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Posted: 1 years ago

Devs life has been tough and he is still grieving his dad’s death. You know write good sequences and your plot line are so beautiful and emotional. 👏

Waiting for the next part

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Posted: 1 years ago

Yr vo subh wala scene to jhakaaaas tha Dev teased vidhi like srk did in ddlj🤣bs kash vo shirt khol k lipstick k nishan dikhata vidhi to faint hi ho jaati🤣

Or dono ek dusre ka ghoorna bhi notice kr rhe hain cartoons khin k or Dev ne kese ghoora hoga Vo to serial mein bhi dekh hi lia tha🤣

Jb Dev ne jhtke se vidhi ko apni trf pull kia mjhe lga ab ferse tease krega but baat vhi khtm hogyi. Tum vidhi ko Dev se zyada se zyada tease krwao bht hi hassi aati h mjhe vidhi ka bcho jesa chehra imagine krk🤣

Bht hi cute likha hai thanks for tagging me

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Posted: 1 years ago

Thanks a lot ☺️..I am missing that ghoorna badly in show. Abb toh Black Daayan and HP ke drama zyada hote hein 

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Posted: 1 years ago

Thanks a lot dear  and I have written next part 🙂. 

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Posted: 1 years ago

Dev is gentle man. Thoda thoda usko Aashiq bana raha hoon......Dekhte hein aage kya hota Hein..... Thanks a lot Parud. 

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Posted: 1 years ago

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/162060298

This is the first FF I wrote here. 

And pichle FF toh abhi abhi aap donon ne pada hein naa.

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Posted: 1 years ago

https://youtu.be/-ei5WUOvDZQ

Kanjoos boli thi Naa mujhe tum , isse dekho aur khush ho jawo 

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Posted: 1 years ago

Originally posted by: Revutty

https://youtu.be/-ei5WUOvDZQ

Kanjoos boli thi Naa mujhe tum , isse dekho aur khush ho jawo 

Yr mein aise khush nhi hone wali lalchi hoon is mamle mein abto tere ff mein dono ne confess bhi kr lia hai. Abto shirtless Dev ko vidhi ka hug bnta hi hai. Dev hadd se zyada vidhi ko tease krega tb hi mzaa ayega🤣

Phle to isne aankhe band krli thi abki bar dev janboojhkr iski ankhen khulwayega🤣

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Posted: 1 years ago

Waiting for the dhmakedaar update from ur side

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Posted: 1 years ago

Part 8

Dear Dev Sir

Aapki dil mein mere liye jagah paakar mein bahut khush hoon. Jaise aapne apne ateet ke saare panne khol dee mein bhi chahti hoon kee mein bhi aapke saamne apni zindagi se jude kuch kadwe sachai aapke saamne khol doon....Mujhe lagta hein yeh bahut zaruri hein Sir kyunki abb hum dilon se ek ho chuke hein toh humein koi bhi baat ek dusre se chupana nahi chahiye....Aapne jiss tarah Satyawati maa ke baare mein batayi ussi tarah ek kahani hamare ghar se bhi Judi hein.... Woh hein meri buwa Neeli kee kahani.... Unhein pyaar ho gaya thaa apne se bade umra waale Pratap Phoopha ji se uss dauran jab woh donon saath mein naukri karte the college mein....Neeli buwa hamare ghar kee pehli ladki thi joh ghar ke dehleez paar karke bahar shehar mein naukri karti thi.....Mere dadaji ko jaise hi pata chala toh unhone zabardasti buwa ji kee shaadi hamari biradari ke kisi ladke ke saath unki marzi ke khilaf karwane kee koshish kee... Jiss din shaadi hone waali thi ussi din  Phoopha ji mandap mein aaye aur puri biradri, rishtey naate ke saamne himmat se Buwa ji ke haath dhaam liye aur wahan se unhein leke Gaye...Phir donon ne register marriage kee....Iss baat kaa sadma mere Dadaji ko lag gaye jab saare mohalle waale ,biradri sab tarah tarah kee baatein karne lage....Mere Paapa tab 19 saal kaa thaa aur unhein bhi bahut bura laga kee unki didi ne yeh kadam udaa lee. Uss zamane mein ladkiyan agar  awaaz udayi toh uss par ungli pariwar Wale hi udate the.....Dadaji ko dil kaa daura pada aur

