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Posted: 1 years ago
  1. Surpita wedding/relationship serves no other purpose than moving forward Arylie either through angst or heigtened proximity. Refer to Arshi during Payash wedding. We are not getting another wedding track quite so soon. Gul needs to manage a budget.
  2. However, can Arpita and Sundar's relationship be given a bit more depth? When did they fall in love apart from Sundar's celebrity crush on Arpita? Can we have flashbacks, and Arpita struggling to find closure with Arvind's murder. Arylie and Sundar can help her through that; she can fall in love with Sundar during that process. Whatever conflict or angst can follow suit.
  3. None of the Rathores are 2D characters, so essentially Sundar has to be developed beyond a servile man to the Ts. Yesterday's Sundar-Imlie exposition was good. Insta-love doesn't provide for adequate or enough foil for Arylie. Insta-love is boring. See Abh!ra.
  4. Aryan has to be more pragmatic about Arpita's trauma than Imlie who's moon-eyed at the idea of playing cupid. Refer to Emma.
Edited by Deltablues - 1 years ago
Posted: 1 years ago

Yes, develop the character or keep them as friends. Why does a single woman in ITV land has to find a partner to have a complete and secure life. Come on people..

Or if the writers are short on story introduce another debonair business man who can match Arpi's character, a close friend of Arvind who is a self made man and then he can marry Arpi.. Sundar can then realize he should have ambition, starts a cooking blog becomes famous and finds someone else???

Posted: 1 years ago
Originally posted by Deltablues


  1. Surpita wedding/relationship serves no other purpose than moving forward Arylie either through angst or heigtened proximity. Refer to Arshi during Payash wedding. We are not getting another wedding track quite so soon. Gul needs to manage a budget.
  2. However, can Arpita and Sundar's relationship be given a bit more depth? When did they fall in love apart from Sundar's celebrity crush on Arpita? Can we have flashbacks, and Arpita struggling to find closure with Arvind's murder. Arylie and Sundar can help her through that; she can fall in love with Sundar during that process. Whatever conflict or angst can follow suit.
  3. None of the Rathores are 2D characters, so essentially Sundar has to be developed beyond a servile man to the Ts. Yesterday's Sundar-Imlie exposition was good. Insta-love doesn't provide for adequate or enough foil for Arylie. Insta-love is boring. See Abh!ra.
  4. Aryan has to be more pragmatic about Arpita's trauma than Imlie who's moon-eyed at the idea of playing cupid. Refer to Emma.

@bold - that’s what my hope is .. Payash wedding track was absolute Gold for developing Arnav Khushi’s relationship .. almost all my favorite Arshi scenes are from that track 😄 ..I mean from angst to the push n pull , to their almosttt realization , to jealousy , to absolute heartbreak ..u name it and that track served it .. If Gul and Atif’s plan is to go along the same lines, I dont mind a bit !

Edited by novice1 - 1 years ago
Posted: 1 years ago
Originally posted by nmurali


Yes, develop the character or keep them as friends. Why does a single woman in ITV land has to find a partner to have a complete and secure life. Come on people..

Or if the writers are short on story introduce another debonair business man who can match Arpi's character, a close friend of Arvind who is a self made man and then he can marry Arpi.. Sundar can then realize he should have ambition, starts a cooking blog becomes famous and finds someone else???

Sundar's financial status is not as much as an issue as the fact that he's been given very litte personality beyond being a stupidly sacrificial servant ot the Tripathis. They should show why Arpita would fall in love with Sundar in the first place. That's why yesterday's Imlie-Sundar flashbacks were important

Edited by Deltablues - 1 years ago
Posted: 1 years ago

Sunder was tooo much of a side character in imlie 1.0, for him to have a parallel lead track, there needs to be character development and definitely relationship development for arpinder, dating and all before they think of full blown wedding track.

Posted: 1 years ago

Originally posted by novice1


@bold - that’s what my hope is .. Payash wedding track was absolute Gold for developing Arnav Khushi’s relationship .. almost all my favorite Arshi scenes are from that track 😄 ..I mean from angst to the push n pull , to their almosttt realization , to jealousy , to absolute heartbreak ..u name it and that track served it .. If Gul and Atif’s plan is to go along the same lines, I dont mind a bit !


I think this was already done during the Adini relationship..

Posted: 1 years ago
Originally posted by BlueJayFire



I think this was already done during the Adini relationship..

Yes, it was and Aru kind of dented it during his own wedding. smiley8

So they are falling in love anew.


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