ShiVi OS: Can't Help Falling In Love With You - Page 2

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Oh I had a ball reading this. Btw I was listening to Can't help falling in love on repeat. (Hahah, lol I am a slow reader) 

I loved that you addressed the trauma of the whole kidnapping track. Shiva helping Raavi get over her nightmares, gradually becoming partners and how it culminated into desire and love. It was beautiful and the lyrics of the song went perfectly with the story.


Hope to read more of your stories.

Love,

Abhi 🌼

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Posted: 3 years ago
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My heart is racing.Girl you have done an amazing job. Such a beautiful story.You have captured the character essence of Shiva and Raavi so beautifully and translated into a story which I can actually visualize. ❤️❤️ Loved it. 👏

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Thanks guys for the lovely comments and likes. Thanks for taking your time to read and review 😃. Thanks a lot 😊.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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