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Posted: 2 years ago

Aeee India Forum Ke Pandya Store Forum Ke Log 🤗

Kessan ho aap? 

Hope you all are having a wonderful week, I have had so much fun interacting with everyone. 

Over the past few weeks I have noticed just how hungry we all are for stories on ShiVi 😆

But obviously it takes a lot of time and effort for our writers to put something together, so while we wait for updates - I was thinking we could come up with our own one shots together as a forum. 

@Mehakbhambri had suggested this idea a while back and I think it will be so fun and entertaining. 

Basically we will pick a topic/scene to write about and each person will continue the story onwards from the previous post. Everyone just has to write 2-3 lines at a time so it's not a lot of commitment or thinking involved 🤣

Every time we are done with a particular scene - I will compile everyone's sentences and post it in one post so any readers can read it all in one go. 

What do you all think? 

Ashu aka Mrs. Dhillon 😉


One Shot Links:

Kuch Naya Bol [Page 4]

Kesar Ne Kasar Nahi Chodhi [Page 9]

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Posted: 2 years ago

Scene One Summary: Shiva and Raavi are spending their first night in the haveli and are bickering per usual. Fed up with Raavi, Shiva decides to tease her by pointing out a nonexistent chipkali. Soon the chipkali just becomes an excuse for some chipak chipak romance. 


Someone please start - also if you don't like this scene then please start with something you like 😳 I just came up with it randomly since chipkali seems to be a common theme haha

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: SlytherInMe.

Scene One Summary: Shiva and Raavi are spending their first night in the haveli and are bickering per usual. Fed up with Raavi, Shiva decides to tease her by pointing out a nonexistent chipkali. Soon the chipkali just becomes an excuse for some chipak chipak romance. 


Someone please start - also if you don't like this scene then please start with something you like 😳 I just came up with it randomly since chipkali seems to be a common theme haha

"Ae Mami Ki Behen Ki Beti! Waha mat jaa, udhar chipkali hai."

Ravi shouts and holds Shiva's arm tightly, pressing her face against his shoulder.

"Shiva please bhaga uss chipkali ko! Aur bhagwaan ke liye wahi purani baat mat chalu karna ki chipkali ko chipkali se dar kyu lage?"

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Originally posted by: hedwig_potter

"Ae Mami Ki Behen Ki Beti! Waha mat jaa, udhar chipkali hai."

Ravi shouts and holds Shiva's arm tightly, pressing her face against his shoulder.

"Shiva please bhaga uss chipkali ko! Aur bhagwaan ke liye wahi purani baat mat chalu karna ki chipkali ko chipkali se dar kyu lage?"


“Tu theek tarah se jawaab de deti to main poochta hi nahin baar baar!” Shiva replied and just as she was about to separate from him to answer him with a befitting reply. “Woh dekh wahan!” Shiva shouted again. 


“Aah!” Raavi shouted and climbed his side as she hung to him while searching the floor. Shiva began to laugh. Raavi turned towards him to tell him off but instead was mesmerized by his laugh.


“Tu hanste hue-”


“Bahut alag dikhta hoon! Janta hoon! Tune bataya! Kuch naya bol!” He declared.

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: ValleyOfPeace


“Tu theek tarah se jawaab de deti to main poochta hi nahin baar baar!” Shiva replied and just as she was about to separate from him to answer him with a befitting reply. “Woh dekh wahan!” Shiva shouted again. 


“Aah!” Raavi shouted and climbed his side as she hung to him while searching the floor. Shiva began to laugh. Raavi turned towards him to tell him off but instead was mesmerized by his laugh.


“Tu hanste hue-”


“Bahut alag dikhta hoon! Janta hoon! Tune bataya! Kuch naya bol!” He declared.


"Ae saand ki aaulad, baat toh puri karne de. Aur ye kya koi film chal rahi hai jo tere entertainment ke liye naye naye dialogues bolu" Raavi huffed out in response. 


"Filhaal tu dialogues ki chinta maath kar, voh dekh teri bak bak sun kar ek aur chipakli aagaya" Shiva said while trying to control his laughter. 


"Aah Shiva please please kuch karo. Main teri favorite wali chikki banogi, I promise", Raavi exclaimed as she jumped further in his arms. 

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: SlytherInMe.


"Ae saand ki aaulad, baat toh puri karne de. Aur ye kya koi film chal rahi hai jo tere entertainment ke liye naye naye dialogues bolu" Raavi huffed out in response. 


"Filhaal tu dialogues ki chinta maath kar, voh dekh teri bak bak sun kar ek aur chipakli aagaya" Shiva said while trying to control his laughter. 


"Aah Shiva please please kuch karo. Main teri favorite wali chikki banogi, I promise", Raavi exclaimed as she jumped further in his arms. 


