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Posted: 4 years ago
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Don’t you guys feel specially while watching today’s episode that there is so much inconsistency I the show as if two different writers sitting in different rooms are writing things and then randomly it is put together

For eg

1. Kaku has always made clear she doesn’t like devkit because Pulkit is naukar that’s it now today’s episode they are showing as if kaku is against devkit because she loves her daughter and afraid that Pulkit will leave her

Kuch din bad mard patni ka pallu chod ke dusri aurat ka pallu tham leta hai

2. Sai says agar aap Devi Rao se pyar na karti to shadi rokne na aati but we all know kaku shadi rokne isliye nahi aayi thi because she loves Devi but again because naukar se shadi nahi hogi izzat and all

Devkit ki shadi ke episode ke baad we never ever heard kaku even mentioning her name ki meri beti kaisi hai Pulkit thik se rakh raha hai ya nahi etc so now suddenly Sai claiming that kaku loves Devi is looking so out of place

3. Patralekha’s dialogues- her dialogue were so out of place like

A talking to B

Patralekha - haan haan tum to aisa hi kahoge

B talking to c

Patralekha - haan haan c to aisi hi hai

So out of place


and there is so many more but later on that


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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: simmi_jp

Don’t you guys feel specially while watching today’s episode that there is so much inconsistency I the show as if two different writers sitting in different rooms are writing things and then randomly it is put together

For eg

1. Kaku has always made clear she doesn’t like devkit because Pulkit is naukar that’s it now today’s episode they are showing as if kaku is against devkit because she loves her daughter and afraid that Pulkit will leave her

Kuch din bad mard patni ka pallu chod ke dusri aurat ka pallu tham leta hai

2. Sai says agar aap Devi Rao se pyar na karti to shadi rokne na aati but we all know kaku shadi rokne isliye nahi aayi thi because she loves Devi but again because naukar se shadi nahi hogi izzat and all

Devkit ki shadi ke episode ke baad we never ever heard kaku even mentioning her name ki meri beti kaisi hai Pulkit thik se rakh raha hai ya nahi etc so now suddenly Sai claiming that kaku loves Devi is looking so out of place

3. Patralekha’s dialogues- her dialogue were so out of place like

A talking to B

Patralekha - haan haan tum to aisa hi kahoge

B talking to c

Patralekha - haan haan c to aisi hi hai

So out of place


and there is so many more but later on that


bbaki logo kae toe phir bhe once in a while hote hai but pakhi didi kae most of the time hote hai koi sense hi ni bnta uske lines kaa kabhe bhe

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: simmi_jp

Don’t you guys feel specially while watching today’s episode that there is so much inconsistency I the show as if two different writers sitting in different rooms are writing things and then randomly it is put together

For eg

1. Kaku has always made clear she doesn’t like devkit because Pulkit is naukar that’s it now today’s episode they are showing as if kaku is against devkit because she loves her daughter and afraid that Pulkit will leave her

Kuch din bad mard patni ka pallu chod ke dusri aurat ka pallu tham leta hai

2. Sai says agar aap Devi Rao se pyar na karti to shadi rokne na aati but we all know kaku shadi rokne isliye nahi aayi thi because she loves Devi but again because naukar se shadi nahi hogi izzat and all

Devkit ki shadi ke episode ke baad we never ever heard kaku even mentioning her name ki meri beti kaisi hai Pulkit thik se rakh raha hai ya nahi etc so now suddenly Sai claiming that kaku loves Devi is looking so out of place

3. Patralekha’s dialogues- her dialogue were so out of place like

A talking to B

Patralekha - haan haan tum to aisa hi kahoge

B talking to c

Patralekha - haan haan c to aisi hi hai

So out of place


and there is so many more but later on that



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You echoed my thoughts

Pakhi's character is poorly written and has no work except for taunting sai and poking her nose wherever not required.


Honestly, till sairat reception track,her character was bearable. After that it started degrading and now-a-days her character starts talking out if nowhere..that too she repeats same ..bezaati..waah virat..taunts and still gets a lot of screen space👎🏼

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Bibliophile68


@bold


You echoed my thoughts

Pakhi's character is poorly written and has no work except for taunting sai and poking her nose wherever not required.


Honestly, till sairat reception track,her character was bearable. After that it started degrading and now-a-days her character starts talking out if nowhere..that too she repeats same ..bezaati..waah virat..taunts and still gets a lot of screen space👎🏼

So true her role is worse then Mohit though she is projected as third lead

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: simmi_jp

So true her role is worse then Mohit though she is projected as third lead


The character who truly progressed throughout the story is Mohit only. Everyone remained same except him.. Ashwini too started giving back and questioning pakhi..that is some progression..


Sairat's story is still stuck..though virat has moved on and conveyed the same to pakhi,that isn't helping because sai is still stuck at his vaada..👎🏼..I thought we will witness sairat progression after seeing the promo but in vain ..

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Writing is inconsistent

About Pakhi, I feel they try to incorporate the expectations of SM fans in her dialogues, you see the "Beijjati" one is used by everyone so they add this word in her dialogues, nothing she says makes any sense, she has no self respect and her character has no substance and really there's no need for her character

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: NoraSM

Writing is inconsistent

About Pakhi, I feel they try to incorporate the expectations of SM fans in her dialogues, you see the "Beijjati" one is used by everyone so they add this word in her dialogues, nothing she says makes any sense, she has no self respect and her character has no substance and really there's no need for her character

Ohh I remembered one more inconsistency

Pakhi is supporting ghar ke bade log in devkit matter but when Virat gives gift to Devi and camera shows every body’s reaction Pakhi was having that sweet smile that we give when we love something but Pakhi never had any connection with Devi tai even today she was opposing them and still why she had that smile totally opposite reaction

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Also mohit enters buying groceries which Sai vahini asked- dal / rice/ veggies and all. But then immediately in the same scene sequence they welcome Devkit, so when did Sai actually use the things Mohit bought? All those masale n all? or did she use the things at home as she is shown cooking and the things Mohit bought was to refill the things used by her 🤪

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Exactly my thoughts. The laziness of this writing is saddening as a viewer. No attention to detail, character arcs, logic, consistency:(

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: purpless

Also mohit enters buying groceries which Sai vahini asked- dal / rice/ veggies and all. But then immediately in the same scene sequence they welcome Devkit, so when did Sai actually use the things Mohit bought? All those masale n all? or did she use the things at home as she is shown cooking and the things Mohit bought was to refill the things used by her 🤪

Ohh yes sahi hai 😀😀

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