unhone Paapa ke saamne apni antim saans Lee..Tab se Paapa ke dil mein yeh soch ghusa kee ladkiyon ko agar ghar se dur naukri , padai ke liye bej diye jaaye toh woh haath se nikal sakti hein.....Mere maa paapa kee shaadi toh biradri ke saamne saare paramparawon ke paalan ke saath huwa....Waqt beet gaye, par Paapa kee soch nahi badle. Kahin naa kahin meri Maa ne bhi kahin baaton mein chupi saad Lee, kyunki Paapa ko samjhana bahut mushkil kaam hein....Apne sapnon ko pura karne kee khatir mein Mumbai toh aayi par mere Paapa se iske liye mujhe bahut ladne pade, maine vaada kiya tha kee mein unka vishwas kabhi nahin todungi..Tab jaake unhone mujhe ijaazat dee aur mein naukri karne yahan aa gayi....Sir aap jab akelepan mein mere dost bane the tab bilkul ghabrahat nahin thi....Par mein abb sirf dost nahi hoon uss se kahin zyada aapke liye mein maayne rakhti hun aur aap mere liye bhi....Mein yeh aapke aankhon ke saamne bhi toh bol sakti thi par shayad yeh sab bolte bolte meri aankhon mein aansu aayenge aur aapko dard hoga. ....Aapko aur dard dena mujhe bilkul accha nahi lagta,par mein kuch chupa bhi nahi sakti aapse,... Isliye yeh baatein kehne ke liye maine iss card ko sahara bana di...Chahe toh iss mein bahut see ishq kaa Alam bhar bhar ke likh sakti thi, par mein brutally honest rehna chahti hoon....Isliye joh dard dil mein dabakar rakhti thi woh likh daali kyunki Sir aap ne himmat dikhakar apne dard mere saath baante toh mein bhi wahi karungi naa ? Paapa kee nazariya iss hadh tak jaa chuke hein kee unhein khauff hein kee betiyan kab tak reh sakti hein kunwari banke ? Mein jaisi ek boch ban chuki hoon aur isliye aaye din meri shaadi kee baatein hote hain ghar pe.... Samjha samjhane thak jaati hun Sir.,...Mujhe aap pe bharosa hein aur hum milkar apne sach ko apna chuke hein, umra ke faaslon ko hata chuke hein....Aur muje pata hein kee jaise buwa ji ko register marriage karni padi waise kuch karne mein aapki bhi marzi nahi hogi..... Kyunki pariwar waalon ke aashirwad aur khushi nahi hein toh puri zindagi humein lagege kee kya shayad humne galti kee hein??? Yeh mat sochiyega kee mein peeche hat rahi hoon. Aapke saath haath milakar garv se sir uncha karke kadam milakar chalna hee hamari pyaar hein....Bas aapke saamne yeh sab batake kahin ro naa loon, isliye iss card mein yeh sab likh daali.... Darwaazon ko khatkhatate huye hum dil kee Darwaazon ko bhi khatkhatayi...Aur yeh Darwaazon se darwazon mein jaane ke beech joh halki see jhalak, pyaar bhare sparsh , dil kee baatein mujhe himmat dee yeh likhne kee.....

Aapki Vidhi. 

Dev read the letter and took a deep breath... Dev sat in chair and thought: Vidhi kitni mushkilon se guzar rahi hein ? Uske saare sapnon ko mein pura karungi..,...Kuch bhi ho jaaye Vidhi, ek pal ke liye bhi tumhein yeh feel nahi hone dungi tum boch ho.... Tumhari ladayi mere bhi ladayi hein Vidhi...

Sangeeta placed a cup of coffee and Dev came out from his thoughts.

Sangeeta: Sir aap thode thake huye lag rahe hein. Coffee ke chuskiyan leejiye thode..

Dev smiled and started having coffee.

Sangeeta: Sir ek baat kahun ? Iss coffee kee bhi ek khaasiyat hein.....

Dev : Kya ?

Sangeeta: Yeh jab aise garam Banti hein toh banane waale kee yahi umeed hoti hein kee peene waale ko isse peeke sukoon mile. Uski chehre mein Khushi aaye aur woh muskuraye....Sir mein har cabins mein, har desks pe yeh pahunchati hoon issi ummeed ke saath....Aur jab muje yeh sabse mil jaate hein naa tab mein iss coffee ko ek Thanks kehti hoon. Woh isliye kyunki sabki muskaan ne meri pareshaniyon ko thoda halka mujhe mehsoos karwate hein aur uski wajah banj hein yeh choti see ek cup kee coffee ☕. Iss se pareshaniyan khatam toh nahi hoti,par mera dil mayoos bhi nahi hota. Yahi iss coffee kee khaasiyat hein. 

Dev : Itni see coffee mein itne saare baatein hein yeh kabhi socha bhi nahi Sangeeta. Tumne yeh kehkar actually mere dil ko sukoon dilwayi. Thanks for the coffee.

Dev smiled and Sangeeta also smiled. 

Dev : Ek favour chahta hoon ....Abhi Accounts Head Vidhi ko joh coffee deni hein woh mujhe de do. Kyunki woh pareshan hein...Aur mein ek cup coffee deke uski pareshani door karna chahti hoon. 