Shiva paused for a moment to think about her offer. Looking down at this girl, no woman, in his arms. He realised their position and felt his heart skipped a beat. He tried to distract himself and asked her,


"Pakka banayegi ? Mere per bhi daba doon ?"


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Originally posted by: Hanyshah


Shiva paused for a moment to think about her offer. Looking down at this girl, no woman, in his arms. He realised their position and felt his heart skipped a beat. He tried to distract himself and asked her,


"Pakka banayegi ? Mere per bhi daba doon ?"


"Pair bhi daba doongi, kapde bhi dho dungi, sab kuch kar dungi, please bhaga na usko!!"

Shiva's eyes widened.

"Sab kuch kar degi?"

"Haa, sab kuch kar dungi," Raavi exclaimed in panic.

"Jo mai kahunga?"

"Ae gadhede tujhe maine kaha na ki kar dungi, tu pehle jaa ke bhaga na chipkali ko, please. Yaha meri jaan nikal rahi hai lekin tu abhi bhi mujhe pareshaan karne me hi laga hua hai."

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: hedwig_potter

"Pair bhi daba doongi, kapde bhi dho dungi, sab kuch kar dungi, please bhaga na usko!!"

Shiva's eyes widened.

"Sab kuch kar degi?"

"Haa, sab kuch kar dungi," Raavi exclaimed in panic.

"Jo mai kahunga?"

"Ae gadhede tujhe maine kaha na ki kar dungi, tu pehle jaa ke bhaga na chipkali ko, please. Yaha meri jaan nikal rahi hai lekin tu abhi bhi mujhe pareshaan karne me hi laga hua hai."


"Yaad rakhna bhul mat jana jo abhi bola tune. "

"Haa yaad rakhugi aab jaa aur uss chipkali ko bhaga."

"Ae gaderhi tu chodegi toh jauga na, ki tu bhi saath chalegi mere chipkali bagane."

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"Yaad rakhna bhul mat jana jo abhi bola tune. "

"Haa yaad rakhugi aab jaa aur uss chipkali ko bhaga."

"Ae gaderhi tu chodegi toh jauga na, ki tu bhi saath chalegi mere chipkali bagane."


“Haan haan.” Raavi said and got off Shiva, who grinned and moved around the room as if he was actually chasing away the non existent chipkalis.


“Chal Maami ki behen ki beti! Bhaga diya teri behno ko... ab tu chalu ho ja!”


“Kya chalu ho jaun?” Raavi asked in confusion.


“Pehle to mere kapde dho dena!” Shiva ordered as he fell flat on the bed watching Raavi.


Raavi made a face but proceeded to take all his clothes and go downstairs so she could wash them. Shiva was stunned. He hadn’t actually expected her to do this.


The family was sitting in the courtyard later when Raavi brought a of Shiva’s clothes and put them on the clothe line to dry. 


“Ye main kya dekh raha hoon?” Krish mumbled to Gautam. “Raavi bhabhi sati savitri kab se ban gayi? Inko to Shiva ke kapdon se allergy thi na?”

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: ValleyOfPeace


“Haan haan.” Raavi said and got off Shiva, who grinned and moved around the room as if he was actually chasing away the non existent chipkalis.


“Chal Maami ki behen ki beti! Bhaga diya teri behno ko... ab tu chalu ho ja!”


“Kya chalu ho jaun?” Raavi asked in confusion.


“Pehle to mere kapde dho dena!” Shiva ordered as he fell flat on the bed watching Raavi.


Raavi made a face but proceeded to take all his clothes and go downstairs so she could wash them. Shiva was stunned. He hadn’t actually expected her to do this.


The family was sitting in the courtyard later when Raavi brought a of Shiva’s clothes and put them on the clothe line to dry. 


“Ye main kya dekh raha hoon?” Krish mumbled to Gautam. “Raavi bhabhi sati savitri kab se ban gayi? Inko to Shiva ke kapdon se allergy thi na?”


Gaumbi hit Krish on the head and indicated for him to be quiet. "Kya yaar, mein sabse chota hoon toh sab marthe rehthe hain" Krish murmured. 

"Allergy toh uske kapdo aur uss Bhootnath dono se hai but kya karu deal is a deal" Raavi sighed in exasperation. 

Everyone slowly retreated back to their rooms as it was getting pretty late at night. Shiva came out with the intention of teasing his chipkali more but was soon mesmerized by the way her hair was flowing across her face. 

He chuckled at the lines of frustration her face as she unsuccessfully tried to move her hair out the way and made his way towards her. 

Sitting behind her, he moved the strands of hair one by one - making it a point to slowly drag his finger from her cheek down to her neck each time. Raavi had completely stilled from his electrifying touch. 

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