24/03/21 A Jeeva Shiva SS part16 p. 33 epilogue p.34 - Page 7

Thank God it's Mohit.... This story getting interesting day by day....so , is samrat acting as mentally disabled.... Plz update next chapter as soon as possible

Originally posted by: sukri

So finally tubelight ko chamka that his actions might not be taken sacrifice and can be understood as dhoka.

Good update,  also liked how you sneaked in Sai's trusting Virat. 

I missed Samrat in this one. 

Yeah, he needs to realise what he did could be termed as something else too.

Originally posted by: ssoujanya

Story is very very interesting....

I couldn't get whether it is her imagination or really samrat is doing all thus....I am confused...

Eager to read further......please give soon....

time will tell😆

I'll be writing soon.❤️

Originally posted by: Mahibeejay

Thank you so much for update...the story is getting more interesting...can’t wait for the next update... please update soon...👍🏻

And also for loving my story❤️

Originally posted by: Sairat

I read all your parts....but earlier did not got tome to comment..

So here is my late comment...

Amazing story line and truth to be told; I don't want Samrat to return and take ehat was served to him...

What Patralekha did was gross acc to me..marrying one brother to be with another...and Virat giving that stupid vaada was delusional and wrong ; I believe Virat and Patralekha should feel the pain of Samrat and Sai: i wanted a role reversal...

I dont want samrat to be goody two shoes: i love your storyline or other where he tries to win Sai just to spite Virat ...and Sai misunderstands Virat and can throw tje lines back in his face that he said to her during there intial marriage days...

About friendship, i want sai to find a good friend in samrat and samrat finding a good partner in Sai even if it is to make Virat jealous and eat his own words.

Patralekha is an irredeemable character for me.

And I hope my story gives you some satisfaction at least😆❤️❤️

Originally posted by: Saichintalli

Thank God it's Mohit.... This story getting interesting day by day....so , is samrat acting as mentally disabled.... Plz update next chapter as soon as possible

Thankyou🤗

Time will tell❤️❤️

loving the story . you have absolutely pushed samrat to the dark side. how dumb can virat be that he doesn’t even understand that what he did to his brother is dhoka. waiting for the next part.❤️❤️❤️❤️

Originally posted by: raji02

loving the story . you have absolutely pushed samrat to the dark side. how dumb can virat be that he doesn’t even understand that what he did to his brother is dhoka. waiting for the next part.❤️❤️❤️❤️

yeah, Virat is dumb. I actually showed him this way in the story because I didn't see him feeling guilty at all for what he did, in the show. So it's my own attempt to make him see what he did thinking right could be wrong too.

Wow,read from chapter 4 all in one go.

It was amazing,you are really a damn good writer,amazing.💕💕💕

Story touches the heart directly.

Originally posted by: Shristhi2002

Wow,read from chapter 4 all in one go.

It was amazing,you are really a damn good writer,amazing.💕💕💕

Story touches the heart directly.

Thank-you so much🤗

If you could see me right now, you would see a big bright smile on my face.❤️