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Hope you guys like it.
Thank you for tagging me.
I ❤️ it - you have written it so well and it is absolutely beautiful.
All those lovely memories for Virat. I was glad that Sai left half her bangles and took the others with her.
Please do write some more 🥰
Virat is not going to know what has hit him...hope to see some great scenes from two fantastic actors...
Finally! Aisa lagta hai mitra ki tumne Virat ka dil kholkar rakh diya hai hamare saamne. All those feelings that can be seen in his eyes but he never dares to voice. You just captured them and made them fly out of the window for the whole world to see. My God! It felt as if not Virat but his heart was speaking. and the last part. I was so glad because you did not let his feelings get broken. And you might call me mad 😆but I was so engorssed in virat's emotions that I wanted it to be specifically about him. I did not want Sai's pain to overshadow and undermine his pain and his feelings. So thank you.
It was perfect❤️ I truly truly loved it.
Okay ,it was awesome. Have to say this,you are super talented in emotional matters.
(Baaki baad mein lamba comment dungi,have to rush a bit )❤💕
Loved it, see you in a while 🤗
It’s really really nice, man it’s seems we are preparing ourself for separation. It goons hurt us. Seems with them we all gonna cry, this colourfull week will be our reason also until they are together. 💕💕
loved it lakshmi. could feel virat’s pain. i wish you had put down sai’s pain in an another os. it somehow felt distracting. his dialogue about how he is selfish and how he wanted sai to be selfish and think only about her and him and no one else was so well put down. ❤️❤️❤️
loved it lakshmi. could feel virat’s pain. i wish you had put down sai’s pain in an another os. it somehow felt distracting. his dialogue about how he is selfish and how he wanted sai to be selfish and think only about her and him and no one else was so well put down. ❤️❤️❤️
Thank dear, abhi nikal doon? I just wanted to show that she also wanted the same, but may be I need not have added it.
loved it lakshmi. could feel virat’s pain. i wish you had put down sai’s pain in an another os. it somehow felt distracting. his dialogue about how he is selfish and how he wanted sai to be selfish and think only about her and him and no one else was so well put down. ❤️❤️❤️
Nikal diya 😆. Thanks a lot for your honest feedback ❤❤.
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