bhi ho bas hamara hain hamara donon ka kisi akela ka nahi..maine hi tumse kaha ki hamara rishte ka koi future nahi hai.koi ummed mat rakhna. Par ab main vaada karta Hu ki hamara future jo bhi ho ham donon milakar ye ladayi ladenge our jeetengi bhi.kyonki hamne koyi galti nahi kiya hai our pyar karna koi guna nahi hai.

Par tumne aaj jo bhi kiya usko dobara repeat Kia na ..pata nahi main kya kar baithunga..

Vidhi: sir.. abhi aapne kaha na sab kuch hamara dono ka hai . Tho iss dard me main aapko akela kaise chod sakta Hu. Jaisa apne iss puri duniya ke saamne mere ijjat bachane keliye aapki dil ko jalne dia na jan buchkar ..bas aise hi main bhi milapini maa ke saamne meri haat our dil dono jalne dia. Kyon ki  main aapko dard me nahi dekh sakti Hu Aapka dard ko chahkar bhi mita nahi sakta isiliye aapki dard me thoda hissa maine bhi leliya jaisa aap har baar mere dard me mere sath nahi choda.. jaise aap hospital me mere sath dene keliye sab ki bathe chup chap sunlia mere ma aapko kitna insult Kia par aap fir bhi mera sath nahi choda..

Dev: nahi chod sakta vidhi .. kyonki main tumse pyar karta Hu our ab tum mera jindagi bangayi ho..

Vidhi: our aap meri jindagi…

Dev hold her hands very gently and said kal ham milengi ya nahi ye to nahi pata hai par ham dil se ek hai. Bas yeh yaad rakhna . Tumhe himmat rakhna hoga khud ke liye our apni family keliye. Yeh bahut lambi ladayi hain vidhi aise bhavanaon me aakar khud ko kamjor mat banao. Hamara pyar hamara takat hai  kamjori nahi..

Main chalta Hu bahut raat ho chuki hai.tumhari parents hame aise dekh Lia tho uski pareshani our badhega. Maa baap jyada din bachon se naraz nahi raha sakte hai. Tumhe unhe manana hoga. Ye yakeen dilana hoga ki tum uski beti ho koi galati nahi kar sakte ho..tumhe tutna nahi hain . Sar uthake jeena hai.mujhse promise karo khudka our apni parivaar ka dyan rakhogi.

She smiled and assured with her eyes.

He released her hands and just traced her wound gently with his fingers and said theek hai phir jao.. jao apply the ointment.. bhulna math..

He waved his hand and went from there while praying milapini maa to meet them again soon.

Vidhi went to her room and slept….




guilt stricken ,heavy hearted and teared up broken Bimla came from hide out and took the ointment and went to Vidhi room to treat her daughters wound .

SHINIKA 

Yaha IF pe sab kitna ache scene likhte hai, makers pata nhi kaun sa nasha karke kahani daudate rehte hai.

Posted: 1 years ago

Bade matlabi hai Aapke dev sirr, apna Matlab Nikal Liya phir HariLa ko chinta Karne lage ..


"Main chalta Hu bahut raat ho chuki hai.tumhari parents hame aise dekh Lia tho uski pareshani our badhega."

🤣


Beautiful write-up ❤️

Edited by Dreamzz - 1 years ago
Posted: 1 years ago

Dats b'ful .....wish it could have happened Par makers ko train pakadni thi 😆😆😆😆

Posted: 1 years ago

Absolutely loved it! Amazing work dear !

Posted: 1 years ago

Thank you Geeta❤️

Edited by Shinika - 1 years ago
Posted: 1 years ago

Beautiful yaar...

Show me to half minute me khatam kar diya...esa kuch to dikhana chahie tha...bande ko upar na chadate bandi ko hi niche utar dete...

Bht mast likha he...Kash ye padh lete 

Posted: 1 years ago

Thank you nany❤️

Mujhe bas vahi laga kuch our der aaram se dikha dia tho acha hota par usko kahi bhagna haina kya karthe ham hi story likh ke hamari arman puri karte hai😂



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