Arylie OS: New perspectives, new beginnings - Page 3

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Posted: 2 years ago
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you are such a great writer! i love how you get into the character's heads, and I love Kim (I am in the USA myself so enjoyed seeing her in Boston). can't wait to see imlie continue to learn more about her own feelings for Aryan. 

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Loved it! It's such beautiful writing, and I think the way you've shown the gradual shift is very organic. It's not rushed, or overtly dramatic, and very natural. It's stunning to read this perspective and see the pieces sort of fall into place for Imlie as she finds herself moving more and more towards Aryan and away from her past. Can't wait to read more!

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Loved it.  Hope Aryan flies down and surprises Imlie in the next part.  

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: GenMed

Loved it.  Hope Aryan flies down and surprises Imlie in the next part.  


Oh I love that visual! Aryan running to meet Imlie! ðŸ˜ƒ

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Posted: 2 years ago
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This is so good, you are an excellent writer..looking forward for more..

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: GenMed

Loved it.  Hope Aryan flies down and surprises Imlie in the next part.  


Wish granted i guess ... ðŸ˜†

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Posted: 2 years ago
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This oneshot was such a beauty! Loved the parallels you created between Imlie and Kim's life and how she was quick to pick up on them and figure out the answers to her questions. It's barely just been a month but our girl is already missing her man and imagining what it will be like when she meets him again. ðŸ˜†


And Aryan, well, that man is unrealistically perfect. ðŸĪĢI was not surprised even one bit when he said she just has to say it and he'd be on the next flight to Boston – in fact I expected him to say exactly that.  


Can't wait to catch up with the rest of the shots! 

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Posted: 2 years ago
#28

😍 another beautiful piece. Aru is already sure about his feelings but imlie still ia confused...or its more like afraid...


Ah how sweetly he said i love you husband goal! 


Btw these OS are connected to each other right? Shaadi ke rasam or like marriage proposal or how they agreed to this aisa koyi Os hei kya? 

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: SundariP


Wish granted i guess ... ðŸ˜†

Ok i got spoiler for next OS. ðŸĪĐ

Writer mata ki jai ho 😘 no wait lets say it in imlie's style "writer maiyaa ki jai ho" 

 So aru actually understood her 😍 i was hoping for this too that aru would catch her real feelings.  

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: mahiaana

Ok i got spoiler for next OS. ðŸĪĐ

Writer mata ki jai ho 😘 no wait lets say it in imlie's style "writer maiyaa ki jai ho" 

 So aru actually understood her 😍 i was hoping for this too that aru would catch her real feelings.  


Spoiler kya sab likha hua hai, unpublished hota toh baat thi ðŸ˜†

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