| ShiVi DRABBLE : Kabhi Kushboo | | His POV | - Page 2

Awww it was soooooo beautiful 😍 .  I loved it so much.  Shiva missing Raavi and defying Suman all at the same time was just amazing 👏.  This was the Rishita that I liked in the show when she was being supportive of her family not creating problems and crying like a banshee.  

Great update I loved it.

Thanks for the tag❤️

Wowww❤️❤️

This is so so so beautiful....Absolutely loved it 

Rishita is the interfering bhabi in this one but she did it with a good heart so I don't mind her...

Liked the Shiva Suman face off(more like a blinking contest)...

You are a wonderful writer dear....💔

Really enjoyed reading this one...❤️

First of all congrats for nine years completion🎉🎉

And coming to tge story it was treat to read😘😘

Thanks for tagging me ❤

I hope you are okay now 🥰

Mummmaaa 😭😭😭 this was so good.

I can feel him.  It was not his fault. The situation was so wrong. 🤧🤧

And as always that stupid family does not deserve him 🙄

res.....

will read it as soon as i can

thanks for the tag❤️

p.s. happy ninth ritu!!!❤️😳🤗

Thanks for the tag❤️

This is so so so sooooooo beautiful 😍😭😍😭😍

I loved it!!! Take this

Also congratulations on completing 9 years on IF❤️

Congratulations for 9 years on IF. 😃

And lovely OS. 😳

Ritu🤗! I didn't let myself think about it, and read right through it😃!!!! 

Hmmmm..... Now, thoughts thoughts! On one hand, Shiva does seem to regret what he'd done to Raavi, but on the other, it seems to be because he selfishly wants her love beyond it all.... And that felt a little gray to me. 

He is in pain, understandable. And he recognises that he is the sole cause of it, amazing. But, he also does nothing to rectify his mistakes. He only waits there in Somnath, broken, and NOT searching for Raavi. Something that does not sit well with me. Perhaps this is because the Shiva I initially fell in love with and dreamt up was a man of action, and the current Shiva is NOT. 

Rishita realises how broken he is though, and I'm glad you included that and consider it genius on your part too, because it was what convinced me to think twice about Shiva's POV. Is his lack of action simply a sign of just HOW broken he is? And not the lack of character or spine that I had momentarily written it off as? 

When he sets out in search of her (,FINALLY!), he is confident to a fault that Raavi is coming back with him. And that rubbed me wrong too, until I realised that Raavi herself had not been able to move one step forward from him in life, always moving forward only to step back towards her bond with him.... It is simply what they have become. Their faith in each other is all they have, is it not, in the world their cruel families have created for them? 

The ending was amazing though! And Suman finally realised that she is losing her son slowly slowly slowly! (Although my dramatic heart wanted more of a fight, I do understand that apathy is the ultimate lack of love) 

Overall, a lot of mixed feelings about this piece, and Shiva still doesn't have me completely convinced, but this is beautiful exploration of a flawed character! ❤️

Congrats on completing 9 yrs on IF

I loved how u showed Suman not having that much powers on Shiva. 

Shiva going to Raavi 

Really liked it ❤

Thanks for Tagging 🤗

Beautiful one

Shiva's pov written beautifully here

For a change rishita being understanding😉