Sangeeta: Aap kee yeh joh naye safar hein uss mein aapko kamyaabi mile...Aap maano yaa maano par itna toh mein samajh gayi kee woh aapke liye khaas hein. 

Dev smiled shyily.

Sangeeta: Good luck Sir.

Vidhi was walking restless  in her cabin.

Vidhi: Kya aise card mein woh saari baatein bata dena zaruri thaa ? Kya soch rahe honge? Kya  mein Dev sir ko aur pareshan toh nahi kar rahi hoon?

Dev knocked at the door. Vidhi looked and was surprised to see Dev holding the cup of coffee in his hand with a smile.

Vidhi: Sir aap

Dev : May I come in Miss Vidhi? 

Vidhi: Sir aap bhi!! Aayiye naa Sir.

Dev came inside and kept the coffee at her table.

Vidhi looked Dev surprisingly.

Vidhi: Sir aap kyun coffee leke aaye ? 

Dev : Socha aaj Sangeeta ki madad Karun.... Coffee pee lo Vidhi...

Vidhi: Sir aap ne card pada kya ? Kuch kahiye naa ? 

Dev : Pehle cabin ke door ko close kardo.

Vidhi: Sir 

Dev: Vidhi mein tumhara boss hoon.... It's my order.

Vidhi closed the cabin door. Meanwhile Rishabh was looking Vidhi.

Rishabh: Anaya Yeh Vidhi ne darwaza kyun close kee ? Dev sir bhi gaye uski cabin mein 

Anaya : Apne kaam pe dhyan do Rishabh. Kya pata Sir ko kuch discuss karni ho uss se ? 

Rishabh; May be...Waise yeh donon kabhi bhi apne cabins ke doors close nahi karte 

Anaya : Rishabh, ho kya gaya hein tumhein? 

Rishabh: Maine joh dekha wahi bata diye. 

Anaya : Toh mat dekho, kaam karo....What you do today can improve all your tomorrows. Iss baat ko yaad rakhi hoti naa toh Dev Sir would have promoted you. But tumne toh...

Rishabh: Please yaad mat dilawon yaar. Waise shaam ko kya tum mere saath chalogi club mein? 

Anaya smiled and nodded her head. Rishabh also smiled and he get back to his work.

Vidhi: Sir aap ne cabin close karne ke liye kyun kaha? Pata hein woh Rishabh aise dekh raha thaa kee ....

Dev sat in the chair and pulled Vidhi towards him. He made her to sat at his lap.

Vidhi: Sir aapko romance kee padi hein....Yeh office mein ho nahi sakta...

Dev : Kya hein naa Vidhi Kabhi kabhi thode bahut aise chori chupke se Chupa huwa Rustom banne mein bahut maza aata hein mujhe.....

Vidhi looked him surprisingly.

Dev : Mera office hein, rules mein jab chahe badal sakta hoon..Mujhe koyi rok nahi sakta... Rishabh bhi nahi, tum bhi nahi.... Chupchap coffee pee lo. 

Dev held the coffee cup in his hand and bought it near her mouth. 

Vidhi: Mein pee lungi....

Vidhi started having coffee and Dev's arms were encircled around her body.

Vidhi: Sir aap ne woh card pada?

Dev ; Haan Vidhi...

Vidhi: Mein aapko sab kuch....

Dev : Vidhi, Tumhare Paapa ke saamne woh sab huwa hein toh hum unhein blame toh nahi kar sakte. Jiss mauhaul mein rehte hein, wahan kee society kya kehte hain isska asar toh hoga .....Vidhi tum uss chaar deewaron ko laanghkar aaj yahan iss shehar tak pahunchi ho....Jitna bhi unka soch ,unka dar hein , unka gussa hein unn sabko face karke tum yahan aayi ho... Toh kabhi bhi apne aap ko kamzor mat samjho Vidhi. Ek taraf dekha jaaye toh kahin naa kahin woh dil mein apni beti ke kaamyabi ko dekhkar khush hein....Uss mohalle mein shayad bahut kam ladkiyan honge joh apne baaton ko aage rakhke apne parents ko samjha sake....Woh Akash jiss ne tumhari feelings kee respect nahi kee, usko reject karne ke liye tumne awaaz udayi....Yeh aasan nahi hein Vidhi... Himmat dikhana bahut badi baat hein...Hum donon Ko yeh himmat banayi rakhni hogi par iss baat kaa dhyaan zarur rakhna hein kee hum kisi apne ko koyi zakham naa pahunchawo....Unke vishwas, unke dil ko jeetke sahi maayne mein hamare pyaar kee Jeet hogi Vidhi....Tum saari baatein meri aankhon mein dekhke keh sakti ho...Sahi kaha agar tumhari aankhon mein aansu dikh jaaye toh mujhe bahut bura lagega. Par Vidhi meri ungaliyan unn aansuvon ko zarur pochenge aur koshish karunga kee mein tumhein hamesha khush rakhun....Unn khushiyon mein bhi koyi aansu naa aaye.... Tumhari buwa ne majboori mein woh kadam udayi hogi par hum aisa kuch nahi karenge Vidhi.....

