MaAn Drabble collection: Nuggets of Love - Page 33

Originally posted by: Fighter03

So cute, well written, well thought out.

Why why and why can’t people, who call themselves professional writers, who I assume must be trained in the art, ever come up with such a sequence?

Something that is emotional, playful and showcases some chemistry. Every MaAn scene of late is just….meh. Vanilla. No chemistry. Feels forced. At this point you would expect them to have some kind of a sexy vibe occasionally. But nil.

You are right, one would assume they would have professional writers whose full time job is coming up with meaningful storylines and dialouges. But the reality is far from it.

If the state of #1 show is like this, I can imagine what the rest of them would look like🤔

Let Baa burn who cares😆....Loved the scene❤️

Scene: Shah family visiting Kapadias for a formal ritual without Anu.

An alternative small scene from la la land 😳 While the Shahs are all still on their way … AK calls Anu

She picks up the video call. … and is pleasantly surprised to see Anuj in maroon kurta, clean shaven, looking elegant. She is happy to see him excited.

Anu: aap kitne achche lag rahe hai?!😳

Anuj: Beams with joy.... "Thank you, Anu! " Runs his hands over his cheeks and ask “ye kaisa hai?”...😎

Anu: bohot bohot pyaara hai,😳❤️ …. par kyun…..and she feels shy.😳

Anuj: chuckles and says… “tumhe yaad hai? Jab hum udaipur gaye the… taxi mein… “ 🤗 ( reference to earlier drabble**)

Anu: moments later…. "Haan… yaad aaya" 😳

Anuj: batao, kaisa laga?😊

Anu: aapne mere liye ye kiya… bohot achcha hai…..

Anuj: sacch?! 😉

Anu: aap jo bhi pehnenge, jaisa bhi honge, mujhe hamesha pyyare lagte hai😳🤗

par aaj .... aisa lagta hai jaise chaand chamakne laga hai....😳😉

Anuj: happily flicks his eyebrows and asks "matlab… aaj tak pheeka tha? mujh mein chamak nahi thi? bolo!😲😕

Anu: aap bhi ne… sabka ulta matlab nikalna zaroori hai, kya?🤔

She sees her family walking in far behind him in the video..

"Aap peeche dekhiye…." 😊

Anuj: ulta toh tum kehti ho, jab tum mere samne ho, toh mein peeche kyun dekhu?

Anu: aarey! Bapuji, samar sab aa gaye, aap ke peeche dekhiye..!🤪

Anuj: "oh no!: makes a face 😕 and continues "I wanted you to see me first …chalo baad mein baat karenge.... I love you! " ❤️🤗 and throws a flying kiss.

Anu: Touches her phone screen as if to feel his face…😳😳

Call ends.....

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I wish someone had mentioned about his new look in a casual way. It would have been nice if Anu did, but I would have taken even if Mukku or Devika mentioned it.

Anyway.... I wrote this to fulfill my wish, by conveying what i wanted to my AK....😳

Let me know if you liked it. I had other drabble ideas as well on his new look, but chose to post this one

Did you like it? Drop in your comment to let me know...

**reference to my earlier drabble #21 (Check the 1st post index on this thread)

Originally posted by: SmithaRam

Scene: Shah family visiting Kapadias for a formal ritual without Anu.

An alternative small scene from la la land 😳 While the Shahs are all still on their way … AK calls Anu

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Aww so sweet smitha 😊

Love it. Your drabbles are so real Smitha.

Me too, I wanted someone to acknowledge it too. I want Anu to notice and show her preference for a stubble actually 😊

Yes he looks handsome in this one.. its coz of prequel i guess.. but jo bhi ho today's ep was amazing, shahs teasing him and so is urs drabble ❤

True yaar… he was looking sooooo handsome. Koi toh acknowledge karta 😒

Me toooooooo! No one mentioned anything about his look.😏