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Posted: 2 years ago
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                                 Part 3

Hey guys, back with part 3. Here I changed the story a lil. Bear with me.

Some days went on with Raavi and Shiva still fighting with each other, but the fights were healthy fights, no mean comments and insults thrown at each other. 

Raavi had thrown Dev out of her every memory. She was moving on with Shiva. Here Shiva was also trying to be not harsh with his MKBKB.

Suman instructed all of them that they are going to their haveli for Mahamrityunjay Havan as the jaap can only take place at their ancestral home.

After one whole day of travelling, they reached the place. Prafulla also came with them reasoning to spend time with Raavi. In fact, she came to spy on Shiva much to Shiva's annoyance. Anita was also been dragged into it by Maami.

Raavi was in a shock from what happened 3 days ago.

                       Flashback

Raavi was gone to market to buy the veggies. Suddenly some men came and abducted her. A boy who saw all of this went and narrated everything to Shiva. Shiva was furious. He knew who could have done that. He straight went to his bike and drove to Janardhan's house 🏠. 

He hold on to Janardhan's neck and told him to free Raavi. Janardhan was surprised to hear that.

Janardhan : Mujhe kya pata Raavi kahan hai ?

Shiva : Dekh seedhe seedhe bata de, Raavi kahan hai. Mujhe sab pata tere hi gundon ne Raavi ko kidnap kiya hai. Agar Raavi ko tune nahi choda to dekh lena teri beti ki Zindagi mein barbaad kar dunga. 

Janardhan then remembered that he instructed his men to kidnap Dhara but his men kidnapped Raavi. He also feared that if he really does something to Rishita. JD knew Pandya's were a respectable family but Shiva was a exception. He could go to any lengths for ho family and if he told him to that he was going to kidnap Dhara then his death is for sure.

Shiva : Tere gundon ko bol ki Raavi ko abhi yahan lekar aaye. Aur sun agar Raavi ko kuch hua to kasam baba Somnath ki tujhe aur tere ghar ko jalakar rakh dunga.

JD : Thik hain.

JD called his men and instructed them to safely bring Raavi here as early as possible. In sharp, 15 min Raavi was with Shiva.

Raavi with Shiva went to Pandya Niwas. Raavi went inside and tightly hugged Dhara. Dhara was a little surprised by this move. 

Dhara : Raavi bacche kya hua? Tujhe kya hua? Tu Shiva ke saath kese? Tu toh market gayi thi na?

Raavi didn't answered anything. She was just sobbing in Dhara's arms. Everyone gathered there including Rishita.

Rishita : Ye itna kyun ro rahi hai?

Shiva : Apne baap se jaake puch. 

Shiva was fuming in anger. He was going to tell everything what happened to the family but stopped hearing Dhara's panicked voice.

Dhara : Shiva, Raavi behosh ho gayi hai.

He picked Raavi up and went to their room. He lay Raavi on their bed and called Doctor. Doctor came and checked Raavi. Everyone sighed when doctor told them it was nothing serious, she just faint because of fatigue, fear and stress. All came outside the room and Shiva narrated everything that happened.

Shiva (to Dev) : Agar  meri Raavi ko kuch hua to main naa teri biwi ko chhodunga na tere sasur ko. Samjha!

 Dev gulped nervously. But there Rishita was fuming in anger. Shiva moved outside the house controlling his anger. After 2 hours, she got up by seeing a nightmare and screamed. Everyone gathered there including Maami. Maami got to know about everything and rushed to Pandya Niwas.

Maami : Raavi meri bacchi. Tu thik hain na?

They all were standing witnessing Maami calling Raavi continuously but Raavi wasn't responding at all. Shiva bent before Raavi.

Shiva (softly) : Raavi!

It was like Raavi came back to life after hearing Shiva's voice. She lifted her head up and hugged Shiva with all her strength shocking Maami and everyone present there. Shiva tightened his hold on Raavi. Everyone left the room on Suman's command leaving the pair there.

Dhara : Mujhe Raavi ko lekar bahut tension ho rahi hai, Gaumbi.

Gaumbui : Fikr mat kar, Shiva hai uske pass.