Vidhi; Sir aap kee baaton se meri dil ko thandak mili. Ek aur baat hein.... Aap ko mere saath jaana padega Indore iss Sunday ko.

Dev : Vidhi!!!

Vidhi: Mujhe aapki Maa se milna hein....

Dev : Vidhi maa ne khud mujhe mana kiya hein, Mere chote bhai Abhimanyu aur uski wife Priya ke beech kuch problems hein.....Maa ne kaha kee woh jab tak nahi kahegi mein wahan Jaa nahin sakta....

Vidhi: Theek hain aap mujhe le jaayiye. Aap bahar rahiye ,mein hi aapki Maa se baat karungi.

Dev : Kya kehna chahti ho tum? 

Vidhi: Aapki ek dard ko hatane kee koshish karne jaa rahi hoon. ....Aap chahte hein naa aapki Maa ek baar uss wood house mein aaye jahan woh chuttiyan manati thi apne pati ke saath, apne bacchon ke saath.....

Dev ; Yeh bahut mushkil hein Vidhi..Aur bahut sawalein udenge.....Tumhein kisi ne kuch kaha toh .....Vidhi......

Vidhi cupped Dev's face and looked him.

Vidhi: Mein sirf koshish karne jaa rahi hoon....Humne pyaar ke saath ladayi bhi sweekar kee hein.....Toh bas aap haath dhaamke mujhe wahan aangan tak chod deejiye. Baaki mein dekh lungi....Mujhe bharosa hein kee Aapki Maa ek baar toh aayegi.....Woh aapko bahut Miss karti hein bas batati nahi.....Aapki tarah dil mein saare dukh ko dabake rakhi hein...Mein bas unhein yeh ehsas dilana chahti hoon kee unke bete ko unki Mamta kee bahut zarurat hein.....Aise dooriyan mat banake rakhe....Mein shayad haar bhi jawun par ek baat toh yakeen se keh sakti hoon kee Aapki Maa iss baare mein sochegi zarur....

Vidhi kissed at Dev's forehead and Dev felt it as magical. He hugged her tightly like a child and she waved her hand on his hairs. 

Dev looked her and said: Vidhi tumne meri zindagi mein aane mein itne der kyun kar dee ? 

Vidhi: Raichand group of companies se appointment order bahut late mili.....

Dev and Vidhi laughed together and Dev stared her with his intense eyes.

Dev : Coffee kaisi thi ? 

Vidhi: Bhannat thi 

Dev : Lekin maine toh piya nahi....

Vidhi: Kya lekin Sangeeta di toh pehle aapko deti hein coffee....iss pure office mein....

Dev : Woh waali coffee kee baat nahi.....woh toh maine pee Lee....Par Marginal utility kee theory padi naa joh maine coffee ke examples deke samjhayi tumhein 

Vidhi: Haan mujhe yaad hein.....Toh abb aapko dubara coffee peene kaa mann kar raha hein.... Professor saab...

Dev ; Haan.

Vidhi: Lekin Sir , aise bahut saare coffee kaun Peeta hein??? 

Dev ; Mein Peeta hoon Vidhi......Aur abhi Jo peene Jaa rahi hoon woh sirf tum hi dila sakti ho mujhe...

Vidhi: Aise bhi kaisi coffee hein ? 

Dev : Coffee peene ke baad tumhari hoton pe joh shehad jaisi dikh rahi hein naa usse peene kaa mann kar raha hein ......Bahut meethi coffee hein.....

Vidhi: Ek consumer ko jitna chahiye utni hi coffee peeni chahiye,uss se zyada nahi....

Dev : Tum Professor ko samjhane waali Student mat bano....Aise theories mat Batawo mujhe, tum ne kaha naa mein Chupa huwa Rustom hoon toh tumhari hoton kee sweet honey pe mera pura haq hein.....Isse mein peeke rahungi aaj ...

Vidhi; Mein chillawungi !!!! Aap aise kuch kiye toh ...

Dev held her arms at her waist tightly....

Dev : Zara mein bhi toh dekhun tujh mein himmat ke apne boss ke khilaf chillane kee Vidhi!!!

Dev's lips went towards her soft lips and she rounded her arms around his neck and closed her eyes. Dev gently kissed her lips one by one and licked those lips with his tongue and slowly  one of  his hand tangled her hairs and the other hand held her towards his body and in passion they both locked their lips. 

To be continued 😄😄😄😄😄😄😄