24/03/21 A Jeeva Shiva SS part16 p. 33 epilogue p.34 - Page 10

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Posted: 3 years ago

Wow amazingly written dear. Loved it. 

Viru's guiltiness, Sam's pain everything is very beautifully portrayed. 😭

Now I want to see our jeeva shiva jodi back

Let's see how Dr. Vineet is able to help both viru and Sam.

Thanks a lot for this update👏😊😊😊


Continue soon ....

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Posted: 3 years ago

Ohh thank god karishma time pe aai..... reason koi bhi ho uske dimag mai....usne knife to nikali virat ke hath se.....nice of Dr V. to help virat first....it's a trauma for him too....👏👍🏼

Nice story ☺️

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Shyama9090

Wow amazingly written dear. Loved it. 

Viru's guiltiness, Sam's pain everything is very beautifully portrayed. 😭

Now I want to see our jeeva shiva jodi back

Let's see how Dr. Vineet is able to help both viru and Sam.

Thanks a lot for this update👏😊😊😊


Continue soon ....

thankyou for your beautiful words❤️❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: ashsamik

Ohh thank god karishma time pe aai..... reason koi bhi ho uske dimag mai....usne knife to nikali virat ke hath se.....nice of Dr V. to help virat first....it's a trauma for him too....👏👍🏼

Nice story ☺️

yes, she did right.

And I hope I do justice with Vineet's profession too.

Thankyou for reading and leaving a comment❤️❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago

Update jaldi khatam ho Gaya 😭😭😁😁


What was virat thinking holding the knife?? I don't think he would have harmed self...


Dr vineet is smart..... He will sort of virat and Pakhi and samrat will be ok automatically...


Very sweet of sai to want to be there to support virat.... And quite lame and cowardly of Pakhi to almost run from the session...


Continue soon!!


Happy writing!!!

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: MSgayatri

Update jaldi khatam ho Gaya 😭😭😁😁


What was virat thinking holding the knife?? I don't think he would have harmed self...


Dr vineet is smart..... He will sort of virat and Pakhi and samrat will be ok automatically...


Very sweet of sai to want to be there to support virat.... And quite lame and cowardly of Pakhi to almost run from the session...


Continue soon!!


Happy writing!!!

So are you upset or happy for the short update.😆

Virat holding the knife. Hmmm😆

Thankyou🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: cheekukabeej

So are you upset or happy for the short update.😆

Virat holding the knife. Hmmm😆

Thankyou🤗


I am being lalchi and wanting longer updates 🙈🙈 but also understanding that there are various factors in making any update... 😁😁


❤️❤️🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: MSgayatri


I am being lalchi and wanting longer updates 🙈🙈 but also understanding that there are various factors in making any update... 😁😁


❤️❤️🤗

hahahaha I understand. I myself am a very greedy person😆

Thanks for being so understanding❤️❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago

omg!!!i have same reaction to every update of yours. chalo is daado sutto ne anjaane mein hi sahi acha kiya. what does dr vineet want to talk about to virat and patralekha? looking eagerly for the next update.❤️❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago

Short tha but effective one .

why was Karishma afraid of  Virat finding the knife

Is kaku up to something 

Nice one