ShiVi FF- Mine, Chapter 16 UPDATED on page 55

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Posted: 3 years ago

A new ShiVi tale just for you all. Hope you like this take on their story. Happy reading. And do tell me how it was and also what your guesses are regarding this story.

 

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Prologue 

 

She picked up her son of some months and amidst the stares and musings of her neighbors, she knocked on her maternal home. When the heat of their stares and barbs of their talks became too much to bear she looked away and knocked some more. 

 

“Arre aa rahi hoon baba! Aa rahi hoon!” She heard her before she saw her and her eyes became wet. She longed to fall in her embrace and let out the sorrow that was eating her alive. The door opened and she was staring at the face that represented motherhood for her. “Aye tu? Tu idhar? Yahan kya kar rahi hai beta?” She heard the question and her eyes began to tear up. 

 

“Main wahan se aa gayi hoon. Ab wapas nahin jaaungi.” She replied brokenly. Her Maasi took her son away from her and began to pat his back lovingly and then turned towards her in confusion and fear.

 

“Kya keh rahi hai? Dimagh theek che?” Her Maasi glared at her but there was no real heat.

 

“Who hamesha ke liye chod kar ja chuka hai mujhe Maasi. Ek hafte pehle hi uski death ho gayi.” She revealed. Her Maasi watched her in shock and then realised that she hadn’t yet allowed her daughter to enter the house. They were speaking in front of all and the neighbors had already heard her proclamation. The air was alive with gossip as they pointed at her. She felt faint and almost let go. 

 

“Chal andar.” She uttered and pulled her inside, shutting the door on the world. 

 

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Index


Prologue page 1

Chapter 1 page 2

Chapter 2 page 4

Chapter 3 page 6

Chapter 4 page 9

Chapter 5 page 13

Chapter 6 page 16

Chapter 7 page 18

Chapter 8 page 21

Chapter 9 (part 1) page 23

Chapter 9 (part 2) page 25

Chapter 10 page 31

Chapter 11 page 35

Chapter 12 page 39

Chapter 13 page 43

Chapter 14 page 45

Chapter 15 page 51

Chapter 16 page 55

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See you soon, ila liqaa’.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Wow, very intriguing 😳😳

She is Raavi I guess but he?!🤔

Update soon dear

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Posted: 3 years ago

Btw very interesting plot don't know what future holds

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Posted: 3 years ago

Oh no! I hope it’s just an misunderstanding 😲

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: raindropsroses

Oh no! I hope it’s just an misunderstanding 😲


What is a misunderstanding??😛 dead husband? Check

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Posted: 3 years ago

I think Raavi was married to someone else and not to shiva

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As in, he’s not actually dead but faked his death or someone conveyed wrong information 😂

Or maybe he’s “dead to her”

Originally posted by: ValleyOfPeace


What is a misunderstanding??😛 dead husband? Check

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Posted: 3 years ago

Oh this also makes sense 

Originally posted by: Riddhi2Saini006

I think Raavi was married to someone else and not to shiva

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Posted: 3 years ago

Shivi have a baby already :)

There no way that Shiva is dead, but where did he go?

Interesting, please continue soon

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Originally posted by: Foxii

Shivi have a baby already :)

There no way that Shiva is dead, but where did he go?

Interesting, please continue soon

When did they have baby