Loved this so much! This was beautiful- right from the beginning to the end❤️thank you for writing this! The episodes haven’t been the best the past few days, so reading this made me superrrr happy. Cannot wait to read more of what you write:))
Loved this so much! This was beautiful- right from the beginning to the end❤️thank you for writing this! The episodes haven’t been the best the past few days, so reading this made me superrrr happy. Cannot wait to read more of what you write:))
i almost had an heart attack when shiva said he didnt want to get married im the end.
Hilarious hilarious and hilarious🤣
Ye kabhi nahi sudhrenge😆
But thats what we love about them
A beautiful story as usual❤️
Finally they got married.
It was an amazing chapter as usual.
Loved the story very much. ShiVi are extraordinary couple. 😆
Looking forward to read another story from you.
Fav line of the whole series:
Mera naam Raavi nahi Shiva hai 😂
Loved it. Total fun story. Thank you
Totally hilarious story it was🤣. Love it❤️
Hope you come back with new stories soon☺️
Haha, finally Raavi knows the truth. OMG the embarrassment she'd feel with constant reminders of how she wanted to marry Gaumbi and proposed to Shiva motherly figure.😂😂
So glad they had their moment. I honestly didn't pick up on Raavi's prank in between and haha I was taken for a ride with the family members. These two and their crazy dimag. Haha I am scared to see how lunatic their kids will be.
Hope there is a bonus part!
lovely ending!
i'm glad you were inspired to include krish as a dulhan.. pehle shiva ne use ladki banaya phir raavi ne 😆
poor raavi tried to play a prank on shiva but he's always 10 steps ahead of her 😉 after all woh raavi nahi shiva hai 😆
i loved this whole story overall! ❤️
Awsome update ❤❤
Beautiful ending
Sahi bat h shivi jesa couple ho to sari family ko roz naye kand dekhne milege😅😅😅
Wow! I loved the whole Series & Ending toh Kaafi❤️
Paglait Raavi ko finally akal aagayi & all's well now.
The last chapter scared me for Raavi, it's an instance that will scare any girl, what if she hadn't reciprocated, it would have gone in a very wrong direction!
But you handled it in this Chapter so I was like Oh,All Good good then! Krish Raavi & Shiva finally in the same house. Pandya Parivar jaldi hi Mental Asylum mein milenge humein🤣
Meet you in your next Piece of writing soon😉
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