ShiVi TS- What’s Going On? (Completed) - Page 2

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Posted: 3 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: Hanyshah


Yes please ! Anything to help with the Shivi Ship 😂😂😂


We can go around leaving motivational quotes and encouraging writers on all the stories!! 😂😂 

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Posted: 3 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: ananyakhetarpal

Love this open and honest conversation between them! ❤️ Just what is required.


Waiting for next part 😃

Thank youuuu❤️

Will be back with next part soon!

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Posted: 3 years ago
#13

Welcome :)

Beautiful part. I like the fondness that Krish has for Raavi.

Shiva os restless now, hope that changes in the next part😉

Can’t wait to read more

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: .Rangeeli.

Love this and your writing! :) <3

Thank youuuusmiley27

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Posted: 3 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: TunesOfHeart

Hiiii!!!! 😳

I absolutely loved how Shiva acted in here!!

And krish is a true shipper!!! 🥳

Please do update soon

Thank youuuusmiley27

Same here we all are literally waiting Shiva is speak to Raavi normally 😆

Krish is love 🥺

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Posted: 3 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: barbieflora

Loved the story! ❤️

This is the ShiVi we hope to see in the show.

The unwavering support, the raw emotions, the uncertainty, you captured everything so beautifully

Can't wait for the update 😁

 Thank youuuusmiley27

So glad you liked it!!! I feel the uncertainty in their relationship is something they never discuss so this came up 😆 

Will be back with next part soon!!

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Posted: 3 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: Hanyshah

Your story made me cry ! 

Becchara Raavi ko. Why is it always her 🥺🥺

She's been through a lot but still things keep hitting her. 

Thank you Krish ! You are both Bane and Boon to your brother ! You knew exactly who to look for when it concerns Raavi and just when Shiva decided to give her time, you let him stew in his own mind while you take Raavi away.  That's what younger siblings are for 😂😂


I love the conversation between them. I think in the serial, the reason Shiva isn't willing to have a serious conversation with Raavi is because he's afraid she will taunt him to no end. What with their history and him vehemently saying he hates her. But deep down he already accepted that she is his wife. No matter what they feel for each other and no matter what other people say about their relationship.


And Raavi ! Mere pyaari bacchi ! She accepts him too. Even after believing that he left her with those goons, she still defended her marriage to Maasi. Deep down she didn't want to leave her husband. And her first reaction after Shiva came to her is to cry in his arms ! Shiva didn't even need to say anything, he just needed to pull her close. 

I love the flow of you story ! Can't wait for the next part ! Maybe have Raavi answer back to Rishita and shut her up for once and for all. That girl really needs a tight slap on her face 🙄🙄

Great job ! Keep up the good work ! 
Love,

Hany ♥️

OH MY GOD! 
ok let me thank you for such a long and lovely comment first ❤️🥺

Krish is my person! Loving him in the show!

He understands and knows Raavi since long and hence his reactions!!

I agree in the show I feel Shiva is afraid of a rejection which obviously won’t be there from Raavi’s side since they are already married 😆

However, more than Raavi I think Shiva had accepted the marriage since day 1. I He is very it is what it is type of person and did seem to have a soft corner for her since the beginning masking it with the fights. 🥺

Raavi has already moved on from Dev and accepts Shiva as a husband subconsciously I feel. If that makes sense !😆

Rishita is on everyone’s nerves!! Yes getting back with next part soon! Seeing such a positive response makes me feel so happy!❤️🥺


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Posted: 3 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: Foxii

Welcome :)

Beautiful part. I like the fondness that Krish has for Raavi.

Shiva os restless now, hope that changes in the next part😉

Can’t wait to read more

Thank youuuusmiley27

 I would personally love Krish Raavi bonding they have known each since so long and are fun loving and cute 😆

Next part will be up soon! Shiva’s only going to be happy don’t worry 🤣

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Really nice!!! I really like the direction you are going into!

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: ms.ObseSSeD

Really nice!!! I really like the direction you are going into!

Thank Youuu ❤️