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Another OS. Hope you guys like it.
It's very nice, you showed virat emotions very nicely and beautifully... It's going to be heartbreaking and your os is trail for that
What a beautiful OS. 🥺
What I love the most about your writing is the dialogues. 👏 Loved everything Virat said to himself. Could feel his pain. 😭 The way he touched her sarees and looked at the chudyaan. 😔 The guy is missing him so much. Loved how he wanted to be the most important person in her life, even more than her Aaba. ❤️ And Sai who couldn't leave everything behind her. She kept a part of him with her.
Beautiful writing. 👏
Originally posted by: tinafans
Awww seriously...this is beautiful....bechara viru😭
Haan yaar, woh toh hai
Thank you. Will continue with Sai's soon.
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