Krish : Haa bhabhi, dekha nahi aapne abhi Shiva ne kese kahan tha "Meri Raavi." Aur Raav bhabhi ne bhi to Shiva ko hi hug kiya hum sab ke wahan hone ke bawjood.


That's it for today!!!








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Posted: 2 years ago
#12

Really nice. 

Their relationship is progressing. 

Looking forward to read more of them.

Waiting for the next chapter. Update soon. 

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Posted: 2 years ago
#13

They are progressing!!! Glad to see them acknowledge their relationship β€οΈ

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Posted: 2 years ago
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                                     Part 4

Sorry guys for the late update. So here we go....

                             Flashback 

Raavi was still in Shiva's arms. She wasn't crying anymore but still not letting go of Shiva. Shiva was caressing her hair. None of them wanted this moment to end. They wanted the time to stop πŸ›‘ and they can sit peacefully in the comfortable silence 🀐. 

After some time Shiva spoke breaking the silence between them.

Shiva ( softly ) : Raavi 

Raavi : Hmm..

Shiva : Maa ne kahan hai ki hum sab logon ko jaap karne ke liye haveli jaana hoga. To tu chal sakti hai na? Tujhe koi problem to nahi hogi na.

Raavi broke the hug...and spoke 

Raavi : Jab tak tu mere saath hai mujhe koi problem nahi hai. Tu hamesha mera saath dega na, tu bhi mere parents ki tarah kahi mujhe chhod to nahi dega?

Shiva : Main aakhri saans tak tere saath rahoonga chipku bankar. Jaise tu mujhse chipkali ki tarah chipakti hai na waise hi.

Raavi smiled hearing him and once again hugged him. Shiva also tightened his hold on Raavi.

 With this hug a promise was made, a promise to always be together, always be with each other, promise to give their πŸ’― % to their marriage.

                                Flashback ends 


Raavi was looking out of window in thoughts πŸ’­ when she found someone encircling their hand on her waist. Raavi turned around to see her husband snuggling in her and flashing his billion dollar smile which makes Raavi's heart ❀️ to flutter πŸƒ. Shiva snuggles more into her and Raavi can feel her cheeks heating up. She looks down blushing 😍. The journey was spent in this position only. Unknown to Raavi, that Krish has clicked a picture of them both and who's gonna embarass her to the core.

Everyone reached haveli in the night πŸŒƒπŸŒ‰ and went to sleep πŸ’€πŸ˜΄. Next morning πŸŒ„ when Raavi woke up she couldn't find Shiva anywhere. She searched whole haveli but it went in vain.

She freshen up and went to the kitchen to see Dhara already present there. Before Raavi can speak πŸ—£οΈ anything Dhara spoke, Shiva kuch kaam se baahar gaya hai, thodi der mein aa jayega. Tu so rahi thi isliye tujhe nahi uthaya. 

Then Dhara told her to serve everyone tea which she already made. Everyone was done with the breakfast. Raavi was cleaning the table when her eye caught something in her phone πŸ“±. It was a message sent by Krish to there family WhatsApp group. It was her and Shiva's pic from last night πŸŒƒπŸŒƒ in the bus. And more embarrassing to it was Gaumbi and Dhara di's comments on the picture. With Gaumbi giving a ❀️❀️ two hearts and Dhara di's " thu..thu..thu..." with a flying kiss 😘. Raavi looked up to see everyone including Suman, Anita (who saw the pic in Dhara's phone), Dhara and even Gaumbi giving her teasing looks. She screamed Krish who was laughing loudly looking at her and ran behind him. She was running to catch but collided with her husband. She complained about Krish to Shiva but what Shiva told made her jaws dropped..

Shiva : Ae gadhede, photo sahi se lena tha na. Mera chehra chupa hua aaya hai. 

And with that everyone excluding Rishita and Maami burst into laugh.













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Posted: 2 years ago
#15

Cute and sweet update😊

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#16

Light hearted and fun read ..do continue

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#17

Amazing 

Continue soon 

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Cute update πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°


Even I want to comment on their pic 


Kisi ki nazar na lgeπŸ˜…πŸ˜…πŸ˜…πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

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Posted: 2 years ago
#19

Very cute update! Loved shivi's flashback scene and the final dialogue from Shiva πŸ˜†

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Posted: 2 years ago
#20

Such a cute chapter.


Do update soon...