- Surpita wedding/relationship serves no other purpose than moving forward Arylie either through angst or heigtened proximity. Refer to Arshi during Payash wedding. We are not getting another wedding track quite so soon. Gul needs to manage a budget.
- However, can Arpita and Sundar's relationship be given a bit more depth? When did they fall in love apart from Sundar's celebrity crush on Arpita? Can we have flashbacks, and Arpita struggling to find closure with Arvind's murder. Arylie and Sundar can help her through that; she can fall in love with Sundar during that process. Whatever conflict or angst can follow suit.
- None of the Rathores are 2D characters, so essentially Sundar has to be developed beyond a servile man to the Ts. Yesterday's Sundar-Imlie exposition was good. Insta-love doesn't provide for adequate or enough foil for Arylie. Insta-love is boring. See Abh!ra.
- Aryan has to be more pragmatic about Arpita's trauma than Imlie who's moon-eyed at the idea of playing cupid. Refer to Emma.
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